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Channelling: Oni-Akuma Way
Sun Apr 23, 2017 8:52 pmChannelling: Oni-Akuma Way
Fighting Style: Channelling: Oni-Akuma Way
Weapon Utilisation: Yes - Yuuki-Onna
Specialization: Sword Style
Description:
Inherited from his Master, Giselle, 'Gaki' or Lazarus learns to channel elemental energy in his sword strikes by aligning himself to an ancestor in Horned Clan Lineage. For generations, beings with Horns were said to possess the ability to tap into the Supernatural Realm, channel ancestor's Supernatural abilities as their own. Giselle noted that Lazarus's cold but kind heart would align him with ancestor who went by the Moniker of Yeti. As such, his blade strikes aligned itself with the element of ice, using his horns to harbour the spiritual energy, transposed directly to his blade. A blue aura can be seen dripping off the blade when techniques of this style is used, focusing on quick but strongly placed strikes, rendering opponent's froze in it's wake.
Techniques
- Light Attacks:
Oni-Gaki
Technique Level: 1
Technique Range: Blade's Length
Technique Cooldown: 3
Technique Duration: 1
Technique Buffs: N/A
Technique Debuffs:N/A
Technique Description:
In quick succession, Lazarus slashes in any direction twice with immense force. Wounds inflicted, if any, freeze with a light one inch ice coat.Stat changes apply in situations where freezing occur, Attack must out weigh defense by 200%.
Sliding Waltz
Technique Level: 1
Technique Range: 5 Meters
Technique Cooldown: 3
Technique Duration: 1
Technique Buffs: N/A
Technique Debuffs: N/A
Technique Description:
Raking the blade against the floor, Lazarus creates a coat of ice which covers the blade's tip as he advances. In one flicker of a moment, the blade's removed from it's contents, and it's tip in stabbed outward, the force of which pushes enemy back five meters. The wound is frozen, leaving a thick coat of one inch ice. Stat changes apply in situations where freezing occur, Attack must out weigh defense by 200%.
- Medium Attacks:
Shear Cold
Technique Level: 1
Technique Range: Blade's Length
Technique Cooldown: 8
Technique Duration: 4
Technique Buffs: * Increases all attacks using the blade by +50% for duration.
Technique Debuffs: *Decreases speed on all attacks using the blade by -50% for duration.
Technique Description:
Focusing the collected energy around his blade, Lazarus covers his blade in a blue aura which freezes everything the blade touches against in eight inch ice. All sword strikes seemingly have more 'weight' to them upon contact with enemies or surfaces. Stat changes apply in situations where freezing occur, Attack must out weigh defense by 200%.
- Heavy Attacks:
Frozen Lion - White Oni Glare
Technique Level: 1
Technique Range: 5 Meters
Technique Cooldown: 10
Technique Duration: 1
Technique Buffs: N/A
Technique Debuffs: N/A
Technique Description:
Advancing five meters, Lazarus draws his unsheathed Yuuki-Onna from it's sheath, delivering a fierce outward slash ripping apart the surface that came in contact with the slash. Literally moments after, the wound/slash area is frozen solid with ten inch thick ice. Stat changes apply in situations where freezing occur, Attack must out weigh defense by 200%.
- AOE Attacks:
Frozen Whirlwind
Technique Level: 1
Technique Range: 2.5 Diameters
Technique Radius: 10 Diameters
Technique Cooldown: 15
Technique Duration: 1
Technique Buffs: -50% Reflex for course of duration.
Technique Debuffs: -50% Attack for course of duration.
Technique Description:
Quickly drawing his blade, Lazarus creates a whirlwind with the friction created from his specialised drawing technique, creating a whirlwind which spirals outward in a twister type format. Those caught in it's wake, experience a 'chilly' or 'frosty' chill on their skin, rendering weaker or susceptible bodies, froze for one post. Stat changes apply in situations where freezing occur, Attack must out weigh defense by 200%
Gray
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Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species/Tribe : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
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Re: Channelling: Oni-Akuma Way
Mon Apr 24, 2017 1:10 pmWhile I am a bit hesitant to allow "supernatural" aspects that haven't already been established in canon, I'll just pretend it;s the technology of the sword that allows you to create the freezing effects. Keep in mind though that you shouldn't go too crazy with the freezing effects in the future unless you feed the sword an ice paramecia. (Keep it limited to freezing slashes and thrusts like you have now.)
