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This post has in-line assessment comments.Thu Mar 09, 2017 11:22 pm

   
Joey Pryce
   


   
Joey Pryce  307239

   Basic Character Information
   


   Starting Bonus: Pocket Change| [Starting Bonus Roll]

   First Name: Joey
   Middle Name/Initial: C.
   Last Name: Pryce
   Epithet: Jojo
   Age: 16
   Gender: Male
   Race: Human
   Faction: Pirate
   Profession: Brawler who also fairs well with swinging stuff around like hammers, and baseball bats.
   


   Physical Appearance
   


   Height: 5'5"
   Weight: 142lb

   Hair Style: Smooth and down
   Hair Color: Blond
   Eye Color: Gold
   Scars: None
   Clothing and Accessories:
Spoiler:
At a first glance, one would think Joey to be a farmer due to his attire. (Though his personality might not help much.) Joey's usual attire consists of light blue overalls that go all the way down to just below his knees. Underneath it is a short sleeved worn out shirt that is light brown in color which he acquired from his years as an orphan. Underneath that is YET another shirt which is black and has sleeves leading half way down his arms. Being more of an outside person, Joey usually wears light brown flip flops, thankfully without socks. Luckily he has a brown belt wrapped around his waist to keep that overall of his up. He also has a straw hat which completes his farmer like appearance. He never wears the hat oddly, and instead keeps it behind him held up by some black string he managed to connect together with said hat.

   Description: Joey has blond hair that is surprisingly well kept most of the time despite the trouble he ends up getting himself into. The back of his hair goes halfway down his neck with some hair nearly covering each side of his head save for his ears as well as some going down between his golden eyes. His skin is light in color without any signs of scars, or blemishes save for his freckles. His cheeks are riddled with said freckles, four of them just under both of his eyes which further shows off his all around friendly face usually plastered with an innocent smile. Joey has a skinny build, and stands up to 5'5" not being the tallest of people. Though despite his skinny appearance, the boy is known to have above human level strength due to some training he has went through in the past which usually take people by surprise. He also sports a six pack, the only source of visible muscle on his body most can argue.
   


   The Past
   


   Main Traits: Care free, Simple minded, Positive
   Likes: Nature, Birds, Family, Friends
   Dislikes: Bullies, Being told what to do, People who betray others
   Hometown: Was dropped off at Dawn Island as a baby. True hometown unknown.
   Personality:
Spoiler:

   
History:


Last edited by Joey Pryce on Wed Mar 15, 2017 1:46 pm; edited 3 times in total
Gray
Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species/Tribe : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[childofdestiny]][[freakofnature]]
[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]

[[improviseadaptovercome]]
Posts : 3991

Joey Pryce  Empty Re: Joey Pryce

This post has in-line assessment comments.Wed Mar 15, 2017 10:22 am
One thing that I think you should probably reconsider is stowing away on a ship that's traveling from the North Blue to the South Blue. Because the two Blues are divided by the Red Line, I wouldn't recommend crossing it so casually in your history. After all, Brook did say that to cross the Red Line is a massive undertaking. One more thing I ask of you is to not mention the "Chinjao" family specifically, just because we're technically an alternate universe. You can still learn Hasshoken, just don't have his tutor specifically name the family. You should also think about giving his tutor a name, just to add more character depth and connection.
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Joey Pryce  Empty Re: Joey Pryce

This post has in-line assessment comments.Wed Mar 15, 2017 12:10 pm
I've made the other changes, but I don't see what is wrong with stowing away on a ship to go from North to South. I know going through the Red Line is hard, but the ship could have been able to make the trip.
Gray
Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species/Tribe : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[childofdestiny]][[freakofnature]]
[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]

[[improviseadaptovercome]]
Posts : 3991

Joey Pryce  Empty Re: Joey Pryce

This post has in-line assessment comments.Wed Mar 15, 2017 1:30 pm
Joey Pryce wrote:I've made the other changes, but I don't see what is wrong with stowing away on a ship to go from North to South. I know going through the Red Line is hard, but the ship could have been able to make the trip.
The ship could've crossed the mountain, huh?
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Joey Pryce  Empty Re: Joey Pryce

This post has in-line assessment comments.Wed Mar 15, 2017 1:33 pm
Of course! >:0

Oh....wait.....>.> I will make some sort of change <.<

He's an East baby now. owo
Gray
Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species/Tribe : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[childofdestiny]][[freakofnature]]
[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]

[[improviseadaptovercome]]
Posts : 3991

Joey Pryce  Empty Re: Joey Pryce

This post has in-line assessment comments.Wed Mar 15, 2017 1:48 pm
Your hometown field still says Flevance! D:
Gray
Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species/Tribe : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[childofdestiny]][[freakofnature]]
[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]

[[improviseadaptovercome]]
Posts : 3991

Joey Pryce  Empty Re: Joey Pryce

This post has in-line assessment comments.Wed Mar 15, 2017 1:49 pm
Joey Pryce  Fdzj9w
Joey Pryce wrote:

   
Joey Pryce
   


   
Joey Pryce  307239

   Basic Character Information
   


   Starting Bonus: Pocket Change| [Starting Bonus Roll]

   First Name: Joey
   Middle Name/Initial: C.
   Last Name: Pryce
   Epithet: Jojo
   Age: 16
   Gender: Male
   Race: Human
   Faction: Pirate
   Profession: Brawler who also fairs well with swinging stuff around like hammers, and baseball bats.
   


   Physical Appearance
   


   Height: 5'5"
   Weight: 142lb

   Hair Style: Smooth and down
   Hair Color: Blond
   Eye Color: Gold
   Scars: None
   Clothing and Accessories:
Spoiler:
At a first glance, one would think Joey to be a farmer due to his attire. (Though his personality might not help much.) Joey's usual attire consists of light blue overalls that go all the way down to just below his knees. Underneath it is a short sleeved worn out shirt that is light brown in color which he acquired from his years as an orphan. Underneath that is YET another shirt which is black and has sleeves leading half way down his arms. Being more of an outside person, Joey usually wears light brown flip flops, thankfully without socks. Luckily he has a brown belt wrapped around his waist to keep that overall of his up. He also has a straw hat which completes his farmer like appearance. He never wears the hat oddly, and instead keeps it behind him held up by some black string he managed to connect together with said hat.

   Description: Joey has blond hair that is surprisingly well kept most of the time despite the trouble he ends up getting himself into. The back of his hair goes halfway down his neck with some hair nearly covering each side of his head save for his ears as well as some going down between his golden eyes. His skin is light in color without any signs of scars, or blemishes save for his freckles. His cheeks are riddled with said freckles, four of them just under both of his eyes which further shows off his all around friendly face usually plastered with an innocent smile. Joey has a skinny build, and stands up to 5'5" not being the tallest of people. Though despite his skinny appearance, the boy is known to have above human level strength due to some training he has went through in the past which usually take people by surprise. He also sports a six pack, the only source of visible muscle on his body most can argue.
   


   The Past
   


   Main Traits: Care free, Simple minded, Positive
   Likes: Nature, Birds, Family, Friends
   Dislikes: Bullies, Being told what to do, People who betray others
   Hometown: Was dropped off at Dawn Island as a baby. True hometown unknown.
   Personality:
Spoiler:

   
History:
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