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Chuck Newriss
Sat Feb 25, 2017 6:15 pmChuck Newriss
Basic Character Information
Starting Bonus: +25 Stat Points | [Super Rookie]
First Name: Chuck
Middle Name/Initial: N/A
Last Name: Newriss
Epithet: Black Claw
Age: 22
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Faction: Marine
Profession: A bit of a Cook, he knows some types of food and a couple of dishes but nothing amazing.
Physical Appearance
Height: 6'0"
Weight: 189 lbs
Hair Style: Short, messy
Hair Color: Black
Eye Color: Blue
Scars: Long one on his left face which lasts from his chin to his eye.
Clothing and Accessories: Chuck as a rear-admiral usually wears a black suit or Black trench coat, depending on the temperature. He always wears his mask and rarely puts it off. Also, like every marine high rank over Ensign, Chuck has the "Justice" coat hanging on his back, but puts it off if he has to fight seriously. As for his bottom part, he wears Black Pants to go in style with either his black suit or trenchcoat, and wears shoes that have small blades at the front.
Description: Chuck has a bit of a muscular side to his muscles but he's skinny, across his body are scars from cuts and slashes he received before he ate the Chop-Chop Fruit.
The Past
Main Traits: Laidback, Chilled, Calculating, Just.
Likes:
- Excitement, anything that happens out of the ordinary, though in his position as Rear-Admiral he gets more then he bargains for.
- A good fight, during his rise to Rear-Admiral he had a lot of excitement in fighting new opponents that were always a challenge, but now. He's risen to a level of strength where weaker people aren't even able to land a hit on him.
- New things, Chuck can be close-minded, but if you really push through to him he can find the most stupidest thing interesting, you know what they say. You learn something new everyday.
Dislikes:
- Bullying, Torture, etc all though he is accepting of such actions like violence if the person deserves it, but if it's unnecessary, it doesn't sit right with Chuck
- Sensitive, despite his lazy attitude he does care sometimes about what others think of him, if he gets judged too much or too critically, you'll touch a nerve of his.
- Being a scumbag in general, Chuck usually tries to mind his own business but he gets angry at the sight of someone who did nothing wrong being harmed or tormented, he'll punish such people who do such things.
Hometown:Unnamed Island, militarized by World Government.
Personality: Chuck had a fire at a much younger age, he was very open-minded, very brave and had a lot of courage when it came to hardships and facing new challenges but over the years he grew tired of it in a way, after seeing the world for how it is, he hasn't had much motivation for anything else. He doesn't find anything that challenging at his level. All though he's mostly been employed against lower-bounty pirates so they don't get any bigger then needed, he grew from an energetic boy to a laidback, lazy person.
All though, when a situation actually gets serious or a friend gets hurt, that energetic part of him comes back and he does everything in his power to calm everything down. He's closed to most people but to people he's friends with, he is very talkative and open to them. To the point he would even reveal his scar to a friend if they asked.
If you're friends with Chuck, he'll treat you like his own sibling. To the normal person, it would look quite odd how he looks sad and closed to anyone he doesn't know, but suddenly changes when he sees a friend and starts talking to them
If you're enemies with Chuck... well, he instantly gets serious the moment he spots you, and would try to kill you depending on what you did to make him your enemy, he isn't unreasonable, but most cases are if he's angry with you for something, it wouldn't be forgiven so easily.
- History:
Chuck was born in South Blue, on an island that was heavily militarized by the world government, while other citizens hated this type of management others saw it in a respecting manner, to the point of patriotism. Chuck was one of the few who saw it like so, who thought the World Government was everything, that it's justice was needed against criminals.
Chuck's parents wanted Chuck to have a simple life, he was taught by his parents on how to cook. They wanted him to become a chef but quit halfway through his training in doing so and started to learn how to battle properly, he went to the marines at the age of 18 and was trained in the ways of fighting, normally a marine would be put through the ways of swordsmanship, or just using a cutlass decently. But Chuck grew an affinity to using his fists, or specifically, fisted weapons like claws or gloves.
