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Anton La'croix
Anton La'croix
[tracker=/t544-anton-la-croix#2124]
Name : Anton La'croix
Epithet : Screaming Grasshopper
Age : 23
Height : 5'9''
Weight : 186lb
Species/Tribe : Human
Faction : Marine
World Position : Rear Admiral
Crew : The Guardian Knights
Ship : The Grand Steamer
Crew Role : Captain
Devil Fruit : Bug-Bug Fruit, Model: Grasshopper
Quality Score : S
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.15 (from world position); +0.16 (from turf); +0.20 (to all allies)
Balance : [bel] 1,472,069,543
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Posts : 652

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This post has in-line assessment comments.Thu Mar 30, 2017 2:00 pm

Mushi Mushi no Mi: Model Grasshopper


Devil Fruit: Mushi Mushi no Mi: Model Grasshopper
Devil Fruit Type: Zoan

Devil Fruit Appearance: The fruit is about the size of an apple, a leafy green colour, and shaped almost to resemble a goard. As per regular Devil Fruits, its covered in spirals, and tastes absolutely awful.
Devil Fruit Description: This zoan type devil fruit allows its user to transform into a grasshopper, as well as transform into a hybrid form. This also grants the user the abilities tied to that of a grasshopper, including absurd jumping ability, multiple limbs, a chitinous exoskeleton and the ability to generate sonic base attacks.

Devil Fruit Passive Abilities:
Jumping Power (Passive): Grasshoppers are renowned for their jumping ability, and this one is no exception. In his regular form, Anton's jumping ability is increased to allow him to jump up to seven times his own height. In his hybrid form though, boosted by the insectoid wings he has on his back, he's capable of leaping up to thirty five times his regular height. Despite him possessing wings, Anton cannot fly, only jump really high.

Exoskeleton (Toggle): Grasshoppers, like all insects, have a chitinous exoskeleton. When in hybrid or full form, Anton's skin hardens to a point like metal. While in this state, his Defense is increased by 20%. However, this outer armour does hamper Anton's movements somewhat, resulting in a 20% decrease in Reflex.

Molting (Toggle): By shedding large amounts of his exoskeleton, and thus extra weight, Anton is able to make himself lighter, capable of moving faster. This raises his Reflex by 20%, though the decrease in mass makes him more fragile, dropping his Willpower by 20%

Multi-armed (Passive): Grasshoppers have six limbs, the powerful back legs, and four front limbs. In Anton's hybrid form, this translates into him possessing four arms. These don't apply any bonuses, outside of allowing him to wield up to four weapons simultaneously.

Sonic Generation (Passive): The grasshopper's famous ability to generate sound through their hind legs. In this case, it's able to be weaponized to allow Anton to generate sonic abilities with his hind legs. This of course requires him to be able to use his legs freely to do so.

Fighting Style: Insect Knight
Weapon Utilization: Devil Fruit, Broad Sword
Specialization: Melee to Medium Range
Description: Using a combination of swordsmanship and Anton's Devil Fruit abilities, the Insect Knight fighting style utitlizes powerful sword strokes, powerful kicks, and the mobility granted by the devil fruit's jumping power. Rather straightforward, without relying on trickery or dirty tactics.


Techniques



Light Attacks:

Medium Attacks:

Heavy Attacks:

AOE Attacks:



Last edited by Anton La'croix on Tue Nov 23, 2021 1:25 pm; edited 30 times in total
Gray
Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species/Tribe : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
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This post has in-line assessment comments.Fri Mar 31, 2017 3:32 pm
Excellently balanced! Only thing I noticed was in the light technique, Sonic Sword, where you should balance out the 10% attack buff with an equivalent debuff. Maybe a 10% reflex debuff to account for the hard-to-control vibrating sword?
Anton La'croix
Anton La'croix
[tracker=/t544-anton-la-croix#2124]
Name : Anton La'croix
Epithet : Screaming Grasshopper
Age : 23
Height : 5'9''
Weight : 186lb
Species/Tribe : Human
Faction : Marine
World Position : Rear Admiral
Crew : The Guardian Knights
Ship : The Grand Steamer
Crew Role : Captain
Devil Fruit : Bug-Bug Fruit, Model: Grasshopper
Quality Score : S
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.15 (from world position); +0.16 (from turf); +0.20 (to all allies)
Balance : [bel] 1,472,069,543
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[[berryprinter]][[punchoutguru]]

[[improviseadaptovercome]]
Turf : [turf="/t299-turf-details-minion-island#1113"]Minion Island[/turf]
Posts : 652

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This post has in-line assessment comments.Fri Mar 31, 2017 5:39 pm
Thank you for the compliment. Edits have been made.
Gray
Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species/Tribe : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
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Posts : 3993

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This post has in-line assessment comments.Fri Mar 31, 2017 8:25 pm
Approved.

