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Kanui Surize
Fri Jul 28, 2023 7:12 pmKanui "The Unhallowed" Surize
Basic Character Information
Forename: Kanui
Middle Name/Initial: N/A
Surname: Surize
Epithet: The Unhallowed
Birthdate: 03/09/1806
Gender: Male
Species/Tribe: Human
Faction: Revolutionary
Profession: Swordsman
Physical Appearance
Height: 5'10
Weight: 170
Hair Style: Long straight hair
Hair Color: Silver
Eye Color: Light Blue
Scars: N/A
Gear: Purple Rope used as a waist sash tied into a knot behind the back.
Description: Kanui carries an aura of serene determination with his distinct attire that strikes a balance between aesthetic and functionality. Dominating his appearance is a long-sleeved grey kimono shirt that drapes over his strong arms. The shirt is tailored to permit fluid motion, a crucial aspect for close combat situations. Its high collar brushes against his neck, adding a level of enigma to his already imposing presence.
Complementing the kimono shirt are his form-fitting black pants that trace the contours of his legs. The snug fit doesn't hinder his mobility, allowing Kanui to move effortlessly during high-stakes battles or while navigating the unpredictable terrains of the Grand Line.His feet are shod in durable, black boots. They show signs of extensive travels and skirmishes but are kept in commendable condition, providing him reliable protection and traction in all circumstances.
Securing his outfit in place is a wide purple rope belt wrapped around his waist. The deep shade contrasts with the rest of his attire, making it stand out. It is not just an accessory but also a symbol of his unwavering dedication to his cause.In its entirety, Kanui's attire is a reflection of his persona: a seasoned warrior, a guardian of the oppressed, and a defiant figure against all forms of tyranny. His outfit, though primarily utilitarian, does not lack in character and forms an integral part of his identity.
The Past
Main Traits: Stoic, Unnerving, Patient, Loving
Likes: Cooking, Training, Reading,
Dislikes: Unessecary Violence, Pickles, Impatience
Unique laugh: Yamamama
Hometown: Please read the Turf Details of your home island provided in the Roleplay section of the forum. Some islands are a bit different from how you may remember them from canon, so it is imperative that you read them. However, you may choose to make up your own island instead also, in which case you may make up its history so long as it doesn't distort the overall history of the forum's plot.
Personality: Kanui embodies a stoic demeanor, a quiet fortitude that can sometimes be mistaken for coldness. This aloof exterior masks an unyielding determination and a heart that deeply cares for those around him. He is unwavering in the face of tyranny and relentless in his pursuit of justice. Even when the odds are stacked against him, Kanui never falters, his spirit as unbreakable as the bones he manipulates.
In battle, Kanui is a force to be reckoned with, as calculating and precise as he is formidable. His strategies are often meticulously planned, reflecting the logical and tactical mind that resides within his impassive exterior. He wields his power with a surgeon's precision, controlling his own skeletal structure to strike with devastating effectiveness.
Despite his fearsome prowess, Kanui is not an unapproachable figure. Outside of battle, his demeanor softens considerably. He possesses a calm, easygoing nature that belies his intense presence. He's a man of few words but listens attentively when others speak, offering wisdom when needed.His kindness doesn't stop at passive listening, however. He often checks in on his crew, showing concern for their well-being. His quiet demeanor hides a depth of empathy, proving that his heart is just as robust as his bones. It is these qualities that make Kanui a reliable ally, a steadfast friend, and a beacon of hope against the darkness of tyranny.
- History:
As a child, Kanui was discovered alone and desolate, a single surviving soul amongst the ravages of an unnamed conflict. With no memory of his family or birthplace, he found himself rescued by the Revolutionaries. One figure among them, a man of imposing stature and kind eyes, took particular interest in the young boy. This was Big Boy Jake, a respected and well-known leader within the Revolutionaries, known as much for his formidable strength as his generous heart.
