[Episode] Career Changes
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- Rowan Roji
- [tracker=/t2320-roji-superior#14003]
Name : Rowan Roji
Epithet : Roji of the Morning Dew | Saint Rowan
Age : 17
Height : 6'2" | 188 cm
Weight : 235 lbs. | 106 kg
Species/Tribe : Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Supernova
Crew : Nox Pirates
Ship : The Wailing Calamity
Crew Role : Vice Captain | Envy Sin
Bounty : [ber=r] 237,000,000
Quality Score : B
Income Bonus : +0.42 (Turf)
Shop Discount : -10%
Balance : [ber] 698,067,971
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Turf : [turf="/t296-turf-details-lvneel#1110"]Lvneel[/turf] [turf="/t309-turf-details-st-poplar#1124"]St. Poplar[/turf]
Posts : 79
Re: [Episode] Career Changes
Tue Jun 28, 2022 9:53 am
Roji heard the guard’s advance and formation way before he gathered the strength to lift himself to a sitting position and see them for himself. He and Kernel both had been surrounded. Of course that meant a lot more for Roji than Kernel, As Kernel should still have enough energy to at least attempt an escape while Roji was still facing a particularly unpleasant-looking cut.
The ex-revolutionary grew particularly worried when [dass]Bearington himself[cmt]This seems to imply that Roji knows who Bearington is?[/cmt][/dass] walked through the blockade of guardsmen and announced that they were under arrest. Too exhausted from the battle, Roji could just barely stay still while he protested Bearington’s judgment, “Hey! I was helping you guys! This guy is the problem, he tried to kill everyone!”
Roji pointed to his cousin while he told his harrowing (and heavily embellished) retelling of the events that just transpired. It did not feel too nice to throw his cousin under the bus, especially since Kernel believed that Roji had already done so once before. But considering his options and the fact that Kernel just spent the last ten to fifteen minutes beating him up, Roji did not think he was in the wrong.
Kernel directed his anger from Roji’s accusations toward the guards, The orange-haired pirate dropped his crewmate and balled up his fists before attempting to make a breakthrough in the knight's formation. As he was too big to squeeze through any gaps, Kernel's only option was to run directly into one of the knights and hoping that they would fall over.
Kernel’s scheme would fail horribly, When he made contact with one of the knights he was met with a swift bash of a shield by the man he hit as well as smacks from the two knights on his sides. The sudden impact left Kernel flat on his ass, but uninjured. Taking in his surroundings, Kernel realized that he needed more time to come up with a feasible escape plan.
@Castor O. Nox
The ex-revolutionary grew particularly worried when [dass]Bearington himself[cmt]This seems to imply that Roji knows who Bearington is?[/cmt][/dass] walked through the blockade of guardsmen and announced that they were under arrest. Too exhausted from the battle, Roji could just barely stay still while he protested Bearington’s judgment, “Hey! I was helping you guys! This guy is the problem, he tried to kill everyone!”
Roji pointed to his cousin while he told his harrowing (and heavily embellished) retelling of the events that just transpired. It did not feel too nice to throw his cousin under the bus, especially since Kernel believed that Roji had already done so once before. But considering his options and the fact that Kernel just spent the last ten to fifteen minutes beating him up, Roji did not think he was in the wrong.
Kernel directed his anger from Roji’s accusations toward the guards, The orange-haired pirate dropped his crewmate and balled up his fists before attempting to make a breakthrough in the knight's formation. As he was too big to squeeze through any gaps, Kernel's only option was to run directly into one of the knights and hoping that they would fall over.
Kernel’s scheme would fail horribly, When he made contact with one of the knights he was met with a swift bash of a shield by the man he hit as well as smacks from the two knights on his sides. The sudden impact left Kernel flat on his ass, but uninjured. Taking in his surroundings, Kernel realized that he needed more time to come up with a feasible escape plan.
- Word Count:
- 322|5370|5000
@Castor O. Nox
- Castor O. Nox
[tracker=/t980-castor-o-nox#4771]
Name : Castor O. Nox
Epithet : Sanpaku | The Azure Pheasant | Duke Of Lvneel | Saint Nox
Age : 25
Height : 5'9"
Weight : 175lbs
Species/Tribe : Three-Eye Tribesman
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Blockbuster
Alliance : -
Crew : Nox Pirates
Ship : The Wailing Calamity
Crew Role : Captain | Navigator | Book Collector | Pride Sin
Devil Fruit : Goro Goro no Mi
Bounty : [ber=r] 620,000,000
Quality Score : S
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (To all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.42 (Turf); +0.10 (Blockbuster); +0.20 (To all allies)
Shop Discount : -20%
Crew Pool : [bel=u] 96,000,000
Balance : [bel] 2,470,815,020
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Re: [Episode] Career Changes
Tue Jun 28, 2022 11:19 am
A New Sin
Returning to the Castle's walls, Castor reformed his body, several streaks of lightning appeared within the circle of guards, particularly next to Bearington's position.
"Azure Pheasant!" The guards shouted with much glee of their Duke's presence.
"Eh. I hate that nickname. Bearington. Roji's with me. Take the rest of the rebels and throw them into the prison." Castor ordered, pointing to the ponytail man to indicate who Roji was.
After a bit of resistance, the other outlaws were subdued and the two men were left in the throne room alone. "Gashi Gashi... Well, this has been quite the day. Unfortunately, I'm way too exhausted and starving to worry about reading at this time." Castor declared with a chuckle, walking towards the staircase that leads to the throne.
