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[Fighting Style] Formless Arts
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Formless Arts
Fighting Style: Formless Arts
Weapon Utilization: The limbs of the human body.
Description: Weapons are used to further the physical limits of humans. However, with enough training, imagination and the right techniques the human body itself can become any weapon.
Toggled and Passive Abilities:
Felyne Finesse (Passive): Over the years of exercising his art, Jaxon had managed to find himself in many sticky situations. As result of his training and experiences in such situations, he managed to attain agility akin to a human cat, to always be able to escape to places no normal person would be able to. It would not be stupid to mistake him for a seasoned acrobat.
Optimist (Passive): A man with a curious mind will always find a way to optimize his skills. Such a thing rings true in Jaxon, he always thinks about innovations in his set of skills to make the seemingly impossible, possible. Maximalising efficiency is something he always strives for.
Formless: Blunt : By just utilizing both fists, Jaxon is able to imitate the effect of a myriad of blunt weapons. The versatility is amazing. Holding his fists together and clenching them delivers the same impact as a hammer. A simple punch has the same effect as the swing of a bat. The downside is that the strikes will not be very easy to land. (+20% ATK, -20% DEF)
Formless: Sharp : The opposite of clenching his fists together is holding his hands open, positioning them to be akin to a blade. Due to a bladde hidden beneath his clothing, Jaxon can mimic the effects of a blade with the use of his hands. In this form, he can be much more precise with his strikes, but they do not deal as much damage and he can't take hits as well. Most people can’t see the hidden blade, thus they assume he just uses his hands.(+20RX, -20% DEF)
Techniques
- Light Techniques:
Formless Arts: Tempering
Type: STAT MORPH
Cooldown: 6
Duration: 2
Buffs: DEF 25+%
Debuffs: -
Flavour: By flexing his muscles beyond the limits Jaxon can increase his defensive potential.
Formless Arts: Meaty Shield
Type: CANCELLER
Cooldown: 2
Duration: -
Buffs: -
Debuffs: -
Flavour: A basic defensive move where Jaxon keeps his guard as close as possible, to mitigate the damage received.
Formless Arts: Burning Precision Barrage
Type: DoT
Cooldown: 2
Duration: 5
Buffs: -
Debuffs: -
Flavour: An attack mixing both the precision and technique needed from the Formless Arts, mixed with the ingenuity of Jaxon. By inflicting numerous superficial cuts at high speed, the poison which he coated his weapon with, can act and spread fast, causing the cuts to bleed more than usual. As cause of the poison, the cuts will feel like they are on fire.
Formless Arts: Hammer Strike
Type: FLAT
Cooldown: 2
Duration: -
Buffs: -
Debuffs: -
Flavour: Using both fists simultaneously to strike the opponent, Jaxon can deliver a devastating blow. The effect is similar to a hammer strike.
- Medium Techniques:
Formless Arts: Spectral Arrow
Type: STAT MORPH
Cooldown: 9
Duration: 3
Buffs: RX +50%
Debuffs: -
Flavour: A more advanced technique of the Formless Arts. Jaxon utilizes the muscles in his body in such a way to move considerably faster, making it easier to land strikes and more difficult to be hit.
Formless Arts: Lava Ram
Type: FLAT HYBRID
Cooldown: 9
Duration: 3
Buffs: -
Debuffs: DEF -20%
Flavour: With a mix of speed, power and poison, Jaxon applies a nerve poison after landing a hit with the force comparable of a battering ram. The poison inhibits the defensive capability of the inflicted, causing them to feel as if they are standing in a pool of lava.
- Heavy Techniques:
Formless Arts: Null Armor
Type: STAT MORPH
Cooldown: 12
Duration: 4
Buffs: +75% WP
Debuffs: -
Flavour: After experimentation with his skills and the limits of the possibilites, Jaxon realized he could temporarily increase his vitality by greats amount, by sheer will. His muscles form a natural armor that makes it possible for him to last longer in battle. The armor lasts as long as he can hold that conviction.
Giant's Bat
Type: FLAT
Cooldown: 6
Duration: -
Buffs: -
Debuffs: -
Flavour: Beyond the level of normal weapons, is the league of giants. By focusing all his strength and energy on his fist, he is able strike with the strength of a giant's bat. If it lands, the attack causes serious damage.
