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Western Trigonometry!
Tue Jul 23, 2019 11:40 pmDoa Doa no Mi
Devil Fruit: Door Door Fruit
Devil Fruit Type: Paramecia
Devil Fruit Appearance: Doa Doa no Mi
Devil Fruit Description: The Doa Doa no Mi is a Paramecia-type Devil Fruit that allows the user to create doors through anything they touch, making the user a Door Human. The doors they create can be created from any part of their body, from the palm of their hands to their whole body itself, and usually take the shape and form of the body part creating it. The doors remain as passageways anyone can pass through until closed completely.
Fighting Style: Western Trigonometry
Weapon Utilization: Firearms
Description: Using a combination of Rokushiki, Expert Marksmanship, and lastly a devil fruit. Thaddeus Boone has found a lethal new combination of disciplines in order to dispatch enemies quickly.
Passive Abilities:
Door Door~! -The user makes a door on any surface he chooses. With the exception being water.
Mantra - With his skypiean heritage Thaddeus was exposed to haki from a very young age, giving him ample time to perfect his craft. Thaddeus gains a +20% buff to willpower, but a -10% debuff to Defense and Attack.
Toggled Abilities:
Eye of the Hawk - Thaddeus is able to calculate the trajectory of incoming projectiles as well as his own projectiles boosting his reflexes by +20% but lowering his defense by -20%
Eye of the Assassin - With no truer aim than with intent to kill, Thaddeus' trained eye can spot weak points/ vital organs making his bullets do +20% more damage, however he takes a -10% deduff to reflexes and defense.
Techniques
(The following techniques can either be all devil fruit techniques, or a combination of devil fruit, and natural/weapon techniques)
- Light Techniques:
Straight Shot
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: 10m
Cooldown: 2 posts
Duration:N/A
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs: N/A
Description: Steadying their weapon the gunman aims down his sights, and fires.
Night Walk
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: 10m
Cooldown: 4 posts
Duration: 2 posts
Buffs: N/A
Description: The user is able to leap off the night sky itself, based on the Rokushiki technique Geppou. Thaddeus was able to create his own variant of the technique by stomping on the surface of the air extremely hard. Giving the user a +20% boost to reflexes but a -10% debuff to defense and attack.
Double Tap!
Technique Level: 5
Maximum Base Range: 50m
Cooldown: 2 posts
Duration: N/A
Buffs: N/A
Description: The user is able to fire off 2 bullets simultaneously, or with precise control. As the gunslinger is allowed to fire on target.
Electric Slide
Technique Level: 20
Maximum Base Range: 200m
Cooldown: 4 posts
Duration: 2 posts
Buffs:
Debuffs:
Description: Based on the rokushiki technique soru, Thaddeus created his own variant of the technique, in which he uses a massive amount of force to propel himself, however his step is so nimble that it appears has if he is gliding across the floor due to the mastery of the technique.
Giving the user a +20% boost to reflexes but a -10% debuff to defense and attack.
- Medium Techniques:
Trick Shot!
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: 10m
Cooldown: 8 posts
Duration: 3 posts
Buffs: +40% Reflex
Debuffs: -40% Reflex, -20% Defense (user), -20% willpower (user)
Description: Priding himself as an expert marksmen, Thaddeus can catch his opponents off guard with an expertly timed trick shot, boosting his reflexes by 40% and lowering his opponent's reflexes by -40% for 3 posts.
While preforming this technique Thaddeus is vulnerable lowering his defense and willpower by -20% for 3 posts.
Bullet Dance - Attack Formation!
Technique Level: 5
Maximum Base Range: 50m
Cooldown: 8 posts
Duration: 3 posts
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs: -40% Reflex, -40% Defense (user)
Description: Incorporating martial arts into his gunplay Thaddeus can take an offensive stance when firing his weapons making the trajectory of his bullets harder for the opponent to predict, lowering their reflexes by -40% for 3 posts.
