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DeVillna Uglina Repulsa Empty DeVillna Uglina Repulsa

This post has in-line assessment comments.Mon Sep 06, 2021 5:17 am

DeVillna Repulsa


DeVillna Uglina Repulsa SWYxsis

Basic Character Information


Starting Bonus:
Hard Boiled

First Name: Devillna
Middle Name/Initial: Uglina
Last Name: Repulsa
Epithet: Queen Of Mean
Birthdate: 06 /06 / 1759
Gender: Female
Species/Race/Tribe: Giant
Faction: Pirate
Profession: Pirate Captain/Cook


Physical Appearance


Height: 39.3 Ft.
Weight: 250,000 lbs

Hair Style: Updo Hairstyle
Hair Color: Pink
Eye Color: Blue
Scars: Lots of stretch marks if that counts
Clothing and Accessories: As the big bad to be, Devillna wears an outfit best made to strike fear in her enemies along with her humongous size! She wears a large black midnight dress, one made from the same material as one of those theater curtains and the dress itself was more than enough to be able to cover a large house with it if not more since the dress itself was about 33 feet. Along with her dark dress she also wears a stylish black fur shawl over her shoulders along with a massive black fur hat made from what could only be guessed as the same animal and some large high heels. She also wears a red ruby necklace and a pair of ruby earrings: each jewel about the same size if not just a little bit bigger than a child since all of them measure around 4 feet each.

Description: Devillna is a massive blob of a woman. If her overall ugliness isn’t enough to put the fear of god in you perhaps looking up at a 39’3 foot giant and being grotestly obsessed would probably do it for the weak willed. Her ruby lips almost always curled into a snaggle tooth smirk, those menacing cold blue eyes always piercing down at her prey down below. Meda also has a really thick neck, like a triple chin or something like that with a beak-like nose.


The Past


Main Traits: cruel and bossy
Likes:
>Fashion
>Food & Cooking
> Chaos
>Murder
>Making People Cry
>Picking on smaller people
>Anarchy
> insulting people
> Treating people as less than people

Dislikes:
> Everybody! She's not too fond of people!
> Dogs
> Seeing others happy when she’s not
>The World Government
> Pirates/Revolutionaries who think they are good people
>Towns that don’t have giant friendly places
>The annoying sun
>The annoying moon
>Non rough Ocean waves that dosen’t sink boats
> ALL LIFE IN GENERAL AND ANYTHING THAT'S BEAUTIFUL AND SWEET

Unique laugh: Mwa ha ha ha! MIMIMI-MIMI

Hometown: SWALLOW ISLAND on the South Blue
Personality: Plenty of people will dislike DeVillna Repulsa,  the fact she's pretty ugly and she has a nasty attitude is just the tip of the iceberg. She is a wicked pirate with a hatred for all things good and right in the world. Even other evil doers are annoying to her since DeVillna believes there should only be one villain within these seas and her name is DeVillna Uglina Repulsa! But at the very least she's countered somewhat by being dedicated to the goal of having mindless anarchy as well.  Focused on bringing in a new era where there will be pirates, marines, revolutionaries and the like killing and dancing with joy as villages burn where she will laugh upon a throne of bones and a sea of blood and tears. Fair is fair though, DeVillna isn't just some murder hobo (though she is at least most of the time). To bring in the new age, she is willing to stomach working with other people to fulfill her goals and is even willing to play a little nice now and again before having to brush her teeth with sea water. She also loves to cook, which is relatively the only time she is nice to people when she is serving food. But no matter how long the relationship is, one mistake and you're gone! Also don't expect a thank you or good job from her, she is known to reward kindness with cruelty.