Anyways, this is ready to be approved except for one small thing in the AoE. Your description says that the duration is one post while the duration field says it is 3 posts. Also, if you're going to "freeze" someone, unless it's only for cosmetic effect, you should associate a stat debuff with it. For example, you can give them a -50% reflex while giving yourself a -50% attack. Also, please include a stat check where the frozen effect only applies if their defense is... say <50% of your attack? Of course, you only get a debuff if someone is actually affected by the -50% reflex.
Anyways, this is ready to be approved except for one small thing in the AoE. Your description says that the duration is one post while the duration field says it is 3 posts. Also, if you're going to "freeze" someone, unless it's only for cosmetic effect, you should associate a stat debuff with it. For example, you can give them a -50% reflex while giving yourself a -50% attack. Also, please include a stat check where the frozen effect only applies if their defense is... say <50% of your attack? Of course, you only get a debuff if someone is actually affected by the -50% reflex.
Lazarus wrote:Channelling: Oni-Akuma Way
Fighting Style: Channelling: Oni-Akuma Way
Weapon Utilisation: Yes - Yuuki-Onna
Specialization: Sword Style
Description:
Inherited from his Master, Giselle, 'Gaki' or Lazarus learns to channel elemental energy in his sword strikes by aligning himself to an ancestor in Horned Clan Lineage. For generations, beings with Horns were said to possess the ability to tap into the Supernatural Realm, channel ancestor's Supernatural abilities as their own. Giselle noted that Lazarus's cold but kind heart would align him with ancestor who went by the Moniker of Yeti. As such, his blade strikes aligned itself with the element of ice, using his horns to harbour the spiritual energy, transposed directly to his blade. A blue aura can be seen dripping off the blade when techniques of this style is used, focusing on quick but strongly placed strikes, rendering opponent's froze in it's wake.
Techniques
- Light Attacks:
Oni-Gaki
Technique Level: 1
Technique Range: Blade's Length
Technique Cooldown: 3
Technique Duration: 1
Technique Buffs: N/A
Technique Debuffs:N/A
Technique Description:
In quick succession, Lazarus slashes in any direction twice with immense force. Wounds inflicted, if any, freeze with a light one inch ice coat.
Sliding Waltz
Technique Level: 1
Technique Range: 5 Meters
Technique Cooldown: 3
Technique Duration: 1
Technique Buffs: N/A
Technique Debuffs: N/A
Technique Description:
Raking the blade against the floor, Lazarus creates a coat of ice which covers the blade's tip as he advances. In one flicker of a moment, the blade's removed from it's contents, and it's tip in stabbed outward, the force of which pushes enemy back five meters. The wound is frozen, leaving a thick coat of one inch ice.
- Medium Attacks:
Shear Cold
Technique Level: 1
Technique Range: Blade's Length
Technique Cooldown: 8
Technique Duration: 4
Technique Buffs: * Increases all attacks using the blade by +5 for duration.
Technique Debuffs: *Decreases speed on all attacks using the blade by -5 for duration.
Technique Description:
Focusing the collected energy around his blade, Lazarus covers his blade in a blue aura which freezes everything the blade touches against in eight inch ice. All sword strikes seemingly have more 'weight' to them upon contact with enemies or surfaces.
- Heavy Attacks:
Frozen Lion - White Oni Glare
Technique Level: 1
Technique Range: 5 Meters
Technique Cooldown: 10
Technique Duration: 1
Technique Buffs: N/A
Technique Debuffs: N/A
Technique Description:
Advancing five meters, Lazarus draws his unsheathed Yuuki-Onna from it's sheath, delivering a fierce outward slash ripping apart the surface that came in contact with the slash. Literally moments after, the wound/slash area is frozen solid with ten inch thick ice.
- AOE Attacks:
Frozen Whirlwind
Technique Level: 1
Technique Range: 2.5 Diameters
Technique Radius: 10 Diameters
Technique Cooldown: 15
Technique Duration: 3
Technique Buffs: N/A
Technique Debuffs: N/A
Technique Description:
Quickly drawing his blade, Lazarus creates a whirlwind with the friction created from his specialised drawing technique, creating a whirlwind which spirals outward in a twister type format. Those caught in it's wake, experience a 'chilly' or 'frosty' chill on their skin, rendering weaker or susceptible bodies, froze for one post.
