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Me Me No Mi
Wed Dec 28, 2016 5:53 pmMe Me no mi
Devil Fruit: Me me no mi
Devil Fruit Type: Paramecia
Devil Fruit Appearance: Me me no mi is like a pear in shape. It is a dark purple color with various swirling patterns all around it.
Devil Fruit Description: Me me no me or the eye-eye fruit turns the user into an eye man. This allows the user to generate thier eyes onto any inorganic objects near them or anywhere on the users body. Why this power the user is also able to give himself night vision when needed.
Devil Fruit Passive Abilities:
Eye generation: the user is able to put copies of his eyes on anything that he can see within a certain area. This areas distance form the user is (user's level x 10 meters.)
Currently 400 meters.
Night vision: The user is able to give themselves the ability to see at night since this is an ability some eyes have.
360 Vision: If the user puts eyes on thier body during combat they gain +30 reflex and but at the cost of -30 attack.
Sun's Glory Style, Midnight Dance Style
Fighting Style: Sun's Glory, Midnight Dance Style
Weapon Utilization: A rapier sword
Specialization: mix of melee and ranged
Description: Sun's Glory is the sword style the sword style that Sesshomaru created and uses while he is playing his ruse when he is with crewmates. This style is full of graceful and flashy that are quick but lack in power. The user is almost always in a stance where they have one foot in front of the other and thier free hand behind thier back. The attacks are normally named around the sun or daytime stuff. Sun's Glory ranged attacks have a golden glow to them. Sun's Glory the the sister style to Midnight Dance.
Midnight Dance is the second sword style that he had created. It is the sister style to Sun's Glory and is only used when he is his true self which is usually when he is away from his allies. While using this style the users body is much more loose and the user often swings thier body from side to side. This style is the opposite of Sun's Glory. It is full of brutal and devastating attacks that are named after anything dark or nightime related. It's ranged air pressure attacks have a dark aura around them.
Techniques
- Light Attacks:
Sun's Glory Style: Afternoon Stroll
Technique Level:1
Technique Range:N/A
Technique Cooldown: 5 duration 3
Technique Description: The user's stance tightens up as the user becomes more defensive. They gain +15 defense but lose -15reflex
Midnight Dance
Technique Level:1
Technique Range:N/A
Technique Cooldown: 10 duration 2
Technique Description: The user's movements begin to become more eradict and hard to predict. The body swings more than normal in this style. The user game +50 reflex but loses -50 defense.
Sun's Glory Style: Brilliant Rays
Technique Level: 5
Technique Range: 50 meters
Technique Cooldown: 5
Technique Description: The user takes their sword and rapidly thrusts thier sword 10 times at the target. With the force behind the attacks this sends 10 air pressure attacks at the enemy in quick succession. The wind attacks have a golden aura to them.
Sun's Glory Style: Morning Shower
Technique Level:20
Technique Range:20 meters
Technique Cooldown: 3
Technique Description: This is a version of Brilliant Rays. Instead of thrusting at the target from the ground however the user must be above the target to use this technique.
Sun's Glory Style: Dance of Sunlight
Technique Level:40
Technique Range:melee
Technique Cooldown:3
Technique Description: The user puts one hand behind thier back and one foot in front of the other. The user than dances around his target while making quick accurate, short slahing attacks while trying to avoid getting hit.
- Medium Attacks:
Midnight Dance Style: Devil's Brand
Technique Level:1
Technique Range: melee
Technique Cooldown: 6
Technique Description: The user makes two consecutive slashes that makes an X shaped mark on the user's body.
Midnight Dance Style: Filth Slash
Technique Level:5
Technique Range: 20 meters
Technique Cooldown: 7
Technique Description:This move the user fights dirty. They stab thier sword into the ground than they quickly swing the sword up at the target sending an air pressure attack. This attack is followed with dirt and dust in an attempt to distract or blind the target.
Midnight Dance Style: Hellraiser
Technique Level:20
Technique Range: melee
Technique Cooldown: 12
Technique Description:The user stabs viciously with blinding speed at the target potentially filling them with several holes.
Sun's Glory Style: Solar Flare
Technique Level:40
Technique Range:10 meters
Technique Cooldown: 5
Technique Description: Sun's Glory's most used move. The user charges directly thrusting thier rapier at the target.
- Heavy Attacks:
Midnight Dance Style: Morning Star
Technique Level:1
Technique Range: 10 meters
Technique Cooldown: 13
Technique Description: The Midnight Dance Style version of Solar Flare. The user charges at the target faster than before and using his full strength to thrust his blade into the target.
Midnight Dance Style: Devil's Gaze
Technique Level: 10
Technique Range: 100 meters
Technique Cooldown: 15
Technique Description: The Sesshomaru tries to intimidate the user by revealing thier true never-ending bloodlust and madness. If it works they will lose -50 willpower for 5 but the he will lose -50 defense for five posts as well.