While preforming this technique Thaddeus is vulnerable lowering his defense by 40% for 3 posts.
Southern Hospitality
Technique Level: 20
Maximum Base Range: 200m
Cooldown: 5 posts
Duration:
Buffs: +40% Attack
Debuffs: -40% Defense (user)
Description: Priding himself as an expert marksmen, Thaddeus can catch his opponents off guard with an expertly timed trick shot, boosting his Attack by 40%.
While preforming this technique Thaddeus is vulnerable lowering his defense by 40% for 3 posts.
- Heavy Techniques:
Marked for Death
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: 10m
Cooldown: 14 posts
Duration: 6 posts
Buffs: +100% Attack
Debuffs: -50% Defense (user), -50% Willpower (user)
Description: With the trained eye of an assassin Thaddeus can focus his fire on crucial parts of the human body inflicting more damage upon his victims, boosting his Attack power by 100% for 6 posts.
However Thaddeus is prone to leaving himself open in such moments of pure carnage. -50% Defense & Willpower for 6 posts.
Slight of Hand, Touch of Death
Technique Level: 10
Maximum Base Range: 100m
Cooldown: 14 posts
Duration: 6 posts
Buffs:
Debuffs: -100% Reflex, -50% Defense (user), -50% Willpower (user)
Description: Trained in the ways of the con-man Thaddeus has developed a mastery of slight of hand that he uses to his advantage. By twirling his guns, Thaddeus can distract the user in order to sneak in an attack while their attention is focused elsewhere. Giving his victims -100% reflex for 6 posts.
However Thaddeus is prone to leaving himself open in such moments. -50% Defense and Willpower for 6 posts.
- AoE Techniques:
Typhoon Kick
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: 10m
Maximum Base Radius: 2.5m
Cooldown: 16 posts
Duration: 1 post
Buffs: +50% Attack
Debuffs: -50% Defense, -50% Defense (user)
Description: Based on the rokushiki technique storm leg, Thaddeus uses his long bird-like legs to kick a wave of momentum toward his opponent, this energy strong enough to crumble structures in it's wake.
Arguably more powerful then it's Rokushiki counterpart, the user gains a boost of +50% attack for the duration of the technique, while also giving the opponent a debuff of -50% defense.
Trap Door!
Technique Level: 20
Maximum Base Range: 200m
Maximum Base Radius: 125m
Cooldown: 20 posts
Duration:5 posts
Buffs:
Debuffs:
Description: Utilizing his devil fruit, Thaddeus can create a trap door by stomping his foot on the ground beneath him.
Lowering himself underneath the floor, he can use this technique to escape bad situation, create some ground between himself and his opponent, or to simply hide from an incoming attack.
From anywhere in a 125m radius Thaddeus can then reappear from another door elsewhere within the radius of his ability.
Thaddeus can remain hidden for 5 posts, before exhausting himself, having a cooldown time of 20 posts.
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Re: Western Trigonometry!
Thu Jul 25, 2019 12:23 amComments in blue.
Thaddeus Boone wrote:Doa Doa no Mi
Devil Fruit: Door Door Fruit
Devil Fruit Type: Paramecia
Devil Fruit Appearance: Doa Doa no Mi
Devil Fruit Description: The Doa Doa no Mi is a Paramecia-type Devil Fruit that allows the user to create doors through anything they touch, making the user a Door Human. The doors they create can be created from any part of their body, from the palm of their hands to their whole body itself, and usually take the shape and form of the body part creating it. The doors remain as passageways anyone can pass through until closed completely.
Fighting Style: Western Trigonometry
Weapon Utilization: Firearms
Description: Using a combination of Rokushiki, Expert Marksmanship, and lastly a devil fruit. Thaddeus Boone has found a lethal new combination of disciplines in order to dispatch enemies quickly.
Toggled and Passive Abilities:
Door Door~! -The user makes a door on any surface he chooses. With the exception being water. - As long as you know that you can only make doors on opponents via techniques in the form of a debuff, this is fine.
