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Wezza H. Dorian's Equipment
Sat Mar 04, 2017 9:05 pmCharacter Name: Wezza H. Dorian
Number of Equipment Pieces: Two
Highest tiered equipment: 2
Total Equipment Stat Points: 20
Equipment Name: Forest Whistles
Equipment Type: Twin rapiers.
Equipment Tier: 2
Equipment Stats: +5 attack, +5 speed
Equipment Description: A pair of light yet powerful sword that carry the calmness of the forest with them. When striking, they do not make a sound.
Equipment Name: Pop Green bag
Equipment Type: A satchel of Pop Green seeds.
Equipment Tier: 2
Equipment Stats: +5 attack, +5 will
Equipment Description: A small satchel of Pop Green seeds. Not many different types, mainly for utility, a few for attacking.
Techniques
Number of Equipment Pieces: Two
Highest tiered equipment: 2
Total Equipment Stat Points: 20
Equipment Name: Forest Whistles
Equipment Type: Twin rapiers.
Equipment Tier: 2
Equipment Stats: +5 attack, +5 speed
Equipment Description: A pair of light yet powerful sword that carry the calmness of the forest with them. When striking, they do not make a sound.
Equipment Name: Pop Green bag
Equipment Type: A satchel of Pop Green seeds.
Equipment Tier: 2
Equipment Stats: +5 attack, +5 will
Equipment Description: A small satchel of Pop Green seeds. Not many different types, mainly for utility, a few for attacking.
Techniques
- Equipment Techniques:
Name of the technique: Tri Strike
Technique By: Forest Whistles
Technique Tier: 2
Technique Range: 5 - 20m
Technique Cooldown: 7
Technique Description: He jumps at his opponent, with his beak and both his swords thrust at them to deliver three simultaneous powerful strikes.
Name of the technique: Plucking Life
Technique By: Forest Whistles
Technique Tier: 2
Technique Range: 1 - 5m
Technique Cooldown: 8
Technique Description: He grabs his opponent with his beak and slashes at them with his rapiers relentlessly whilst they're trapped, aiming specifically at the area where the heart is.
Gray
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Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species/Tribe : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
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Re: Wezza H. Dorian's Equipment
Mon Mar 06, 2017 2:08 pm[Corrections in orange.]
[Note: Please make sure you proofread your stuff before requesting approvals. It only lengthens the process of getting your stuff approved if you don't.]
[Missing description.]WezzaHD wrote:Character Name: Wezza H. Dorian
Number of Equipment Pieces: Two
Highest tiered equipment: What is the tier of your highest tiered equipment? [This should be "2".]
Total Equipment Stat Points: 20
Equipment Name: Forest Whistles
Equipment Type: Twin rapiers. A pair of light yet powerful sword that carry the calmness of the forest with them. When striking, they do not make a sound.
Equipment Tier: 2
Equipment Stats: +5 attack, +5 speed
Equipment Description: Describe how this equipment works, and what its purpose is. [You missed this.]
Techniques [I'd suggest placing the techniques at the end of the post like in the template, despite all of these techniques being associated with the Forest Whistles.]
- Equipment Techniques:
Name of the technique: Tri Strike
Technique By: Forest Whistles
Technique Tier: 2
Technique Range: Within jumping distance [Give an exact number in meters. Recommendation would be 5-20m.]
Technique Cooldown: Another missing bit.
Technique Description: He jumps at his opponent, with his beak and both his swords thrust at them to deliver three simultaneous powerful strikes.
Name of the technique: Plucking Life
Technique By: Forest Whistles
Technique Tier: 2
Technique Range: Within range of beak [Again, need an exact range in meters. For this one, 1-5m sounds reasonable.]
Technique Cooldown: 8
Technique Description: He grabs his opponent with his beak and slashes at them with his rapiers relentlessly whilst they're trapped, aiming specifically at the area where the heart is.
Equipment Name: Pop Green bag
Equipment Type: A small satchel of Pop Green seeds. Not many different types, mainly for utility, a few for attacking.
Equipment Tier: 2
Equipment Stats: +5 attack, +5 will
[Note: Please make sure you proofread your stuff before requesting approvals. It only lengthens the process of getting your stuff approved if you don't.]
- Gray
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species/Tribe : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
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Posts : 3990
Re: Wezza H. Dorian's Equipment
Mon Mar 06, 2017 9:10 pmWezzaHD wrote:Character Name: Wezza H. Dorian
Number of Equipment Pieces: Two
Highest tiered equipment: 2
Total Equipment Stat Points: 20
Equipment Name: Forest Whistles
Equipment Type: Twin rapiers.
Equipment Tier: 2
Equipment Stats: +5 attack, +5 speed
Equipment Name: Pop Green bag
Equipment Type: Asatchel of Pop Green seeds..
Equipment Tier: 2
Equipment Stats: +5 attack, +5 will
Equipment Description: A small satchel of Pop Green seeds. Not many different types, mainly for utility, a few for attacking.
[Now you see why I asked you to proofread?]
Equipment Description: A pair of light yet powerful sword that carry the calmness of the forest with them. When striking, they do not make a sound.
Techniques
- Equipment Techniques:
Name of the technique: Tri Strike
Technique By: Forest Whistles
Technique Tier: 2
Technique Range: 5 - 20m
Technique Cooldown: 7
Technique Description: He jumps at his opponent, with his beak and both his swords thrust at them to deliver three simultaneous powerful strikes.
Name of the technique: Plucking Life
Technique By: Forest Whistles
Technique Tier: 2
Technique Range: 1 - 5m
Technique Cooldown: 8
Technique Description: He grabs his opponent with his beak and slashes at them with his rapiers relentlessly whilst they're trapped, aiming specifically at the area where the heart is.
- Gray
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species/Tribe : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[childofdestiny]][[freakofnature]]
[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]
[[improviseadaptovercome]]
Posts : 3990
Re: Wezza H. Dorian's Equipment
Tue Mar 07, 2017 8:03 pm
WezzaHD wrote:Character Name: Wezza H. Dorian
Number of Equipment Pieces: Two
Highest tiered equipment: 2
Total Equipment Stat Points: 20
Equipment Name: Forest Whistles
Equipment Type: Twin rapiers.
Equipment Tier: 2
Equipment Stats: +5 attack, +5 speed
Equipment Description: A pair of light yet powerful sword that carry the calmness of the forest with them. When striking, they do not make a sound.
Equipment Name: Pop Green bag
Equipment Type: A satchel of Pop Green seeds.
Equipment Tier: 2
Equipment Stats: +5 attack, +5 will
Equipment Description: A small satchel of Pop Green seeds. Not many different types, mainly for utility, a few for attacking.
Techniques
- Equipment Techniques:
Name of the technique: Tri Strike
Technique By: Forest Whistles
Technique Tier: 2
Technique Range: 5 - 20m
Technique Cooldown: 7
Technique Description: He jumps at his opponent, with his beak and both his swords thrust at them to deliver three simultaneous powerful strikes.
Name of the technique: Plucking Life
Technique By: Forest Whistles
Technique Tier: 2
Technique Range: 1 - 5m
Technique Cooldown: 8
Technique Description: He grabs his opponent with his beak and slashes at them with his rapiers relentlessly whilst they're trapped, aiming specifically at the area where the heart is.
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