Midnight Dance Style: Purgatory
Technique Level: 40
Technique Range: 400 meters
Technique Radius: 100 meters
Technique Cooldown: 25
Technique Description: The user puts thier full strength into a powerful slash creating a giant black air slash in his chosen direction.
- AOE Attacks:
Sun's Glory Style: Sun Burn
Technique Level:1
Technique Range: 10 meters
Technique Radius;5meters
Technique Cooldown: 20
Technique Description:This is a small scale version of another attack called Sun's Glory. The user spins around swinging his sword creating a small circular wind slash.
Sun's Glory
Technique Level: 20
Technique Range: 200 meters
Technique Radius: 50 meters
Technique Cooldown: 20
Technique Description: Sun's Glory Style signature move. The user spins around sends a golden air attack completely around him that expands till it hits its max distance.
Gray
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species/Tribe : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
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Re: Me Me No Mi
Wed Dec 28, 2016 7:16 pmI'm not sure why you wrote "done" in the title, but you're missing 95% of the content here.
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Re: Me Me No Mi
Wed Dec 28, 2016 7:23 pmThis devil fruit has not damage dealing abilities so I left the rest blank and I am working on adding the sword style to the non devil fruit fighting styles.
- Gray
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species/Tribe : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[childofdestiny]][[freakofnature]]
[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]
[[improviseadaptovercome]]
Posts : 3991
Re: Me Me No Mi
Wed Dec 28, 2016 7:24 pmNo no. Add it here. All of your combat related stuff goes here. That's why there is a separate "Fighting Style" section in this template.
- Gray
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species/Tribe : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[childofdestiny]][[freakofnature]]
[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]
[[improviseadaptovercome]]
Posts : 3991
Re: Me Me No Mi
Sat Dec 31, 2016 6:09 amExcellently balanced techniques and a very creative duality to the theme of your fighting style. The only correction I have for you is regarding the technique's levels. There seems to be some confusion about this, so I shall list the number of techniques you should have based on the technique levels.
You should have:
Two level 1 lights, one level 5 light, one level 20 light and one level 40 light.
One level 1 medium, one level 5 medium, one level 20 medium and one level 40 medium.
One level 1 heavy, one level 10 heavy and one level 40 heavy.
One level 1 AoE, one level 20 AoE.
Also, be sure to organize the techniques in ascending order, starting from lower level attacks and progressing towards higher level attacks. (While still keeping the light, medium, heavy and AoE separated).
Lastly, your final AoE attack, Midnight Dance Style: Purgatory, seems more like a heavy attack since it's a slash that travels in a certain direction. AoE attacks should affect a stationary area (preferably circular areas with a fixed radius).
You should have:
Two level 1 lights, one level 5 light, one level 20 light and one level 40 light.
One level 1 medium, one level 5 medium, one level 20 medium and one level 40 medium.
One level 1 heavy, one level 10 heavy and one level 40 heavy.
One level 1 AoE, one level 20 AoE.
Also, be sure to organize the techniques in ascending order, starting from lower level attacks and progressing towards higher level attacks. (While still keeping the light, medium, heavy and AoE separated).
Lastly, your final AoE attack, Midnight Dance Style: Purgatory, seems more like a heavy attack since it's a slash that travels in a certain direction. AoE attacks should affect a stationary area (preferably circular areas with a fixed radius).
- Gray
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species/Tribe : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[childofdestiny]][[freakofnature]]
[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]
[[improviseadaptovercome]]
Posts : 3991
Re: Me Me No Mi
Sat Dec 31, 2016 12:40 pmFor light techniques, the buffs/debuffs given by Afternoon Stroll and Midnight Dance is too much. Either cut the buff and debuff values to a half or change the cooldowns to 10 posts. Everything else looks fantastic, great job!
- Gray
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species/Tribe : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[childofdestiny]][[freakofnature]]
[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]
[[improviseadaptovercome]]
Posts : 3991
Re: Me Me No Mi
Sat Dec 31, 2016 1:16 pm
Sesshomaru wrote:Meme no mi
Devil Fruit: Me me no mi
Devil Fruit Type: Paramecia
Devil Fruit Appearance: Me me no mi is like a pear in shape. It is a dark purple color with various swirling patterns all around it.
Devil Fruit Description: Me me no me or the eye-eye fruit turns the user into an eye man. This allows the user to generate thier eyes onto any inorganic objects near them or anywhere on the users body. Why this power the user is also able to give himself night vision when needed.
Devil Fruit Passive Abilities:
Eye generation: the user is able to put copies of his eyes on anything that he can see within a certain area. This areas distance form the user is (user's level x 10 meters.)
Currently 400 meters.
Night vision: The user is able to give themselves the ability to see at night since this is an ability some eyes have.