Eye of the Hawk - Thaddeus is able to calculate the trajectory of incoming projectiles as well as his own projectiles boosting his reflexes by +20% - You must also share a similar debuff of -20% for this, I recommend making this a toggled ability and stating it as such.
Eye of the Assassin - With no truer aim than with intent to kill, Thaddeus' trained eye can spot weak points/ vital organs making his bullets do +20% more damage. - Same case as Eye of the Hawk.
Mantra - With his skypiean heritage Thaddeus was exposed to haki from a very young age, giving him ample time to perfect his craft. Thaddeus gains a +20% buff to willpower. - Same case as Eye of the Hawk.
Techniques
(The following techniques can either be all devil fruit techniques, or a combination of devil fruit, and natural/weapon techniques)
- Light Techniques:
Straight Shot
Technique Level: Starter - List this as 1 instead of "Starter"
Maximum Base Range: 100m - Since technique range can only be 10x the technique level, the max range of this is 10m as it is a level 1 technique.
Cooldown: 2 posts
Duration:N/A
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs: N/A
Description: Steadying their weapon the gunman aims down his sights, and fires.
Night Walk
Technique Level: Starter - Same case as Straight Shot.
Maximum Base Range: 100m - Same case as Straight Shot.
Cooldown: 4 posts
Duration: 2 posts - What is this giving a boost for? if this is meant to boost the character's speed, you'd have to reflect this in the form of a reflex buff, followed by the same percentage of a debuff.
Buffs: N/A - Continuing the above, if this is meant to increase the user's reflex, show it here and show the appropriate debuff drawback in the Debuff field.
Description: The user is able to leap off the night sky itself, based on the Rokushiki technique Geppou. Thaddeus was able to create his own variant of the technique by stomping on the surface of the air extremely hard.
Double Tap!
Technique Level: 5
Maximum Base Range: 50m
Cooldown: 4 posts
Duration: 2 posts - Same case as Night Walk, what is this boosting? if a technique isn't meant to give you a buff or debuff, the cooldown would only be 2 and the duration would be N/A.
Buffs: N/A
Description: The user is able to fire off 2 bullets simultaneously, or with precise control. As the gunslinger is allowed to fire on target.
Electric Slide
Technique Level: 20
Maximum Base Range: 200m
Cooldown: 2 posts
Duration: N/A
Buffs:
Debuffs:
Description: Based on the rokushiki technique soru, Thaddeus created his own variant of the technique, in which he uses a massive amount of force to propel himself, however his step is so nimble that it appears has if he is gliding across the floor due to the mastery of the technique. - I'm confused about this one, is this purely meant to be a increased speed technique once more, or is this an attack? show the appropriate boosts in the buff field and a appropriate debuff in the fields above the description.
- Medium Techniques:
Trick Shot!
Technique Level: Starter - List this as 1 instead of "Starter"
Maximum Base Range: 200m - Since technique range can only be 10x the technique level, the max range of this is 10m as it is a level 1 technique.
Cooldown: 8 posts
Duration: 3 posts
Buffs: +40% Reflex
Debuffs: -40% Reflex, -20% Defense (user), -20% willpower (user)
Description: Priding himself as an expert marksmen, Thaddeus can catch his opponents off guard with an expertly timed trick shot, boosting his reflexes by 40% and lowering his opponent's reflexes by -40% for 3 posts.
While preforming this technique Thaddeus is vulnerable lowering his defense by 40% for 3 posts. - Could you be more clearer/concise in what you're buffing and debuffing for this technique? I don't understand.
Bullet Dance - Attack Formation!
Technique Level: 5
Maximum Base Range: 50m
Cooldown: 8 posts
Duration: 3 posts
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs: -40% Reflex, -40% Defense (user)
Description: Incorporating martial arts into his gunplay Thaddeus can take an offensive stance when firing his weapons making the trajectory of his bullets harder for the opponent to predict, lowering their reflexes by -40% for 3 posts.
