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Argent's Stuff
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Argent's Equipment
Character Name: Neville Basil
Number of Equipment Pieces: 1
Highest tiered equipment: 2
Total Equipment Stat Points: 20
Equipment Name: Silver Moon
Equipment Type:Sword
Equipment Tier: 2
Equipment Stats:+10 defense
Equipment Description: A sword with cross guard. The hilt has been bandaged for comfort at the very tip of the handle it open into a ring. Although the handle is called silver it is actually made from a precious metal called moon stone. This valuable blade would be recognized by sword enthusiast.
Techniques
- Equipment Techniques:
Cool Breeze
Technique By: Silver Moon
Technique Tier: 2
Technique Range: 25m
Technique Cooldown: 7
Technique Description: Spinning his sword with both hands, by the handle. This technique is reminiscent of a fan except can pull stuff in range towards it or blow it away. The closer the targets get the to the blade the heavier the cutting damage. The air sucking in the target is extremely cold and dense curtsy of the Hie Hie no mi. The user can't move during this attack (100% debuff?), unless he stops it. Targets 50% debuff reflex attack hits plus 50%.
Equipment Name:Silver Moon's sheath
Equipment Type:sheath
Equipment Tier: 2
Equipment Stats:+10 defense
Equipment Description: A licorice laqured sheath with close silverbands near the top and another longer piece at the base.
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Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
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Re: Argent's Stuff
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You're missing equipment descriptions for both equipment pieces.
- Gray
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[childofdestiny]][[freakofnature]]
[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]
[[improviseadaptovercome]]
Posts : 3928
Re: Argent's Stuff
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Argent wrote:Argent's Equipment
Character Name: Neville Basil
Number of Equipment Pieces: 1
Highest tiered equipment: 2
Total Equipment Stat Points: 20
Equipment Name: Silver Moon
Equipment Type:Sword
Equipment Tier: 2
Equipment Stats:+10 defense
Equipment Description: A sword with cross guard. The hilt has been bandaged for comfort at the very tip of the handle it open into a ring. Although the handle is called silver it is actually made from a precious metal called moon stone. This valuable blade would be recognized by sword enthusiast.
Techniques
- Equipment Techniques:
Name of the technique[Missing the name of the technique.]
Technique By: Silver Moon
Technique Tier: 2
Technique Range: 25m
Technique Cooldown: 7
Technique Description: Spinning his sword with both hands, by the handle. This technique is reminiscent of a fan except can pull stuff in range towards it or blow it away. The closer the targets get the to the blade the heavier the cutting damage. The air sucking in the target is extremely cold and dense curtsy of the Hie Hie no mi. The user can't move during this attack (100% debuff?) [Immobilizing yourself while still being able to attack is hard to represent in stats, so just give yourself a 25% reflex debuff and balance it out with equivalent debuffs to your opponent.], unless he stops it. Targets 50% debuff reflex attack hits plus 50%. [Not sure what this sentence means. Please re-word or clarify. Also, since there are stat changes involved with this technique, please include a duration.]
Equipment Name:Silver Moon's sheath
Equipment Type:sheath
Equipment Tier: 2
Equipment Stats:+10 defense
Equipment Description: A licorice laqured sheath with close silverbands near the top and another longer piece at the base.
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