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Bob D. Bell
Thu Jul 07, 2016 9:57 pmStarting bonus :pocket change
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Basic Character Information
Starting Bonus: pocket change Pocket Change
First Name: Bob
Middle Name/Initial: D.
Last Name: Bell
Epithet: N/A
Age: 21
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Faction: Pirate
Affiliation:
Position:
Profession: Carpenter+ Fighter
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Physical Appearance
Height: 6.2 feet
Weight: 235 lbs
Hair Style:spiky and short
Hair Color: black/white
Eye Color: red
Scars: no scars
[ltr][size=15][b]Clothing and Accessories:[/b] [/ltr][/size]
[ltr][size=15]Bob wears a black leather vest with white fur trimming, and a black choker around his neck. He also wears a pair of yellow pants with black designs on them and burgundy boots; there are spiked bracelets on his wrists and skull earrings in his ears. [/ltr][/size]
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[size=15][b]Detailed Description:[/b] [/ltr][/size]
[ltr][size=15] Bob is a very lean, slightly effeminate young man with short spiky black hair on the top, and longer, straight white hair on the bottom; he has long strands of white hair framing either side of his face, with the right strand, in particular, being adorned by five maroon beads. Bob’s lower eyelashes are very prominent, and he wears dark eyeliner and plum-colored lipstick. Bob’s red Mark spells located on his right shoulder which mean greatness, and he wears dark nail polish. [/ltr][/size]
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[size=15]He loves to wear vest because he love to see his arms and also keep his body cool. His favourite colour is black; Bob would buy anything once it has in black, the reason for his liking black so much because it suits him. [/ltr][/size]
[ltr][size=15]------------------------------------------------- [/ltr][/size]
[ltr][size=15][size=18][b]The Past[/b] [/ltr][/size][/size]
[ltr][size=15][b]Main Traits:[/b] [/ltr][/size]
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[size=15][b]Likes:[/b] [/ltr][/size]
[ltr]
[size=15][b]Dislikes:[/b] [/ltr][/size]
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[size=15][b]Hometown:[/b] loguetown east blue [/ltr][/size]
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[size=15][b]Personality:[/b] [/ltr][/size]
[ltr][size=15]Bob is a happy young man who is always looking for a great adventure, but he is truly happy when there is piece of meat in front of him. There will always be a smile on his face and he will show appreciation to his friends. Bob is angered if he sees injustice and will try to help in the moment. Bob is someone who would help if he is being asked too .The ring around his neck is very special to him and if it is lost he will go through the lengths to get it back. [/ltr][/size]
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[size=15]Bob isn't a judgmental person since he believes that books aren't supposed to be judged by their covers. Bob does not attack people unless they attack him or any civilian. Bob isn't afraid to have a debate with a superior if what he sees the superior is doing is wrong such as yonko ,admirals, fleet admirals and marine official etc , same goes with those who are of a lower rank. If Bob is challenged he would not back down from a fight. [/ltr][/size]
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[size=15]When Bob is in a battle his attitude changes to a very serious mood and he become more aggressive and hardly talks in the battle. He will fight with all of his heart and strength and with the intention to kill. [/ltr][/size]
[ltr][size=15][spoiler=History] [/ltr][/size]
[ltr][size=15]Bob lived with his mother until he was 5 and from that age he wanted to be a pirate just like his father John D. Bell and wanted to go out to sea and meet him. John D. Bell was a part of a great pirate ship. Bob's father’s ship was attacked by a fleet of Navy ships. After hours of fighting on the sea, Bob's father’s ship was sunk by the navy which lead to them being captured and, since they were such great pirates, their execution. [/ltr][/size]
