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Bara-Bara no Mi
Sun Feb 26, 2017 6:22 amBara Bara no Mi
Devil Fruit: Chop-Chop Fruit
Devil Fruit Type: Paramecia
Devil Fruit Appearance:
Devil Fruit Description: Turns the user into a "splitting human" allowing them to split any limb of their body and fly them around except the feet.
Essentially, the user can fly any splitted limb excluding the feet around a limited distance, the feet however cannot fly at all and act as an anchor for the other limbs flying around.
Other then that, the user is given standard weakness's, weak to seastone, drowns in the sea etc.
Devil Fruit Passive Abilities: The user is immune to sword attacks such as stabbing and slashing, the cutted limb will only split which will allow the user to put back the splitted limb. However, this doesn't apply if the sword has seastone or infused with Busoshoku Haki.
Fighting Style: Bara-Bara Black Claw Style
Weapon Utilization: the current user, Chuck uses Black Claw's in association with the powers of the chop-chop fruit
Specialization: The devil fruit is mixed in close range and long range, since the user can split body parts and fly them around to attack their opponent.
Description: Chuck uses the powers of the chop-chop fruit in association with his Black Claws and Bladed Boots, his Black Claw is usually only good for up-close combat but thanks to the powers of the fruit, he can extend upon this range greatly
Techniques
- Light Attacks:
Bara-Bara Punch
Technique Level: 1
Technique Range: up to 10m
Technique Cooldown: 2
Technique Description: Chuck splits his hand and flies it towards an opponent with a clenched fist, landing a direct punch.
Bara-Bara Black Bullet
Technique Level: 5
Technique Range: up to 50m
Technique Cooldown: 4
Technique Description: Chuck uses his chop-chop fruit to split one of his fingers with a claw still attached, and sends it flying to an opponent at great speed which if hits will stab the opponent.
Bara-Bara Black Claw
Technique Level: 1
Technique Range: up to 10m
Technique Cooldown: 3
Technique Description: Similar to Bara-Bara Punch, except the user has all his fingers claw opened up, flying at the opponent.
Bara-Bara Bladed Kick
Technique Level: 20
Technique Range: 5m
Technique Cooldown: 4
Technique Description: This move is mostly used when Chuck's upper body is splitted, When somebody is near Chuck's legs when he is flying around, he activates the boots blades and the legs spin around at the opponent, to hit them with the bladed boots.
- Medium Attacks:
Bara-Bara Aerial Spin Attack
Technique Level: 1
Technique Range: 5m
Technique Cooldown: 5
Technique Description: This requires for the user to actually be close to the opponent, but once he's close he splits his hands, grabs the opponent and starts flying him into the air, then the hands starts spinning the opponent around in the air and driving him to the ground with full force
Bara-Bara Black Piercer
Technique Level: 20
Technique Range: 30m
Technique Cooldown: 6
Technique Description: Chuck splits both of his arms and starts flying them towards an opponent. If this lands, all the claws of both hands will stab the opponent.
Bara-Bara Black Gattling
Technique Level: 5
Technique Range: 15m
Technique Cooldown: 7
Technique Description: Chuck splits both his hands and then starts a barrage of claw attacks in-front of him.
- Heavy Attacks:
Bara-Bara Black Impaler
Technique Level: 1
Technique Range: 5m
Technique Cooldown: 12
Technique Description: This technique requires for the user to actually get close to the opponent, when given the chance, Chuck will grab the opponent, split his upper body and fly high in the air, then drop them. Before they fall down, Chuck uses his entire upper body and impales his claws into the enemy, then flying the opponent with full speed into the ground. This is usually meant to do heavy damage, but it could only do medium damage depending on the opponent.
Bara-Bara Black Cannon
Technique Level: 20
Technique Range: 30m
Technique Cooldown: 14
Technique Description: Chuck splits both hands and puts them about 4 metres away from each other, Chuck sends them flying forward and the splitted hands start spinning around that 4 metre distance, creating a circle-foward spinny attack!
