[Archived Approval Requests] 2022-07-03
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Anton La'croix
Maxwell
Gray
Castor O. Nox
8 posters
- Gray
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[childofdestiny]][[freakofnature]]
[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]
[[improviseadaptovercome]]
Posts : 3928
Re: [Archived Approval Requests] 2022-07-03
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The above have been commented on/graded.Thaddeus Boone wrote:Category: Character Creation
Link: The Gunslinging Bird
Category: Devil Fruit Claim
Link: Bottom of the page (I don't know how to direct link to a post yet, sorry.)
Category: Equipment Thread
Link: Thaddeus' Equipment
^I shall be reading this over the course of this week.Noir wrote:Category: Quest Grading
Link: https://www.revivaldawn.com/t744-episode-001-that-s-not-how-the-myth-goes
enjoy~
^These have been approved.Maxwell wrote:Updated the old templates with the new style code. Gray mentioned something about cleaning up the old quote posts as well.
Category: Character Bio
Link: Richard Maxwell
Category: Stats
Link: Richard Maxwell's stats
Category: Fighting Style
Link: Foul Play
Category: Equipment
Link: Richard Maxwell's equipment
^And so have these.Baltroy wrote:Category: NPCs
Link: https://www.revivaldawn.com/t426-npcs-alice-b-ronx
- GuestGuest
Re: [Archived Approval Requests] 2022-07-03
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Category: Character Creation
Link: https://www.revivaldawn.com/t936-y-sera-knight#4435
Link: https://www.revivaldawn.com/t936-y-sera-knight#4435
- Gray
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[childofdestiny]][[freakofnature]]
[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]
[[improviseadaptovercome]]
Posts : 3928
Re: [Archived Approval Requests] 2022-07-03
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Y'sera Knight wrote:Category: Character Creation
Link: https://www.revivaldawn.com/t936-y-sera-knight#4435
Blair Cairistine wrote:Category: App Changes and all pertinent claims
Link: Application, Â Face Claim
All of the above have been approved.
- GuestGuest
Re: [Archived Approval Requests] 2022-07-03
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Category: Quest
Link: https://www.revivaldawn.com/t680-revolutionary-mayhem-episode
Other: @Howai
Howai's tough initiation to the Bonbons~ She's dedicated and generous enough to stick with us even after the heavy beating she sustains from this 2 year thread XD
Edit: take all the time you need to grade. It's very long despite being an episode >_>
Link: https://www.revivaldawn.com/t680-revolutionary-mayhem-episode
Other: @Howai
Howai's tough initiation to the Bonbons~ She's dedicated and generous enough to stick with us even after the heavy beating she sustains from this 2 year thread XD
Edit: take all the time you need to grade. It's very long despite being an episode >_>
- GuestGuest
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Putting all my accounts together instead of switching accounts
Category: Alice's Fighting Style
Link: https://www.revivaldawn.com/t389-flying-darts
Category: Alice's Equipment
Link: https://www.revivaldawn.com/t387-alice-baltroy-ronx-s-equipment
Category: Fran's Fighting Style
Link: https://www.revivaldawn.com/t693-emperor-s-butterfly
Category: Wren's Fighting Style
Link: https://www.revivaldawn.com/t812-horu-horu-no-mi-hormone-hormone-fruit
Category: Alice's Fighting Style
Link: https://www.revivaldawn.com/t389-flying-darts
Category: Alice's Equipment
Link: https://www.revivaldawn.com/t387-alice-baltroy-ronx-s-equipment
Category: Fran's Fighting Style
Link: https://www.revivaldawn.com/t693-emperor-s-butterfly
Category: Wren's Fighting Style
Link: https://www.revivaldawn.com/t812-horu-horu-no-mi-hormone-hormone-fruit
- Anton La'croix
- [tracker=/t544-anton-la-croix#2124]
Name : Anton La'croix
