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Rangoon
Thu Jun 30, 2016 10:13 pm
Tatsuma C. Rangoon
Basic Character Information
Starting Bonus: Haoshoku (One in a million)
First Name: Rangoon
Middle Name/Initial: C.
Last Name: Tatsuma
Epithet: "Black Hand" Rangoon
Age: 46
Gender: Male
Race: Fishman
Faction: Pirate
Affiliation: Not Yet
Position: Shichibukai
Profession:
Tracker: Rangoon is very good at tracking people or any living beings down, specially in the ocean because of his experience as a fishman pirate.
Navigator: With the years passing, he has learned to navigate the ship, however, he doesn't like doing it and prefers to have someone to navigate instead of him.
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Physical Appearance
Height: 12.5 feet, 3.8 meters
Weight: 652 pounds, 295 kilograms
Hair Style: N/A
Hair Color: N/A
Eye Color: Black
Scars: None
Clothing and Accessories: Rangoon usually wears a big brown jacket which just nearly fits him and some white pants. He uses a pair of suspenders in x shape but are not added to his pants, instead, they end up crossing again behind. These suspenders can be used to carry weapons as well. As in footwear, he uses a pair of black boots. When he jumps into the water, he usually does without any clothes on top nor his suspenders and only keeps the pants without the boots.
Detailed Description: Rangoon is a Fishman (Pygocentrus piraya). He has a big, very muscular body which is covered by scales to make it harder. His body is purple and he has a pair of horns in his face, one pointing up and one pointing down. In his arms, he has some sort of big fin which can be used to fight giving him a minimum range in his blunt attacks.
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The Past
Main Traits:
- Intelligent
- Grumpy
- Agressive
- Sadistic
Likes:
- Fighting: It entertains him to hurt other living beings.
- Fish: Eating fish is that he likes, it's his favorite meal but he usually doesn't cook it.
- Blood: He actually likes drinking blood which is why he likes to take the bodies of those he kills with him.
Dislikes:
- Weakness: He hates seeing weak living beings. He thinks only the strong ones deserve to survive.
- Losing: It makes him feel weak, and again, he can't tolerate weakness in any form.
- High Places: He is used to being in water, a place where he can't actually fall, so just falling far from tall places is something he fears.
Hometown: Fishman Island
Personality: Rangoon is quite a terrifying looking guy. He hardly smiles or laughs and has a very hard and deep voice which in combination with his physical appearance, makes him look quite terrifying. He likes to cause fear because he knows a fight can be won even before starting. He is very smart and always knows when to fight an enemy and when to avoid a fight. He also knows how to fight someone trying to find their weak spots and exploiting them, however, this mentality isn't just used in combat, but instead, he constantly uses it in his day to day life. Even his presence is by itself aggressive, constantly causing some sort of fear aura which usually affect weaker people. He likes fighting by himself and believes in warrior's honor which means he will never break the rules in a fight. As a superior in his crew, he takes no orders and instead exploits his crew to do anything he wants and sometimes even punishing the weak ones to show his superiority. To understand his way of thinking, you must also understand his philosophy about only the strong ones surviving. He strongly believes that only does who are strong enough may survive and may even reject petitions for help from his own crew.
- History:
Rangoon was born in fishman island. He grew up with no parents or family but still had a normal life. He was known by many other fishmen around the area he lived as a lonely kid. He didn't like talking to others and preferred to do anything by himself. Rangoon usually got into fights with other kids and later on some bigger fishmen than him. One day, when he was only 10 years old, he fought with 3 other guys about the double his size. They easily defeated him and left him in terrible conditions. Rangoon wasn't especially a good fighter, but even in many other fights when he lost, he was left that bad. However, an older fishman walked by to the scene and found the kid. After following him home and taking a quick look at his injuries, he started to talk to the kid finally understanding his social situation and his loneliness at home. The old male tried to talk with the kid for a while, but there were no results, the kid simply didn't want to talk to him. However, after a while, the old guy asked Rangoon if he wanted to learn to fight, this was the only thing in their conversation that actually caught Rangoon's attention.