Formless: Nullifying Armor
Type: STAT MORPH
Cooldown: 12
Duration: 4
Buffs: -
Debuffs: WP +75%
Flavour: The absolute reverse of the Null Armor causes the opponent to be severely weakened, albeit temporarily. Jaxon delivers several non-damaging strikes to specific points of his opponent's body. As result, his opponent will tire and be able to be knocked out much quicker. After a while, the opponent's body returns to normal.
- AoE Techniques:
Wind of Pain
Type: DoT
Cooldown: 8
Duration: 5
Buffs: -
Debuffs: -
Flavour: A technique, specifically developed for fighting multiple enemies. Jaxon moves quickly, inflicting superficial wounds, applying a very potent poison. The poison is not deadly, but it inflicts immense pain for some time. The gust Jaxon creates when he moves, combined with the effect of the poison gave the technique it's name.
Formless Arts: Mass Sharpening
Type: Buff
Cooldown: 14
Duration: 4
Buffs: +75% ATK
Debuffs:
Flavour: Jaxon activates the pressure points in his body, as the bodies of his allies. Allowing the blood to circulate with way more effeciency, increasing their offensive capabilites. The effect lasts for a while, after which the effect will dissipate.
- Gray
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
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Re: [Fighting Style] Formless Arts
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Nice work getting this done! I just had a few comments/corrections. You can find them below in orange.
Jaxon Black wrote:Formless Arts
Fighting Style: Formless Arts
Weapon Utilization: The limbs of the human body.
Description: Weapons are used to further the physical limits of humans. However, with enough training, imagination and the right techniques the human body itself can become any weapon.
Toggled and Passive Abilities:
Nerve Damage (Passive): After having tempered the body to a degree, by gradually receiving damge to several parts of the body, the nerve endings have been damaged to such a point that the Jaxon does not feel pain, unless the damage penetrates the skin several inches. [ This feels a bit contrived and unnecessary for this character and doesn't quite make sense based on his background. I recommend removing it entirely. ]
Felyne Finesse (Passive): Over the years of exercising his art, Jaxon had managed to find himself in many sticky situations. As result of his training and experiences in such situations, he managed to attain agility akin to a human cat, to always be able to escape to places no normal person would be able to. It would not be stupid to mistake him for a seasoned acrobat.
Optimist (Passive): A man with a curious mind will always find a way to optimize his skills. Such a thing rings true in Jaxon, he always thinks about innovations in his set of skills to make the seemingly impossible, possible. Maximalising efficiency is something he always strives for.
Formless: Blunt : By just utilizing both fists, Jaxon is able to imitate the effect of a myriad of blunt weapons. The versatility is amazing. Holding his fists together and clenching them delivers the same impact as a hammer. A simple punch has the same effect as the swing of a bat. The downside is that the strikes will not be very easy to land. (+20% ATK, -20% DEF)
Formless: Sharp : The opposite of clenching his fists together is holding his hands open, positioning them to be akin to a blade. Due to his training, Jaxon can mimic the effects of a blade with the use of his hands. In this form, he can be much more precise with his strikes, but they do not deal as much damage and he can't take hits as well. (+20RX, -20% DEF) [ I would also like for you to replace this. Firstly, at level 1, your character is expected to be about as strong as Fullbody at Baratie. But, more importantly, based on his background, having the technique of cutting things with just his hands just doesn't seem reasonable. Just give him a sword instead if you really wanna cut. ]
Techniques
- Light Techniques:
Formless Arts: Tempering
Type: STAT MORPH
Cooldown: 6
Duration: 2
Buffs: DEF [ Please specify the percentage. ]
Debuffs: -
Flavour: By flexing his muscles beyond the limits Jaxon can increase his defensive potential.
Formless Arts: Meaty Shield
Type: CANCELLER
Cooldown: 2
Duration: -
Buffs: -
Debuffs: -
Flavour: A basic defensive move where Jaxon keeps his guard as close as possible, to mitigate the damage received.
Formless Arts: Burning Precision Barrage
Type: DoT
Cooldown: 2
Duration: 5
Buffs: -
Debuffs: -
Flavour: An attack mixing both the precision and technique needed from the Formless Arts, mixed with the ingenuity of Jaxon. By inflicting numerous superficial cuts at high speed, the poison which he coated his weapon with, can act and spread fast, causing the cuts to bleed more than usual. As cause of the poison, the cuts will feel like they are on fire.
