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Suigin Suigin no Mi
Sun Jul 23, 2017 11:33 pmSuigin Suigin no Mi
Devil Fruit: Suigin Suigin no Mi (Mercury Mercury Fruit)
Devil Fruit Type: Paramecia
Devil Fruit Appearance: Suigin Suigin no Mi's appearance consist of it being the shape of a tomato but gray in color. The Devil Fruit has swirls accompanied by stripes around it. The branch of the Suigin Suigin no Mi is rather curved and is in a purple color.
Devil Fruit Description: The Suigin Suigin no Mi gives the user the ability to generate liquid mercury from their body and wield it into shapes and objects that they desire and even give the user the ability to switch the mercury from solid to liquid and vice versa.
Fighting Style: Silver Heart Style
Weapon Utilization: N/A
Description: The fighting style for this Devil Fruit is mainly based on keeping distance from his opponents and letting his Devil Fruit techniques support him during the rather than used for close combat.
Toggled and Passive Abilities:
Mercury Poisoning: After 5 post of exposure to mercury caused by this fruit allies and enemies alike will have their Defense and Reflex cut off by 25% each.
Techniques
- Light Techniques:
Mercury Slice
Technique Level: 1
Technique Range: Melee
Technique Cooldown: 2 Posts
Technique Duration: Instant
Technique Buffs: N/A
Technique Debuffs: N/A
Technique Description: The users covers his arm in a solid coating of mercury for a brief moment and slashes the enemy to deal some damage if he is to be left weaponless or the gap between him and his opponent was crossed.
Mercury Blessing
Technique Level: 1
Technique Range: N/A
Technique Cooldown: 2
Technique Duration: 1
Technique Buffs: +5 Defense
Technique Debuffs: -5 Reflex
Technique Description: This technique slows down the hit of an opponent by covering his body in liquid mercury. During the short moment he is stopping the attack his Reflex will drop considerably for 1 posts.
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Technique Level: 5
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Technique Level: 20
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- Medium Techniques:
The Joy of Creation: Type One
Technique Level: 1
Technique Range: Melee
Technique Cooldown: 5 Posts
Technique Duration: 3 Posts
Technique Buffs: N/A
Technique Debuffs: N/A
Technique Description: The Joy of Creation: Type One lets the user forge Tier 1 weapons made out of Mercury only limited to blunt objects such as Maces, Hammers and such. All weapons made by this technique only have a 3 Post duration and after it will revert back to it's liquid state.
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Technique Level: 5
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Technique Level: 20
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- Heavy Techniques:
Knight's Armor
Technique Level: 1
Technique Range: N/A
Technique Cooldown: 10 Posts
Technique Duration: 5 Posts
Technique Buffs: +25 Defense
Technique Debuffs: +25 Reflex
Technique Description: The users covers his body in a solid mercury victorian styled armor. The armor grants the user a boost of +25 Defense but lowers the user's Reflex by the same amount.
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Technique Level: 10
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Mercury Sea
Technique Level: 1
Technique Range: 10m
Technique Radius: 2.5
Technique Cooldown: 15 Posts
Technique Duration: 4 Posts
Technique Buffs: -15 decrease in Reflex towards those caught in it.
Technique Debuffs: -15 decrease in Willpower towards the user.
Technique Description: The user gradually covers the floor in mercury during 4 posts making it harder for others to attack giving them a -15 Reflex decrease.
Mercurial Rain
Technique Level: 20
Technique Range: 5m
Technique Radius: 2.5
Technique Cooldown: 20
Technique Duration: Instant
Technique Buffs: N/A
Technique Debuffs: N/A
Technique Description: The user covers himself in liquid mercury and starts spinning and throwing mercury that quickly solidifies into solid spikes of mercury hitting enemies clockwise.
Butch
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Name : Butch Castle
Epithet : "No-Good" Butch
Age : 19
Height : 5'8½" / 174 cm
Weight : 143 lbs. / 65 kg
Species/Tribe : Human
Faction : Bounty Hunter
Crew : N/A
Ship : Little Castle
Crew Role : N/A
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Re: Suigin Suigin no Mi
Tue Jul 25, 2017 12:25 pmSince you're still working on this, I'd like you to remove the mercury poisoning passive. First of all, you cannot have an ability that gives others debuffs without also giving yourself an equivalent debuff (albeit, to another stat or split between some of your stats). Secondly, your ability implies that this debuff will last for the remainder of the thread. A -25% debuff for an entire thread is just too much. You should change this mercury poisoning into a light technique. This way, you can have a low cooldown on it (maybe 6 posts) and a 2 post duration. If you'd like to increase the duration, also increase the cooldown. Also, even if you make it an LT, do not forget to balance out those debuffs.
Also note that if you're applying a -25% debuff to multiple enemies using anything but an AoE, it will have to be split between those enemies. It can not give a -25% debuff to each enemy.
Also note that if you're applying a -25% debuff to multiple enemies using anything but an AoE, it will have to be split between those enemies. It can not give a -25% debuff to each enemy.
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