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[Archived Claims] [2020-09-02] Devil Fruit Claims

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This post has in-line assessment comments.Mon Dec 12, 2016 5:01 pm
Character Name: Roja D. Yuki
Devil Fruit Name: Uddo Uddo no mi/Wood wood fruit
Type: Paramecia
Description: This fruit allows the eater to control and manipulate any wood in the surrounding environment. This allows him to control trees even if they have been cut down. He can control and manipulate the wood of buildings and ships with enough strength. With enough strength he can control a entire forest.


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The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species/Tribe : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
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This post has in-line assessment comments.Mon Dec 12, 2016 5:07 pm
Quentin Quint wrote:Character Name: Quentin Quint
Devil Fruit Name: Inu-Inu no Mi, Model: White Wolf
Type: Zoan
Description: The Inu-Inu no Mi, Model: White Wolf lets it's user take on the shape and characteristics of a white wolf. The full-wolf form is bigger, stronger and more ferocious looking than a normal white wolf.
Code:

[b]Inu-Inu no Mi, Model: White Wolf (Dog-Dog Fruit, Model: White Wolf)[/b] belongs to [u]Quentin Quint[/u].

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The Conqueror / Black Fist
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Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species/Tribe : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
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This post has in-line assessment comments.Mon Dec 12, 2016 5:10 pm
Roja D. Yuki wrote:
Character Name: Roja D. Yuki
Devil Fruit Name: Uddo Uddo no mi/Wood wood fruit
Type: Paramecia
Description: This fruit allows the water [The water? I'm assuming you mean "the user".] to control and manipulate wood in the surrounding environment. In the case of a paramecia, I'd add a bit more detail to this. For example, does being able to manipulate wood mean you can control trees too? Or is it only the wood that has been cut off from trees?

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This post has in-line assessment comments.Tue Dec 13, 2016 5:14 pm
Character Name: Cerise Videl
Devil Fruit Name: Ondo Ondo no Mi (ENG: Temp-Temp Fruit)
Type: Paramecia
Description: The fruit allows the user to gain the ability to manipulate their body's temperature and the temperature of anything they touch (to a certain extent). It also makes the user less susceptible to temperature-induced injuries. Basically like Miss Valentine's weight manipulation fruit, but with temperature instead of weight.
Code:

[b]Ondo Ondo no Mi (ENG: Temp-Temp Fruit)[/b] belongs to [u]Cerise Videl[/u].
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The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species/Tribe : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
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This post has in-line assessment comments.Tue Dec 13, 2016 5:17 pm
Cerise wrote:Character Name: Cerise Videl
Devil Fruit Name: Ondo Ondo no Mi (ENG: Temp-Temp Fruit)
Type: Paramecia
Description: The fruit allows the user to gain the ability to manipulate their body's temperature and the temperature of anything they touch (to a certain extent). It also makes the user less susceptible to temperature-induced injuries. Basically like Miss Valentine's weight manipulation fruit, but with temperature instead of weight.
Code:

[b]Ondo Ondo no Mi (ENG: Temp-Temp Fruit)[/b] belongs to [u]Cerise Videl[/u].

Interesting idea~ I can't wait to see what you do with it.

Also, welcome to the site! If you need any assistance, you can find me in the chatbox or PM me.

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This post has in-line assessment comments.Wed Dec 14, 2016 7:25 am
I've added more detail
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The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species/Tribe : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
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This post has in-line assessment comments.Wed Dec 14, 2016 8:01 am
Roja D. Yuki wrote:Character Name: Roja D. Yuki
Devil Fruit Name: Uddo Uddo no mi/Wood wood fruit
Type: Paramecia
Description: This fruit allows the eater to control and manipulate any wood in the surrounding environment. This allows him to control trees even if they have been cut down. He can control and manipulate the wood of buildings and ships with enough strength. With enough strength he can control a entire forest.

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This post has in-line assessment comments.Sun Dec 25, 2016 12:03 pm
Character Name: Sesshomaru
Devil Fruit Name: Me me no mi (eye-eye fruit)
Type: Paramecia
Description: The eater of this devil fruit becomes an eye man. The user can generate eyes on his entire body and even on whatever he is wearing. The eyes have the ability to shoot Lazer beams out of them.
Code:

[b]Me me no mi (eye-eye fruit)[/b] belongs to [u] Sesshomaru[/u].
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The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species/Tribe : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
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This post has in-line assessment comments.Sun Dec 25, 2016 12:07 pm
Sesshomaru wrote:Character Name: Sesshomaru
Devil Fruit Name: Me me no mi (eye-eye fruit)
Type: Paramecia
Description: The eater of this devil fruit becomes an eye man. The user can generate eyes on his entire body and even on whatever he is wearing. The eyes have the ability to shoot Lazer beams out of them.
Code:

[b]Me me no mi (eye-eye fruit)[/b] belongs to [u] Sesshomaru[/u].

