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Repulsive Fighting Style
Tue Sep 07, 2021 3:19 pmRepulsive Fighting Style
Fighting Style: Repulsive Fighting Style
Weapon Utilization: NONE
Description: As a giant, DeVillna possesses a level of strength beyond that of a normal human. She is capable of lifting from large ships to large house's with ease; as well as being able to lift massive boulders and rip trees out of the ground like a carrot. She can easily tear and bend the strongest metals like a piece of tin foil with her bare hands and she has enhanced durability to allow her to fight longer. Offensively, DeVillna is able to send opponents flying several miles away, break bones instantly with a single punch, and relatively overwhelm her opponents with brute force that was equivalent
Toggled and Passive Abilities:
Enhanced Durability (Toggled): Since DeVillna is much bigger than her enemies she has the ability to withstand damage to a certain extent but because of her size DeVillna isn’t as good at dodging since she is a bigger target. +%20 DEF, -%20 REF
Monstrous Tantrums. (Toggled): This fighting style uses brute force to overwhelm her opponent and to crush her enemies as quickly as possible however due to the power behind each blow she is known to get tired faster due to the energy she exerts behind her monstrous tantrums. +%20 ATK, -%20 WP
Techniques
- Light Techniques:
Nasty Jab’s
Type: Flat
Cooldown: 2
Flavour: DeVillna throws a straight punch toward her opponent which is weaker than most hits that she would normally this is usually used in consecutive with more punches like these so there is little time to recover before finishing them with one super hard punch!
Vile Sucker-Punch!
Type: FLAT/HYBRID
Cooldown: 6
Duration: 2
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs: 10% REF
Flavour: DeVillna hits her opponent hard enough to disorent them for a few seconds, not necessarily a big advantage but those few seconds could just be what she needs to land a critical blow to them.
Wrongful Torment
Type: DOT/HYBRID
Cooldown: 6
Duration: 2
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs: 10% DEF
Flavour: DeVillna picks up her opponent (or steps on them) and proceeds to torture them. Squishing them between her index finger and thumb (or grinding the poor sap underneath her heel) gently enough not to kill them but hard enough to crack a few ribs just to hear them scream! Music to her ears.
Stomach-Turning BLOB
Type: STAT MORPH
Cooldown: 6
Duration: 2
Buffs: 25% DEF
Debuffs: N/A
Flavour: Her fat is thick enough not to only act as armor, but she can also use that big belly as a shield causing attacks to feel almost like nothing. Allowing her to withstand things like bullets, small explosions, and even punches from normal people. However though she is able to take a hit she’ll still feel the pain which will make Devilla even angrier.
- Medium Techniques:
Ugly Uppercut
Type: Flat
Cooldown: 4
Flavour: DeVillna delivers an hard uppercut to her opponent, putting a bit of her strength into that punch which would be more than enough to send a poor soul flying up into the air and fall to the ground with a sickening thud.
Sickening Stompin’
Type: DOT/HYBRID
Cooldown: 9
Duration: 3
Buffs:
Debuffs: - 20% DEF
Flavour: DeVillna stomps on her opponent making sure they are laying flat before she keeps stomping on them then grinding them under her heel while laughing like a mad woman and throwing a few insults as she repeatedly stomps her enemy.
- Heavy Techniques:
Distasteful Crush!
Type: Flat
Cooldown: 6
Flavour: DeVillna is furious, so she slams her fist down on her opponent in order to outright pulverise the poor sucker that is unfortunate enough to be underneath her fist. In fact she puts all her strength into this attack, so much that she leaves a massive crater, causing tremors that shake houses and causes seas to rise.
Abhorrent Juggernaut
Type: STAT MORPH
Cooldown: 12
Duration: 4
Buffs: 75% DEF
Debuffs: N/A
Flavour: DeVillna is so angry that she turns red and only the whites of her eyes can be seen. At this point she becomes a Juggernaut of sorts, not caring if she gets hurt or not only dead focused on destroying everything in her path making things like pain seem non existent to her.