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[size=15]One day he was with his mother and saw her start to cry without realising that his father had been captured. His mother read the newspaper to bob of his father’s captured and executed. By losing his father, Bob realised they were people who were way stronger (since Bob used to think his father was strongest in world); therefore he made a promise to himself to train, to become stronger and stronger and look to become a great pirate. [/ltr][/size]
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[size=15]A year later his grandfather came to the island looking to pay his respect to Bob’s mother. When bob first saw his grandfather he was impressed by how he looked with huge muscles. When he came to the house he had a small chest in his possession. As he rest the chest to talk to Bob’s mother about the situation, Bob went snooping around the chest and opened it. When he opened it there was a devil fruit inside, since bob didn’t know what that was and was also hungry he dived right in to it and ate it. Before his grandfather realised Bob had eaten the whole fruit, Bob's grandfather sat and explained how devil fruits worked and which fruit he ate. From then, Bob gained the devil fruit's powers of the sickle sickle fruit. When Bob’s grandfather realise he ate the fruit he decided to stay and train him. [/ltr][/size]
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[size=15]One day the navy came to Bob’s hometown in search of anyone associated with his father. The navy came to Bob’s house and came in with their guns, the vice admiral of the navy asked Bob what is his name? , Bob said his name with scared voice, when the vice admiral heard his name they attacked Bob with full forced, Bob ran for his life, he was chased by the navy into a corner. The navy was about to take the head of Bob but his grandfather jump between him and the blade and caught it while his mother came up from behind swinging a bat, hitting each navy in her way. Bob’s grandfather grabbed him and ran away with his mother running behind them, they ran to the docks, there was a ship with some of the other villagers on it. As they got closer to the ship they were intercepted by the navy, Bob’s grandfather and mother fought through, but there were too many navy soldier Bob’s Mother decided to stay behind and fight while her child and her father in law escaped. Bob’s grandfather escaped on the ship while his mother stayed; as Bob shed tears to watch his hometown go up in flames and his mother on her knees in shackles. [/ltr][/size]
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[size=15]The villagers were transported to a nearby town where Bob and his grandfather stayed for a year. After they recover, Bob and his grandfather travel from island to island, also after that year he read the paper and saw his mother was executed, Bob’s grandfather consoled him and told him to be strong, from since then Bob’s mission was to take out the Navy and what they have done to him, his hometown and his family. [/ltr][/size]
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[size=15]Bob’s grandfather dies of old age when he was 19 and from there he started his adventure on the seas and to take down the navy. [/ltr][/size]
[ltr] [size=15][/spoiler] [/ltr][/size]
[ltr][size=15]------------------------------------------------- [/ltr][/size]
Bob D.Bell.
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Basic Character Information
Starting Bonus: pocket change Pocket Change
First Name: Bob
Middle Name/Initial: D.
Last Name: Bell
Epithet: N/A
Age: 21
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Faction: Pirate
Affiliation:
Position:
Profession: Carpenter+ Fighter
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Physical Appearance
Height: 6.2 feet
Weight: 235 lbs
Hair Style:spiky and short
Hair Color: black/white
Eye Color: red
Scars: no scars
[ltr][size=15][b]Clothing and Accessories:[/b] [/ltr][/size]
[ltr][size=15]Bob wears a black leather vest with white fur trimming, and a black choker around his neck. He also wears a pair of yellow pants with black designs on them and burgundy boots; there are spiked bracelets on his wrists and skull earrings in his ears. [/ltr][/size]
[ltr]
[size=15][b]Detailed Description:[/b] [/ltr][/size]
[ltr][size=15] Bob is a very lean, slightly effeminate young man with short spiky black hair on the top, and longer, straight white hair on the bottom; he has long strands of white hair framing either side of his face, with the right strand, in particular, being adorned by five maroon beads. Bob’s lower eyelashes are very prominent, and he wears dark eyeliner and plum-colored lipstick. Bob’s red Mark spells located on his right shoulder which mean greatness, and he wears dark nail polish. [/ltr][/size]