Since the marines didn't deal with anyone who used claws before, they decided to just let him serve a high rank and let him build his own techniques as he goes through missions. Throughout the years of serving he has shown promising potential, he managed to show great technique with his black claws and taking away many criminals on his own. During one of his missions, he confiscated a devil fruit. Normally the choice of action was to give it to the government and get paid handsomely for it, but his high ranking officer gave him a choice. Either eat it and become a more efficient weapon for the marines or give away the chance for more power. Chuck chose the first option, and became a Devil Fruit User, it was revealed that he ate the Chop-Chop fruit, becoming a split human. This allows him to split his body apart and fly around distances. Combined with his great technique in using his black claws and the properties of the Chop-Chop fruit, Chuck Newriss rised up fast through the ranks to the point of Rear-Admiral, but was blocked for a while as higher ranks considered that he was going "too fast"
However, he got cocky once in a mission and fought against an opponent with Busoshoku Haki, he charged straight ahead at the enemy with his chop fruit, but got slashed to his left side of the face, losing his left eye. Now there's a massive scar on his face and he wears a mask to hide it, as he isn't comfortable with showing it.
Gray
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species/Tribe : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[childofdestiny]][[freakofnature]]
[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]
[[improviseadaptovercome]]
Posts : 3990
Re: Chuck Newriss
Sat Feb 25, 2017 10:50 pmI like the contrast he has to Sanji where Sanji wanted to cook instead of fight, while Chuck wanted to fight instead of cook. XD
But, just one thing I noticed in the Clothing and Accessories section, where I think you might've accidentally skipped half a sentence at the end. Everything else is ready to go, so once you've corrected that, just reply to this thread to let me know. Alternatively, you can post anything that needs to be approved in the Waiting Room (Labelled as "Approval Requests" in the Quick Links). Once you're finished with this, you can proceed to Step 6 in the Character Creation Guide. Good luck!
But, just one thing I noticed in the Clothing and Accessories section, where I think you might've accidentally skipped half a sentence at the end. Everything else is ready to go, so once you've corrected that, just reply to this thread to let me know. Alternatively, you can post anything that needs to be approved in the Waiting Room (Labelled as "Approval Requests" in the Quick Links). Once you're finished with this, you can proceed to Step 6 in the Character Creation Guide. Good luck!
- Gray
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species/Tribe : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[childofdestiny]][[freakofnature]]
[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]
[[improviseadaptovercome]]
Posts : 3990
Re: Chuck Newriss
Sun Feb 26, 2017 10:37 am
Chucky wrote:Chuck Newriss
Basic Character Information
Starting Bonus: +25 Stat Points | [Super Rookie]
First Name: Chuck
Middle Name/Initial: N/A
Last Name: Newriss
Epithet: Black Claw
Age: 22
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Faction: Marine
Profession: A bit of a Cook, he knows some types of food and a couple of dishes but nothing amazing.
Physical Appearance
Height: 6'0"
Weight: 189 lbs
Hair Style: Short, messy
Hair Color: Black
Eye Color: Blue
Scars: Long one on his left face which lasts from his chin to his eye.
Clothing and Accessories: Chuck as a rear-admiral usually wears a black suit or Black trench coat, depending on the temperature. He always wears his mask and rarely puts it off. Also, like every marine high rank over Ensign, Chuck has the "Justice" coat hanging on his back, but puts it off if he has to fight seriously. As for his bottom part, he wears Black Pants to go in style with either his black suit or trenchcoat, and wears shoes that have small blades at the front.
Description: Chuck has a bit of a muscular side to his muscles but he's skinny, across his body are scars from cuts and slashes he received before he ate the Chop-Chop Fruit.
The Past
Main Traits: Laidback, Chilled, Calculating, Just.