- Gray
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species/Tribe : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
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Re: Channelling: Oni-Akuma Way
Mon Apr 24, 2017 1:57 pm
Lazarus wrote:Channelling: Oni-Akuma Way
Fighting Style: Channelling: Oni-Akuma Way
Weapon Utilisation: Yes - Yuuki-Onna
Specialization: Sword Style
Description:
Inherited from his Master, Giselle, 'Gaki' or Lazarus learns to channel elemental energy in his sword strikes by aligning himself to an ancestor in Horned Clan Lineage. For generations, beings with Horns were said to possess the ability to tap into the Supernatural Realm, channel ancestor's Supernatural abilities as their own. Giselle noted that Lazarus's cold but kind heart would align him with ancestor who went by the Moniker of Yeti. As such, his blade strikes aligned itself with the element of ice, using his horns to harbour the spiritual energy, transposed directly to his blade. A blue aura can be seen dripping off the blade when techniques of this style is used, focusing on quick but strongly placed strikes, rendering opponent's froze in it's wake.
Techniques
- Light Attacks:
Oni-Gaki
Technique Level: 1
Technique Range: Blade's Length
Technique Cooldown: 3
Technique Duration: 1
Technique Buffs: N/A
Technique Debuffs:N/A
Technique Description:
In quick succession, Lazarus slashes in any direction twice with immense force. Wounds inflicted, if any, freeze with a light one inch ice coat.Stat changes apply in situations where freezing occur, Attack must out weigh defense by 200%.
Sliding Waltz
Technique Level: 1
Technique Range: 5 Meters
Technique Cooldown: 3
Technique Duration: 1
Technique Buffs: N/A
Technique Debuffs: N/A
Technique Description:
Raking the blade against the floor, Lazarus creates a coat of ice which covers the blade's tip as he advances. In one flicker of a moment, the blade's removed from it's contents, and it's tip in stabbed outward, the force of which pushes enemy back five meters. The wound is frozen, leaving a thick coat of one inch ice. Stat changes apply in situations where freezing occur, Attack must out weigh defense by 200%.
- Medium Attacks:
Shear Cold
Technique Level: 1
Technique Range: Blade's Length
Technique Cooldown: 8
Technique Duration: 4
Technique Buffs: * Increases all attacks using the blade by +50% for duration.
Technique Debuffs: *Decreases speed on all attacks using the blade by -50% for duration.
Technique Description:
Focusing the collected energy around his blade, Lazarus covers his blade in a blue aura which freezes everything the blade touches against in eight inch ice. All sword strikes seemingly have more 'weight' to them upon contact with enemies or surfaces. Stat changes apply in situations where freezing occur, Attack must out weigh defense by 200%.
- Heavy Attacks:
Frozen Lion - White Oni Glare
Technique Level: 1
Technique Range: 5 Meters
Technique Cooldown: 10
Technique Duration: 1
Technique Buffs: N/A
Technique Debuffs: N/A
Technique Description:
Advancing five meters, Lazarus draws his unsheathed Yuuki-Onna from it's sheath, delivering a fierce outward slash ripping apart the surface that came in contact with the slash. Literally moments after, the wound/slash area is frozen solid with ten inch thick ice. Stat changes apply in situations where freezing occur, Attack must out weigh defense by 200%.
- AOE Attacks:
Frozen Whirlwind
Technique Level: 1
Technique Range: 2.5 Diameters
Technique Radius: 10 Diameters
Technique Cooldown: 15
Technique Duration: 1
Technique Buffs: -50% Reflex for course of duration.
Technique Debuffs: -50% Attack for course of duration.
Technique Description:
Quickly drawing his blade, Lazarus creates a whirlwind with the friction created from his specialised drawing technique, creating a whirlwind which spirals outward in a twister type format. Those caught in it's wake, experience a 'chilly' or 'frosty' chill on their skin, rendering weaker or susceptible bodies, froze for one post. Stat changes apply in situations where freezing occur, Attack must out weigh defense by 200%
- Gray
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species/Tribe : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
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Posts : 3990
Re: Channelling: Oni-Akuma Way
Thu Sep 07, 2017 5:06 pmSince your fighting style is still running on the old system, you might have a huge handicap! So, I'm unlocking this thread so you can update it using the new template provided here.
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