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[size=15]He loves to wear vest because he love to see his arms and also keep his body cool. His favourite colour is black; Bob would buy anything once it has in black, the reason for his liking black so much because it suits him. [/ltr][/size]
[ltr][size=15]------------------------------------------------- [/ltr][/size]
[ltr][size=15][size=18][b]The Past[/b] [/ltr][/size][/size]
[ltr][size=15][b]Main Traits:[/b] [/ltr][/size]
- Happy
- Honest
- Unexpected
[ltr]
[size=15][b]Likes:[/b] [/ltr][/size]
- Eating meat
- Building equipment
- The color black
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[size=15][b]Dislikes:[/b] [/ltr][/size]
- watching innocent people being hurt
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[size=15][b]Hometown:[/b] loguetown east blue [/ltr][/size]
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[size=15][b]Personality:[/b] [/ltr][/size]
[ltr][size=15]Bob is a happy young man who is always looking for a great adventure, but he is truly happy when there is piece of meat in front of him. There will always be a smile on his face and he will show appreciation to his friends. Bob is angered if he sees injustice and will try to help in the moment. Bob is someone who would help if he is being asked too .The ring around his neck is very special to him and if it is lost he will go through the lengths to get it back. [/ltr][/size]
[ltr]
[size=15]Bob isn't a judgmental person since he believes that books aren't supposed to be judged by their covers. Bob does not attack people unless they attack him or any civilian. Bob isn't afraid to have a debate with a superior if what he sees the superior is doing is wrong such as yonko ,admirals, fleet admirals and marine official etc , same goes with those who are of a lower rank. If Bob is challenged he would not back down from a fight. [/ltr][/size]
[ltr]
[size=15]When Bob is in a battle his attitude changes to a very serious mood and he become more aggressive and hardly talks in the battle. He will fight with all of his heart and strength and with the intention to kill. [/ltr][/size]
[ltr][size=15][spoiler=History] [/ltr][/size]
[ltr][size=15]Bob lived with his mother until he was 5 and from that age he wanted to be a pirate just like his father John D. Bell and wanted to go out to sea and meet him. John D. Bell was a part of a great pirate ship. Bob's father’s ship was attacked by a fleet of Navy ships. After hours of fighting on the sea, Bob's father’s ship was sunk by the navy which lead to them being captured and, since they were such great pirates, their execution. [/ltr][/size]
[ltr]
[size=15]One day he was with his mother and saw her start to cry without realising that his father had been captured. His mother read the newspaper to bob of his father’s captured and executed. By losing his father, Bob realised they were people who were way stronger (since Bob used to think his father was strongest in world); therefore he made a promise to himself to train, to become stronger and stronger and look to become a great pirate. [/ltr][/size]
[ltr]
[size=15]A year later his grandfather came to the island looking to pay his respect to Bob’s mother. When bob first saw his grandfather he was impressed by how he looked with huge muscles. When he came to the house he had a small chest in his possession. As he rest the chest to talk to Bob’s mother about the situation, Bob went snooping around the chest and opened it. When he opened it there was a devil fruit inside, since bob didn’t know what that was and was also hungry he dived right in to it and ate it. Before his grandfather realised Bob had eaten the whole fruit, Bob's grandfather sat and explained how devil fruits worked and which fruit he ate. From then, Bob gained the devil fruit's powers of the sickle sickle fruit. When Bob’s grandfather realise he ate the fruit he decided to stay and train him. [/ltr][/size]
[ltr]