While the eye-generating idea is entirely awesome, the shooting laser beams out of the eyes bit is too far-fetched to justify as that fruit's ability.
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This post has in-line assessment comments.Sun Dec 25, 2016 12:09 pm
Okay. Can I add like him being able to put eyes on other things like Robin's ability?
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[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species/Tribe : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
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This post has in-line assessment comments.Sun Dec 25, 2016 12:11 pm
Sesshomaru wrote:Okay. Can I add like him being able to put eyes on other things like Robin's ability?

Absolutely. That seems completely fair.
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This post has in-line assessment comments.Sun Dec 25, 2016 12:15 pm
Sweet. This will work great hopefully for my character.
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The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species/Tribe : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
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[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]

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This post has in-line assessment comments.Sun Dec 25, 2016 12:17 pm
Sesshomaru wrote:Sweet. This will work great hopefully for my character.

Just update your original Devil Fruit Claim post and let me know so I can approve it.
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This post has in-line assessment comments.Sun Dec 25, 2016 12:32 pm
Character Name: Sesshomaru
Devil Fruit Name: Me me no mi (eye-eye fruit)
Type: Paramecia
Description: The eater of this devil fruit becomes an eye man. The user can generate eyes on his entire body and even on whatever he is wearing. The user is also able to put the eyes on other objects near the user.
Code:

[b]Me me no mi (eye-eye fruit)[/b] belongs to [u] Sesshomaru[/u].
Gray
Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species/Tribe : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
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This post has in-line assessment comments.Sun Dec 25, 2016 12:37 pm
Sesshomaru wrote:Character Name: Sesshomaru
Devil Fruit Name: Me me no mi (eye-eye fruit)
Type: Paramecia
Description: The eater of this devil fruit becomes an eye man. The user can generate eyes on his entire body and even on whatever he is wearing. The user is also able to put the eyes on other objects near the user.
Code:

[b]Me me no mi (eye-eye fruit)[/b] belongs to [u] Sesshomaru[/u].

One question I have regarding this is whether you'll be able to grow eyes on just other objects, or other people as well?
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This post has in-line assessment comments.Sun Dec 25, 2016 12:43 pm
I was thinking anything non organic which would include clothes but not people themselves.
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[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species/Tribe : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
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This post has in-line assessment comments.Sun Dec 25, 2016 12:53 pm
Sesshomaru wrote:I was thinking anything non organic which would include clothes but not people themselves.

Inorganic objects sounds perfect! If you want to add that bit to your description, I'm ready to approve it.
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This post has in-line assessment comments.Sun Dec 25, 2016 12:59 pm
Character Name: Sesshomaru
Devil Fruit Name: Me me no mi (eye-eye fruit)
Type: Paramecia
Description: The eater of this devil fruit becomes an eye man. The user can generate eyes on his entire body and even on whatever he is wearing. The user is also able to put the eyes on inorganic objects near the user.
Code:

[b]Me me no mi (eye-eye fruit)[/b] belongs to [u] Sesshomaru[/u].
Gray
Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species/Tribe : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
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[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]

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This post has in-line assessment comments.Sun Dec 25, 2016 1:04 pm
Sesshomaru wrote:Character Name: Sesshomaru
Devil Fruit Name: Me me no mi (eye-eye fruit)
Type: Paramecia
Description: The eater of this devil fruit becomes an eye man. The user can generate eyes on his entire body and even on whatever he is wearing. The user is also able to put the eyes on inorganic objects near the user.
Code:

[b]Me Me no Mi (Eye-Eye fruit)[/b] belongs to [u]Sesshomaru[/u].

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This post has in-line assessment comments.Wed Dec 28, 2016 7:19 pm
Character Name: Haythen Avery
Devil Fruit Name: "Denki Denki No Mi (Electric-Electric fruit)
Type: Paramecia
Description: The devil fruit gives the owner the ability to electrify his body, the area closely surrounding him and objects that he has direct contact with. The denki denki no mi does not give it's user the ability to turn himself into electricity like the Goro Goro No Mi, but is able to boost its users movement speed. Having mastered the fruit, the fruit can also potentially give it's user the ability to manipulate and control electromagnetic fields.

Code:

[b] Denki Denki No Mi (Electric-Electric fruit)[/b] belongs to [u]Haythen Avery[/u].


