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This post has in-line assessment comments.Tue Dec 20, 2016 11:54 pm

Mazin Botros


Mazin Botros Mazin_2

Basic Character Information


Starting Bonus: Soar, Phoenix | [Starting Bonus Roll] (Traded for [Jackpot])

First Name: Mazin
Middle Name/Initial:  N/A
Last Name: Botros
Epithet:  “Water Walking”
Age: 15
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Faction: Pirate
Affiliation:Apollo’s Pompokolin (a.k.a. “Pompoko Pirates”)
Position: Navigator | Martial Artist
Profession:

Navigator: The primary skill Mazin honed under Sinbad. Mazin is capable of reading detailed maps and predicting weather, with a constant eye on wordly affairs to make sure his Captain can make a safe trip.

Actor: During most of his youth, any duties beyond chores that were given to him were along this line.  Growing up, he could play the part of a sickeningly sweet child, even though he was anything but, although his abilities are limited in comparison to a master of disguise.

Thief: Mazin’s capabilities for this are very low, as he has not had to rely on thievery to make his living in quite some time. Despite this, he could still probably swipe a key off your standard jailor, though.


Physical Appearance


Height: 4’7” (140 cm)
Weight: 93 lbs (42 kg)

Hair Style: Fairly long – Often braided in the back.
Hair Color: Blue
Eye Color: Blue
Scars: Few “manly scars” of any note, although he does bear light scars on his legs and back from experiments gone wrong.
Clothing and Accessories: Mazin has never been much of one for fashion, but more practicality.  Aside from an accessory given to him by his mother, a red jewel, he tends to dress to fit his environment.  Of course, if there was any pattern to notice, he really likes the color blue and tan.

Description: As one could note from his statistics, for a young man, he certainly doesn’t look the part. Standing below five feet in height, many in the One Piece universe tower over him, once earning him the epithet “Shorty.”

What’s worse is that while he is muscular for his build – as he once discovered after a prank from his Captain – if one put him in a drag he could actually pass for a girl. When this was used for a covert operation, however, it temporarily gave him a new alias and epithet.  Only, when the Marines figured things out and adjusted his bounty accordingly, he apparently gained a supportive reputation among okama...


The Past


Main Traits: Calm, Compassionate, Free-spirited | Clingy, Overly Cautious, Soft-hearted
Likes: Cooking, Swimming (or used to), Music, Adventure, Tea, Taking Pictures, Drawing Sketches, Bugs
Dislikes: Dark Places, Coffee, Summer, Spiders, Being Lost
Hometown: Alubarna
Personality:

Mazin has always been a mild-mannered and calm youth that has a careful, level headed approach to life. He is initially distrusting of others, although despite his experiences he is still caring and empathetic at heart, a fact that he tries to repress. Because of this he can be a bit snarky at times – or depending on the recipient – tsundere.

He is something of a paradox in demeanor, as he is a fairly gentle boy, with a tendency to space out every so often.  Yet at other times, in spite of what would be an otherwise mature disposition, he can act like an utter child, for both better and worse.  He can be both silly and bratty, wise and devoted. If told there is adventure to be had, even if he said no to it, he’d might fidget excitedly.  As such, he is prone to being teased over various subjects with those familiar with him.

Of course, there is also deeper aspect to Mazin due to his upbringing.  Just like his mentors, he has a very fine line between friend and foe.  The second it is crossed from one side to the other, he can be very amiable or entirely business.  He tends not to take anything personally, and will act solely in the interests of whoever he is either working for or defending.  In fact, a keen eye would notice he doesn’t tend to have much personal ambition at all, instead acting mostly on loyalty.  Anything he views as disloyal is frowned upon, whether it be failure to support one’s subordinates or failure to comply to a trusted superior, which causes a large conflict for him should his “boss” dictate he do something he feels against.

He does, however, have his own goals and values. For one, he treasures memories, and is fiercely adamant on taking care of keepsakes and souvenirs. He’d be the sort to put everything otherwise seen as “worthless” and shove it in a treasure chest, only to let the gold go. Truthfully, for a boy who under the service of two shrewd captains and a mercenary group, he has little financial sense to speak of.  It’s there, but rarely does he seem to use it. As for his goals, though, he’d simply like to see and capture many of the world’s best scenic views, possibly document amazing places or adventures he’d been on. He’d also like to uncover what happened to his former family, especially the woman whose last name he still carries. While there may be other desires in his heart, nakama come first.  

History:




Last edited by Mazin on Thu Dec 22, 2016 12:40 am; edited 4 times in total
Gray
Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species/Tribe : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[childofdestiny]][[freakofnature]]
[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]

[[improviseadaptovercome]]
Posts : 3991

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This post has in-line assessment comments.Wed Dec 21, 2016 9:30 am
Simply awesome! You put quite a lot of work into this, and it was worth it. An excellent read from start to finish. If you're ready for me to approve this, just say the word. However, I did have one suggestion. If you'd like to name the NRA leader that fought beside you, I'd suggest Bach "Black Mage" Garland for this particular past event. As for the Shichibukai, his arrest is fine, and we can assume that his arrest led to the open spot in the Shichibukai ranks that was later filled by Cobalt.