360 Vision: If the user puts eyes on thier body during combat they gain +30 reflex and but at the cost of -30 attack.Sun's Glory Style, Midnight Dance Style
Fighting Style: Sun's Glory, Midnight Dance Style
Weapon Utilization: A rapier sword
Specialization: mix of melee and ranged
Description: Sun's Glory is the sword style the sword style that Sesshomaru created and uses while he is playing his ruse when he is with crewmates. This style is full of graceful and flashy that are quick but lack in power. The user is almost always in a stance where they have one foot in front of the other and thier free hand behind thier back. The attacks are normally named around the sun or daytime stuff. Sun's Glory ranged attacks have a golden glow to them. Sun's Glory the the sister style to Midnight Dance.
Midnight Dance is the second sword style that he had created. It is the sister style to Sun's Glory and is only used when he is his true self which is usually when he is away from his allies. While using this style the users body is much more loose and the user often swings thier body from side to side. This style is the opposite of Sun's Glory. It is full of brutal and devastating attacks that are named after anything dark or nightime related. It's ranged air pressure attacks have a dark aura around them.
Techniques
- Light Attacks:
Sun's Glory Style: Afternoon Stroll
Technique Level:1
Technique Range:N/A
Technique Cooldown: 5 duration 3
Technique Description: The user's stance tightens up as the user becomes more defensive. They gain +15 defense but lose -15reflex
Midnight Dance
Technique Level:1
Technique Range:N/A
Technique Cooldown: 10 duration 2
Technique Description: The user's movements begin to become more eradict and hard to predict. The body swings more than normal in this style. The user game +50 reflex but loses -50 defense.
Sun's Glory Style: Brilliant Rays
Technique Level: 5
Technique Range: 50 meters
Technique Cooldown: 5
Technique Description: The user takes their sword and rapidly thrusts thier sword 10 times at the target. With the force behind the attacks this sends 10 air pressure attacks at the enemy in quick succession. The wind attacks have a golden aura to them.
Sun's Glory Style: Morning Shower
Technique Level:20
Technique Range:20 meters
Technique Cooldown: 3
Technique Description: This is a version of Brilliant Rays. Instead of thrusting at the target from the ground however the user must be above the target to use this technique.
Sun's Glory Style: Dance of Sunlight
Technique Level:40
Technique Range:melee
Technique Cooldown:3
Technique Description: The user puts one hand behind thier back and one foot in front of the other. The user than dances around his target while making quick accurate, short slahing attacks while trying to avoid getting hit.
- Medium Attacks:
Midnight Dance Style: Devil's Brand
Technique Level:1
Technique Range: melee
Technique Cooldown: 6
Technique Description: The user makes two consecutive slashes that makes an X shaped mark on the user's body.
Midnight Dance Style: Filth Slash
Technique Level:5
Technique Range: 20 meters
Technique Cooldown: 7
Technique Description:This move the user fights dirty. They stab thier sword into the ground than they quickly swing the sword up at the target sending an air pressure attack. This attack is followed with dirt and dust in an attempt to distract or blind the target.
Midnight Dance Style: Hellraiser
Technique Level:20
Technique Range: melee
Technique Cooldown: 12
Technique Description:The user stabs viciously with blinding speed at the target potentially filling them with several holes.
Sun's Glory Style: Solar Flare
Technique Level:40
Technique Range:10 meters
Technique Cooldown: 5
Technique Description: Sun's Glory's most used move. The user charges directly thrusting thier rapier at the target.
- Heavy Attacks:
Midnight Dance Style: Morning Star
Technique Level:1
Technique Range: 10 meters
Technique Cooldown: 13
Technique Description: The Midnight Dance Style version of Solar Flare. The user charges at the target faster than before and using his full strength to thrust his blade into the target.
Midnight Dance Style: Devil's Gaze
Technique Level: 10
Technique Range: 100 meters
Technique Cooldown: 15
Technique Description: The Sesshomaru tries to intimidate the user by revealing thier true never-ending bloodlust and madness. If it works they will lose -50 willpower for 5 but the he will lose -50 defense for five posts as well.
Midnight Dance Style: Purgatory
Technique Level: 40
Technique Range: 400 meters
Technique Radius: 100 meters
Technique Cooldown: 25
Technique Description: The user puts thier full strength into a powerful slash creating a giant black air slash in his chosen direction.
- AOE Attacks:
Sun's Glory Style: Sun Burn
Technique Level:1
Technique Range: 10 meters
Technique Radius;5meters
Technique Cooldown: 20
Technique Description:This is a small scale version of another attack called Sun's Glory. The user spins around swinging his sword creating a small circular wind slash.
Sun's Glory
Technique Level: 20
Technique Range: 200 meters
Technique Radius: 50 meters
Technique Cooldown: 20
Technique Description: Sun's Glory Style signature move. The user spins around sends a golden air attack completely around him that expands till it hits its max distance.
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