History:


Last edited by DeVillna Repulsa on Mon Sep 06, 2021 12:39 pm; edited 1 time in total (Reason for editing : And edited!)
Gray
Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species/Tribe : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[childofdestiny]][[freakofnature]]
[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]

[[improviseadaptovercome]]
Posts : 3991

DeVillna Uglina Repulsa Empty Re: DeVillna Uglina Repulsa

This post has in-line assessment comments.Mon Sep 06, 2021 12:32 pm
A classic take on a villainous character. I only had two minor comments that need to be addressed before I can approve this:
+ Her birthdate requires a year. The current year is 1829. I also noticed that your age is only 45. If you're planning on making a giant, maybe make them 70-100 years old since 45-year-old giants would still be adolescents. Alternatively, you can make her a Big Mom-sized human. Being a large human rather than a giant might make a bit more sense based on her hometown.
+ Even considering her excessive obesity, a 39 feet tall giant wouldn't be this heavy. Make her 250,000 lbs instead. If you choose to make her a Big Mom sized human (29 feet tall), knock the weight down to 115,000 lbs.


DeVillna Repulsa wrote:

DeVillna Repulsa


DeVillna Uglina Repulsa SWYxsis

Basic Character Information


Starting Bonus:
Hard Boiled

First Name: Devillna
Middle Name/Initial: Uglina
Last Name: Repulsa
Epithet: Queen Of Mean
Birthdate: 06/06 [ ]
Gender: Female
Species/Race/Tribe: Giant
Faction: Pirate
Profession: Pirate Captain/Cook


Physical Appearance


Height: 39.3 Ft.
Weight: 350,000 lbs [ ]

Hair Style: Updo Hairstyle
Hair Color: Pink
Eye Color: Blue
Scars: Lots of stretch marks if that counts
Clothing and Accessories: As the big bad to be, Devillna wears an outfit best made to strike fear in her enemies along with her humongous size! She wears a large black midnight dress, one made from the same material as one of those theater curtains and the dress itself was more than enough to be able to cover a large house with it if not more since the dress itself was about 33 feet. Along with her dark dress she also wears a stylish black fur shawl over her shoulders along with a massive black fur hat made from what could only be guessed as the same animal and some large high heels. She also wears a red ruby necklace and a pair of ruby earrings: each jewel about the same size if not just a little bit bigger than a child since all of them measure around 4 feet each.

Description: Devillna is a massive blob of a woman. If her overall ugliness isn’t enough to put the fear of god in you perhaps looking up at a 39’3 foot giant and being grotestly obsessed would probably do it for the weak willed. Her ruby lips almost always curled into a snaggle tooth smirk, those menacing cold blue eyes always piercing down at her prey down below. Meda also has a really thick neck, like a triple chin or something like that with a beak-like nose.


The Past


Main Traits: cruel and bossy
Likes:
>Fashion
>Food & Cooking
> Chaos
>Murder
>Making People Cry
>Picking on smaller people
>Anarchy
> insulting people
> Treating people as less than people

Dislikes:
> Everybody! She's not too fond of people!
> Dogs
> Seeing others happy when she’s not
>The World Government
> Pirates/Revolutionaries who think they are good people
>Towns that don’t have giant friendly places
>The annoying sun
>The annoying moon
>Non rough Ocean waves that dosen’t sink boats
> ALL LIFE IN GENERAL AND ANYTHING THAT'S BEAUTIFUL AND SWEET

Unique laugh: Mwa ha ha ha! MIMIMI-MIMI

Hometown: SWALLOW ISLAND on the South Blue
Personality: Plenty of people will dislike DeVillna Repulsa,  the fact she's pretty ugly and she has a nasty attitude is just the tip of the iceberg. She is a wicked pirate with a hatred for all things good and right in the world. Even other evil doers are annoying to her since DeVillna believes there should only be one villain within these seas and her name is DeVillna Uglina Repulsa! But at the very least she's countered somewhat by being dedicated to the goal of having mindless anarchy as well.  Focused on bringing in a new era where there will be pirates, marines, revolutionaries and the like killing and dancing with joy as villages burn where she will laugh upon a throne of bones and a sea of blood and tears. Fair is fair though, DeVillna isn't just some murder hobo (though she is at least most of the time). To bring in the new age, she is willing to stomach working with other people to fulfill her goals and is even willing to play a little nice now and again before having to brush her teeth with sea water. She also loves to cook, which is relatively the only time she is nice to people when she is serving food. But no matter how long the relationship is, one mistake and you're gone! Also don't expect a thank you or good job from her, she is known to reward kindness with cruelty.