[size=15]One day the navy came to Bob’s hometown in search of anyone associated with his father. The navy came to Bob’s house and came in with their guns, the vice admiral of the navy asked Bob what is his name? , Bob said his name with scared voice, when the vice admiral heard his name they attacked Bob with full forced, Bob ran for his life, he was chased by the navy into a corner. The navy was about to take the head of Bob but his grandfather jump between him and the blade and caught it while his mother came up from behind swinging a bat, hitting each navy in her way. Bob’s grandfather grabbed him and ran away with his mother running behind them, they ran to the docks, there was a ship with some of the other villagers on it. As they got closer to the ship they were intercepted by the navy, Bob’s grandfather and mother fought through, but there were too many navy soldier Bob’s Mother decided to stay behind and fight while her child and her father in law escaped. Bob’s grandfather escaped on the ship while his mother stayed; as Bob shed tears to watch his hometown go up in flames and his mother on her knees in shackles. [/ltr][/size]
[ltr]
[size=15]The villagers were transported to a nearby town where Bob and his grandfather stayed for a year. After they recover, Bob and his grandfather travel from island to island, also after that year he read the paper and saw his mother was executed, Bob’s grandfather consoled him and told him to be strong, from since then Bob’s mission was to take out the Navy and what they have done to him, his hometown and his family. [/ltr][/size]
[ltr]
[size=15]Bob’s grandfather dies of old age when he was 19 and from there he started his adventure on the seas and to take down the navy. [/ltr][/size]
[ltr] [size=15][/spoiler] [/ltr][/size]
[ltr][size=15]------------------------------------------------- [/ltr][/size]
Castor O. Nox
[tracker=/t980-castor-o-nox#4771]
Name : Castor O. Nox
Epithet : Sanpaku | The Azure Pheasant | Duke Of Lvneel | Saint Nox
Age : 25
Height : 5'9"
Weight : 175lbs
Species/Tribe : Three-Eye Tribesman
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Blockbuster
Alliance : -
Crew : Nox Pirates
Ship : The Wailing Calamity
Crew Role : Captain | Navigator | Book Collector | Pride Sin
Devil Fruit : Goro Goro no Mi
Bounty : [ber=r] 620,000,000
Quality Score : S
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (To all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.42 (Turf); +0.10 (Blockbuster); +0.20 (To all allies)
Shop Discount : -20%
Crew Pool : [bel=u] 96,000,000
Balance : [bel] 2,470,815,020
[[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[dreamsneverdie]]
[[bookworm]][[untouchable]][[childofdestiny]]
[[punchoutguru]][[berryprinter]]
Turf : [turf="/t296-turf-details-lvneel#1110"]Lvneel[/turf] [turf="/t309-turf-details-st-poplar#1124"]St. Poplar[/turf]
Posts : 795
Re: Bob D. Bell
Sat Jul 09, 2016 4:33 ambobbertz wrote:Starting bonus :pocket changeBob D.Bell.
Basic Character Information
Starting Bonus: pocket change Pocket Change
First Name: Bob
Middle Name/Initial: D.
Last Name: Bell
Epithet: N/A
Age: 21
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Faction: Pirate
Affiliation: Rebell Pirates
Position: Pirate Captain
Profession: Carpenter+ Fighter
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Physical Appearance
Height: 6.2 feet
Weight: 235 lbs
Hair Style:spiky and short
Hair Color: black
Eye Color: brown
Scars: no scars
Clothing and Accessories: A ¾ black jeans pants with a red button up sleeveless shirt. Bob wears a pair of brown slippers. There is a piece of string is resting on Bob neck, there is a ring at end of the string that he will never go nowhere without it.
The grammar here is very poorly structured. What you might mean:
Bob wears a ¾ black jeans pants with a red buttoned up sleeveless shirt. He wears a pair of brown slippers as well to match. There is a piece of string is resting on Bob neck, there is a ring at end of the string that he will never go nowhere without it.
Detailed Description:
Bob is a dark skin young man, who has short black spiky hair with brown eyes. He grows up with his mother and train with his grandfather at an early age due to his gaining devil fruit powers.
His love to wear sleeveless shirts since shirt with sleeves has kept his heart, as the same reason he wears those ¾ pants. His favorite color is red and his favorite food is meat. He has a small muscular physique that he gain due to his training with his grandfather.
Again, grammar here. Also, add more description please. How does he actual appear, is he youthful, is older looking? Why does he wear sleeveless shirts? What do you mean 'has kept his heart' semantically that makes no sense. Elaborate more here.