Rangoon decided to start training with the elder. At first, he was being taught basic fighting skills, but as time passed, the elder who Rangoon now just called "old man", started to teach him basic Fishman Karate. In a month, Rangoon learned the basics of fishman karate, so the old man decided to go a bit further. He started to train him to become a very strong fishman fighter and taught him fishman karate advanced techniques followed by fishman jujutsu. Rangoon quickly learned these techniques and only took him a year and a half to master. Once he turned 12, he was taken to some fighting tournaments and after a while even decided to live in karate island around 2 years later. He had finally found love for something. He had already grown apreciation for the old man, but his new dream was to become a strong fighter. However, in karate island, some people acted aggressively towards him because of him being a fishman. He was really never welcomed because his fishman techniques were called cheating by those who couldn't defeat him. After around a year living in karate island, he decided he couldn't keep living there and returned to fishman island. When he returned, his friend, the old man, had already died. The old fishman knew about his death long ago, but he decided to leave something in the world, that was Rangoon. Confused and sad, Rangoon didn't know what to do, his dream had been crushed by humans and his only friend was now dead.
It was until one day that a big group of pirates arrived at the island. The crew was known to be very strong and actually one of the biggest and strongest sea armies in the world. That day, Rangoon found a few of them and after a non-sense discussion in the marker, he got in a fight with them. After defeating three of them, the pirates ran with their captain, Aurochs Loha. The captain was impressed with the kid's abilities and decided to offer him a spot in his crew. Rangoon didn't really think it much, he had nothing to do with his life and decided to join a bit before turning 25. Aurochs was the one who introduced him to the pirate world. His life as a pirate was full of adventures in the new world, but once Rangoon turned 36, after 11 years of service, he decided to leave the crew and start his own. It was then when his new adventure as a captain started.
During his adventures with Aurochs, Rangoon faced many other strong pirates including other Yonko and marine admirals. While he didn't face them personally instead leaving them to his captain, he did fight many times against very high leveled enemies. Once he left the crew and made his own, he felt like leaving the new world and returned to the paradise to recruit people and train them to become a stronger crew. However, he underestimated his own power and easily defeated over a hundred pirate crews in a single year. Once he decided to return to the new world, he felt the huge jump in power of those in that sea. However, it was still not enough to make them retreat to the paradise. He defeated many crews and faced some other strong ones, including the Yonko Brand E. Oga and even at some point, his last captain Aurochs. Without being able to defeat them, his crew suffered several casualties and he was heavily injured a couple of times (specifically by Brand E. Oga), but these losses were only to, later on, grow stronger. The crew then kept looking for power and experience to someday defeat those who had defeated them. His crew is now well known to be a powerful crew who hunts down pirates for nothing but experience in combat. When Rangoon was 40, he was taken as a shichibukai because of his high bounty and the fear his crew caused around the pirate world.
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Combat Statistics
Fighting Style: -
Equipment: -
Haki: Haoshoku
Stats:
- Attack: 280
- Defense: 200
- Reflex: 200
- Willpower: 500
- Gray
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species/Tribe : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
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Re: Rangoon
Fri Jul 01, 2016 9:06 pm
Rangoon turned out to be even more ruthless than I'd originally thought. Nonetheless, our first fishman is almost ready. The corrections are marked in [orange].
Rangoon wrote:Tatsuma C. Rangoon
Basic Character Information
Starting Bonus: Haoshoku (One in a million)
First Name: Rangoon
Middle Name/Initial: C.
Last Name: Tatsuma
Epithet: "Black Fist" Rangoon
Age: 46
Gender: Male
Race: Fishman
Faction: Pirate
Affiliation: Not Yet
Position: Shichibukai
Profession:
Tracker: Rangoon is very [at] good tracking people or any living beings down, specially in the ocean because of his experience as a fishman pirate.
Navigator: With the years passing, he has learned to navigate the ship, however, he doesn't like doing it and prefers to have someone to navigate instead of him.
-------------------------------------------------
Physical Appearance
Height: 12.5 feet, 3.8 meters
Weight: 652 pounds, 295 kilograms
Hair Style: N/A
Hair Color: N/A
Eye Color: Black
Scars: None
Clothing and Accessories: Rangoon usually wears a big brown jacket which just nearly fits him and some white pants. He uses a pair of suspenders in x shape but are not added to his pants, instead, they end up crossing again behind. These suspenders can be used to carry weapons as well. As in footwear, he uses a pair of black boots. When he jumps into the water, he usually does without any clothes on top nor his suspenders and only keeps the pants without the boots.
Detailed Description: Rangoon is a Fishman [Include which type of fishman he is, for example: whale fishman, shark fishman, blowfish fishman]. He has a big, very muscular body which is covered by scales to make it harder. His body is purple and he has a pair of horns in his face, one pointing up and one pointing down. In his arms, he has some sort of big fin which can be used to fight giving him a minimum range in his blunt attacks.