History:
Gray
Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species/Tribe : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[childofdestiny]][[freakofnature]]
[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]

[[improviseadaptovercome]]
Posts : 3991

DeVillna Uglina Repulsa Empty Re: DeVillna Uglina Repulsa

This post has in-line assessment comments.Mon Sep 06, 2021 12:45 pm
Approved!

DeVillna Repulsa wrote:

DeVillna Repulsa


DeVillna Uglina Repulsa SWYxsis

Basic Character Information


Starting Bonus:
Hard Boiled

First Name: Devillna
Middle Name/Initial: Uglina
Last Name: Repulsa
Epithet: Queen Of Mean
Birthdate: 06 /06 / 1759
Gender: Female
Species/Race/Tribe: Giant
Faction: Pirate
Profession: Pirate Captain/Cook


Physical Appearance


Height: 39.3 Ft.
Weight: 250,000 lbs

Hair Style: Updo Hairstyle
Hair Color: Pink
Eye Color: Blue
Scars: Lots of stretch marks if that counts
Clothing and Accessories: As the big bad to be, Devillna wears an outfit best made to strike fear in her enemies along with her humongous size! She wears a large black midnight dress, one made from the same material as one of those theater curtains and the dress itself was more than enough to be able to cover a large house with it if not more since the dress itself was about 33 feet. Along with her dark dress she also wears a stylish black fur shawl over her shoulders along with a massive black fur hat made from what could only be guessed as the same animal and some large high heels. She also wears a red ruby necklace and a pair of ruby earrings: each jewel about the same size if not just a little bit bigger than a child since all of them measure around 4 feet each.

Description: Devillna is a massive blob of a woman. If her overall ugliness isn’t enough to put the fear of god in you perhaps looking up at a 39’3 foot giant and being grotestly obsessed would probably do it for the weak willed. Her ruby lips almost always curled into a snaggle tooth smirk, those menacing cold blue eyes always piercing down at her prey down below. Meda also has a really thick neck, like a triple chin or something like that with a beak-like nose.


The Past


Main Traits: cruel and bossy
Likes:
>Fashion
>Food & Cooking
> Chaos
>Murder
>Making People Cry
>Picking on smaller people
>Anarchy
> insulting people
> Treating people as less than people

Dislikes:
> Everybody! She's not too fond of people!
> Dogs
> Seeing others happy when she’s not
>The World Government
> Pirates/Revolutionaries who think they are good people
>Towns that don’t have giant friendly places
>The annoying sun
>The annoying moon
>Non rough Ocean waves that dosen’t sink boats
> ALL LIFE IN GENERAL AND ANYTHING THAT'S BEAUTIFUL AND SWEET

Unique laugh: Mwa ha ha ha! MIMIMI-MIMI

Hometown: SWALLOW ISLAND on the South Blue
Personality: Plenty of people will dislike DeVillna Repulsa,  the fact she's pretty ugly and she has a nasty attitude is just the tip of the iceberg. She is a wicked pirate with a hatred for all things good and right in the world. Even other evil doers are annoying to her since DeVillna believes there should only be one villain within these seas and her name is DeVillna Uglina Repulsa! But at the very least she's countered somewhat by being dedicated to the goal of having mindless anarchy as well.  Focused on bringing in a new era where there will be pirates, marines, revolutionaries and the like killing and dancing with joy as villages burn where she will laugh upon a throne of bones and a sea of blood and tears. Fair is fair though, DeVillna isn't just some murder hobo (though she is at least most of the time). To bring in the new age, she is willing to stomach working with other people to fulfill her goals and is even willing to play a little nice now and again before having to brush her teeth with sea water. She also loves to cook, which is relatively the only time she is nice to people when she is serving food. But no matter how long the relationship is, one mistake and you're gone! Also don't expect a thank you or good job from her, she is known to reward kindness with cruelty.

History:
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