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The Past
Main Traits:
- Happy
- Honest
Likes:
- Eating Meat
- Building Equipment
Dislikes:
- People hurting innocent people
Hometown: Loguetown - East Blue
Personality:
Bob is a happy young man who is always looking for a great adventure, but he is truly happy when there is a piece of meat in front of him. He always has a smile on his face, appreciates his friends and who is willing to help him. Bob will get angry if he sees injustice and will rush in to try and help the innocent people. If innocent people ask Bob for help, he will try and help. The ring around his neck means something to him and if it is lost, he will go through the lengths to get it back.
Bob isn't a judgmental person since he believes that books aren't supposed to be judged by their covers. Bob does not attack people unless they attack him or any civilian. Bob isn't afraid to have a debate with a higher-up if what he sees the higher-up is doing is wrong, same goes with those who are below his rank. If Bob is a challenge he would not back down from a fight.
when Bob is in a battle his attitude change to a very serious mood and he will fight with all of his heart and strength and with the intention to kill
What about his attitude changes? is he more aggressive, does he scream alot, is a quite anger, how does Bob apply himself to these situations. Again, grammar, carefully read over everything to make sure the tenses and phrasing is correct.
- History:
Bob lives with his mother until he was 5, from that age he wanted to be a pirate just like his father and wanted to go out to sea to meet him. One day his mother was reading the newspaper and he was told the news of his father being captured and being executed. After that he promises to train and become stronger, strong enough to rule the seas.
A year later his grandfather came to the island looking to pay his respect to Bob’s mother, when bob first saw his grandfather, he was impressed by how he did look with huge muscles. When he came to the house he was walking with this small chest in his hand. As he rests the chest to talk to Bob’s mother about the situation, Bob went snooping around the chest and open it when he open it there was a devil fruit inside, Since bob didn’t know what that was and was also hungry, he dive right into it and eat it and from there he had devil fruit powers of the sickle sickle fruit.When Bob’s grandfather realize he ate the fruit he decided to stay and train him.
When Bob was 19 his grandfather dying of old age, leaving him with a ring which bob kept up till this day as a close personal item.
Give me a little bit more in this summary, it starts off intriguing but then tapers off, paint a bigger picture. (You don't need thousands of words but even if you use 500 total or 800 total you'd be fine.)
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Combat Statistics
Fighting Style: sickle sickle fruit
Equipment: Links to your weapons and items go here.
Haki: This field remains blank for now unless you acquired a particular haki in the starting bonuses page.
Stats:
- Attack: 50
- Defense: 50
- Reflex: 75
- Willpower:25
I'll hold off approving stats since you applied for Pioneer's bonus, which will give you some more exp and stats, anyway, please work on the changes in orange.
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- GuestGuest
Re: Bob D. Bell
Tue Jul 12, 2016 3:48 ambobbertz wrote:Starting bonus :pocket changeBob D.Bell.
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Basic Character Information
Starting Bonus: pocket change Pocket Change
First Name: Bob
Middle Name/Initial: D.
Last Name: Bell
Epithet: N/A
Age: 21
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Faction: Pirate
Affiliation: Rebell Pirates
Position: Pirate Captain
Profession: Carpenter+ Fighter
-------------------------------------------------
Physical Appearance
Height: 6.2 feet
Weight: 235 lbs
Hair Style:spiky and short
Hair Color: black/white
Eye Color: red
Scars: no scars
Clothing and Accessories:
Bob wears a black leather vest with white fur trimming, and a black choker around his neck. He also wears a pair of yellow pants with black designs on them and burgundy boots; there are spiked bracelets on his wrists and skull earrings in his ears.
Detailed Description:
Bob is a very lean, slightly effeminate young man with short spiky black hair on the top, and longer, straight white hair on the bottom; he has long strands of white hair framing either side of his face, with the right strand, in particular, being adorned by five maroon beads. Bob’s lower eyelashes are very prominent, and he wears dark eyeliner and plum-colored lipstick. Bob’s red Mar which spells “greatness” is located on his right shoulder, and he wears dark nail polish.
He loves to wear vest because he love to see his arms and also keep his body cool. His favourite colour is black; Bob would buy anything once it has in black, the reason for his liking black so much because it suits him.