While preforming this technique Thaddeus is vulnerable lowering his defense by 40% for 3 posts.
Southern Hospitality
Technique Level: 20
Maximum Base Range: 200m
Cooldown: 5 posts
Duration:
Buffs: +40% Attack
Debuffs: -40% Defense (user)
Description: Priding himself as an expert marksmen, Thaddeus can catch his opponents off guard with an expertly timed trick shot, boosting his reflexes by 40% and lowering his opponent's reflexes by -40% for 3 posts.
While preforming this technique Thaddeus is vulnerable lowering his defense by 40% for 3 posts. - Similar to Trick Shot, I don't know what you're trying to buff or debuff here.
- Heavy Techniques:
Marked for Death
Technique Level: Starter - List this as 1 instead of "Starter"
Maximum Base Range: 800m - Since technique range can only be 10x the technique level, the max range of this is 10m as it is a level 1 technique.
Cooldown: 14 - I included the cooldown here, heavy techniques are originally 8 cooldown but since you have a 6 duration buff/debuff, add 6 to 8 and that makes 14.
Duration: 6 posts
Buffs: +100% Attack
Debuffs: -100% Defense
Description: With the trained eye of an assassin Thaddeus can focus his fire on crucial parts of the human body inflicting more damage upon his victims, boosting his Attack power by 100% for 6 posts.
However Thaddeus is prone to leaving himself open in such moments of pure carnage. -100% Defense for 6 posts.
Slight of Hand, Touch of Death
Technique Level: 10
Maximum Base Range: 100m
Cooldown: 14 - I included the cooldown here, heavy techniques are originally 8 cooldown but since you have a 6 duration buff/debuff, add 6 to 8 and that makes 14.
Duration: 6 posts
Buffs:
Debuffs: -100% Reflex, -100% Defense (user)
Description: Trained in the ways of the con-man Thaddeus has developed a mastery of slight of hand that he uses to his advantage. By twirling his guns, Thaddeus can distract the user in order to sneak in an attack while their attention is focused elsewhere. Giving his victims -100% reflex for 6 posts.
However Thaddeus is prone to leaving himself open in such moments of pure carnage. -100% Defense for 6 posts.
- AoE Techniques:
Typhoon Kick
Technique Level: Starter - List this as 1 instead of "Starter"
Maximum Base Range: 250m - Since technique range can only be 10x the technique level, the max range of this is 10m as it is a level 1 technique.
Maximum Base Radius: 62.5m - 25% of 10 is 2.5
Cooldown: 15 posts
Duration: N/A - This requires a duration since you're trying to debuff the opponent.
Buffs: +50% Attack
Debuffs: -50% Defense, -50% Defense (user)
Description: Based on the rokushiki technique storm leg, Thaddeus uses his long bird-like legs to kick a wave of momentum toward his opponent, this energy strong enough to crumble structures in it's wake.
Arguably more powerful then it's Rokushiki counterpart, the user gains a boost of +50% attack for the duration of the technique, while also giving the opponent a debuff of -50% defense. - As mentioned earlier, be concise in what you're trying to debuff as your debuff field and your description are different from telling me what you're trying to buff and debuff with this technique.
Vanishing Act!
Technique Level: 20
Maximum Base Range: 200m
Maximum Base Radius: 125m
Cooldown: 20 posts
Duration:5 posts
Buffs:
Debuffs:
Description: Utilizing his devil fruit Thaddeus can seemingly disappear from sight, using a door to walk through.
From anywhere in a 125m radius Thaddeus can then reappear from another door elsewhere within the radius of his ability.
Thaddeus can remain hidden from sight for 5 posts, before exhausting himself, having a cooldown time of 20 posts. - This technique is outright denied, it's already been explained in the DF claims that the air door ability is a tricky concept considering our combat system, and this way of doing it isn't allowed. Please make a different technique.
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Re: Western Trigonometry!
