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Zein Sultan
Zein Sultan
[tracker=/f47-personal-tracker]
Name : Zein Sultan
Age : 16
Height : 5'11
Weight : 152 lbs
Species/Tribe : Human
Faction : Civillian
Devil Fruit : N/A
Crew Pool : [bel=u] 10,000,000
Balance : [bel] 29,525,000
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Posts : 7

[Bio] Zein Sultan Empty [Bio] Zein Sultan

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Zein Sultan



[Bio] Zein Sultan Zein_s11


Basic Character Information



Forename: Zein
Middle Name/Initial: N/A
Surname: Sultan
Epithet: Fate shall decide.
Birthdate: 1812
Gender: Male.  
Species/Tribe: “Human. I mean, what do I look like? Bahahaha.”   
Faction: Miscellaneous. Civilian.  

Profession:

Student: Zein is proficient in several basic skills and areas of knowledge, including but not limited to: cooking, creating basic structures and technology, navigating, and psychology. at least theoretically. That being said, he is still a student. His true profession and primary skill is the ability to learn, and very quickly, itself.

Doctor:Well not yet a full fledged doctor, he studied in the prestigious academy in the White City of Flevance and as a top student, he was well ahead of his peers and a true genius at his craft. He can perform many surgical procedures that experienced doctors may struggle with. He also has an arsenal of medical knowledge that equips him for many situations.





Physical Appearance


Height: 5’11
Weight: 152 pounds
Hair Style: Thick wavy, curly even, and slightly messy, shoulder length hair.
Hair Color: Jet Black hair, bistre brown facial hair.
Eye Color: Gold.
Scars: Needle marks, and several cuts under bandaged arm.  

Gear: Dressed in casual, but visibly expensive sand brown vest, a cream loose shirt and sand black pants. On his feet, he dons fashionable white shoes with golden indents on them. On his waist is a simple but stylish black belt with a golden buckle. He wears fashionable glasses and has bandages wrapped around his right hand. Most of the time, wrapped around his head is a plain white headband. He carries a black knapsack with golden strings that contains food, money and basic medical supplies. Contained deep within it is the canister that his brother gave him.

Description: A slightly tanned, olive skinned individual. His skin is so smooth that it appears to shine under the sun. Somewhat skinny, but extremely  defined and lean. Somewhat of a round face, but angular, made up of his innocent eyes, slightly large nose and wide welcoming smile.




The Past



Main Traits:

Self Righteous: While he isn’t perfect, he puts a lot of care into doing the right thing. He strongly believes that after one passes, they will all be accountable for each and every step they took, and for that reason, he makes sure to step with his right before his left. Don’t expect a dirty joke out of this fella’s mouth, but if you let one slip beside him, what you can expect is a dark glare or even a lecture.

Playful and Humorous: One of his goals is to be able to make it to heaven and receive  the replay tape of his life with joyous, and sincere laughter. He loves to joke, and the laughter of others is the paint that strokes a smile onto his face.  

Reflective and Curious: Despite his playful demeanor, when the world is not rolling on the floor, dying of laughter, at his feet, he is actually quite subdued. He overanalyzes the smallest of matters and may find great wisdom in a loosely threaded sentence. He is very reflective and enjoys nothing more than finding an answer to a deep problem; not even forcing a laugh from those around him.

Respectful and polite:“If you respect someone, you treat them with respect. If you don’t respect someone, you still treat them with respect. Not because they deserve it, but because you respect yourself so much that you can’t help but behave in a respectful manner.” Now, don’t be fooled. That doesn’t mean that if he thinks you deserve a piece of his mind he won’t give it to you–he will, just coated with a thick layer of politeness.

Immature and Gullible: As many of those traveling the seas would say, he is “ripe for the picking.” He is fooled and trusts people quite easily. Due to his sheltered past he has no real experiences of the real world. It’s not that he isn’t intelligent, he just doesn’t pick up on subtle things easily. 

Humble and Self Depreciating: The people around him value his presence and acknowledge him Despite that, he seems to be incapable of taking a compliment or coming to terms with the fact that he is well liked.


Likes:

Poetry: He can find great wisdom from a loosely threaded sentence. From a stream of meticulously crafted, fluidly flowing ones weaved by a master articulator; however, he finds deep sentimental value and purpose.

Debating: He won’t waste his time arguing with an ignorant or an arrogant person. A debate, on the other hand, is a prospect that causes his face to light up. A loss is more delightful to him than a victory as it sends him into the realm of questions, that eventually leads to the heavenly satisfaction of incipient answers.  

History: He loves to contemplate, and anything history related is an all-you-can-eat-buffet for the mind. He finds the dynamics between people of the past to be thrilling; why read a novel or a fantasy when you can read a real life story that surpasses them all?