Epithet : Screaming Grasshopper
Age : 23
Height : 5'9''
Weight : 186lb
Species : Human
Faction : Marine
World Position : Rear Admiral
Crew : The Guardian Knights
Ship : The Grand Steamer
Crew Role : Captain
Devil Fruit : Bug-Bug Fruit, Model: Grasshopper
Quality Score : S
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.15 (from world position); +0.16 (from turf); +0.20 (to all allies)
Balance : [bel] 1,472,069,543
[[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[bookworm]][[childofdestiny]]
[[berryprinter]][[punchoutguru]]
[[improviseadaptovercome]]
Turf : [turf="/t299-turf-details-minion-island#1113"]Minion Island[/turf]
Posts : 650
Re: [Archived Approval Requests] 2022-07-03
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Category: Fighting Style
Link: Mushi Mushi no Mi Model: Grasshopper
Link: Mushi Mushi no Mi Model: Grasshopper
- Anton La'croix
- [tracker=/t544-anton-la-croix#2124]
Name : Anton La'croix
Epithet : Screaming Grasshopper
Age : 23
Height : 5'9''
Weight : 186lb
Species : Human
Faction : Marine
World Position : Rear Admiral
Crew : The Guardian Knights
Ship : The Grand Steamer
Crew Role : Captain
Devil Fruit : Bug-Bug Fruit, Model: Grasshopper
Quality Score : S
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.15 (from world position); +0.16 (from turf); +0.20 (to all allies)
Balance : [bel] 1,472,069,543
[[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[bookworm]][[childofdestiny]]
[[berryprinter]][[punchoutguru]]
[[improviseadaptovercome]]
Turf : [turf="/t299-turf-details-minion-island#1113"]Minion Island[/turf]
Posts : 650
Re: [Archived Approval Requests] 2022-07-03
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Category: Quest Approval
Link: Link
Link: Link
- GuestGuest
Re: [Archived Approval Requests] 2022-07-03
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Updated Laurel's equipment and fighting style for the new system. Also cleaned up the DF description so that Toggled abilities and regular passives are separated.
Fighting style: https://www.revivaldawn.com/t442-inu-inu-no-mi-model-bake-danuki#1549
Equipment: https://www.revivaldawn.com/t417-laurel-ohallorans-equipment#1419
Fighting style: https://www.revivaldawn.com/t442-inu-inu-no-mi-model-bake-danuki#1549
Equipment: https://www.revivaldawn.com/t417-laurel-ohallorans-equipment#1419
- Gray
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[childofdestiny]][[freakofnature]]
[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]
[[improviseadaptovercome]]
Posts : 3928
Re: [Archived Approval Requests] 2022-07-03
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Baltroy wrote:Category: Quest
Link: https://www.revivaldawn.com/t680-revolutionary-mayhem-episode
Other: @Howai
Howai's tough initiation to the Bonbons~ She's dedicated and generous enough to stick with us even after the heavy beating she sustains from this 2 year thread XD
Edit: take all the time you need to grade. It's very long despite being an episode >_>
^Working on grading this quest. It sure as shit will take me forever. >_>
Everything quoted below has been graded and approved.
Baltroy wrote:Putting all my accounts together instead of switching accounts
Category: Alice's Fighting Style
Link: https://www.revivaldawn.com/t389-flying-darts
Category: Alice's Equipment
Link: https://www.revivaldawn.com/t387-alice-baltroy-ronx-s-equipment
Category: Fran's Fighting Style
Link: https://www.revivaldawn.com/t693-emperor-s-butterfly
Category: Wren's Fighting Style
Link: https://www.revivaldawn.com/t812-horu-horu-no-mi-hormone-hormone-fruit
Anton La'croix wrote:Category: Fighting Style
Link: Mushi Mushi no Mi Model: Grasshopper
Anton La'croix wrote:Category: Quest Approval
Link: Link
Laurel O’Halloran wrote:Updated Laurel's equipment and fighting style for the new system. Also cleaned up the DF description so that Toggled abilities and regular passives are separated.
