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Bomu Bomu no Mi: Bomb Bomb Fruit
Sat Aug 19, 2017 1:26 amBomu Bomu no Mi: Bomb Bomb Fruit
Devil Fruit: Bomu Bomu no Mi
Devil Fruit Type: Paramecia
Devil Fruit Appearance: The shape of the fruit takes on a perfect sphere, with an opening at the top for a stem. The stem that sticks out of this hole looks almost exactly like a fuse with the very top looking as though the fuse is lit. The base color of the fruit is black with orange swirls decorating the entirety of the fruit. The stem itself is orange with the very top lit looking part being a dark red.
Devil Fruit Description: This devil fruit allows the user to make any part of his or her body explode, whether it be hair, mucus, or breath, making the user a Bomb Human.
Fighting Style: Strategic Demolitions
Weapon Utilization: Entirety of the User's Body
Description: The user uses his body as a bomb. Anything on his body and made by his body can be used as an explosive device. This would include hair, breath, mucus, etc. Explosions that utilize his body do not affect him in a negative way, like having his arm explode and then no longer having an arm.
Toggled and Passive Abilities: List any and all passive abilities and properties your devil fruit gives you. This cannot include any damage dealing special attacks, as those will be included under techniques.
Techniques
(The following techniques can either be all devil fruit techniques, or a combination of devil fruit, and natural/weapon techniques)
- Light Techniques:
Bomb Flicker
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: 10 meters
Cooldown: 2
Duration: 0
Buffs:
Debuffs:
Description: The user points any one of his fingers and lets out an explosion from his finger that reaches 10 meters in front of them.
Afterburst
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: 10 meters
Cooldown: 2 Posts
Duration: 0
Buffs:
Debuffs:
Description: When the user delivers and a form of physical attack, he can then cause the body part that created the attack to explode. This explosion reaches to 10 meters directly in front of the user.
Concussive Blow
Technique Level: 5
Maximum Base Range: 50 meters
Cooldown: 4 Posts
Duration: 2 Posts
Buffs:
Debuffs: 20% Debuff to Reflex on Opponent, 20% Debuff to Defense on User
Description: This technique allows the user to increase the force of an explosion for more blowback and forceful power with minimal explosive damage. The main power is in the damage it does from the force of the explosion and the 20% Reflex debuff it provides rather than the usual burns and shrapnel. The strenuous force it causes though, provides a 20% debuff on Defence as well for the user. This attack can reach up to 50 meters in front of the user.
- Medium Techniques:
Claymore
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: 10 Meters
Cooldown: 5 Posts
Duration:
Buffs:
Debuffs:
Description: Once activated, the user has to be attacked in a physical way of any kind. The body then acts as a claymore mine and the explosion counter attacks whatever hit the user. In whatever direction the attacks comes from, is where the 10 meter blast shoots out.
Sticky Bomb
Technique Level: 5
Maximum Base Range: 50 Meters
Cooldown: 5 Posts
Duration:
Buffs:
Debuffs: 20% Defense Debuff on Opponent, 20% Debuff to Reflex on User
Description: The user uses the dried naval mucus inside their nose as a sticky bomb. The user flicks the bomb to a distance of 50 meters in whatever direction pointed and then it detonates upon sticking to a person. The shock and sheer disgusting nature of being hit by a booger grants opponents a 20% Defense debuff. Likewise, the user gains a 20% Reflex debuff from attempting to find enough naval mucus to use the technique.
- Heavy Techniques:
Molotov Cocktail
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: 10 meters
Cooldown: 8 Posts
Duration: 0
Buffs:
Debuffs:
Description: The user balls one of his hands into a fist and points it in a direction. When the user balls his hand, the sweat on the user's body acts as an accelerant for this technique. When the fist is quickly opened, the explosion erupts into flames 10 meters in whatever direction the hand is facing.
Dynamite Blast
Technique Level: 10
Maximum Base Range: 100 meters
Cooldown: 8 Posts
Duration: 0
Buffs:
Debuffs:
Description: The user uses his index and middle fingers as guns on both hands. The two thumbs act as a sight for the hands. When the two thumbs are cocked downwards, the fingers explode in the direction pointed for up to 100 meters.
- AoE Techniques:
Cluster Bomb
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: 10 meters
Maximum Base Radius: 2.5 meters
Cooldown: 15 Posts
Duration:
Buffs:
Debuffs:
Description: The user points their open palm into a direction and then fires off an explosion that then heats up a pocket of space that explodes as well. The initial explosion reaches up to 10 meters while the pocket of space is only 2.5 meters wide in all directions.
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Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species/Tribe : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
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Re: Bomu Bomu no Mi: Bomb Bomb Fruit
Sat Aug 19, 2017 6:35 amJust a few of edits and your fighting style should be good to go.
Concussive Blow: Don't forget to list your defense debuff in the debuffs.
Sticky bomb: While this is a cool reference to sticky bombs, it doesn't make sense the way you've designed it. My alternative to this is that you throw sticky boogers at people instead. And these sticky boogers can give them a stat debuff for a period of time (due to being grossed out) while also doing damage. Also, remove the part where the user can escape the stickiness. When you do the booger thing, the user can be damaged and debuffed as soon as the booger hits anyway, so it won't matter.
Molotov Cocktail: This one is pretty much the same as sticky bomb, so in this case, you could use your sweat instead of boogers. That way, it'll truly be a "molotov cocktail". XD
Concussive Blow: Don't forget to list your defense debuff in the debuffs.