-------------------------------------------------
The Past
Main Traits:
- Happy
- Honest
- Unexpected
Likes:
- Eating Meat
- Building Equipment
- black
Dislikes:
- Innocent people getting hurt
- Navy
Hometown: Loguetown - East Blue
Personality:
Bob is a happy young man who is always looking for a great adventure, but he is truly happy when there is piece of meat in front of him. There will always be a smile on his face and he will show appreciation to his friends. Bob is anger if he saw injustice and will try to help in the moment. Bob is someone who would help if he is being asked too .The ring around his neck is very special to him and if it is lost he will go through the lengths to get it back.
Bob isn't a judgemental person since he believes that books aren't supposed to be judged by their covers. Bob does not attack people unless they attack him or any civilian. Bob isn't afraid to have a debate with a higher-up if what he sees the higher-up is doing is wrong, same goeswith those who are of below he rank. If Bob is challenge he would not back down from a fight.
When Bob is in a battle his attitude change to a very serious mood he become more aggressive and hardly talks in the battle. He will fight with all of his heart and strength and with the intention to kill
- History:
Bob live with his mother until he was 5 and from that age he wanted to be a pirate just like his father John D.Bell and wanted to go out to sea and meet him. One day he was with his mother and he saw start to cry without realising that his father have been capture. His mother read the newspaper to bob of his father being capture and being executed. After that he promise to trained, become stronger and stronger and look to become a great pirate.
A year later his grandfather came to the island looking to pay his respect to Bob’s mother , when bob first saw his grandfather he was in impressed by how he did look with huge muscles. When he came to the house he did walking with this small chest in his hand. As he rest the chest to talk to Bob’s mother about the situation, Bob went snooping around the chest and open it when he open it there was a devil fruit inside, Since bob didn’t know what that was and was also hungry he dive right in to it and eat it and from there he had devil fruit powers of the sickle sickle fruit. When Bob’s grandfather realise he ate the fruit he decided to stay and train him.
One day Bob’s home town was attacked by the Navy due to a rumor John D. Bell having a son there. As Bob was sleeping, he heard a loud explosion from the town, as he wakes up with fear he saw houses on fire, as he watches the navy run through town slaughtering children and everyone who stands against them. The Navy attack Bob but he ran for his life, as he ran the navy chase, he was chased into a corner. The navy was about to take the head of Bob but his grandfather jump between him and the blade and catch it while his mother came up from behind swinging a bat, hitting each navy in her way. Bob’s grandfather grabbed him and ran away with his mother running behind them, we ran to the docks, there was a ship with some of the other villagers on it. As we got closer to the ship we were intercepted by the navy, Bob’s grandfather and my mother fought through, but Navy admiral appears and Bob’s Mother decided to stay behind and fight while her child and her father in law escaped. Bob’s grandfather escaped on the ship while his mother stays, as Bob shed tears to watch his hometown goes up in flames and his mother on her knees in shackles.
The villagers were transported to a nearby town where Bob’s and his grandfather stayed for a year. After they recover bob’s grandfather and Bob travel from island to island, also after that year he read the paper and saw his mother was executed, Bob’s grandfather console him and told him to be strong, from since then Bob’s mission was to take out the Navy and what they have done to him, his hometown and his family.
Bob’s grandfather dies of old age when he was 19 and from there he started his adventure on the seas and to take down the navy.
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Combat Statistics
Fighting Style: sickle sickle fruit
Equipment: Links to your weapons and items go here.
Haki: This field remains blank for now unless you acquired a particular haki in the starting bonuses page.