Sat Jul 27, 2019 6:21 am[Comments in orange.]
Thaddeus Boone wrote:Doa Doa no Mi
Devil Fruit: Door Door Fruit
Devil Fruit Type: Paramecia
Devil Fruit Appearance: Doa Doa no Mi
Devil Fruit Description: The Doa Doa no Mi is a Paramecia-type Devil Fruit that allows the user to create doors through anything they touch, making the user a Door Human. The doors they create can be created from any part of their body, from the palm of their hands to their whole body itself, and usually take the shape and form of the body part creating it. The doors remain as passageways anyone can pass through until closed completely.
Fighting Style: Western Trigonometry
Weapon Utilization: Firearms
Description: Using a combination of Rokushiki, Expert Marksmanship, and lastly a devil fruit. Thaddeus Boone has found a lethal new combination of disciplines in order to dispatch enemies quickly.
Passive Abilities:
Door Door~! -The user makes a door on any surface he chooses. With the exception being water. [Can’t make doors on solid ground or, in general, on surfaces that are too thick.]
Mantra - With his skypiean heritage Thaddeus was exposed to haki from a very young age, giving him ample time to perfect his craft. Thaddeus gains a +20% buff to willpower, but a -10% debuff to Defense and Attack. [This should be a toggled ability. If the stat changes are always there, they aren’t exactly “buffs” or “debuffs”. You can just balance your stats accordingly.]
Toggled Abilities:
Eye of the Hawk - Thaddeus is able to calculate the trajectory of incoming projectiles as well as his own projectiles boosting his reflexes by +20% but lowering his defense by -20%
Eye of the Assassin - With no truer aim than with intent to kill, Thaddeus' trained eye can spot weak points/ vital organs making his bullets do +20% more damage, however he takes a -10% deduff to reflexes and defense. [Note that you can only toggle these abilities once per post.]
Techniques
(The following techniques can either be all devil fruit techniques, or a combination of devil fruit, and natural/weapon techniques)
- Light Techniques:
Straight Shot
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: 10m
Cooldown: 2 posts
Duration:N/A
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs: N/A
Description: Steadying their weapon the gunman aims down his sights, and fires.
Night Walk
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: 10m
Cooldown: 4 posts
Duration: 2 posts
Buffs: N/A [Put your buffs and debuffs here please.]
Description: The user is able to leap off the night sky itself, based on the Rokushiki technique Geppou. Thaddeus was able to create his own variant of the technique by stomping on the surface of the air extremely hard. Giving the user a +20% boost to reflexes but a -10% debuff to defense and attack. [“Night sky”? Does this mean this ability can only be used at night?]
Double Tap!
Technique Level: 5
Maximum Base Range: 50m
Cooldown: 2 posts
Duration: N/A
Buffs: N/A
Description: The user is able to fire off 2 bullets simultaneously, or with precise control. As the gunslinger is allowed to fire on target. [Don’t know what you mean by the second sentence here.]
Electric Slide
Technique Level: 20
Maximum Base Range: 200m
Cooldown: 4 posts
Duration: 2 posts
Buffs:
Debuffs: [List your buffs and debuffs in the fields here please.]
Description: Based on the rokushiki technique soru, Thaddeus created his own variant of the technique, in which he uses a massive amount of force to propel himself, however his step is so nimble that it appears has if he is gliding across the floor due to the mastery of the technique.
Giving the user a +20% boost to reflexes but a -10% debuff to defense and attack.
- Medium Techniques:
Trick Shot!
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: 10m
Cooldown: 8 posts
Duration: 3 posts
Buffs: +40% Reflex
Debuffs: -40% Reflex, -20% Defense (user), -20% willpower (user) [The buffs are not balanced here. Please balance them.]
Description: Priding himself as an expert marksmen, Thaddeus can catch his opponents off guard with an expertly timed trick shot, boosting his reflexes by 40% and lowering his opponent's reflexes by -40% for 3 posts.