- AOE Attacks:
Bara-Bara Bladed Hurricane
Technique Level: 20
Technique Range: 20m
Technique Radius: 5
Technique Cooldown: 22
Technique Description: Chuck activates his bladed boots then he splits his upper half, then uses his hands to start spinning his leg at extreme speeds which start flying around the area then Chuck splits his hands with the Black Claw's still attached, flying everywhere. This is meant to hit any enemy that is close.
Bara-Bara Black Whirlwind
Technique Level: 1
Technique Range: 10m
Technique Radius: 2.5
Technique Cooldown: 20
Technique Description: Chuck splits his hands and then the left hand goes 2.5 metres away from Chuck, then the right hand goes 2.5 metres away to the other side, and they start spinning around in that 2.5 metre circle, hitting anybody who is close.
Gray
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Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species/Tribe : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
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Re: Bara-Bara no Mi
Mon Feb 27, 2017 11:20 amYour techniques are almost good to go, Chuck, except for one important misunderstanding. The technique levels are not determined by your character's level. They're determined by which level you get those techniques at. So, you should have the following levels for techniques:
Light: Two level 1, one level 5, one level 20
Medium: One level 1, one level 5, one level 20
Heavy: One level 1, one level 10
AOE: One level 1, one level 20
And the technique range is determined by the technique's level, not the characters. So, a level 1 technique would have a maximum range of 10m while the maximum range of a level 5 technique would be 50m.
Light: Two level 1, one level 5, one level 20
Medium: One level 1, one level 5, one level 20
Heavy: One level 1, one level 10
AOE: One level 1, one level 20
And the technique range is determined by the technique's level, not the characters. So, a level 1 technique would have a maximum range of 10m while the maximum range of a level 5 technique would be 50m.
- Gray
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species/Tribe : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[childofdestiny]][[freakofnature]]
[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]
[[improviseadaptovercome]]
Posts : 3990
Re: Bara-Bara no Mi
Mon Feb 27, 2017 3:32 pmFor Bara-Bara Black Whirlwind (the level 1 AOE), you've worded your description to suggest that the radius of the technique is 5m. It can only be a maximum of 2.5m.
- GuestGuest
Re: Bara-Bara no Mi
Mon Feb 27, 2017 3:44 pmYou mis-read it? it's range is 5m, but the radius of the technique which is 25% of what 5m is, which is 1.25
EDIT: NVM! I see what you mean haha, not the actual set values but the actual description itself, my bad I'll fix it.
EDIT: NVM! I see what you mean haha, not the actual set values but the actual description itself, my bad I'll fix it.
- GuestGuest
Re: Bara-Bara no Mi
Mon Feb 27, 2017 3:49 pmOkay! sorry about the above, it's been properly fixed now.
- Gray
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species/Tribe : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[childofdestiny]][[freakofnature]]
[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]
[[improviseadaptovercome]]
Posts : 3990
Re: Bara-Bara no Mi
Mon Feb 27, 2017 3:49 pm"Chuck splits his hands and then the left hand goes 5 metres away from Chuck, then the right hand goes 5 metres away to the other side, and they start spinning around in that 5 metre circle, hitting anybody who is close." The bolded bit suggests that you're hitting everything within that 5-metre circle. Otherwise, why even spread out your hands 5 meters apart? "Hitting anybody who is close" does not specify any range, so it only makes sense for the reader to assume that by "close", you mean anyone within that 5-meter circle.
- Gray
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species/Tribe : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[childofdestiny]][[freakofnature]]
[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]
[[improviseadaptovercome]]
Posts : 3990
Re: Bara-Bara no Mi
Mon Feb 27, 2017 3:50 pmNow all you need is a red nose and a killer laugh!
Chucky wrote:Bara Bara no Mi
Devil Fruit: Chop-Chop Fruit
Devil Fruit Type: Paramecia
Devil Fruit Appearance:
Devil Fruit Description: Turns the user into a "splitting human" allowing them to split any limb of their body and fly them around except the feet.
Essentially, the user can fly any splitted limb excluding the feet around a limited distance, the feet however cannot fly at all and act as an anchor for the other limbs flying around.
Other then that, the user is given standard weakness's, weak to seastone, drowns in the sea etc.