Sticky bomb: While this is a cool reference to sticky bombs, it doesn't make sense the way you've designed it. My alternative to this is that you throw sticky boogers at people instead. And these sticky boogers can give them a stat debuff for a period of time (due to being grossed out) while also doing damage. Also, remove the part where the user can escape the stickiness. When you do the booger thing, the user can be damaged and debuffed as soon as the booger hits anyway, so it won't matter.
Molotov Cocktail: This one is pretty much the same as sticky bomb, so in this case, you could use your sweat instead of boogers. That way, it'll truly be a "molotov cocktail". XD
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Re: Bomu Bomu no Mi: Bomb Bomb Fruit
Sat Aug 19, 2017 11:08 amAlright! Edits have been made.
- Gray
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species/Tribe : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[childofdestiny]][[freakofnature]]
[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]
[[improviseadaptovercome]]
Posts : 3991
Re: Bomu Bomu no Mi: Bomb Bomb Fruit
Sat Aug 19, 2017 4:51 pmConcussive Blow and Sticky Bomb need the debuffs applied to your character listed in "Debuffs:" also, right next to the debuffs applied to the opponent.
- Gray
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species/Tribe : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[childofdestiny]][[freakofnature]]
[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]
[[improviseadaptovercome]]
Posts : 3991
Re: Bomu Bomu no Mi: Bomb Bomb Fruit
Sat Aug 19, 2017 4:57 pm
Dante Ryseli wrote:Bomu Bomu no Mi: Bomb Bomb Fruit
Devil Fruit: Bomu Bomu no Mi
Devil Fruit Type: Paramecia
Devil Fruit Appearance: The shape of the fruit takes on a perfect sphere, with an opening at the top for a stem. The stem that sticks out of this hole looks almost exactly like a fuse with the very top looking as though the fuse is lit. The base color of the fruit is black with orange swirls decorating the entirety of the fruit. The stem itself is orange with the very top lit looking part being a dark red.
Devil Fruit Description: This devil fruit allows the user to make any part of his or her body explode, whether it be hair, mucus, or breath, making the user a Bomb Human.
Fighting Style: Strategic Demolitions
Weapon Utilization: Entirety of the User's Body
Description: The user uses his body as a bomb. Anything on his body and made by his body can be used as an explosive device. This would include hair, breath, mucus, etc. Explosions that utilize his body do not affect him in a negative way, like having his arm explode and then no longer having an arm.
Toggled and Passive Abilities: List any and all passive abilities and properties your devil fruit gives you. This cannot include any damage dealing special attacks, as those will be included under techniques.
Techniques
(The following techniques can either be all devil fruit techniques, or a combination of devil fruit, and natural/weapon techniques)
- Light Techniques:
Bomb Flicker
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: 10 meters
Cooldown: 2
Duration: 0
Buffs:
Debuffs:
Description: The user points any one of his fingers and lets out an explosion from his finger that reaches 10 meters in front of them.
Afterburst
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: 10 meters
Cooldown: 2 Posts
Duration: 0
Buffs:
Debuffs:
Description: When the user delivers and a form of physical attack, he can then cause the body part that created the attack to explode. This explosion reaches to 10 meters directly in front of the user.
Concussive Blow
Technique Level: 5
Maximum Base Range: 50 meters
Cooldown: 4 Posts
Duration: 2 Posts
Buffs:
Debuffs: 20% Debuff to Reflex on Opponent, 20% Debuff to Defense on User
Description: This technique allows the user to increase the force of an explosion for more blowback and forceful power with minimal explosive damage. The main power is in the damage it does from the force of the explosion and the 20% Reflex debuff it provides rather than the usual burns and shrapnel. The strenuous force it causes though, provides a 20% debuff on Defence as well for the user. This attack can reach up to 50 meters in front of the user.
- Medium Techniques:
Claymore
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: 10 Meters
Cooldown: 5 Posts
Duration:
Buffs:
Debuffs:
Description: Once activated, the user has to be attacked in a physical way of any kind. The body then acts as a claymore mine and the explosion counter attacks whatever hit the user. In whatever direction the attacks comes from, is where the 10 meter blast shoots out.
Sticky Bomb
Technique Level: 5
Maximum Base Range: 50 Meters
Cooldown: 5 Posts
Duration:
Buffs:
Debuffs: 20% Defense Debuff on Opponent, 20% Debuff to Reflex on User
Description: The user uses the dried naval mucus inside their nose as a sticky bomb. The user flicks the bomb to a distance of 50 meters in whatever direction pointed and then it detonates upon sticking to a person. The shock and sheer disgusting nature of being hit by a booger grants opponents a 20% Defense debuff. Likewise, the user gains a 20% Reflex debuff from attempting to find enough naval mucus to use the technique.
- Heavy Techniques:
Molotov Cocktail
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: 10 meters
Cooldown: 8 Posts
Duration: 0
Buffs:
Debuffs:
Description: The user balls one of his hands into a fist and points it in a direction. When the user balls his hand, the sweat on the user's body acts as an accelerant for this technique. When the fist is quickly opened, the explosion erupts into flames 10 meters in whatever direction the hand is facing.
Dynamite Blast
Technique Level: 10
Maximum Base Range: 100 meters
Cooldown: 8 Posts
Duration: 0
Buffs:
Debuffs:
Description: The user uses his index and middle fingers as guns on both hands. The two thumbs act as a sight for the hands. When the two thumbs are cocked downwards, the fingers explode in the direction pointed for up to 100 meters.
- AoE Techniques:
Cluster Bomb
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: 10 meters
Maximum Base Radius: 2.5 meters
Cooldown: 15 Posts
Duration:
Buffs:
Debuffs:
Description: The user points their open palm into a direction and then fires off an explosion that then heats up a pocket of space that explodes as well. The initial explosion reaches up to 10 meters while the pocket of space is only 2.5 meters wide in all directions.
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