While preforming this technique Thaddeus is vulnerable lowering his defense and willpower by -20% for 3 posts.
Bullet Dance - Attack Formation!
Technique Level: 5
Maximum Base Range: 50m
Cooldown: 8 posts
Duration: 3 posts
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs: -40% Reflex, -40% Defense (user)
Description: Incorporating martial arts into his gunplay Thaddeus can take an offensive stance when firing his weapons making the trajectory of his bullets harder for the opponent to predict, lowering their reflexes by -40% for 3 posts.
While preforming this technique Thaddeus is vulnerable lowering his defense by 40% for 3 posts.
Southern Hospitality
Technique Level: 20
Maximum Base Range: 200m
Cooldown: 5 posts
Duration:
Buffs: +40% Attack
Debuffs: -40% Defense (user)
Description: Priding himself as an expert marksmen, Thaddeus can catch his opponents off guard with an expertly timed trick shot, boosting his Attack by 40%.
While preforming this technique Thaddeus is vulnerable lowering his defense by 40% for 3 posts. [I highly recommend that you cut down significantly on the number of stat changing techniques. Believe me, it’ll not only be hard for you and people you RP with to keep track of your stats, but you’ll also find yourself waiting for techniques to come out of cooldown for long periods of time without having anything to attack with. You should have maybe 2-3 total stat changing techniques at this level.]
- Heavy Techniques:
Marked for Death
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: 10m
Cooldown: 14 posts
Duration: 6 posts
Buffs: +100% Attack
Debuffs: -50% Defense (user), -50% Willpower (user)
Description: With the trained eye of an assassin Thaddeus can focus his fire on crucial parts of the human body inflicting more damage upon his victims, boosting his Attack power by 100% for 6 posts.
However Thaddeus is prone to leaving himself open in such moments of pure carnage. -50% Defense & Willpower for 6 posts.
Slight of Hand, Touch of Death
Technique Level: 10
Maximum Base Range: 100m
Cooldown: 14 posts
Duration: 6 posts
Buffs:
Debuffs: -100% Reflex, -50% Defense (user), -50% Willpower (user)
Description: Trained in the ways of the con-man Thaddeus has developed a mastery of slight of hand that he uses to his advantage. By twirling his guns, Thaddeus can distract the user in order to sneak in an attack while their attention is focused elsewhere. Giving his victims -100% reflex for 6 posts.
However Thaddeus is prone to leaving himself open in such moments. -50% Defense and Willpower for 6 posts.
- AoE Techniques:
Typhoon Kick
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: 10m
Maximum Base Radius: 2.5m
Cooldown: 16 posts
Duration: 1 post
Buffs: +50% Attack
Debuffs: -50% Defense, -50% Defense (user)
Description: Based on the rokushiki technique storm leg, Thaddeus uses his long bird-like legs to kick a wave of momentum toward his opponent, this energy strong enough to crumble structures in it's wake.
Arguably more powerful then it's Rokushiki counterpart, the user gains a boost of +50% attack for the duration of the technique, while also giving the opponent a debuff of -50% defense. [Seriously, cut down the buffing/debuffing techniques to a third of what you have now.]
Trap Door!
Technique Level: 20
Maximum Base Range: 200m
Maximum Base Radius: 125m
Cooldown: 20 posts
Duration:5 posts
Buffs:
Debuffs:
Description: Utilizing his devil fruit, Thaddeus can create a trap door by stomping his foot on the ground beneath him.
Lowering himself underneath the floor, he can use this technique to escape bad situation, create some ground between himself and his opponent, or to simply hide from an incoming attack. [This ability’s description is all flavour. It will not mechanically make you immune to attacks. You need to represent these sorts of things in the form of buffs/debuffs. So, here’s where you can use stat buffs/debuffs.]
From anywhere in a 125m radius Thaddeus can then reappear from another door elsewhere within the radius of his ability.
Thaddeus can remain hidden for 5 posts, before exhausting himself, having a cooldown time of 20 posts.
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