Devil Fruit Passive Abilities: The user is immune to sword attacks such as stabbing and slashing, the cutted limb will only split which will allow the user to put back the splitted limb. However, this doesn't apply if the sword has seastone or infused with Busoshoku Haki.
Fighting Style: Bara-Bara Black Claw Style
Weapon Utilization: the current user, Chuck uses Black Claw's in association with the powers of the chop-chop fruit
Specialization: The devil fruit is mixed in close range and long range, since the user can split body parts and fly them around to attack their opponent.
Description: Chuck uses the powers of the chop-chop fruit in association with his Black Claws and Bladed Boots, his Black Claw is usually only good for up-close combat but thanks to the powers of the fruit, he can extend upon this range greatly
Techniques
- Light Attacks:
Bara-Bara Punch
Technique Level: 1
Technique Range: up to 10m
Technique Cooldown: 2
Technique Description: Chuck splits his hand and flies it towards an opponent with a clenched fist, landing a direct punch.
Bara-Bara Black Bullet
Technique Level: 5
Technique Range: up to 50m
Technique Cooldown: 4
Technique Description: Chuck uses his chop-chop fruit to split one of his fingers with a claw still attached, and sends it flying to an opponent at great speed which if hits will stab the opponent.
Bara-Bara Black Claw
Technique Level: 1
Technique Range: up to 10m
Technique Cooldown: 3
Technique Description: Similar to Bara-Bara Punch, except the user has all his fingers claw opened up, flying at the opponent.
Bara-Bara Bladed Kick
Technique Level: 20
Technique Range: 5m
Technique Cooldown: 4
Technique Description: This move is mostly used when Chuck's upper body is splitted, When somebody is near Chuck's legs when he is flying around, he activates the boots blades and the legs spin around at the opponent, to hit them with the bladed boots.
- Medium Attacks:
Bara-Bara Aerial Spin Attack
Technique Level: 1
Technique Range: 5m
Technique Cooldown: 5
Technique Description: This requires for the user to actually be close to the opponent, but once he's close he splits his hands, grabs the opponent and starts flying him into the air, then the hands starts spinning the opponent around in the air and driving him to the ground with full force
Bara-Bara Black Piercer
Technique Level: 20
Technique Range: 30m
Technique Cooldown: 6
Technique Description: Chuck splits both of his arms and starts flying them towards an opponent. If this lands, all the claws of both hands will stab the opponent.
Bara-Bara Black Gattling
Technique Level: 5
Technique Range: 15m
Technique Cooldown: 7
Technique Description: Chuck splits both his hands and then starts a barrage of claw attacks in-front of him.
- Heavy Attacks:
Bara-Bara Black Impaler
Technique Level: 1
Technique Range: 5m
Technique Cooldown: 12
Technique Description: This technique requires for the user to actually get close to the opponent, when given the chance, Chuck will grab the opponent, split his upper body and fly high in the air, then drop them. Before they fall down, Chuck uses his entire upper body and impales his claws into the enemy, then flying the opponent with full speed into the ground. This is usually meant to do heavy damage, but it could only do medium damage depending on the opponent.
Bara-Bara Black Cannon
Technique Level: 20
Technique Range: 30m
Technique Cooldown: 14
Technique Description: Chuck splits both hands and puts them about 4 metres away from each other, Chuck sends them flying forward and the splitted hands start spinning around that 4 metre distance, creating a circle-foward spinny attack!
- AOE Attacks:
Bara-Bara Bladed Hurricane
Technique Level: 20
Technique Range: 20m
Technique Radius: 5
Technique Cooldown: 22
Technique Description: Chuck activates his bladed boots then he splits his upper half, then uses his hands to start spinning his leg at extreme speeds which start flying around the area then Chuck splits his hands with the Black Claw's still attached, flying everywhere. This is meant to hit any enemy that is close.
Bara-Bara Black Whirlwind
Technique Level: 1
Technique Range: 10m
Technique Radius: 2.5
Technique Cooldown: 20
Technique Description: Chuck splits his hands and then the left hand goes 2.5 metres away from Chuck, then the right hand goes 2.5 metres away to the other side, and they start spinning around in that 2.5 metre circle, hitting anybody who is close.
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