Anton La'croix wrote:
Mushi Mushi no Mi: Model Grasshopper


Devil Fruit: Mushi Mushi no Mi: Model Grasshopper
Devil Fruit Type: Zoan

Devil Fruit Appearance: The fruit is about the size of an apple, a leafy green colour, and shaped almost to resemble a goard. As per regular Devil Fruits, its covered in spirals, and tastes absolutely awful.
Devil Fruit Description: This zoan type devil fruit allows its user to transform into a grasshopper, as well as transform into a hybrid form. This also grants the user the abilities tied to that of a grasshopper, including absurd jumping ability, multiple limbs, a chitinous exoskeleton and the ability to generate sonic base attacks.

Devil Fruit Passive Abilities:
Jumping Power: Grasshoppers are renowned for their jumping ability, and this one is no exception. In his regular form, Anton's jumping ability is increased to allow him to jump up to seven times his own height. In his hybrid form though, boosted by the insectoid wings he has on his back, he's capable of leaping up to thirty five times his regular height. Despite him possessing wings, Anton cannot fly, only jump really high.

Exoskeleton: Grasshoppers, like all insects, have a chitinous exoskeleton. When in hybrid or full form, Anton's skin hardens to a point like metal. While in this state, his Defense is increased by 5%. However, this outer armour does hamper Anton's movements somewhat, resulting in a 5% decrease in Reflex.

Multi-armed: Grasshoppers have six limbs, the powerful back legs, and four front limbs. In Anton's hybrid form, this translates into him possessing four arms. These don't apply any bonuses, outside of allowing him to wield up to four weapons simultaneously.

Sonic Generation: The grasshopper's famous ability to generate sound through their hind legs. In this case, it's able to be weaponized to allow Anton to generate sonic abilities with his hind legs. This of course requires him to be able to use his legs freely to do so.

Fighting Style: Insect Knight
Weapon Utilization: Devil Fruit, Broad Sword
Specialization: Melee to Medium Range
Description: Using a combination of swordsmanship and Anton's Devil Fruit abilities, the Insect Knight fighting style utitlizes powerful sword strokes, powerful kicks, and the mobility granted by the devil fruit's jumping power. Rather straightforward, without relying on trickery or dirty tactics.


Techniques



Light Attacks:

Medium Attacks:

Heavy Attacks:

AOE Attacks:

Acacia
Acacia
Kurotane (Black Seed)
[tracker=/t897-grimm-aldous-acacia#4096]
Name : Acacia
Epithet : "Black Seed" ("Kurotane")
Age : 27
Height : 8'5" / 257 cm
Weight : 351 lbs / 159 kg
Species/Tribe : Human
Faction : New Revolutionary Army
Devil Fruit : Mochi Mochi no Mi
Bounty : [ber=r] 250,000,000
Balance : [ber] 582,800,000
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Posts : 125

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This post has in-line assessment comments.Wed Jul 31, 2019 7:20 pm
Hi Anton. You need to use the proper names for the Technique Types. Also, for the techniques that have buffs and debuffs, please list them separately as shown in the template. Thank you.
Gray
Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species/Tribe : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
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This post has in-line assessment comments.Thu Aug 01, 2019 3:20 pm
You're missing a Level 20 AoE.

Also, for your Sonic Sword technique, you don't need to balance out your stats anymore with Stat Morphs since they don't deal damage. You can simply give yourself a +25% ATK buff without debuffing your RX.
Gray
Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species/Tribe : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
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Posts : 3993

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This post has in-line assessment comments.Thu Aug 01, 2019 4:34 pm
Sorry for not noticing this sooner, but for any Stat Morphs or Hybrids, if you have a duration, you need to increase your cooldown by that many posts.