-------------------------------------------------
The Past
Main Traits:
- Wise
- Grumpy
- Agresive[Aggressive]
Likes:
- Fighting: It entertains him to hurt other living beings.[If this is true, include "Sadistic" in your traits.]
- Fish: Eating fish is that he likes, it's his favorite meal but he usually doesn't cook it.
- Blood: He actually likes drinking blood which is why he likes to take the bodies of those he kills with him.
Dislikes:
- Weakness: He hates seeing weak living beings. He thinks only the strong ones deserve to survive.
- Losing: It makes him feel weak, and again, he can't tolerate weakness in any form.
- High Places: He is used to being in water, a place where he can't actually fall, so just falling far[from] tall places is something he fears.
Hometown: Fishman Island
Personality: Rangoon is quite a terrifying looking guy. He hardly smiles or laughs and has a very hard and deep voice which in combination with his physical appearance, makes him look quite terrifying. He likes to cause fear because he knows aafight can be won without even fighting.[This kinda conflicts with your like of "hurting others". If Rangoon likes hurting others, then he should instead be fighting even if he can win without it.] He is very wise and always knows when to fight an enemy and when to avoid a fight. He also knows how to fight someone trying to find their weak spots and exploiting them, however, this mentality isn't just used in combat, but instead, he constantly uses it in his day to day life. Even his presence is by itself aggressive, constantly causing some sort of fear aura which usually affect weaker people. He likes fighting by himself and believes in warrior's honor which means he will never break the rules in a fight. As a superior in his crew, he takes no orders and instead exploits his crew to do anything he wants and sometimes even punishing the weak ones to show his superiority. To understand his way [of] thinking, you must also understand his philosophy about only the strong ones surviving. He strongly believes that only does who are strong enough may survive and may even reject petitions for help from his own crew.
- History:
Rangoon was born in fishman island. He grew up with no parents or family but still had a normal life. He was known by many other fishmen around the area he lived as a lonely kid. He didn't like talking to others and preferred to do anything by himself. Rangoon usually got into fights with other kids and later on some bigger fishmen than him. One day, when he was only 10 years old, he fought with 3 other guys about the double his size. They easily defeated him and left him in terrible conditions. Rangoon wasn't especially a good fighter, but even in many other fights when he lost, he was left that bad. However, an olderoldfishman walked by to the scene and found the kid. After following him home and taking a quick look at his injuries, he started to talk to the kid finally understanding his social situation and his loneliness at home. The old male tried to talk with the kid for a while, but there were no results, the kid simply didn't want to talk to him. However, after a while, the old guy asked Rangoon if he wanted to learn to fight, this was the only thing in their conversation that actually caught Rangoon's attention.
Rangoon decided to start training with the elder. At first, he was being taught basic fighting skills, but as time passed, the elder who Rangoon now just called "old man", started to teach him basic Fishman Karate. In a month, Rangoon learned the basics of fishman karate, so the old man decided to go a bit further. He started to train him to become a very strong fishman fighter and taught him fishman karate advanced techniques followed by fishman jujutsu. Rangoon quickly learned these techniques and only took him a year and a half to master. Once he turned 12, he was taken to some fighting tournaments and after a while even decided to live in karate island around 2 years later. He had finally found love for something. He had already grown appreciation for the old man, but his new dream was to become a strong fighter. However, in karate island, some people acted aggressively towards him because of him being a fishman. He was really never welcomed because his fishman techniques were called cheating by those who couldn't defeat him. After around a year living in karate island, he decided he couldn't keep living there and returned to fishman island. When he returned, his friend, the old man, had already died. The old fishman knew about his death long ago, but he decided to leave something in the world, that was Rangoon. Confused and sad, Rangoon didn't know what to do, his dream had been crushed by humans and his only friend was now dead.
It was until one day that a big group of pirates arrived at the island. The crew was known to be very strong and actually one of the biggest and strongest sea armies in the world. That day, Rangoon found a few of them and after a non-sense discussion in the marker, he got in a fight with them. After defeating three of them, the pirates ran with their captain, Aurochs Loha. The captain was impressed with the kid's abilities and decided to offer him a spot in his crew. Rangoon didn't really think it much, he had nothing to do with his life and decided to join a bit before turning 15 [Change this to 25, Aurochs would've been too young 31 years ago to lead his pirate crew]. [Aurochs] was the one who introduced him to the pirate world. His life as a pirate was full of adventures in the new world, but once Rangoon turned 36, after 21 [change this to 11] years of service, he decided to leave the crew and start his own. It was then when his new adventure as a captain started.[Just so you know even if you make those changes, Aurochs wouldn't have been a Yonkou at the beginning when you joined him. Heck the former pirate king would've just recently died.]