Taking a seat in the golden encrusted chair, Castor slouched into one arm and stared intensely at Rojj."Now. What's your next move? I've disposed of the man named Mort, was it? From the Revolutionary Army, you're the only contact that remains." Castor inquired.
"I wish not to make an enemy of the New Revolutionary Army. As the only remaining member here... I'm going to need you to spin the events here in my favor. Tell them of Mort's actions." Castor declared.
"On another note. Roji. I could use a man like you in my fold. Judging by your appearance, you fought hard. If you become one of my Nakama... I guarantee that you'll get stronger. Whatever you wish for. I will see to it becoming a reality."
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- Rowan Roji
- [tracker=/t2320-roji-superior#14003]
Name : Rowan Roji
Epithet : Roji of the Morning Dew | Saint Rowan
Age : 17
Height : 6'2" | 188 cm
Weight : 235 lbs. | 106 kg
Species/Tribe : Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Supernova
Crew : Nox Pirates
Ship : The Wailing Calamity
Crew Role : Vice Captain | Envy Sin
Bounty : [ber=r] 237,000,000
Quality Score : B
Income Bonus : +0.42 (Turf)
Shop Discount : -10%
Balance : [ber] 698,067,971
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Turf : [turf="/t296-turf-details-lvneel#1110"]Lvneel[/turf] [turf="/t309-turf-details-st-poplar#1124"]St. Poplar[/turf]
Posts : 79
Re: [Episode] Career Changes
Tue Jun 28, 2022 1:09 pm
Roji let out an audible sigh of relief when Castor vouched for him and halted his impending arrest. The ex-revolutionary felt strange watching former family and allies alike being taken out of the throne room while he was left behind. [dass]Oh well, that is the way it goes when you switch to the winning team.[cmt]For someone who has "protective" listed as one of his defining traits, this certainly seems wildly out of character. And that describes my feeling about Roji's character in this entire thread.[/cmt][/dass]
Roji slowly turned himself to face the throne, and Castor by extension once he took a seat. The ex-revolutionary shook his head while answering Nox’s first question, “I don’t know what is next, It wouldn’t feel right to go back to the NRA after what just happened, but I don’t want to completely burn that bridge with them.”
He forced himself to maintain eye contact with Castor even though it was hard for him. Roji could not afford to show weakness now, especially after his defeat in battle, “I have no intentions of covering up any of Mort’s wrongdoings. The NRA will be made fully aware of what he did today.”
Roji cracked a smile when hearing Nox’s invitation, “I accept your invitation. My wish is simple, I want the strength to live a truly free life, by any means necessary.”
@Castor O. Nox
Roji slowly turned himself to face the throne, and Castor by extension once he took a seat. The ex-revolutionary shook his head while answering Nox’s first question, “I don’t know what is next, It wouldn’t feel right to go back to the NRA after what just happened, but I don’t want to completely burn that bridge with them.”
He forced himself to maintain eye contact with Castor even though it was hard for him. Roji could not afford to show weakness now, especially after his defeat in battle, “I have no intentions of covering up any of Mort’s wrongdoings. The NRA will be made fully aware of what he did today.”
Roji cracked a smile when hearing Nox’s invitation, “I accept your invitation. My wish is simple, I want the strength to live a truly free life, by any means necessary.”
- Word Count:
- 196|5566|5000
@Castor O. Nox
- Gray
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species/Tribe : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
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Re: [Episode] Career Changes
Wed Jul 05, 2023 11:12 pm
GRADING
Quality Score (Re)assessment: Yes
ASSESSMENT SCORES
- Castor O. Nox:
- Category Scores:
Plot: 70 out of 100
Characters: 55 out of 75
Dialogue: 35 out of 50
World-building: 30 out of 50
Literary Devices: 70 out of 100
Language: 90 out of 125
Total: 335 out of 500
- Rowan Roji:
- Category Scores:
Plot: 70 out of 100
Characters: 45 out of 75
Dialogue: 30 out of 50
World-building: 30 out of 50
Literary Devices: 30 out of 100
Language: 90 out of 125
Total: 295 out of 500
REWARDS
- Castor O. Nox:
Length Multiplier: 1.00x (5,490 words)
Difficulty Bonus: +0.25 (+1)
Quality Bonus: +1.50 (A)
EXP Bonus: +0.20
Income Bonus: +0.47
Apology Bonus: +2.00 (Max)
EXP: +498
Berries: +211,225,000
Bounty: +0 (Reached Blues cap)
EXP redirected to @Rowan Roji.
Roji Old EXP: 548
Roji Updated EXP: 1046 (EXP updated in the combat character-sheet)
Old balance: 290,000,000
Updated balance: 501,225,000
- Rowan Roji:
Length Multiplier: 1.00x (5,566 words)
Difficulty Bonus: +0.00 (+0 due to escaping from boss)
Quality Bonus: +0.75 (B)
EXP Bonus: +0.20 (From Castor's Punchout Guru)
Income Bonus: +0.37 (+0.20 from Castor's Berry Printer)
Apology Bonus: +2.00 (Max)
Noob Bonus: +5.00
EXP: +448
Berries: +50,160,000 [ber]
Bounty: +7,000,000 [ber=r] (For associating with a notorious pirate once the World Government finds out about the incident at Asgar.)
Old EXP: 100
Updated EXP: 548
Old balance: 50,050,000
Updated balance: 100,210,000
Old bounty: [ber=r] 0
Updated bounty: [ber=r] 7,000,000
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