Currently, your Sonic Sword and your B Flat AoE need to have their cooldowns increased. And, for the B Flat AoE, you haven't listed a duration.
Gray
Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species/Tribe : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
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Posts : 3993

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This post has in-line assessment comments.Thu Aug 01, 2019 4:55 pm
Approved! Thanks for your patience.
Anton La'croix wrote:

Mushi Mushi no Mi: Model Grasshopper


Devil Fruit: Mushi Mushi no Mi: Model Grasshopper
Devil Fruit Type: Zoan

Devil Fruit Appearance: The fruit is about the size of an apple, a leafy green colour, and shaped almost to resemble a goard. As per regular Devil Fruits, its covered in spirals, and tastes absolutely awful.
Devil Fruit Description: This zoan type devil fruit allows its user to transform into a grasshopper, as well as transform into a hybrid form. This also grants the user the abilities tied to that of a grasshopper, including absurd jumping ability, multiple limbs, a chitinous exoskeleton and the ability to generate sonic base attacks.

Devil Fruit Passive Abilities:
Jumping Power: Grasshoppers are renowned for their jumping ability, and this one is no exception. In his regular form, Anton's jumping ability is increased to allow him to jump up to seven times his own height. In his hybrid form though, boosted by the insectoid wings he has on his back, he's capable of leaping up to thirty five times his regular height. Despite him possessing wings, Anton cannot fly, only jump really high.

Exoskeleton: Grasshoppers, like all insects, have a chitinous exoskeleton. When in hybrid or full form, Anton's skin hardens to a point like metal. While in this state, his Defense is increased by 5%. However, this outer armour does hamper Anton's movements somewhat, resulting in a 5% decrease in Reflex.

Multi-armed: Grasshoppers have six limbs, the powerful back legs, and four front limbs. In Anton's hybrid form, this translates into him possessing four arms. These don't apply any bonuses, outside of allowing him to wield up to four weapons simultaneously.

Sonic Generation: The grasshopper's famous ability to generate sound through their hind legs. In this case, it's able to be weaponized to allow Anton to generate sonic abilities with his hind legs. This of course requires him to be able to use his legs freely to do so.

Fighting Style: Insect Knight
Weapon Utilization: Devil Fruit, Broad Sword
Specialization: Melee to Medium Range
Description: Using a combination of swordsmanship and Anton's Devil Fruit abilities, the Insect Knight fighting style utitlizes powerful sword strokes, powerful kicks, and the mobility granted by the devil fruit's jumping power. Rather straightforward, without relying on trickery or dirty tactics.


Techniques



Light Attacks:

Medium Attacks:

Heavy Attacks:

AOE Attacks:

Gray
Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species/Tribe : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
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Posts : 3993

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This post has in-line assessment comments.Mon Dec 23, 2019 10:21 am
Unlocked for level 40 updates!
Gray
Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species/Tribe : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
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Posts : 3993

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This post has in-line assessment comments.Thu Dec 26, 2019 1:03 pm
[Fighting Style] Mushi Mushi no Mi: Model Grasshopper XDosNOa

Anton La'croix wrote:

Mushi Mushi no Mi: Model Grasshopper


Devil Fruit: Mushi Mushi no Mi: Model Grasshopper
Devil Fruit Type: Zoan

Devil Fruit Appearance: The fruit is about the size of an apple, a leafy green colour, and shaped almost to resemble a goard. As per regular Devil Fruits, its covered in spirals, and tastes absolutely awful.
Devil Fruit Description: This zoan type devil fruit allows its user to transform into a grasshopper, as well as transform into a hybrid form. This also grants the user the abilities tied to that of a grasshopper, including absurd jumping ability, multiple limbs, a chitinous exoskeleton and the ability to generate sonic base attacks.

Devil Fruit Passive Abilities:
Jumping Power: Grasshoppers are renowned for their jumping ability, and this one is no exception. In his regular form, Anton's jumping ability is increased to allow him to jump up to seven times his own height. In his hybrid form though, boosted by the insectoid wings he has on his back, he's capable of leaping up to thirty five times his regular height. Despite him possessing wings, Anton cannot fly, only jump really high.