Nature: The perfection of this world, the beauty of the way it is shaped and the amazing uniqueness of all the different areas of it never fail to enthrall him. Whether it is a stroll through a forest, or a swim across a river, he loves to spend time in nature.

Other likes:
- Open minded people
- Running (as an exercise)
- All forms of nuts
- Hot temperature
- Bronze (color)  


Dislikes:

Music: Just the sound of it irritates him, as if speaking to his soul-–only in the devil's voice. He likes to enjoy his time with friends, work on something beneficial, or sit and contemplate instead of mindlessly listening to something that won’t benefit him. People use music as a vice to escape from this life, something that he has no need for.

Oppression: “If you sin, then you are only transgressing against yourself. God doesn’t need your actions, you’re the one at a loss. In the end, God is the most merciful, you can change and he can and will forgive you if you do. When you oppress others on the other hand, you are digging your own grave; God forgives, people don’t always.”

Greed: He believes that nothing you give is ever “lost.” It has just found a different use. “Greed is a paradoxical disease of the heart. The more you want, the more you will have. The more you have the more you will want. The more you want the more chaos, destruction and harm you will bring out, all for your selfish desires.”  

Fighting: Yep, I know what you are thinking. “A shonen character that doesn’t like to hurt or kill others!?!?” That is exactly what he is. He doesn’t like to cause harm to anyone, even those who have hurt him or done something to deserve it. He is very complacent and always finds a reason to forgive people. (Part of his hate for fighting may or may not stem from the fact that he sucks at it.)

Cold: With how many cold lines he drops, you’d think he lives in an igloo and eats snow and icicles. Ironically, he hates very few things more than the cold. The way it licks your face and creeps under your clothes, spreading across your skin... uhh, just the thought of it disgusted him.

Other Dislikes:
- Indirect people
- Physical Roughness
- Smell present in hospitals or laboratories
- Superstition
- Alcohol, drugs, etc.  
- Pineapples


Habits:

Procrastination: He can write a perfectly plotted plan, manage everything to excellence, and commit every part of it to memory. When it comes to actually completing the task however... well, we can discuss that later.

Rhyming: He will be having a conversation with someone, and then suddenly, upon accidentally rhyming once, he will start a chain of rhymes. On some occasions he gets so carried away that he forgets the conversation he was having, and in a small trance, continues refining the rhymes and turning it into a full fledged poem.

Apologizing: He will come and apologize to you 100 times for things that you don’t even remember happening. And then when you get annoyed he will apologize to you for apologizing!

Speaking Formally: Due to the sea of colors that is the list of his friends, he has developed many different styles of speaking. From intellectuals and deep thinkers he inherited sophisticated vocabulary and eloquent speech. From the rest of his peers he learned slang and general talk. While, in most situations, he speaks in the latter, sometimes he will start using complex words out of nowhere.

Early Runs: He will wake up early and after sitting on his bed and thinking while everyone else is in a deep slumber, he will start running around like a maniac. Not jogging—-running!

Messy eating: He is, in the eyes of many, a very organized and neat person who has perfected his manners—-until they see him eating that is! He can’t draw with a quill, but with a steamy plate of rice and a plate of meat, he will turn his shirt into a canvas.

Unique laugh: Bahahaha. A very loud and contagious laugh, that quickly descends into a silent wheeze. These laughing fits usually last for quite a while, and are especially likely to happen in situations where laughing would be of utmost horror.

Hometown: Flevance. Beautiful mansion in a wealthy suburb of the White City.

Personality: When he is engaged in an altercation of any sort, he is quick to be overcome by trepidation. He fails to dispel the fear, and more likely than not, he will take the flight option. He is exceptionally lacking in terms of combat ability, and no one knows it better than him. This is not to be blamed on his lack of talent as he has no such thing. Instead, it is a lack of experience. The grand total of all the fights he has had in his life would be… let me count… a whopping zero! He prefers to watch from the sidelines and tend to the wounded, using the skills he learned at the Flevance academy.

Outside of combat, he is a very light hearted, sincere person and understanding individual, and while he can be somewhat obnoxious at times, he does more good than harm. Before pursuing any endeavor, he loves to have all the details sorted and written out neatly, as if them being inked onto the parchment will summon the best possible scenario into existence. While his room may be messy, he never lets the place where he spends the most time–his mind–get messy. He uses much of his spare time to sharpen his mind and explore his thoughts. He rarely gets angry, and only does so upon hearing or seeing something that he believes to be outrageous. He is somewhat bossy and entitled, a result of years of being given what he wants.




History:



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Gray
Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species/Tribe : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[childofdestiny]][[freakofnature]]
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Posts : 3961

[Bio] Zein Sultan Empty Re: [Bio] Zein Sultan

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[warn=""]I'm afraid I'm gonna have to ask you to reformat your bio to remove the excessive use of spoilers and follow the template properly.