Putrid Slam
Type: Flat
Cooldown: 6
Flavour:DeVillna does a combo where she punches her opponent high into the air, then catch them in mid flight upwards before slamming them to the ground with enough force to make the ground explode underneath her. This could also be used as a stand alone stomp if they are already on the ground.
- AoE Techniques:
Special Move: Repulsive Peach Bomb!
Type: Flat
Cooldown: 8
Flavour: By far one of the most destructive attacks in DeVillna’s arsenal. The giantess leaps high into the air, tuck her legs into a squat position and plops down on everyone unfortunate enough to be caught underneath her massive rear! If you weren’t directly crushed underneath her massive tuchus you still aren’t safe because the shockwave from the impact is more than enough to generate a small but magnificent earthquake around the area of impact. Possibly creating fissures, tsunamis and avalanches if she is around mountains.
Special Move: Frightful Repulsive Tantrum
Type: DOT HYBRID
Cooldown: 14
Duration: 4
Buffs:
Debuffs: -30% ATTK
Flavour: Devillna throws a huge temper tantrum which she stomps and knocks over buildings in a blind rage (or sadness.) The ground shakes which disorientates everyone and they would occasionally get hit by falling debris along with large tears if she just so happens to be crying during her tantrum.
Gray
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species/Tribe : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
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Re: Repulsive Fighting Style
Wed Sep 08, 2021 12:20 pm[ Nice work overall! I just had a handful of comments which are marked in orange in the quote below. ]
DeVillna Repulsa wrote:Repulsive Fighting Style
Fighting Style: Repulsive Fighting Style
Weapon Utilization: Rings [ I don't see any mention of her using rings anywhere else in the fighting style? Just say "None" here. ]
Description: As a giant, DeVillna possesses a level of strength beyond that of a normal human. She is capable of lifting from large ships to large house's with ease; as well as being able to lift massive boulders and rip trees out of the ground like a carrot. She can easily tear and bend the strongest metals like a piece of tin foil with her bare hands and she has enhanced durability to allow her to fight longer. Offensively, DeVillna is able to send opponents flying several miles away, break bones instantly with a single punch, and relatively overwhelm her opponents with brute force that was equivalent
Toggled and Passive Abilities:
Enhanced Durability (Toggled): Since DeVillna is much bigger than her enemies she has the ability to withstand damage to a certain extent but because of her size DeVillna isn’t as good at dodging since she is a bigger target. +20 DEF, -20 REF [ Note that these are percentages, not hard values. ]
Monstrous Tantrums. (Toggled): This fighting style uses brute force to overwhelm her opponent and to crush her enemies as quickly as possible however due to the power behind each blow she is known to get tired faster due to the energy she exerts behind her monstrous tantrums. +20 ATK, -20 WP [ Same as above. ]
Techniques
- Light Techniques:
Nasty Jab’s
Type: Flat
Cooldown: 2
Flavour: DeVillna throws a straight punch toward her opponent which is weaker than most hits that she would normally this is usually used in consecutive with more punches like these so there is little time to recover before finishing them with one super hard punch!
Vile Sucker-Punch!
Type: FLAT/HYBRID
Cooldown: 6
Duration: 2
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs: 10% REF
Flavour: DeVillna hits her opponent hard enough to disorent them for a few seconds, not necessarily a big advantage but those few seconds could just be what she needs to land a critical blow to them.
Wrongful Torment
Type: DOT/HYBRID
Cooldown: 6
Duration: 2
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs: 10% DEF
Flavour: DeVillna picks up her opponent (or steps on them) and proceeds to torture them. Squishing them between her index finger and thumb (or grinding the poor sap underneath her heel) gently enough not to kill them but hard enough to crack a few ribs just to hear them scream! Music to her ears.
Stomach-Turning BLOB
Type: STAT MORPH
Cooldown: 6
Duration: 2
Buffs: 25% DEF
Debuffs: N/A
Flavour: Her fat is thick enough not to only act as armor, but she can also use that big belly as a shield causing attacks to feel almost like nothing. Allowing her to withstand things like bullets, small explosions, and even punches from normal people. However though she is able to take a hit she’ll still feel the pain which will make Devilla even angrier.