Fighting style: https://www.revivaldawn.com/t442-inu-inu-no-mi-model-bake-danuki#1549
Equipment: https://www.revivaldawn.com/t417-laurel-ohallorans-equipment#1419
- Castor O. Nox
[tracker=/t980-castor-o-nox#4771]
Name : Castor O. Nox
Epithet : Sanpaku | The Azure Pheasant | Duke Of Lvneel | Saint Nox
Age : 25
Height : 5'9"
Weight : 175lbs
Species : Three-Eye Tribesman
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Blockbuster
Alliance : -
Crew : Nox Pirates
Ship : The Wailing Calamity
Crew Role : Captain | Navigator | Book Collector | Pride Sin
Devil Fruit : Goro Goro no Mi
Bounty : [ber=r] 620,000,000
Quality Score : S
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (To all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.42 (Turf); +0.10 (Blockbuster); +0.20 (To all allies)
Shop Discount : -20%
Crew Pool : [bel=u] 96,000,000
Balance : [bel] 2,470,815,020
[[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[dreamsneverdie]]
[[bookworm]][[untouchable]][[childofdestiny]]
[[punchoutguru]][[berryprinter]]
Turf : [turf="/t296-turf-details-lvneel#1110"]Lvneel[/turf] [turf="/t309-turf-details-st-poplar#1124"]St. Poplar[/turf]
Posts : 794
Re: [Archived Approval Requests] 2022-07-03
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Re: [Archived Approval Requests] 2022-07-03
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Castor O. Nox wrote:Category: Character Approval
Link: https://www.revivaldawn.com/t973-castor-o-nox#4714
Approved :3
- Castor O. Nox
[tracker=/t980-castor-o-nox#4771]
Name : Castor O. Nox
Epithet : Sanpaku | The Azure Pheasant | Duke Of Lvneel | Saint Nox
Age : 25
Height : 5'9"
Weight : 175lbs
Species : Three-Eye Tribesman
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Blockbuster
Alliance : -
Crew : Nox Pirates
Ship : The Wailing Calamity
Crew Role : Captain | Navigator | Book Collector | Pride Sin
Devil Fruit : Goro Goro no Mi
Bounty : [ber=r] 620,000,000
Quality Score : S
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (To all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.42 (Turf); +0.10 (Blockbuster); +0.20 (To all allies)
Shop Discount : -20%
Crew Pool : [bel=u] 96,000,000
Balance : [bel] 2,470,815,020
[[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[dreamsneverdie]]
[[bookworm]][[untouchable]][[childofdestiny]]
[[punchoutguru]][[berryprinter]]
Turf : [turf="/t296-turf-details-lvneel#1110"]Lvneel[/turf] [turf="/t309-turf-details-st-poplar#1124"]St. Poplar[/turf]
Posts : 794
Re: [Archived Approval Requests] 2022-07-03
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Category: Stat Check & Equipment Check Plz
Link: https://www.revivaldawn.com/t975-castor-o-nox-stats#4741
https://www.revivaldawn.com/t974-castor-o-nox-s-equipment#4735
Link: https://www.revivaldawn.com/t975-castor-o-nox-stats#4741
https://www.revivaldawn.com/t974-castor-o-nox-s-equipment#4735
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- Acacia
[tracker=/t897-grimm-aldous-acacia#4096]
Name : Acacia
Epithet : "Black Seed" ("Kurotane")
Age : 27
Height : 8'5" / 257 cm
Weight : 351 lbs / 159 kg
Species : Human
Faction : New Revolutionary Army
Devil Fruit : Mochi Mochi no Mi
Bounty : [ber=r] 250,000,000
Balance : [ber] 582,800,000
[[childofdestiny]]
[[improviseadaptovercome]]
Posts : 122
Re: [Archived Approval Requests] 2022-07-03
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Castor O. Nox wrote:Category: Stat Check & Equipment Check Plz
Link: https://www.revivaldawn.com/t975-castor-o-nox-stats#4741
https://www.revivaldawn.com/t974-castor-o-nox-s-equipment#4735
These have been approved.