Likes:
- Excitement, anything that happens out of the ordinary, though in his position as Rear-Admiral he gets more then he bargains for.
- A good fight, during his rise to Rear-Admiral he had a lot of excitement in fighting new opponents that were always a challenge, but now. He's risen to a level of strength where weaker people aren't even able to land a hit on him.
- New things, Chuck can be close-minded, but if you really push through to him he can find the most stupidest thing interesting, you know what they say. You learn something new everyday.
Dislikes:
- Bullying, Torture, etc all though he is accepting of such actions like violence if the person deserves it, but if it's unnecessary, it doesn't sit right with Chuck
- Sensitive, despite his lazy attitude he does care sometimes about what others think of him, if he gets judged too much or too critically, you'll touch a nerve of his.
- Being a scumbag in general, Chuck usually tries to mind his own business but he gets angry at the sight of someone who did nothing wrong being harmed or tormented, he'll punish such people who do such things.
Hometown:Unnamed Island, militarized by World Government.
Personality: Chuck had a fire at a much younger age, he was very open-minded, very brave and had a lot of courage when it came to hardships and facing new challenges but over the years he grew tired of it in a way, after seeing the world for how it is, he hasn't had much motivation for anything else. He doesn't find anything that challenging at his level. All though he's mostly been employed against lower-bounty pirates so they don't get any bigger then needed, he grew from an energetic boy to a laidback, lazy person.
All though, when a situation actually gets serious or a friend gets hurt, that energetic part of him comes back and he does everything in his power to calm everything down. He's closed to most people but to people he's friends with, he is very talkative and open to them. To the point he would even reveal his scar to a friend if they asked.
If you're friends with Chuck, he'll treat you like his own sibling. To the normal person, it would look quite odd how he looks sad and closed to anyone he doesn't know, but suddenly changes when he sees a friend and starts talking to them
If you're enemies with Chuck... well, he instantly gets serious the moment he spots you, and would try to kill you depending on what you did to make him your enemy, he isn't unreasonable, but most cases are if he's angry with you for something, it wouldn't be forgiven so easily.
- History:
Chuck was born in South Blue, on an island that was heavily militarized by the world government, while other citizens hated this type of management others saw it in a respecting manner, to the point of patriotism. Chuck was one of the few who saw it like so, who thought the World Government was everything, that it's justice was needed against criminals.
Chuck's parents wanted Chuck to have a simple life, he was taught by his parents on how to cook. They wanted him to become a chef but quit halfway through his training in doing so and started to learn how to battle properly, he went to the marines at the age of 18 and was trained in the ways of fighting, normally a marine would be put through the ways of swordsmanship, or just using a cutlass decently. But Chuck grew an affinity to using his fists, or specifically, fisted weapons like claws or gloves.
Since the marines didn't deal with anyone who used claws before, they decided to just let him serve a high rank and let him build his own techniques as he goes through missions. Throughout the years of serving he has shown promising potential, he managed to show great technique with his black claws and taking away many criminals on his own. During one of his missions, he confiscated a devil fruit. Normally the choice of action was to give it to the government and get paid handsomely for it, but his high ranking officer gave him a choice. Either eat it and become a more efficient weapon for the marines or give away the chance for more power. Chuck chose the first option, and became a Devil Fruit User, it was revealed that he ate the Chop-Chop fruit, becoming a split human. This allows him to split his body apart and fly around distances. Combined with his great technique in using his black claws and the properties of the Chop-Chop fruit, Chuck Newriss rised up fast through the ranks to the point of Rear-Admiral, but was blocked for a while as higher ranks considered that he was going "too fast"
However, he got cocky once in a mission and fought against an opponent with Busoshoku Haki, he charged straight ahead at the enemy with his chop fruit, but got slashed to his left side of the face, losing his left eye. Now there's a massive scar on his face and he wears a mask to hide it, as he isn't comfortable with showing it.
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