Edit: For affiliation, you would place your crew's name there. Do you not yet know what Laurel plans to call her crew?

Second Edit: Laurel's crew is supposedly named "Apollo’s Pompokolin (a.k.a. “Pompoko Pirates”)".
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This post has in-line assessment comments.Thu Dec 22, 2016 12:34 am
Thank you very much! To be honest I'd forgotten to fill out the affiliation tab, though, sorry. xD

Edited in so that Laurel and Bach's combined arrival turned the tides of the initial battle.  Helps to have a name since I can also put him in for the confrontation as the person responsible for securing the exits if that's alright. Unless anything catches your eye I'm good.
Gray
Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species/Tribe : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[childofdestiny]][[freakofnature]]
[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]

[[improviseadaptovercome]]
Posts : 3991

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This post has in-line assessment comments.Thu Dec 22, 2016 5:07 am
Sweet, this is ready to have my seal of approval.

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Mazin wrote:

Mazin Botros


Mazin Botros Mazin_2

Basic Character Information


Starting Bonus: Soar, Phoenix | [Starting Bonus Roll] (Traded for [Jackpot])

First Name: Mazin
Middle Name/Initial:  N/A
Last Name: Botros
Epithet:  “Water Walking”
Age: 15
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Faction: Pirate
Affiliation:Apollo’s Pompokolin (a.k.a. “Pompoko Pirates”)
Position: Navigator | Martial Artist
Profession:

Navigator: The primary skill Mazin honed under Sinbad. Mazin is capable of reading detailed maps and predicting weather, with a constant eye on wordly affairs to make sure his Captain can make a safe trip.

Actor: During most of his youth, any duties beyond chores that were given to him were along this line.  Growing up, he could play the part of a sickeningly sweet child, even though he was anything but, although his abilities are limited in comparison to a master of disguise.

Thief: Mazin’s capabilities for this are very low, as he has not had to rely on thievery to make his living in quite some time. Despite this, he could still probably swipe a key off your standard jailor, though.


Physical Appearance


Height: 4’7” (140 cm)
Weight: 93 lbs (42 kg)

Hair Style: Fairly long – Often braided in the back.
Hair Color: Blue
Eye Color: Blue
Scars: Few “manly scars” of any note, although he does bear light scars on his legs and back from experiments gone wrong.
Clothing and Accessories: Mazin has never been much of one for fashion, but more practicality.  Aside from an accessory given to him by his mother, a red jewel, he tends to dress to fit his environment.  Of course, if there was any pattern to notice, he really likes the color blue and tan.

Description: As one could note from his statistics, for a young man, he certainly doesn’t look the part. Standing below five feet in height, many in the One Piece universe tower over him, once earning him the epithet “Shorty.”

What’s worse is that while he is muscular for his build – as he once discovered after a prank from his Captain – if one put him in a drag he could actually pass for a girl. When this was used for a covert operation, however, it temporarily gave him a new alias and epithet.  Only, when the Marines figured things out and adjusted his bounty accordingly, he apparently gained a supportive reputation among okama...


The Past


Main Traits: Calm, Compassionate, Free-spirited | Clingy, Overly Cautious, Soft-hearted
Likes: Cooking, Swimming (or used to), Music, Adventure, Tea, Taking Pictures, Drawing Sketches, Bugs
Dislikes: Dark Places, Coffee, Summer, Spiders, Being Lost
Hometown: Alubarna
Personality:

Mazin has always been a mild-mannered and calm youth that has a careful, level headed approach to life. He is initially distrusting of others, although despite his experiences he is still caring and empathetic at heart, a fact that he tries to repress. Because of this he can be a bit snarky at times – or depending on the recipient – tsundere.

He is something of a paradox in demeanor, as he is a fairly gentle boy, with a tendency to space out every so often.  Yet at other times, in spite of what would be an otherwise mature disposition, he can act like an utter child, for both better and worse.  He can be both silly and bratty, wise and devoted. If told there is adventure to be had, even if he said no to it, he’d might fidget excitedly.  As such, he is prone to being teased over various subjects with those familiar with him.

Of course, there is also deeper aspect to Mazin due to his upbringing.  Just like his mentors, he has a very fine line between friend and foe.  The second it is crossed from one side to the other, he can be very amiable or entirely business.  He tends not to take anything personally, and will act solely in the interests of whoever he is either working for or defending.  In fact, a keen eye would notice he doesn’t tend to have much personal ambition at all, instead acting mostly on loyalty.  Anything he views as disloyal is frowned upon, whether it be failure to support one’s subordinates or failure to comply to a trusted superior, which causes a large conflict for him should his “boss” dictate he do something he feels against.

He does, however, have his own goals and values. For one, he treasures memories, and is fiercely adamant on taking care of keepsakes and souvenirs. He’d be the sort to put everything otherwise seen as “worthless” and shove it in a treasure chest, only to let the gold go. Truthfully, for a boy who under the service of two shrewd captains and a mercenary group, he has little financial sense to speak of.  It’s there, but rarely does he seem to use it. As for his goals, though, he’d simply like to see and capture many of the world’s best scenic views, possibly document amazing places or adventures he’d been on. He’d also like to uncover what happened to his former family, especially the woman whose last name he still carries. While there may be other desires in his heart, nakama come first.  

History:


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