- Medium Techniques:
Ugly Uppercut
Type: Flat
Cooldown: 4
Flavour: DeVillna delivers an hard uppercut to her opponent, putting a bit of her strength into that punch which would be more than enough to send a poor soul flying up into the air and fall to the ground with a sickening thud.
Sickening Stompin’
Type: DOT/HYBRID
Cooldown: 4 [ The cooldown should be 9. ]
Duration: 3
Buffs:
Debuffs: - 20% DEF
Flavour: DeVillna stomps on her opponent making sure they are laying flat before she keeps stomping on them then grinding them under her heel while laughing like a mad woman and throwing a few insults as she repeatedly stomps her enemy.
- Heavy Techniques:
Distasteful Crush!
Type: Flat
Cooldown: 6
Flavour: DeVillna is furious, so she slams her fist down on her opponent in order to outright pulverise the poor sucker that is unfortunate enough to be underneath her fist. In fact she puts all her strength into this attack, so much that she leaves a massive crater, causing tremors that shake houses and causes seas to rise.
Abhorrent Juggernaut
Type: STAT MORPH
Cooldown: 12
Duration: 4
Buffs: 75% DEF
Debuffs: N/A
Flavour: DeVillna is so angry that she turns red and only the whites of her eyes can be seen. At this point she becomes a Juggernaut of sorts, not caring if she gets hurt or not only dead focused on destroying everything in her path making things like pain seem non existent to her.
Putrid Slam
Type: Flat
Cooldown: 6
Flavour:DeVillna does a combo where she punches her opponent high into the air, then catch them in mid flight upwards before slamming them to the ground with enough force to make the ground explode underneath her. This could also be used as a stand alone stomp if they are already on the ground.
- AoE Techniques:
Special Move: Repulsive Peach Bomb!
Type: Flat
Cooldown: 8
Flavour: By far one of the most destructive attacks in DeVillna’s arsenal. The giantess leaps high into the air, tuck her legs into a squat position and plops down on everyone unfortunate enough to be caught underneath her massive rear! If you weren’t directly crushed underneath her massive tuchus you still aren’t safe because the shockwave from the impact is more than enough to generate a small but magnificent earthquake around the area of impact. Possibly creating fissures, tsunamis and avalanches if she is around mountains.
Special Move: Frightful Repulsive Tantrum
Type: DOT HYBRID
Cooldown: 14
Duration: 4
Buffs:
Debuffs: -30% ATTK
Flavour: Devillna throws a huge temper tantrum which she stomps and knocks over buildings in a blind rage (or sadness.) The ground shakes which disorientates everyone and they would occasionally get hit by falling debris along with large tears if she just so happens to be crying during her tantrum.
- Gray
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species/Tribe : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[childofdestiny]][[freakofnature]]
[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]
[[improviseadaptovercome]]
Posts : 3991
Re: Repulsive Fighting Style
Wed Sep 08, 2021 3:18 pmThanks for the edits! Your fighting style is approved!
DeVillna Repulsa wrote:Repulsive Fighting Style
Fighting Style: Repulsive Fighting Style
Weapon Utilization: NONE
Description: As a giant, DeVillna possesses a level of strength beyond that of a normal human. She is capable of lifting from large ships to large house's with ease; as well as being able to lift massive boulders and rip trees out of the ground like a carrot. She can easily tear and bend the strongest metals like a piece of tin foil with her bare hands and she has enhanced durability to allow her to fight longer. Offensively, DeVillna is able to send opponents flying several miles away, break bones instantly with a single punch, and relatively overwhelm her opponents with brute force that was equivalent
Toggled and Passive Abilities:
Enhanced Durability (Toggled): Since DeVillna is much bigger than her enemies she has the ability to withstand damage to a certain extent but because of her size DeVillna isn’t as good at dodging since she is a bigger target. +%20 DEF, -%20 REF
Monstrous Tantrums. (Toggled): This fighting style uses brute force to overwhelm her opponent and to crush her enemies as quickly as possible however due to the power behind each blow she is known to get tired faster due to the energy she exerts behind her monstrous tantrums. +%20 ATK, -%20 WP
Techniques
- Light Techniques:
Nasty Jab’s
Type: Flat
Cooldown: 2
Flavour: DeVillna throws a straight punch toward her opponent which is weaker than most hits that she would normally this is usually used in consecutive with more punches like these so there is little time to recover before finishing them with one super hard punch!