- Castor O. Nox
[tracker=/t980-castor-o-nox#4771]
Name : Castor O. Nox
Epithet : Sanpaku | The Azure Pheasant | Duke Of Lvneel | Saint Nox
Age : 25
Height : 5'9"
Weight : 175lbs
Species : Three-Eye Tribesman
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Blockbuster
Alliance : -
Crew : Nox Pirates
Ship : The Wailing Calamity
Crew Role : Captain | Navigator | Book Collector | Pride Sin
Devil Fruit : Goro Goro no Mi
Bounty : [ber=r] 620,000,000
Quality Score : S
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (To all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.42 (Turf); +0.10 (Blockbuster); +0.20 (To all allies)
Shop Discount : -20%
Crew Pool : [bel=u] 96,000,000
Balance : [bel] 2,470,815,020
[[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[dreamsneverdie]]
[[bookworm]][[untouchable]][[childofdestiny]]
[[punchoutguru]][[berryprinter]]
Turf : [turf="/t296-turf-details-lvneel#1110"]Lvneel[/turf] [turf="/t309-turf-details-st-poplar#1124"]St. Poplar[/turf]
Posts : 794
Re: [Archived Approval Requests] 2022-07-03
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Catergory: Devil Fruit Fighting Style Check
Link: Goro Goro
Link: Goro Goro
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- Gray
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[childofdestiny]][[freakofnature]]
[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]
[[improviseadaptovercome]]
Posts : 3928
Re: [Archived Approval Requests] 2022-07-03
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Castor O. Nox wrote:Catergory: Devil Fruit Fighting Style Check
Link: Goro Goro
Done!
- Castor O. Nox
[tracker=/t980-castor-o-nox#4771]
Name : Castor O. Nox
Epithet : Sanpaku | The Azure Pheasant | Duke Of Lvneel | Saint Nox
Age : 25
Height : 5'9"
Weight : 175lbs
Species : Three-Eye Tribesman
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Blockbuster
Alliance : -
Crew : Nox Pirates
Ship : The Wailing Calamity
Crew Role : Captain | Navigator | Book Collector | Pride Sin
Devil Fruit : Goro Goro no Mi
Bounty : [ber=r] 620,000,000
Quality Score : S
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (To all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.42 (Turf); +0.10 (Blockbuster); +0.20 (To all allies)
Shop Discount : -20%
Crew Pool : [bel=u] 96,000,000
Balance : [bel] 2,470,815,020
[[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[dreamsneverdie]]
[[bookworm]][[untouchable]][[childofdestiny]]
[[punchoutguru]][[berryprinter]]
Turf : [turf="/t296-turf-details-lvneel#1110"]Lvneel[/turf] [turf="/t309-turf-details-st-poplar#1124"]St. Poplar[/turf]
Posts : 794
Re: [Archived Approval Requests] 2022-07-03
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Category: Ship Review
Link: https://www.revivaldawn.com/t991-the-wailing-calamity-jyestha#4823
Link: https://www.revivaldawn.com/t991-the-wailing-calamity-jyestha#4823
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- Acacia
[tracker=/t897-grimm-aldous-acacia#4096]
Name : Acacia
Epithet : "Black Seed" ("Kurotane")
Age : 27
Height : 8'5" / 257 cm
Weight : 351 lbs / 159 kg
Species : Human
Faction : New Revolutionary Army
Devil Fruit : Mochi Mochi no Mi
Bounty : [ber=r] 250,000,000
Balance : [ber] 582,800,000
[[childofdestiny]]
[[improviseadaptovercome]]
Posts : 122
Re: [Archived Approval Requests] 2022-07-03
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Castor O. Nox wrote:Category: Ship Review
Link: https://www.revivaldawn.com/t991-the-wailing-calamity-jyestha#4823
Approved!
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Re: [Archived Approval Requests] 2022-07-03
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Category: Character Bio
Link: Zeref Yuki
Link: Zeref Yuki
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Re: [Archived Approval Requests] 2022-07-03
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Category: Equiptment
Link: Zeref A. Yuki's Equipment
Link: Zeref A. Yuki's Equipment
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Category: Ship
Link: Haven
Link: Haven
- Gray
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[childofdestiny]][[freakofnature]]
[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]
[[improviseadaptovercome]]
Posts : 3928
Re: [Archived Approval Requests] 2022-07-03
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Zeref wrote:Category: Character Bio
Link: Zeref Yuki
Zeref wrote:Category: Equiptment
Link: Zeref A. Yuki's Equipment
Zeref wrote:Category: Ship
Link: Haven
All of the above have been approved.
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Re: [Archived Approval Requests] 2022-07-03
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Category: Fighting Style
Link: Elite Fighting Style
Link: Elite Fighting Style
- Gray
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[childofdestiny]][[freakofnature]]
[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]
[[improviseadaptovercome]]
Posts : 3928
Re: [Archived Approval Requests] 2022-07-03
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Zeref wrote:Category: Fighting Style
Link: Elite Fighting Style
Your fighting style has been commented on.
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