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Laurel O’Halloran’s Equipment
Tue Dec 27, 2016 8:24 pm
Laurel O’Halloran’s Equipment
Character Name: Laurel O’Halloran
Number of Equipment Pieces: 2
Highest tiered equipment: 3
Total Equipment Stat Points: +30
Equipment Name: Monohoshizao
Equipment Type: Kiseru
Equipment Tier: Tier 3
Equipment Stats: +15 Attack
Equipment Description: This smoking pipe was crafted with a shaft made from snakewood and a bowl and mouthpiece of corundum, both gathered from Amazon Lily. Just over 90 cm (2’11.5”) in length, Monohoshizao is much longer and heavier than any typical kiseru, which makes it all the greater for a weapon. The bowl can serve as a bludgeon, of course, while the mouthpiece (the lip, specifically) is tapered enough to break skin with enough force.
Equipment Name: Tools of the Trade
Equipment Type: Thief tools
Equipment Tier: Tier 3
Equipment Stats: +15 Reflex
Equipment Description: While Laurel’s Devil Fruit powers render her old gear somewhat redundant, she considers some pieces of gear as essential tools which no sane phantom thief would leave home without. If she anticipates seastone locks, for instance, she puts on opera gloves that reach up to her elbows to serve as a modest shield between her skin and the seastone material. Hidden between the layers of the gloves is a set of tiny, sophisticated, fragile tools, each glove carrying four: namely a hammer, a chisel, a tiny saw, a torsion wrench, tweezers, and half-diamond, hook, and prod picks. While they’re all too small and delicate to actually use as weapons, they’re not something one would want going for the eyes if too close.
Techniques
- Equipment Techniques:
- Oborozuki
By: Monohoshizao
Type: Stat Morph
Class: Light
Range: 20m
Duration: 1 Post
Cooldown: 2 Posts
Debuffs: -25% RX (Target)
Description: Laurel takes in a long draw of tobacco from her pipe and blows it out in front of her, filling the immediate area with a thick pall of smoke. This doesn’t do any damage, but instead interferes heavily with the sight, smell, and breathing of her target. It is possible to remove the smoke with heavy winds, or in the happenstance that the opponent is able to manipulate smoke.
Tsubame Gaeshi
By: Monohoshizao
Type: Flat Damage
Type: Light
Range: 400m
Cooldown: 1 Post
Description: Dashing towards her target until within range, Laurel strikes at her target with her kiseru with a fierce and swift downward cut from above, followed immediately afterwards with an upward motion from below.
- Gray
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species/Tribe : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
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Posts : 3991
Re: Laurel O’Halloran’s Equipment
Wed Dec 28, 2016 3:10 am
Both the equipment and the techniques are looking great! Only one correction needed: For your techniques, when you assign a stat debuff to opponents, you must have an equivalent debuff to yourself or an equivalent buff to your opponents. I'd probably recommend giving yourself a -30 to attack for the duration of Loguetown Fog since you'll likely use the technique to escape rather than fight.
Secondly, along with the Technique Cooldown, would you mind adding the technique duration so that it can be seen at first glance? For example: "Technique Cooldown: 10 posts | 3 post duration".
Secondly, along with the Technique Cooldown, would you mind adding the technique duration so that it can be seen at first glance? For example: "Technique Cooldown: 10 posts | 3 post duration".
- GuestGuest
Re: Laurel O’Halloran’s Equipment
Wed Dec 28, 2016 9:33 am
Done and done - I've actually shot for a Defense debuff, as there's also potential for the skill to setting up an ambush, so I'd rather not gimp that.
Also changed the name of Loguetown Fog to something slightly more fitting thematically. Overnight headaches while working have a way of clouding judgement. /pun
Also changed the name of Loguetown Fog to something slightly more fitting thematically. Overnight headaches while working have a way of clouding judgement. /pun
- Gray
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species/Tribe : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[childofdestiny]][[freakofnature]]
[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]
[[improviseadaptovercome]]
Posts : 3991
Re: Laurel O’Halloran’s Equipment
Wed Dec 28, 2016 9:40 am
You forgot the second fix~
Gray wrote:Both the equipment and the techniques are looking great! Only one correction needed: For your techniques, when you assign a stat debuff to opponents, you must have an equivalent debuff to yourself or an equivalent buff to your opponents. I'd probably recommend giving yourself a -30 to attack for the duration of Loguetown Fog since you'll likely use the technique to escape rather than fight.
Secondly, along with the Technique Cooldown, would you mind adding the technique duration so that it can be seen at first glance? For example: "Technique Cooldown: 10 posts | 3 post duration".