Exoskeleton: Grasshoppers, like all insects, have a chitinous exoskeleton. When in hybrid or full form, Anton's skin hardens to a point like metal. While in this state, his Defense is increased by 5%. However, this outer armour does hamper Anton's movements somewhat, resulting in a 5% decrease in Reflex.

Multi-armed: Grasshoppers have six limbs, the powerful back legs, and four front limbs. In Anton's hybrid form, this translates into him possessing four arms. These don't apply any bonuses, outside of allowing him to wield up to four weapons simultaneously.

Sonic Generation: The grasshopper's famous ability to generate sound through their hind legs. In this case, it's able to be weaponized to allow Anton to generate sonic abilities with his hind legs. This of course requires him to be able to use his legs freely to do so.

Fighting Style: Insect Knight
Weapon Utilization: Devil Fruit, Broad Sword
Specialization: Melee to Medium Range
Description: Using a combination of swordsmanship and Anton's Devil Fruit abilities, the Insect Knight fighting style utitlizes powerful sword strokes, powerful kicks, and the mobility granted by the devil fruit's jumping power. Rather straightforward, without relying on trickery or dirty tactics.


Techniques



Light Attacks:

Medium Attacks:

Heavy Attacks:

AOE Attacks:

Gray
Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species/Tribe : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
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This post has in-line assessment comments.Fri Dec 18, 2020 12:17 pm
Unlocked for combat system change updates. See new template and technique cooldown values please.
Gray
Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species/Tribe : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[childofdestiny]][[freakofnature]]
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Posts : 3993

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This post has in-line assessment comments.Sat Feb 06, 2021 11:11 am
[ Thanks for the edits, Anton! I just had a few comments which are marked in orange. ]


Anton La'croix wrote:

Mushi Mushi no Mi: Model Grasshopper


Devil Fruit: Mushi Mushi no Mi: Model Grasshopper
Devil Fruit Type: Zoan

Devil Fruit Appearance: The fruit is about the size of an apple, a leafy green colour, and shaped almost to resemble a goard. As per regular Devil Fruits, its covered in spirals, and tastes absolutely awful.
Devil Fruit Description: This zoan type devil fruit allows its user to transform into a grasshopper, as well as transform into a hybrid form. This also grants the user the abilities tied to that of a grasshopper, including absurd jumping ability, multiple limbs, a chitinous exoskeleton and the ability to generate sonic base attacks.

Devil Fruit Passive Abilities:
Jumping Power [ Mark this as a passive in parentheses. ]: Grasshoppers are renowned for their jumping ability, and this one is no exception. In his regular form, Anton's jumping ability is increased to allow him to jump up to seven times his own height. In his hybrid form though, boosted by the insectoid wings he has on his back, he's capable of leaping up to thirty five times his regular height. Despite him possessing wings, Anton cannot fly, only jump really high.

Exoskeleton [ Mark this as a toggle in parentheses. ]: Grasshoppers, like all insects, have a chitinous exoskeleton. When in hybrid or full form, Anton's skin hardens to a point like metal. While in this state, his Defense is increased by 5%. However, this outer armour does hamper Anton's movements somewhat, resulting in a 5% decrease in Reflex. [ Toggles must have a total 20% buffs and 20% debuffs. ]

Multi-armed [ Mark this as a passive in parentheses. ]: Grasshoppers have six limbs, the powerful back legs, and four front limbs. In Anton's hybrid form, this translates into him possessing four arms. These don't apply any bonuses, outside of allowing him to wield up to four weapons simultaneously.

Sonic Generation [ Mark this as a passive in parentheses. ]: The grasshopper's famous ability to generate sound through their hind legs. In this case, it's able to be weaponized to allow Anton to generate sonic abilities with his hind legs. This of course requires him to be able to use his legs freely to do so.

Fighting Style: Insect Knight
Weapon Utilization: Devil Fruit, Broad Sword
Specialization: Melee to Medium Range
Description: Using a combination of swordsmanship and Anton's Devil Fruit abilities, the Insect Knight fighting style utitlizes powerful sword strokes, powerful kicks, and the mobility granted by the devil fruit's jumping power. Rather straightforward, without relying on trickery or dirty tactics.