Edit: Upon reading the bio, I will have to deny it in its current state. Please see the inline assessment comments below.[/warn]

Zein Sultan wrote:

Zein Sultan



[Bio] Zein Sultan Zein_s11


Basic Character Information



Basic Details:


Profession:




Physical Traits:

Gear:

Description:




The Past




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Likes:

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Unique laugh:


Hometown:


Personality:





History:
Gray
Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species/Tribe : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[childofdestiny]][[freakofnature]]
[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]

[[improviseadaptovercome]]
Posts : 3961

[Bio] Zein Sultan Empty Re: [Bio] Zein Sultan

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[approve]Zein is honestly a more interesting character without the copy-pasted Vinsmoke characteristics.[/approve]

Zein Sultan wrote:

Zein Sultan



[Bio] Zein Sultan Zein_s11


Basic Character Information



Forename: Zein
Middle Name/Initial: N/A
Surname: Sultan
Epithet: Fate shall decide.
Birthdate: 1812
Gender: Male.  
Species/Tribe: “Human. I mean, what do I look like? Bahahaha.”   
Faction: Miscellaneous. Civilian.  

Profession:

Student: Zein is proficient in several basic skills and areas of knowledge, including but not limited to: cooking, creating basic structures and technology, navigating, and psychology. at least theoretically. That being said, he is still a student. His true profession and primary skill is the ability to learn, and very quickly, itself.

Doctor:Well not yet a full fledged doctor, he studied in the prestigious academy in the White City of Flevance and as a top student, he was well ahead of his peers and a true genius at his craft. He can perform many surgical procedures that experienced doctors may struggle with. He also has an arsenal of medical knowledge that equips him for many situations.





Physical Appearance


Height: 5’11
Weight: 152 pounds
Hair Style: Thick wavy, curly even, and slightly messy, shoulder length hair.
Hair Color: Jet Black hair, bistre brown facial hair.
Eye Color: Gold.
Scars: Needle marks, and several cuts under bandaged arm.  

Gear: Dressed in casual, but visibly expensive sand brown vest, a cream loose shirt and sand black pants. On his feet, he dons fashionable white shoes with golden indents on them. On his waist is a simple but stylish black belt with a golden buckle. He wears fashionable glasses and has bandages wrapped around his right hand. Most of the time, wrapped around his head is a plain white headband. He carries a black knapsack with golden strings that contains food, money and basic medical supplies. Contained deep within it is the canister that his brother gave him.

Description: A slightly tanned, olive skinned individual. His skin is so smooth that it appears to shine under the sun. Somewhat skinny, but extremely  defined and lean. Somewhat of a round face, but angular, made up of his innocent eyes, slightly large nose and wide welcoming smile.




The Past



Main Traits:

Self Righteous: While he isn’t perfect, he puts a lot of care into doing the right thing. He strongly believes that after one passes, they will all be accountable for each and every step they took, and for that reason, he makes sure to step with his right before his left. Don’t expect a dirty joke out of this fella’s mouth, but if you let one slip beside him, what you can expect is a dark glare or even a lecture.

Playful and Humorous: One of his goals is to be able to make it to heaven and receive  the replay tape of his life with joyous, and sincere laughter. He loves to joke, and the laughter of others is the paint that strokes a smile onto his face.  

Reflective and Curious: Despite his playful demeanor, when the world is not rolling on the floor, dying of laughter, at his feet, he is actually quite subdued. He overanalyzes the smallest of matters and may find great wisdom in a loosely threaded sentence. He is very reflective and enjoys nothing more than finding an answer to a deep problem; not even forcing a laugh from those around him.

Respectful and polite:“If you respect someone, you treat them with respect. If you don’t respect someone, you still treat them with respect. Not because they deserve it, but because you respect yourself so much that you can’t help but behave in a respectful manner.” Now, don’t be fooled. That doesn’t mean that if he thinks you deserve a piece of his mind he won’t give it to you–he will, just coated with a thick layer of politeness.

Immature and Gullible: As many of those traveling the seas would say, he is “ripe for the picking.” He is fooled and trusts people quite easily. Due to his sheltered past he has no real experiences of the real world. It’s not that he isn’t intelligent, he just doesn’t pick up on subtle things easily. 

Humble and Self Depreciating: The people around him value his presence and acknowledge him Despite that, he seems to be incapable of taking a compliment or coming to terms with the fact that he is well liked.


Likes:

Poetry: He can find great wisdom from a loosely threaded sentence. From a stream of meticulously crafted, fluidly flowing ones weaved by a master articulator; however, he finds deep sentimental value and purpose.

Debating: He won’t waste his time arguing with an ignorant or an arrogant person. A debate, on the other hand, is a prospect that causes his face to light up. A loss is more delightful to him than a victory as it sends him into the realm of questions, that eventually leads to the heavenly satisfaction of incipient answers.  