- GuestGuest
Re: Laurel O’Halloran’s Equipment
Wed Dec 28, 2016 9:43 am
Huh, so I did. Welp, that's fixed now too!
- Gray
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species/Tribe : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[childofdestiny]][[freakofnature]]
[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]
[[improviseadaptovercome]]
Posts : 3991
Re: Laurel O’Halloran’s Equipment
Wed Dec 28, 2016 9:55 am
Approved!
Laurel O’Halloran wrote:Laurel O’Halloran’s Equipment
Character Name: Laurel O’Halloran
Number of Equipment Pieces: 2
Highest tiered equipment: 3
Total Equipment Stat Points: +30
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Equipment Name: Monohoshizao
Equipment Type: Kiseru
Equipment Tier: 3
Equipment Stats: +15 Attack
Equipment Description: This smoking pipe was crafted with a shaft made from snakewood and a bowl and mouthpiece of corundum, both gathered from Amazon Lily. Just over 90 cm (2’11.5”) in length, Monohoshizao is much longer and heavier than any typical kiseru, which makes it all the greater for a weapon. The bowl can serve as a bludgeon, of course, while the mouthpiece (the lip, specifically) is tapered enough to break skin with enough force.
Equipment Name: Tools of the Trade
Equipment Type: Opera Gloves with concealed thief tools
Equipment Tier: 3
Equipment Stats: +15 Reflex
Equipment Description:. While Laurel’s Devil Fruit powers render her old gear somewhat redundant, she considers some pieces of gear as essential tools which no sane phantom thief would leave home without. If she anticipates seastone locks, for instance, she puts on opera gloves that reach up to her elbows to serve as a modest shield between her skin and the seastone material. Hidden between the layers of the gloves is a set of tiny, sophisticated, fragile tools, each glove carrying four: namely a hammer, a chisel, a tiny saw, a torsion wrench, tweezers, and half-diamond, hook, and prod picks. While they’re all too small and delicate to actually use as weapons, they’re not something one would want going for the eyes if too close.
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Techniques
- Equipment Techniques:
Oborozuki
Technique By: Monohoshizao
Technique Tier: 3
Technique Range: 20m
Technique Cooldown: 10 posts | 3-Post Duration
Technique Description: Laurel takes in a long draw of tobacco from her pipe and blows it out in front of her, filling the immediate area with a thick pall of smoke. This doesn’t do any damage, but instead interferes heavily with the sight, smell, and breathing of anyone caught in the blast, lowering their Reflex by 50 - though it also creates a false sense of security for Laurel, lowering her Defense by 50 as well. Under normal conditions, the smoke and its interference last up to 3 posts. It is possible to remove the smoke earlier with heavy winds, or in the unfortunate (for Laurel) happenstance that an enemy Devil Fruit user is able to manipulate smoke. Commonly used by Laurel as a means to escape an unfavorable encounter, or catch the enemy by surprise.
Tsubame Gaeshi
Technique By: Monohoshizao
Technique Tier: 3
Technique Range: Melee
Technique Cooldown: 7 posts
Technique Description: This technique involves Laurel striking with her kiseru with a fierce and swift downward cut from above, followed immediately afterwards with an upward motion from below.
- Acacia
[tracker=/t897-grimm-aldous-acacia#4096]
Name : Acacia
Epithet : "Black Seed" ("Kurotane")
Age : 27
Height : 8'5" / 257 cm
Weight : 351 lbs / 159 kg
Species/Tribe : Human
Faction : New Revolutionary Army
Devil Fruit : Mochi Mochi no Mi
Bounty : [ber=r] 250,000,000
Balance : [ber] 582,800,000
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Posts : 125
Re: Laurel O’Halloran’s Equipment
Sat Dec 16, 2017 9:01 pm
I'm sorry I forgot to unlock this! The equipment techniques need to be updated according to the new updates in the equipment template!
- Gray
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species/Tribe : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[childofdestiny]][[freakofnature]]
[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]
[[improviseadaptovercome]]
Posts : 3991
Re: Laurel O’Halloran’s Equipment
Tue Dec 19, 2017 4:30 pm
Approved!
Laurel O’Halloran wrote:Laurel O’Halloran’s Equipment
Character Name: Laurel O’Halloran
Number of Equipment Pieces: 2
Highest tiered equipment: 3
Total Equipment Stat Points: +30
Equipment Name: Monohoshizao
Equipment Type: Kiseru
Equipment Tier: Tier 3
Equipment Stats: +15 Attack
Equipment Description: This smoking pipe was crafted with a shaft made from snakewood and a bowl and mouthpiece of corundum, both gathered from Amazon Lily. Just over 90 cm (2’11.5”) in length, Monohoshizao is much longer and heavier than any typical kiseru, which makes it all the greater for a weapon. The bowl can serve as a bludgeon, of course, while the mouthpiece (the lip, specifically) is tapered enough to break skin with enough force.