Techniques



Light Attacks:

Medium Attacks:

Heavy Attacks:

AOE Attacks:

Gray
Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species/Tribe : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
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Anton La'croix wrote:

Mushi Mushi no Mi: Model Grasshopper


Devil Fruit: Mushi Mushi no Mi: Model Grasshopper
Devil Fruit Type: Zoan

Devil Fruit Appearance: The fruit is about the size of an apple, a leafy green colour, and shaped almost to resemble a goard. As per regular Devil Fruits, its covered in spirals, and tastes absolutely awful.
Devil Fruit Description: This zoan type devil fruit allows its user to transform into a grasshopper, as well as transform into a hybrid form. This also grants the user the abilities tied to that of a grasshopper, including absurd jumping ability, multiple limbs, a chitinous exoskeleton and the ability to generate sonic base attacks.

Devil Fruit Passive Abilities:
Jumping Power (Passive): Grasshoppers are renowned for their jumping ability, and this one is no exception. In his regular form, Anton's jumping ability is increased to allow him to jump up to seven times his own height. In his hybrid form though, boosted by the insectoid wings he has on his back, he's capable of leaping up to thirty five times his regular height. Despite him possessing wings, Anton cannot fly, only jump really high.

Exoskeleton (Toggle): Grasshoppers, like all insects, have a chitinous exoskeleton. When in hybrid or full form, Anton's skin hardens to a point like metal. While in this state, his Defense is increased by 20%. However, this outer armour does hamper Anton's movements somewhat, resulting in a 20% decrease in Reflex.

Molting (Toggle): By shedding large amounts of his exoskeleton, and thus extra weight, Anton is able to make himself lighter, capable of moving faster. This raises his Reflex by 20%, though the decrease in mass makes him more fragile, dropping his Willpower by 20%

Multi-armed (Passive): Grasshoppers have six limbs, the powerful back legs, and four front limbs. In Anton's hybrid form, this translates into him possessing four arms. These don't apply any bonuses, outside of allowing him to wield up to four weapons simultaneously.

Sonic Generation (Passive): The grasshopper's famous ability to generate sound through their hind legs. In this case, it's able to be weaponized to allow Anton to generate sonic abilities with his hind legs. This of course requires him to be able to use his legs freely to do so.

Fighting Style: Insect Knight
Weapon Utilization: Devil Fruit, Broad Sword
Specialization: Melee to Medium Range
Description: Using a combination of swordsmanship and Anton's Devil Fruit abilities, the Insect Knight fighting style utitlizes powerful sword strokes, powerful kicks, and the mobility granted by the devil fruit's jumping power. Rather straightforward, without relying on trickery or dirty tactics.


Techniques



Light Attacks:

Medium Attacks:

Heavy Attacks:

AOE Attacks:

Gray
Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species/Tribe : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
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This post has in-line assessment comments.Fri Oct 29, 2021 4:34 pm
Unlocked for tier-up updates. (T3 -> T4)
Gray
Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species/Tribe : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
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This post has in-line assessment comments.Tue Nov 23, 2021 1:20 pm
Thanks for getting this updated, Anton.

Just a couple of small corrections regarding your Cancellers.

1. You don't have to specify whether a Canceller is for Flats or Stat Morphs. You can choose what it affects when you use it.
2. LT Cancellers have a cooldown of 2. You wrote 4.

Anton La'croix wrote:

Mushi Mushi no Mi: Model Grasshopper


Devil Fruit: Mushi Mushi no Mi: Model Grasshopper
Devil Fruit Type: Zoan

Devil Fruit Appearance: The fruit is about the size of an apple, a leafy green colour, and shaped almost to resemble a goard. As per regular Devil Fruits, its covered in spirals, and tastes absolutely awful.
Devil Fruit Description: This zoan type devil fruit allows its user to transform into a grasshopper, as well as transform into a hybrid form. This also grants the user the abilities tied to that of a grasshopper, including absurd jumping ability, multiple limbs, a chitinous exoskeleton and the ability to generate sonic base attacks.

Devil Fruit Passive Abilities:
Jumping Power (Passive): Grasshoppers are renowned for their jumping ability, and this one is no exception. In his regular form, Anton's jumping ability is increased to allow him to jump up to seven times his own height. In his hybrid form though, boosted by the insectoid wings he has on his back, he's capable of leaping up to thirty five times his regular height. Despite him possessing wings, Anton cannot fly, only jump really high.