Stats:
- Attack: 50
- Defense: 50
- Reflex: 75
- Willpower:25
- Castor O. Nox
[tracker=/t980-castor-o-nox#4771]
Name : Castor O. Nox
Epithet : Sanpaku | The Azure Pheasant | Duke Of Lvneel | Saint Nox
Age : 25
Height : 5'9"
Weight : 175lbs
Species/Tribe : Three-Eye Tribesman
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Blockbuster
Alliance : -
Crew : Nox Pirates
Ship : The Wailing Calamity
Crew Role : Captain | Navigator | Book Collector | Pride Sin
Devil Fruit : Goro Goro no Mi
Bounty : [ber=r] 620,000,000
Quality Score : S
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (To all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.42 (Turf); +0.10 (Blockbuster); +0.20 (To all allies)
Shop Discount : -20%
Crew Pool : [bel=u] 96,000,000
Balance : [bel] 2,470,815,020
[[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[dreamsneverdie]]
[[bookworm]][[untouchable]][[childofdestiny]]
[[punchoutguru]][[berryprinter]]
Turf : [turf="/t296-turf-details-lvneel#1110"]Lvneel[/turf] [turf="/t309-turf-details-st-poplar#1124"]St. Poplar[/turf]
Posts : 795
Re: Bob D. Bell
Wed Jul 13, 2016 5:22 ambobbertz wrote:Starting bonus :pocket change <---- Take this out.Bob D.Bell.
(Fix the image)
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Basic Character Information
Starting Bonus: pocket change Pocket Change
First Name: Bob
Middle Name/Initial: D.
Last Name: Bell
Epithet: N/A
Age: 21
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Faction: Pirate
Affiliation:
Position:
Profession: Carpenter+ Fighter
-------------------------------------------------
Physical Appearance
Height: 6.2 feet
Weight: 235 lbs
Hair Style:spiky and short
Hair Color: black/white
Eye Color: red
Scars: no scars
Clothing and Accessories:
Bob wears a black leather vest with white fur trimming, and a black choker around his neck. He also wears a pair of yellow pants with black designs on them and burgundy boots; there are spiked bracelets on his wrists and skull earrings in his ears.
Detailed Description:
Bob is a very lean, slightly effeminate young man with short spiky black hair on the top, and longer, straight white hair on the bottom; he has long strands of white hair framing either side of his face, with the right strand, in particular, being adorned by five maroon beads. Bob’s lower eyelashes are very prominent, and he wears dark eyeliner and plum-colored lipstick. Bob’s red Mar which spells “greatness” is located on his right shoulder, and he wears dark nail polish. <--- What does this mean? his Red Mar?
He loves to wear vest because he love to see his arms and also keep his body cool. His favourite colour is black; Bob would buy anything once it has in black, the reason for his liking black so much because it suits him.
-------------------------------------------------
The Past
Main Traits:
- Happy
- Honest
- Unexpected
Likes:
- Eating Meat
- Building Equipment
- black (black the color?)
Dislikes:
- Innocent people getting hurt
- Navy
Hometown: Loguetown - East Blue
Personality:
Bob is a happy young man who is always looking for a great adventure, but he is truly happy when there is piece of meat in front of him. There will always be a smile on his face and he will show appreciation to his friends. Bob is anger if he saw injustice and will try to help in the moment. Bob is someone who would help if he is being asked too .The ring around his neck is very special to him and if it is lost he will go through the lengths to get it back.
Bob isn't a judgemental person since he believes that books aren't supposed to be judged by their covers. Bob does not attack people unless they attack him or any civilian. Bob isn't afraid to have a debate with a higher-up if what he sees the higher-up is doing is wrong, same goes(space)with those who are of below he rank. If Bob is challenge he would not back down from a fight. (Higher up as in who, a pirate? a World Government official, who? Do you mean to say he has no respect for those stronger than him and is always looking for a challenge? )
When Bob is in a battle his attitude change to a very serious mood, he becomes more aggressive and hardly talks in the battle. He will fight with all of his heart and strength and with the intention to kill
- History:
Again the punctuation and grammar here is terrible. This site has a certain quality to maintain and uphold, after you type something, make sure to double check for spelling errors(1) and proper use of grammar and syntax(2). I noticed you used alot of slang in your explanation but stick to the Standard Grammatically application, please. Example, 'He did notice his huge muscles', you mean, 'He noticed his huge muscles'.