Formless Arts: Hammer Strike
Type: FLAT
Cooldown: 2
Duration: -
Buffs: -
Debuffs: -
Flavour: Using both fists simultaneously to strike the opponent, Jaxon can deliver a devastating blow. The effect is similar to a hammer strike.
- Medium Techniques:
Formless Arts: Spectral Arrow
Type: STAT MORPH
Cooldown: 9
Duration: 3
Buffs: RX [ For this too. ]
Debuffs: -
Flavour: A more advanced technique of the Formless Arts. Jaxon utilizes the muscles in his body in such a way to move considerably faster, making it easier to land strikes and more difficult to be hit.
Formless Arts: Lava Ram
Type: FLAT HYBRID
Cooldown: 9
Duration: 3
Buffs: -
Debuffs: DEF [ And this. ]
Flavour: With a mix of speed, power and poison, Jaxon applies a nerve poison after landing a hit with the force comparable of a battering ram. The poison inhibits the defensive capability of the inflicted, causing them to feel as if they are standing in a pool of lava.
- Heavy Techniques:
Formless Arts: Null Armor
Type: STAT MORPH
Cooldown: 12
Duration: 4
Buffs: +75% WP
Debuffs: -
Flavour: After experimentation with his skills and the limits of the possibilites, Jaxon realized he could temporarily increase his vitality by greats amount, by sheer will. His muscles form a natural armor that makes it possible for him to last longer in battle. The armor lasts as long as he can hold that conviction.
Giant's Bat
Type: FLAT
Cooldown: 6
Duration: -
Buffs: -
Debuffs: -
Flavour: Beyond the level of normal weapons, is the league of giants. By focusing all his strength and energy on his fist, he is able strike with the strength of a giant's bat. If it lands, the attack causes serious damage.
Formless: Nullifying Armor
Type: STAT MORPH
Cooldown: 12
Duration: 4
Buffs: -
Debuffs: WP [ One more. ]
Flavour: The absolute reverse of the Null Armor causes the opponent to be severely weakened, albeit temporarily. Jaxon delivers several non-damaging strikes to specific points of his opponent's body. As result, his opponent will tire and be able to be knocked out much quicker. After a while, the opponent's body returns to normal.
- AoE Techniques:
Wind of Pain
Type: AoE [ This should be a DoT, I believe. ]
Cooldown: 8
Duration: 5
Buffs: -
Debuffs: -
Flavour: A technique, specifically developed for fighting multiple enemies. Jaxon moves quickly, inflicting superficial wounds, applying a very potent poison. The poison is not deadly, but it inflicts immense pain for some time. The gust Jaxon creates when he moves, combined with the effect of the poison gave the technique it's name.
Formless Arts: Mass Sharpening
Type: Buff [ I think you meant Stat morph here. ]
Cooldown: 14
Duration: 4
Buffs: 75% ATK
Debuffs:
Flavour: Jaxon activates the pressure points in his body, as the bodies of his allies. Allowing the blood to circulate with way more effeciency, increasing their offensive capabilites. The effect lasts for a while, after which the effect will dissipate.
- Gray
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
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Re: [Fighting Style] Formless Arts
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Thanks for the fixes! Approved!
Jaxon Black wrote:Formless Arts
Fighting Style: Formless Arts
Weapon Utilization: The limbs of the human body.
Description: Weapons are used to further the physical limits of humans. However, with enough training, imagination and the right techniques the human body itself can become any weapon.
Toggled and Passive Abilities:
Felyne Finesse (Passive): Over the years of exercising his art, Jaxon had managed to find himself in many sticky situations. As result of his training and experiences in such situations, he managed to attain agility akin to a human cat, to always be able to escape to places no normal person would be able to. It would not be stupid to mistake him for a seasoned acrobat.
Optimist (Passive): A man with a curious mind will always find a way to optimize his skills. Such a thing rings true in Jaxon, he always thinks about innovations in his set of skills to make the seemingly impossible, possible. Maximalising efficiency is something he always strives for.