Equipment Name: Tools of the Trade
Equipment Type: Thief tools
Equipment Tier: Tier 3
Equipment Stats: +15 Reflex
Equipment Description: While Laurel’s Devil Fruit powers render her old gear somewhat redundant, she considers some pieces of gear as essential tools which no sane phantom thief would leave home without. If she anticipates seastone locks, for instance, she puts on opera gloves that reach up to her elbows to serve as a modest shield between her skin and the seastone material. Hidden between the layers of the gloves is a set of tiny, sophisticated, fragile tools, each glove carrying four: namely a hammer, a chisel, a tiny saw, a torsion wrench, tweezers, and half-diamond, hook, and prod picks. While they’re all too small and delicate to actually use as weapons, they’re not something one would want going for the eyes if too close.
Techniques
- Equipment Techniques:
Oborozuki
Technique By: Monohoshizao
Technique Type: Light Technique
Technique Range: 20m
Technique Cooldown: 7
Technique Duration: 2 posts
Debuffs: Target: RX -20% | Self: DEF -20%
Technique Description: Laurel takes in a long draw of tobacco from her pipe and blows it out in front of her, filling the immediate area with a thick pall of smoke. This doesn’t do any damage, but instead interferes heavily with the sight, smell, and breathing of her target, though it also creates a false sense of security for Laurel as well. It is possible to remove the smoke earlier with heavy winds, or in the happenstance that the opponent is able to manipulate smoke.
Tsubame Gaeshi
Technique By: Monohoshizao
Technique Type: Light Technique
Technique Range: 400m
Technique Cooldown: 5 posts
Technique Description: Dashing towards her target until within range, Laurel strikes at her target with her kiseru with a fierce and swift downward cut from above, followed immediately afterwards with an upward motion from below.
- Gray
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species/Tribe : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[childofdestiny]][[freakofnature]]
[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]
[[improviseadaptovercome]]
Posts : 3991
Re: Laurel O’Halloran’s Equipment
Thu Aug 01, 2019 4:49 pm
Approved!
Welcome back, mate!
Welcome back, mate!
Laurel O’Halloran wrote:Laurel O’Halloran’s Equipment
Character Name: Laurel O’Halloran
Number of Equipment Pieces: 2
Highest tiered equipment: 3
Total Equipment Stat Points: +30
Equipment Name: Monohoshizao
Equipment Type: Kiseru
Equipment Tier: Tier 3
Equipment Stats: +15 Attack
Equipment Description: This smoking pipe was crafted with a shaft made from snakewood and a bowl and mouthpiece of corundum, both gathered from Amazon Lily. Just over 90 cm (2’11.5”) in length, Monohoshizao is much longer and heavier than any typical kiseru, which makes it all the greater for a weapon. The bowl can serve as a bludgeon, of course, while the mouthpiece (the lip, specifically) is tapered enough to break skin with enough force.
Equipment Name: Tools of the Trade
Equipment Type: Thief tools
Equipment Tier: Tier 3
Equipment Stats: +15 Reflex
Equipment Description: While Laurel’s Devil Fruit powers render her old gear somewhat redundant, she considers some pieces of gear as essential tools which no sane phantom thief would leave home without. If she anticipates seastone locks, for instance, she puts on opera gloves that reach up to her elbows to serve as a modest shield between her skin and the seastone material. Hidden between the layers of the gloves is a set of tiny, sophisticated, fragile tools, each glove carrying four: namely a hammer, a chisel, a tiny saw, a torsion wrench, tweezers, and half-diamond, hook, and prod picks. While they’re all too small and delicate to actually use as weapons, they’re not something one would want going for the eyes if too close.
Techniques
- Equipment Techniques:
Oborozuki
By: Monohoshizao
Type: Stat Morph
Class: Light
Range: 20m
Duration: 1 Post
Cooldown: 2 Posts
Debuffs: -25% RX (Target)
Description: Laurel takes in a long draw of tobacco from her pipe and blows it out in front of her, filling the immediate area with a thick pall of smoke. This doesn’t do any damage, but instead interferes heavily with the sight, smell, and breathing of her target. It is possible to remove the smoke with heavy winds, or in the happenstance that the opponent is able to manipulate smoke.
Tsubame Gaeshi
By: Monohoshizao
Type: Flat Damage
Type: Light
Range: 400m
Cooldown: 1 Post
Description: Dashing towards her target until within range, Laurel strikes at her target with her kiseru with a fierce and swift downward cut from above, followed immediately afterwards with an upward motion from below.
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