During his adventures with Aurochs, Rangoon faced many other strong pirates including other Yonko and marine admirals. While he didn't face them personally instead leaving them to his captain, he did fight many times against very high leveled enemies. Once he left the crew and made his own, he felt like leaving the new world and returned to the paradise to recruit people and train them to become a stronger crew. However, he underestimated his own power and easily defeated over a hundred pirate crews in a single year. Once he decided to return to the new world, he felt the huge jump in power of those in that sea. However, it was still not enough to make them retreat to the paradise. He defeated many crews and faced some other strong ones, including the Yonko Brand E. Oga and even his last captain. [Fighting these guys would've left Rangoon with devastating losses to his crew mates and some pretty severe injuries to himself. You should either include that as an emotional point for Rangoon, or not fight them altogether, knowing you would've suffered very heavy casualties.] Without being able to defeat them, his crew survived those fights and kept looking for power and experience to someday defeat those above him. His crew is now well known to be a powerful crew who hunts down pirates for nothing but experience in combat. When Rangoon was 40, he was taken as a shichibukai because of his high bounty and the fear his crew caused around the pirate world.
-------------------------------------------------
Combat Statistics
Fighting Style: -
Equipment: -
Haki: Haoshoku
Stats:
- Attack: 280
- Defense: 200
- Reflex: 200
- Willpower: 500
- Gray
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species/Tribe : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
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Posts : 3996
Re: Rangoon
Fri Jul 01, 2016 9:43 pm
You've missed a bunch of corrections Rangoon. Look for them carefully. Don't rush it. And please proof-read!
- Gray
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species/Tribe : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
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Posts : 3996
Re: Rangoon
Fri Jul 01, 2016 10:38 pm
Here comes the first Fishman and Shichibukai!
Rangoon wrote:Tatsuma C. Rangoon
Basic Character Information
Starting Bonus: Haoshoku (One in a million)
First Name: Rangoon
Middle Name/Initial: C.
Last Name: Tatsuma
Epithet: "Black Fist" Rangoon
Age: 46
Gender: Male
Race: Fishman
Faction: Pirate
Affiliation: Not Yet
Position: Shichibukai
Profession:
Tracker: Rangoon is very good at tracking people or any living beings down, specially in the ocean because of his experience as a fishman pirate.
Navigator: With the years passing, he has learned to navigate the ship, however, he doesn't like doing it and prefers to have someone to navigate instead of him.
-------------------------------------------------
Physical Appearance
Height: 12.5 feet, 3.8 meters
Weight: 652 pounds, 295 kilograms
Hair Style: N/A
Hair Color: N/A
Eye Color: Black
Scars: None
Clothing and Accessories: Rangoon usually wears a big brown jacket which just nearly fits him and some white pants. He uses a pair of suspenders in x shape but are not added to his pants, instead, they end up crossing again behind. These suspenders can be used to carry weapons as well. As in footwear, he uses a pair of black boots. When he jumps into the water, he usually does without any clothes on top nor his suspenders and only keeps the pants without the boots.
Detailed Description: Rangoon is a Fishman (Pygocentrus piraya). He has a big, very muscular body which is covered by scales to make it harder. His body is purple and he has a pair of horns in his face, one pointing up and one pointing down. In his arms, he has some sort of big fin which can be used to fight giving him a minimum range in his blunt attacks.
-------------------------------------------------
The Past
Main Traits:
- Intelligent
- Grumpy
- Agressive
- Sadistic
Likes:
- Fighting: It entertains him to hurt other living beings.
- Fish: Eating fish is that he likes, it's his favorite meal but he usually doesn't cook it.
- Blood: He actually likes drinking blood which is why he likes to take the bodies of those he kills with him.
Dislikes:
- Weakness: He hates seeing weak living beings. He thinks only the strong ones deserve to survive.
- Losing: It makes him feel weak, and again, he can't tolerate weakness in any form.
- High Places: He is used to being in water, a place where he can't actually fall, so just falling far from tall places is something he fears.