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[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species/Tribe : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
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This post has in-line assessment comments.Wed Dec 28, 2016 7:21 pm
Hayth wrote:Character Name: Haythen Avery
Devil Fruit Name: "Denki Denki No Mi (Electric-Electric fruit)
Type: Paramecia
Description: The devil fruit gives the owner the ability to electrify his body, the area closely surrounding him and objects that he has contact with. The denki denki no mi does not give it's user the ability to turn himself into electricity like the Goro Goro No Mi, but is able to boost its users movement speed. Having mastered the fruit, the fruit can also potentially give it's user the ability to manipulate and control electromagnetic fields.

Next time, make sure you use the complete template when posting please.

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This post has in-line assessment comments.Mon Jan 02, 2017 6:32 pm
Character Name: Sabre D. Ken
Devil Fruit Name: Fuwa Fuwa no Mi (Float Float Fruit)
Type: Paramecia
Description: The Fuwa Fuwa no Mi allows the user to levitate things once the user comes into physical contact with the object, including themselves and non living objects.The object stays in the air until the user is knocked unconscious or it is dropped by their will.

Code:

[b]Fuwa Fuwa no Mi (Float Float Fruit)[/b] belongs to [u]Sabre D. Ken[/u].


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[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species/Tribe : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
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This post has in-line assessment comments.Mon Jan 02, 2017 6:44 pm
Sabre wrote:Character Name: Sabre D. Ken
Devil Fruit Name: Fuwa Fuwa no Mi (Float Float Fruit)
Type: Paramecia
Description: The Fuwa Fuwa no Mi allows the user to levitate things once the user comes into physical contact with the object, including themselves and non living objects. The weight of the object does not matter, it will levitate as long as it is non living. The object stays in the air until the user is knocked unconscious or it is dropped by their will.

Fuwa Fuwa no Mi (Float Float Fruit) belongs to Sabre D. Ken.

I'm afraid I cannot approve this so long as you have the "weight of the object does not matter" part in your description. If you're imagining doing what Shiki did with his fruit, it's simply not possible with the current system of stats we have going. Something on a much smaller scale would be acceptable, though. Also, please be sure to follow the template exactly. There's a reason why the code tags were around the "Fuwa Fuwa no Mi (Float Float Fruit) belongs to Sabre D. Ken." bits in the template.
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This post has in-line assessment comments.Mon Jan 02, 2017 7:11 pm
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Sabre wrote:Character Name: Sabre D. Ken
Devil Fruit Name: Fuwa Fuwa no Mi (Float Float Fruit)
Type: Paramecia
Description: The Fuwa Fuwa no Mi allows the user to levitate things once the user comes into physical contact with the object, including themselves and non living objects. The weight of the object does not matter, it will levitate as long as it is non living. The object stays in the air until the user is knocked unconscious or it is dropped by their will.

Fuwa Fuwa no Mi (Float Float Fruit) belongs to Sabre D. Ken.

I'm afraid I cannot approve this so long as you have the "weight of the object does not matter" part in your description. If you're imagining doing what Shiki did with his fruit, it's simply not possible with the current system of stats we have going. Something on a much smaller scale would be acceptable, though. Also, please be sure to follow the template exactly. There's a reason why the code tags were around the "Fuwa Fuwa no Mi (Float Float Fruit) belongs to Sabre D. Ken." bits in the template.

Fixed it, is it fine now? Does it need to be smaller? Any other edits?
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This post has in-line assessment comments.Mon Jan 02, 2017 7:18 pm
Sabre wrote:
Gray wrote:
Sabre wrote:Character Name: Sabre D. Ken
Devil Fruit Name: Fuwa Fuwa no Mi (Float Float Fruit)
Type: Paramecia
Description: The Fuwa Fuwa no Mi allows the user to levitate things once the user comes into physical contact with the object, including themselves and non living objects. The weight of the object does not matter, it will levitate as long as it is non living. The object stays in the air until the user is knocked unconscious or it is dropped by their will.

Fuwa Fuwa no Mi (Float Float Fruit) belongs to Sabre D. Ken.

I'm afraid I cannot approve this so long as you have the "weight of the object does not matter" part in your description. If you're imagining doing what Shiki did with his fruit, it's simply not possible with the current system of stats we have going. Something on a much smaller scale would be acceptable, though. Also, please be sure to follow the template exactly. There's a reason why the code tags were around the "Fuwa Fuwa no Mi (Float Float Fruit) belongs to Sabre D. Ken." bits in the template.

Fixed it, is it fine now? Does it need to be smaller? Any other edits?

For now, let's leave out any mentions of how big/heavy of an object you can lift. We'll expand on this further in your fighting style page.
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