Formless: Blunt : By just utilizing both fists, Jaxon is able to imitate the effect of a myriad of blunt weapons. The versatility is amazing. Holding his fists together and clenching them delivers the same impact as a hammer. A simple punch has the same effect as the swing of a bat. The downside is that the strikes will not be very easy to land. (+20% ATK, -20% DEF)
Formless: Sharp : The opposite of clenching his fists together is holding his hands open, positioning them to be akin to a blade. Due to a bladde hidden beneath his clothing, Jaxon can mimic the effects of a blade with the use of his hands. In this form, he can be much more precise with his strikes, but they do not deal as much damage and he can't take hits as well. Most people can’t see the hidden blade, thus they assume he just uses his hands.(+20RX, -20% DEF)
Techniques
- Light Techniques:
Formless Arts: Tempering
Type: STAT MORPH
Cooldown: 6
Duration: 2
Buffs: DEF 25+%
Debuffs: -
Flavour: By flexing his muscles beyond the limits Jaxon can increase his defensive potential.
Formless Arts: Meaty Shield
Type: CANCELLER
Cooldown: 2
Duration: -
Buffs: -
Debuffs: -
Flavour: A basic defensive move where Jaxon keeps his guard as close as possible, to mitigate the damage received.
Formless Arts: Burning Precision Barrage
Type: DoT
Cooldown: 2
Duration: 5
Buffs: -
Debuffs: -
Flavour: An attack mixing both the precision and technique needed from the Formless Arts, mixed with the ingenuity of Jaxon. By inflicting numerous superficial cuts at high speed, the poison which he coated his weapon with, can act and spread fast, causing the cuts to bleed more than usual. As cause of the poison, the cuts will feel like they are on fire.
Formless Arts: Hammer Strike
Type: FLAT
Cooldown: 2
Duration: -
Buffs: -
Debuffs: -
Flavour: Using both fists simultaneously to strike the opponent, Jaxon can deliver a devastating blow. The effect is similar to a hammer strike.
- Medium Techniques:
Formless Arts: Spectral Arrow
Type: STAT MORPH
Cooldown: 9
Duration: 3
Buffs: RX +50%
Debuffs: -
Flavour: A more advanced technique of the Formless Arts. Jaxon utilizes the muscles in his body in such a way to move considerably faster, making it easier to land strikes and more difficult to be hit.
Formless Arts: Lava Ram
Type: FLAT HYBRID
Cooldown: 9
Duration: 3
Buffs: -
Debuffs: DEF -20%
Flavour: With a mix of speed, power and poison, Jaxon applies a nerve poison after landing a hit with the force comparable of a battering ram. The poison inhibits the defensive capability of the inflicted, causing them to feel as if they are standing in a pool of lava.
- Heavy Techniques:
Formless Arts: Null Armor
Type: STAT MORPH
Cooldown: 12
Duration: 4
Buffs: +75% WP
Debuffs: -
Flavour: After experimentation with his skills and the limits of the possibilites, Jaxon realized he could temporarily increase his vitality by greats amount, by sheer will. His muscles form a natural armor that makes it possible for him to last longer in battle. The armor lasts as long as he can hold that conviction.
Giant's Bat
Type: FLAT
Cooldown: 6
Duration: -
Buffs: -
Debuffs: -
Flavour: Beyond the level of normal weapons, is the league of giants. By focusing all his strength and energy on his fist, he is able strike with the strength of a giant's bat. If it lands, the attack causes serious damage.
Formless: Nullifying Armor
Type: STAT MORPH
Cooldown: 12
Duration: 4
Buffs: -
Debuffs: WP +75%
Flavour: The absolute reverse of the Null Armor causes the opponent to be severely weakened, albeit temporarily. Jaxon delivers several non-damaging strikes to specific points of his opponent's body. As result, his opponent will tire and be able to be knocked out much quicker. After a while, the opponent's body returns to normal.
- AoE Techniques:
Wind of Pain
Type: DoT
Cooldown: 8
Duration: 5
Buffs: -
Debuffs: -
Flavour: A technique, specifically developed for fighting multiple enemies. Jaxon moves quickly, inflicting superficial wounds, applying a very potent poison. The poison is not deadly, but it inflicts immense pain for some time. The gust Jaxon creates when he moves, combined with the effect of the poison gave the technique it's name.
Formless Arts: Mass Sharpening
Type: Buff
Cooldown: 14
Duration: 4
Buffs: +75% ATK
Debuffs:
Flavour: Jaxon activates the pressure points in his body, as the bodies of his allies. Allowing the blood to circulate with way more effeciency, increasing their offensive capabilites. The effect lasts for a while, after which the effect will dissipate.
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