Jake adopted the boy, providing not just a home on his ship but a purpose and a family. Kanui took Jake's surname, Surize, marking his rebirth into a new life. From a young age, Kanui showed an aptitude for swordsmanship, his skills honed under Jake's watchful eyes. Jake taught him about the world's harsh realities and the importance of fighting for those who could not defend themselves. Together, they traversed the seas, fighting against oppression and tyranny. Despite the hardships they faced, a sense of camaraderie and shared purpose made the ship feel like home. Kanui grew from a quiet, withdrawn child to a stoic, capable young man under Jake's guidance.
But their peaceful existence was shattered when they encountered a particularly ruthless faction of the Marines. In a fierce and bloody battle, Jake was fatally wounded, making a final stand to ensure the escape of his crew. His death devastated Kanui, a harsh reminder of the world's cruelty.In the aftermath of the battle, while salvaging through the wreckage of the Marine ship, a strange Devil Fruit was discovered. It was an unusual specimen, with a swirl pattern that hinted at unknown powers. In honor of Jake's last stand, and in recognition of Kanui's potential, the crew decided that Kanui should be the one to consume it.
Bitter with grief but resolute, Kanui accepted the fruit. Upon consuming it, he found himself bestowed with a unique power - the ability to manipulate his own bones. The Bone-Bone Fruit, as it was named, further amplified Kanui's capabilities, transforming him into a formidable force for justice.Embracing his newfound powers, Kanui dedicated himself to continuing Jake's legacy. Now known as "The Unhallowed," Kanui vowed to wield his bone manipulation abilities as a beacon against oppression and tyranny, in memory of his fallen mentor and for the future of those he swore to protect.
Gray
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Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species/Tribe : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
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[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]
[[improviseadaptovercome]]
Posts : 3990
Re: Kanui Surize
Tue Aug 01, 2023 2:50 pm[warn=Comments]
Good work finishing up your bio. I did have a few concerns that I have noted in in-line comments below, though.
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Good work finishing up your bio. I did have a few concerns that I have noted in in-line comments below, though.
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Kanui wrote:
Kanui "The Unhallowed" Surize
[dass]See comment.[cmt]You skipped the face-claiming step in the character creation guide. If you don't put in a face claim and someone else claims this same character for their own OC, you will not be allowed to use it as your FC.[/cmt][/dass]
Basic Character Information
Forename: Kanui
Middle Name/Initial: N/A
Surname: Surize
Epithet: The Unhallowed
Birthdate: 03/09/1806
Gender: Male
Species/Tribe: Human
Faction: Revolutionary
Profession: Swordsman
Physical Appearance
Height: 5'10
Weight: 170
Hair Style: Long straight hair
Hair Color: Silver
Eye Color: Light Blue
Scars: N/A
Gear: Purple Rope used as a waist sash tied into a knot behind the back.
Description: Kanui carries an aura of serene determination with his distinct attire that strikes a balance between aesthetic and functionality. Dominating his appearance is a long-sleeved grey kimono shirt that drapes over his strong arms. The shirt is tailored to permit fluid motion, a crucial aspect for close combat situations. Its high collar brushes against his neck, adding a level of enigma to his already imposing presence.
Complementing the kimono shirt are his form-fitting black pants that trace the contours of his legs. The snug fit doesn't hinder his mobility, allowing Kanui to move effortlessly during high-stakes battles or while navigating the unpredictable terrains of the Grand Line.His feet are shod in durable, black boots. They show signs of extensive travels and skirmishes but are kept in commendable condition, providing him reliable protection and traction in all circumstances.
Securing his outfit in place is a wide purple rope belt wrapped around his waist. The deep shade contrasts with the rest of his attire, making it stand out. It is not just an accessory but also a symbol of his unwavering dedication to his cause.In its entirety, Kanui's attire is a reflection of his persona: a seasoned warrior, a guardian of the oppressed, and a defiant figure against all forms of tyranny. His outfit, though primarily utilitarian, does not lack in character and forms an integral part of his identity.