Vile Sucker-Punch!
Type: FLAT/HYBRID
Cooldown: 6
Duration: 2
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs: 10% REF
Flavour: DeVillna hits her opponent hard enough to disorent them for a few seconds, not necessarily a big advantage but those few seconds could just be what she needs to land a critical blow to them.
Wrongful Torment
Type: DOT/HYBRID
Cooldown: 6
Duration: 2
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs: 10% DEF
Flavour: DeVillna picks up her opponent (or steps on them) and proceeds to torture them. Squishing them between her index finger and thumb (or grinding the poor sap underneath her heel) gently enough not to kill them but hard enough to crack a few ribs just to hear them scream! Music to her ears.
Stomach-Turning BLOB
Type: STAT MORPH
Cooldown: 6
Duration: 2
Buffs: 25% DEF
Debuffs: N/A
Flavour: Her fat is thick enough not to only act as armor, but she can also use that big belly as a shield causing attacks to feel almost like nothing. Allowing her to withstand things like bullets, small explosions, and even punches from normal people. However though she is able to take a hit she’ll still feel the pain which will make Devilla even angrier.
- Medium Techniques:
Ugly Uppercut
Type: Flat
Cooldown: 4
Flavour: DeVillna delivers an hard uppercut to her opponent, putting a bit of her strength into that punch which would be more than enough to send a poor soul flying up into the air and fall to the ground with a sickening thud.
Sickening Stompin’
Type: DOT/HYBRID
Cooldown: 9
Duration: 3
Buffs:
Debuffs: - 20% DEF
Flavour: DeVillna stomps on her opponent making sure they are laying flat before she keeps stomping on them then grinding them under her heel while laughing like a mad woman and throwing a few insults as she repeatedly stomps her enemy.
- Heavy Techniques:
Distasteful Crush!
Type: Flat
Cooldown: 6
Flavour: DeVillna is furious, so she slams her fist down on her opponent in order to outright pulverise the poor sucker that is unfortunate enough to be underneath her fist. In fact she puts all her strength into this attack, so much that she leaves a massive crater, causing tremors that shake houses and causes seas to rise.
Abhorrent Juggernaut
Type: STAT MORPH
Cooldown: 12
Duration: 4
Buffs: 75% DEF
Debuffs: N/A
Flavour: DeVillna is so angry that she turns red and only the whites of her eyes can be seen. At this point she becomes a Juggernaut of sorts, not caring if she gets hurt or not only dead focused on destroying everything in her path making things like pain seem non existent to her.
Putrid Slam
Type: Flat
Cooldown: 6
Flavour:DeVillna does a combo where she punches her opponent high into the air, then catch them in mid flight upwards before slamming them to the ground with enough force to make the ground explode underneath her. This could also be used as a stand alone stomp if they are already on the ground.
- AoE Techniques:
Special Move: Repulsive Peach Bomb!
Type: Flat
Cooldown: 8
Flavour: By far one of the most destructive attacks in DeVillna’s arsenal. The giantess leaps high into the air, tuck her legs into a squat position and plops down on everyone unfortunate enough to be caught underneath her massive rear! If you weren’t directly crushed underneath her massive tuchus you still aren’t safe because the shockwave from the impact is more than enough to generate a small but magnificent earthquake around the area of impact. Possibly creating fissures, tsunamis and avalanches if she is around mountains.
Special Move: Frightful Repulsive Tantrum
Type: DOT HYBRID
Cooldown: 14
Duration: 4
Buffs:
Debuffs: -30% ATTK
Flavour: Devillna throws a huge temper tantrum which she stomps and knocks over buildings in a blind rage (or sadness.) The ground shakes which disorientates everyone and they would occasionally get hit by falling debris along with large tears if she just so happens to be crying during her tantrum.
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