Hometown: Fishman Island
Personality: Rangoon is quite a terrifying looking guy. He hardly smiles or laughs and has a very hard and deep voice which in combination with his physical appearance, makes him look quite terrifying. He likes to cause fear because he knows a fight can be won even before starting. He is very smart and always knows when to fight an enemy and when to avoid a fight. He also knows how to fight someone trying to find their weak spots and exploiting them, however, this mentality isn't just used in combat, but instead, he constantly uses it in his day to day life. Even his presence is by itself aggressive, constantly causing some sort of fear aura which usually affect weaker people. He likes fighting by himself and believes in warrior's honor which means he will never break the rules in a fight. As a superior in his crew, he takes no orders and instead exploits his crew to do anything he wants and sometimes even punishing the weak ones to show his superiority. To understand his way of thinking, you must also understand his philosophy about only the strong ones surviving. He strongly believes that only does who are strong enough may survive and may even reject petitions for help from his own crew.
- History:
Rangoon was born in fishman island. He grew up with no parents or family but still had a normal life. He was known by many other fishmen around the area he lived as a lonely kid. He didn't like talking to others and preferred to do anything by himself. Rangoon usually got into fights with other kids and later on some bigger fishmen than him. One day, when he was only 10 years old, he fought with 3 other guys about the double his size. They easily defeated him and left him in terrible conditions. Rangoon wasn't especially a good fighter, but even in many other fights when he lost, he was left that bad. However, an older fishman walked by to the scene and found the kid. After following him home and taking a quick look at his injuries, he started to talk to the kid finally understanding his social situation and his loneliness at home. The old male tried to talk with the kid for a while, but there were no results, the kid simply didn't want to talk to him. However, after a while, the old guy asked Rangoon if he wanted to learn to fight, this was the only thing in their conversation that actually caught Rangoon's attention.
Rangoon decided to start training with the elder. At first, he was being taught basic fighting skills, but as time passed, the elder who Rangoon now just called "old man", started to teach him basic Fishman Karate. In a month, Rangoon learned the basics of fishman karate, so the old man decided to go a bit further. He started to train him to become a very strong fishman fighter and taught him fishman karate advanced techniques followed by fishman jujutsu. Rangoon quickly learned these techniques and only took him a year and a half to master. Once he turned 12, he was taken to some fighting tournaments and after a while even decided to live in karate island around 2 years later. He had finally found love for something. He had already grown apreciation for the old man, but his new dream was to become a strong fighter. However, in karate island, some people acted aggressively towards him because of him being a fishman. He was really never welcomed because his fishman techniques were called cheating by those who couldn't defeat him. After around a year living in karate island, he decided he couldn't keep living there and returned to fishman island. When he returned, his friend, the old man, had already died. The old fishman knew about his death long ago, but he decided to leave something in the world, that was Rangoon. Confused and sad, Rangoon didn't know what to do, his dream had been crushed by humans and his only friend was now dead.
It was until one day that a big group of pirates arrived at the island. The crew was known to be very strong and actually one of the biggest and strongest sea armies in the world. That day, Rangoon found a few of them and after a non-sense discussion in the marker, he got in a fight with them. After defeating three of them, the pirates ran with their captain, Aurochs Loha. The captain was impressed with the kid's abilities and decided to offer him a spot in his crew. Rangoon didn't really think it much, he had nothing to do with his life and decided to join a bit before turning 25. Aurochs was the one who introduced him to the pirate world. His life as a pirate was full of adventures in the new world, but once Rangoon turned 36, after 11 years of service, he decided to leave the crew and start his own. It was then when his new adventure as a captain started.
During his adventures with Aurochs, Rangoon faced many other strong pirates including other Yonko and marine admirals. While he didn't face them personally instead leaving them to his captain, he did fight many times against very high leveled enemies. Once he left the crew and made his own, he felt like leaving the new world and returned to the paradise to recruit people and train them to become a stronger crew. However, he underestimated his own power and easily defeated over a hundred pirate crews in a single year. Once he decided to return to the new world, he felt the huge jump in power of those in that sea. However, it was still not enough to make them retreat to the paradise. He defeated many crews and faced some other strong ones, including the Yonko Brand E. Oga and even at some point, his last captain Aurochs. Without being able to defeat them, his crew suffered several casualties and he was heavily injured a couple of times (specifically by Brand E. Oga), but these losses were only to, later on, grow stronger. The crew then kept looking for power and experience to someday defeat those who had defeated them. His crew is now well known to be a powerful crew who hunts down pirates for nothing but experience in combat. When Rangoon was 40, he was taken as a shichibukai because of his high bounty and the fear his crew caused around the pirate world.
-------------------------------------------------
Combat Statistics
Fighting Style: -
Equipment: -
Haki: Haoshoku
Stats:
- Attack: 280
- Defense: 200
- Reflex: 200
- Willpower: 500
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