Exoskeleton (Toggle): Grasshoppers, like all insects, have a chitinous exoskeleton. When in hybrid or full form, Anton's skin hardens to a point like metal. While in this state, his Defense is increased by 20%. However, this outer armour does hamper Anton's movements somewhat, resulting in a 20% decrease in Reflex.

Molting (Toggle): By shedding large amounts of his exoskeleton, and thus extra weight, Anton is able to make himself lighter, capable of moving faster. This raises his Reflex by 20%, though the decrease in mass makes him more fragile, dropping his Willpower by 20%

Multi-armed (Passive): Grasshoppers have six limbs, the powerful back legs, and four front limbs. In Anton's hybrid form, this translates into him possessing four arms. These don't apply any bonuses, outside of allowing him to wield up to four weapons simultaneously.

Sonic Generation (Passive): The grasshopper's famous ability to generate sound through their hind legs. In this case, it's able to be weaponized to allow Anton to generate sonic abilities with his hind legs. This of course requires him to be able to use his legs freely to do so.

Fighting Style: Insect Knight
Weapon Utilization: Devil Fruit, Broad Sword
Specialization: Melee to Medium Range
Description: Using a combination of swordsmanship and Anton's Devil Fruit abilities, the Insect Knight fighting style utitlizes powerful sword strokes, powerful kicks, and the mobility granted by the devil fruit's jumping power. Rather straightforward, without relying on trickery or dirty tactics.


Techniques



Light Attacks:

Medium Attacks:

Heavy Attacks:

AOE Attacks:

Gray
Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species/Tribe : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
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This post has in-line assessment comments.Tue Nov 23, 2021 1:31 pm
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Anton La'croix wrote:

Mushi Mushi no Mi: Model Grasshopper


Devil Fruit: Mushi Mushi no Mi: Model Grasshopper
Devil Fruit Type: Zoan

Devil Fruit Appearance: The fruit is about the size of an apple, a leafy green colour, and shaped almost to resemble a goard. As per regular Devil Fruits, its covered in spirals, and tastes absolutely awful.
Devil Fruit Description: This zoan type devil fruit allows its user to transform into a grasshopper, as well as transform into a hybrid form. This also grants the user the abilities tied to that of a grasshopper, including absurd jumping ability, multiple limbs, a chitinous exoskeleton and the ability to generate sonic base attacks.

Devil Fruit Passive Abilities:
Jumping Power (Passive): Grasshoppers are renowned for their jumping ability, and this one is no exception. In his regular form, Anton's jumping ability is increased to allow him to jump up to seven times his own height. In his hybrid form though, boosted by the insectoid wings he has on his back, he's capable of leaping up to thirty five times his regular height. Despite him possessing wings, Anton cannot fly, only jump really high.

Exoskeleton (Toggle): Grasshoppers, like all insects, have a chitinous exoskeleton. When in hybrid or full form, Anton's skin hardens to a point like metal. While in this state, his Defense is increased by 20%. However, this outer armour does hamper Anton's movements somewhat, resulting in a 20% decrease in Reflex.

Molting (Toggle): By shedding large amounts of his exoskeleton, and thus extra weight, Anton is able to make himself lighter, capable of moving faster. This raises his Reflex by 20%, though the decrease in mass makes him more fragile, dropping his Willpower by 20%

Multi-armed (Passive): Grasshoppers have six limbs, the powerful back legs, and four front limbs. In Anton's hybrid form, this translates into him possessing four arms. These don't apply any bonuses, outside of allowing him to wield up to four weapons simultaneously.

Sonic Generation (Passive): The grasshopper's famous ability to generate sound through their hind legs. In this case, it's able to be weaponized to allow Anton to generate sonic abilities with his hind legs. This of course requires him to be able to use his legs freely to do so.

Fighting Style: Insect Knight
Weapon Utilization: Devil Fruit, Broad Sword
Specialization: Melee to Medium Range
Description: Using a combination of swordsmanship and Anton's Devil Fruit abilities, the Insect Knight fighting style utitlizes powerful sword strokes, powerful kicks, and the mobility granted by the devil fruit's jumping power. Rather straightforward, without relying on trickery or dirty tactics.


Techniques



Light Attacks:

Medium Attacks:

Heavy Attacks:

AOE Attacks:

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