Refer to this rule from the General Rules:
Language and Grammar: While it is not required that English be your first language, this is very much an English role playing forum. Therefore, some depth in your knowledge of grammar is a requirement. This is to build an educated role-playing atmosphere, and to keep misunderstandings during role play sessions to a minimum. (Not to mention it's more fun reading something that is well-written and not littered with spelling mistakes and grammatical errors.)
Regardless, if you can't uphold this standard, then I recommend that this may not be the site for you. However, we all have to learn and as such, I've corrected majority of the grammar for you. All I ask, is for you to explain and expand on certain points, using the correct grammatical application. Second warning, so be careful.
Bob lived with his mother until he was 5 and from that age he wanted to be a pirate just like his father John D.Bell, wanting to go out to sea and meet him. One day, he was with his mother andhesaw her start to cry without realising that his fatherhavehad been capture. His mother read the newspaper to bob of his father's capture and execution. After that he promised to train, to become stronger and stronger and look to become a great pirate.
Why was his father captured? What was his crimes? Why was it so drastic that he had to executed for it as opposed to imprisoned? Why did it lead him to come to the conclusion to become stronger?
A year later his grandfather came to the island looking to pay his respect to Bob’s mother , when bob first saw his grandfather he was in impressed by how he looked with his huge muscles for his young age. When he came to the house, he did walking with this small chest in his hand. (What does this mean???? You mean to say, When he came to the house, he came with a small chest in his possession. Come on, at least try to be grammatically correct.) As he rest down the chest to talk to Bob’s mother about the situation, Bob went snooping around the chest and opened it. There he found a devil fruit inside, Since bob didn’t know what that was and was also hungry, he dived right in and ate it. From there he had devil fruit powers of the sickle sickle fruit. When Bob’s grandfather realise he ate the fruit, he decided to stay and train him. (How did he automatically know he had the sickle sickle fruit? You mean his Grandfather would have to tell him so?)
One day, Bob’s home town was attacked by the Navy due to a rumor that John D. Bell had a son. As Bob was sleeping, he heard a loud explosion from the town, as he woke up with fear he saw houses on fire. He watched as the Navy ran through town slaughtering children and everyone who stands against them. (Why is the Navy slaughtering children, for what reason?)
The Navy attacked Bob but he ran for his life, as he ran the Navy chased him (why???), he was chased into a corner. The navy was about to take the head of Bob but his grandfather jumped in between him and caught the blade which was going to end his life. All while his mother came up from behind swinging a bat, hitting each navy soldier in her way. Bob’s grandfather grabbed him and ran away with his mother running behind them,wethey ran to the docks, there was a ship with some of the other villagers on it. As we got closer to the shi Bob's family were intercepted by the navy, Bob’s grandfather and my mother fought through, but Navy admiral appeared and Bob’s Mother decided to stay behind and fight while her child and her father in law escaped. Bob’s grandfather escaped on the ship while his mother stays, as Bob shed tears to watch his hometown goes up in flames and his mother on her knees in shackles. (WHY? IS AN ADMIRAL HERE? EXPLAIN?)
The villagers were transported to a nearby town where Bob’s and his grandfather stayed for a year. After they're recovery, bob’s grandfather and Bob traveled from island to island. Also after that year, he read the paper and saw his mother was executed, Bob’s grandfather tried console him and told him to be strong, from since then Bob’s mission was to take out the Navy and what they have done to him, his hometown and his family.
Bob’s grandfather dies of old age when he was 19 and from there he started his adventure on the seas and to take down the navy.-------------------------------------------------
Combat Statistics
Fighting Style: sickle sickle fruit
Equipment: Links to your weapons and items go here.
Haki: This field remains blank for now unless you acquired a particular haki in the starting bonuses page.
Stats:
Attack: 50Defense: 50Reflex: 75Willpower:25
Stats are now done in a separated application please omit. Also, your level 10, you have much more stats than this.
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