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Yume no Katachi Empty Yume no Katachi

This post has in-line assessment comments.Thu Jul 25, 2019 2:35 pm

夢の形
Yume no Katachi - Dream Style


Fighting Style: Yume no Katachi
Weapon Utilization:  Swords
Description: A relatively new way to wield a sword in the grand scheme of sword styles, was developed by Rama the Great to be utilized in his heroics. This style is known as the Dream Style as it combines both elegance and quick or powerful strikes to the body in tandem to make it mesmerizing to spectators and frustrating to opponents. This style requires great speed and focus from the user as they will have to constantly juggle quick stabs and heavy slashes along with dashes and dodges.

In the words of Rama the Great, "I made this style not only to kill, but to look cool while doing it."

Toggled and Passive Abilities: N/A


Techniques




Light Techniques:

Medium Techniques:

Heavy Techniques:

AoE Techniques:






Last edited by Y'sera Knight on Sat Jul 27, 2019 12:04 pm; edited 2 times in total
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Yume no Katachi Empty Re: Yume no Katachi

This post has in-line assessment comments.Fri Jul 26, 2019 6:37 pm
Y'sera Knight wrote:

[Comments and Corrections are in Purple]

夢の形
Yume no Katachi - Dream Style


Fighting Style: Yume no Katachi
Weapon Utilization:  Swords
Description: A relatively new way to wield a sword in the grand scheme of sword styles, was developed by Rama the Great to be utilized in his heroics. This style is known as the Dream Style as it combines both elegance and quick or powerful strikes to the body in tandem to make it mesmerizing to spectators and frustrating to opponents. This style requires great speed and focus from the user as they will have to constantly juggle quick stabs and heavy slashes along with dashes and dodges.

In the words of Rama the Great, "I made this style not only to kill, but to look cool while doing it."

Toggled and Passive Abilities: List any and all passive abilities and properties your fighting style gives you. This cannot include any damage dealing special attacks, as those will be included under techniques. Passive/toggled abilities cannot give buffs/debuffs higher than 20%. [For the sake of a clean looking app, if you don't have any toggled or passive abilities, I would suggest simply placing an "N/A" in this position, as you have done with the parts of techniques that do not apply.]


Techniques




Light Techniques:

Medium Techniques:

Heavy Techniques:

AoE Techniques:




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Yume no Katachi Empty Re: Yume no Katachi

This post has in-line assessment comments.Fri Jul 26, 2019 9:09 pm
Staff deliberation has occurred, and I believe that the debuffs and buffs make enough sense to approve this. I don't have any fancy stamps like Gray and Brood though, sorry.
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The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species/Tribe : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[childofdestiny]][[freakofnature]]
[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]

[[improviseadaptovercome]]
Posts : 3991

Yume no Katachi Empty Re: Yume no Katachi

This post has in-line assessment comments.Sat Jul 27, 2019 2:09 am
This error is on me, however, the "Recommended Cooldowns" wording in the combat guide is an old one that should've been corrected. Your technique cooldowns should always follow the ones listed in the combat guide, altered only by the duration of your technique. Therefore, the cooldown for your HT should 8 posts + 6 posts (the length of your duration), making it no more and no less than 14 posts.
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Yume no Katachi Empty Re: Yume no Katachi

This post has in-line assessment comments.Sat Jul 27, 2019 4:24 pm
Thank you for clarifying things, as well as catching my mistake, Gray. That being said, this is approved again. If you really want a stamp on this, Im sure Gray would be amenable to placing his fancy approval stamp. Otherwise, you're stuck with this plain looking post for now, sorry.
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Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species/Tribe : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[childofdestiny]][[freakofnature]]
[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]

[[improviseadaptovercome]]
Posts : 3991

Yume no Katachi Empty Re: Yume no Katachi

This post has in-line assessment comments.Sat Aug 10, 2019 11:40 am
The combat system was recently updated. Please review the updates and use the new template to adjust your fighting style accordingly. Thanks!

Devil Fruit Fighting Style Template
Non-devil fruit fighting style template
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