The Past
Main Traits: Stoic, Unnerving, Patient, Loving
Likes: Cooking, Training, Reading,
Dislikes: Unessecary Violence, Pickles, Impatience
Unique laugh: Yamamama
[ass=You missed this field.]Hometown: Please read the Turf Details of your home island provided in the Roleplay section of the forum. Some islands are a bit different from how you may remember them from canon, so it is imperative that you read them. However, you may choose to make up your own island instead also, in which case you may make up its history so long as it doesn't distort the overall history of the forum's plot.[/ass]
Personality: Kanui embodies a stoic demeanor, a quiet fortitude that can sometimes be mistaken for coldness. This aloof exterior masks an unyielding determination and a heart that deeply cares for those around him. He is unwavering in the face of tyranny and relentless in his pursuit of justice. Even when the odds are stacked against him, Kanui never falters, his spirit as unbreakable as the bones he manipulates.
In battle, Kanui is a force to be reckoned with, as calculating and precise as he is formidable. His strategies are often meticulously planned, reflecting the logical and tactical mind that resides within his impassive exterior. He wields his power with a surgeon's precision, controlling his own skeletal structure to strike with devastating effectiveness.
Despite his fearsome prowess, Kanui is not an unapproachable figure. Outside of battle, his demeanor softens considerably. He possesses a calm, easygoing nature that belies his intense presence. He's a man of few words but listens attentively when others speak, offering wisdom when needed.His kindness doesn't stop at passive listening, however. He often checks in on his crew, showing concern for their well-being. His quiet demeanor hides a depth of empathy, proving that his heart is just as robust as his bones. It is these qualities that make Kanui a reliable ally, a steadfast friend, and a beacon of hope against the darkness of tyranny.
- History:
As a child, Kanui was discovered alone and desolate, a single surviving soul amongst the ravages of an unnamed conflict. With no memory of his family or birthplace, he found himself rescued by the Revolutionaries. One figure among them, a man of imposing stature and kind eyes, took particular interest in the young boy. This was Big Boy Jake, a respected and well-known leader within the Revolutionaries, known as much for his formidable strength as his generous heart.
Jake adopted the boy, providing not just a home on his ship but a purpose and a family. Kanui took Jake's surname, Surize, marking his rebirth into a new life. From a young age, Kanui showed an aptitude for swordsmanship, his skills honed under Jake's watchful eyes. Jake taught him about the world's harsh realities and the importance of fighting for those who could not defend themselves. Together, they traversed the seas, fighting against oppression and tyranny. Despite the hardships they faced, a sense of camaraderie and shared purpose made the ship feel like home. Kanui grew from a quiet, withdrawn child to a stoic, capable young man under Jake's guidance.
But their peaceful existence was shattered when they encountered a particularly ruthless faction of the Marines. In a fierce and bloody battle, Jake was fatally wounded, making a final stand to ensure the escape of his crew. His death devastated Kanui, a harsh reminder of the world's cruelty.In the aftermath of the battle, while salvaging through the wreckage of the Marine ship, a strange Devil Fruit was discovered. It was an unusual specimen, with a swirl pattern that hinted at unknown powers. In honor of Jake's last stand, and in recognition of Kanui's potential, the crew decided that Kanui should be the one to consume it.
Bitter with grief but resolute, Kanui accepted the fruit. Upon consuming it, he found himself bestowed with a unique power - the ability to manipulate his own bones. [dass]The Bone-Bone Fruit[cmt]You also skipped the devil fruit claiming step. It is important for this step to be completed and approved before you make reference to a devil fruit your character ate in your history (or your bio in general).[/cmt][/dass], as it was named, further amplified Kanui's capabilities, transforming him into a formidable force for justice.Embracing his newfound powers, Kanui dedicated himself to continuing Jake's legacy. Now known as "The Unhallowed," Kanui vowed to wield his bone manipulation abilities as a beacon against oppression and tyranny, in memory of his fallen mentor and for the future of those he swore to protect.
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