History: He loves to contemplate, and anything history related is an all-you-can-eat-buffet for the mind. He finds the dynamics between people of the past to be thrilling; why read a novel or a fantasy when you can read a real life story that surpasses them all?

Nature: The perfection of this world, the beauty of the way it is shaped and the amazing uniqueness of all the different areas of it never fail to enthrall him. Whether it is a stroll through a forest, or a swim across a river, he loves to spend time in nature.

Other likes:
- Open minded people
- Running (as an exercise)
- All forms of nuts
- Hot temperature
- Bronze (color)  


Dislikes:

Music: Just the sound of it irritates him, as if speaking to his soul-–only in the devil's voice. He likes to enjoy his time with friends, work on something beneficial, or sit and contemplate instead of mindlessly listening to something that won’t benefit him. People use music as a vice to escape from this life, something that he has no need for.

Oppression: “If you sin, then you are only transgressing against yourself. God doesn’t need your actions, you’re the one at a loss. In the end, God is the most merciful, you can change and he can and will forgive you if you do. When you oppress others on the other hand, you are digging your own grave; God forgives, people don’t always.”

Greed: He believes that nothing you give is ever “lost.” It has just found a different use. “Greed is a paradoxical disease of the heart. The more you want, the more you will have. The more you have the more you will want. The more you want the more chaos, destruction and harm you will bring out, all for your selfish desires.”  

Fighting: Yep, I know what you are thinking. “A shonen character that doesn’t like to hurt or kill others!?!?” That is exactly what he is. He doesn’t like to cause harm to anyone, even those who have hurt him or done something to deserve it. He is very complacent and always finds a reason to forgive people. (Part of his hate for fighting may or may not stem from the fact that he sucks at it.)

Cold: With how many cold lines he drops, you’d think he lives in an igloo and eats snow and icicles. Ironically, he hates very few things more than the cold. The way it licks your face and creeps under your clothes, spreading across your skin... uhh, just the thought of it disgusted him.

Other Dislikes:
- Indirect people
- Physical Roughness
- Smell present in hospitals or laboratories
- Superstition
- Alcohol, drugs, etc.  
- Pineapples


Habits:

Procrastination: He can write a perfectly plotted plan, manage everything to excellence, and commit every part of it to memory. When it comes to actually completing the task however... well, we can discuss that later.

Rhyming: He will be having a conversation with someone, and then suddenly, upon accidentally rhyming once, he will start a chain of rhymes. On some occasions he gets so carried away that he forgets the conversation he was having, and in a small trance, continues refining the rhymes and turning it into a full fledged poem.

Apologizing: He will come and apologize to you 100 times for things that you don’t even remember happening. And then when you get annoyed he will apologize to you for apologizing!

Speaking Formally: Due to the sea of colors that is the list of his friends, he has developed many different styles of speaking. From intellectuals and deep thinkers he inherited sophisticated vocabulary and eloquent speech. From the rest of his peers he learned slang and general talk. While, in most situations, he speaks in the latter, sometimes he will start using complex words out of nowhere.

Early Runs: He will wake up early and after sitting on his bed and thinking while everyone else is in a deep slumber, he will start running around like a maniac. Not jogging—-running!

Messy eating: He is, in the eyes of many, a very organized and neat person who has perfected his manners—-until they see him eating that is! He can’t draw with a quill, but with a steamy plate of rice and a plate of meat, he will turn his shirt into a canvas.

Unique laugh: Bahahaha. A very loud and contagious laugh, that quickly descends into a silent wheeze. These laughing fits usually last for quite a while, and are especially likely to happen in situations where laughing would be of utmost horror.

Hometown: Flevance. Beautiful mansion in a wealthy suburb of the White City.

Personality: When he is engaged in an altercation of any sort, he is quick to be overcome by trepidation. He fails to dispel the fear, and more likely than not, he will take the flight option. He is exceptionally lacking in terms of combat ability, and no one knows it better than him. This is not to be blamed on his lack of talent as he has no such thing. Instead, it is a lack of experience. The grand total of all the fights he has had in his life would be… let me count… a whopping zero! He prefers to watch from the sidelines and tend to the wounded, using the skills he learned at the Flevance academy.

Outside of combat, he is a very light hearted, sincere person and understanding individual, and while he can be somewhat obnoxious at times, he does more good than harm. Before pursuing any endeavor, he loves to have all the details sorted and written out neatly, as if them being inked onto the parchment will summon the best possible scenario into existence. While his room may be messy, he never lets the place where he spends the most time–his mind–get messy. He uses much of his spare time to sharpen his mind and explore his thoughts. He rarely gets angry, and only does so upon hearing or seeing something that he believes to be outrageous. He is somewhat bossy and entitled, a result of years of being given what he wants.




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