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This post has in-line assessment comments.Tue Feb 09, 2021 6:22 am
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#1 'Reflex Check' : 5, 6, 6

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#2 'Reflex Check' : 7, 9, 15
Ryoichi Ayugai
Ryoichi Ayugai
[tracker=/t1576-ryoichi-ayugai#8716]
Name : Ryoichi Ayugai
Epithet : The Boxing Bear
Age : 22
Height : 6 feet 1 inch (1.85m)
Weight : 198 lbs (95kg)
Species : Human
Faction : Marines
Crew : Blue Fist Academy
Ship : SSS Rocky
Marine Rank : Rear Admiral
Crew Role : Grandmaster
Devil Fruit : Kuma-Kuma no Mi (Bear-Bear Fruit) Model: Polar Bear
Quality Score : A
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.15 (Rear Admiral); 0.20 (to all allies)
Crew Pool : [bel=u] 50,000,000
Balance : [bel] 485,600,807
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This post has in-line assessment comments.Tue Feb 09, 2021 6:47 am
"Youth betther watth your feet!" with a grin, the bison rose his head a bit from the ground and swiftly he twirled himself like a spinner on the ground. With a swift motion, he swept Ryoichi off of his feet, dropping him down on the ground, face first... Like a ragdoll. Clearly, there wasn't too much need to use strength in this case. He already was barely standing by the Bison.

There the proud boxer was again... Down on the ground... And from the looks of it, defeated once more. The Bison recollected himself up from the ground, letting out a chuckle, following with a cocky grin. "I toldth you! Boxing ith a uthelethth fighting art!". To celebrate his victory, the Mink began to approach the prisoners once more. From the looks of it, he was not paying much attention to his partner's ultimate defeat but was more focused on accomplishing the mission.

"Letth ghet you guyth out of tehere.." the bison lowered himself to do what he was supposed to do initially. The lockpicking was now in progress! "You are doing great, Bison man!" the prisoners kept cheering for their savior. What he was doing right now, however, had a very big downside to it... One should never ever, leave his back open to their opponent.

While the bison was busy lockpicking, Ryoichi had begun to raise himself upon his knees, supporting himself with his arms. His body was shaking a bit in the process, beginning to feel nauseous but fighting against it with all his might. The fight was not over until one of them didn't get back up anymore... Even a drunk Ryoichi knew that... Thus he resulted in something he had not done in a while... Probably the stupidest idea he could have given the current situation... But he was not thinking much.

Increasingly his body began to grow larger and larger, his body began to deform. White fur began to grow over his skin along with sharp claws from his hands and feet. Moments later... Stomp! Stomp! The ground shook a bit with each step he took until he stopped. "B...B...Bison man..." the prisoners looked up, trembling on their spot. Bison who had assumed the trembling of the ground was nothing but a small earthquake was not too fazed about... Perhaps he should have been.

Before he knew... A large white polar bear was standing behind the bison, growling angrily at the pick locking Mink. The arms of the bear began to flicker unstably before being coated in a black armor-like substance... This followed by a swift and strong punch at a distracted Mink, crushing him into the ground... He really should have paid more attention.

This did not end there, unfortunately for the Bison. The polar bear grabbed the mink and tossed him up in the air. "I'ill syhow you whvo succks!" the growling voice shouted out at a flying bison. He took in the position. He began focusing on a precise punch... If you could call it that...

When the bison was freefalling... At the 'precise' moment, Ryoichi sent out another punch at him... However, he timed it wrong... And the punch landed at the bison's legs instead of the upper body... Regardless, the punch was... Enough of success to send the mink twirling into a tree. The punch however had its own 'side effects' as well.

Immediately after the punch, Ryoichi got thrown off of his feet, slamming down into the ground, just an inch away from crushing the most nearby prisoner under him... Boy those prisoners sure were lucky today...

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Yumiko
Yumiko
[tracker=/t1347-yumiko#7408]
Name : Yumiko
Epithet : Kamaitachi
Age : 28
Height : 5'5'' / 165 cm
Weight : 128 lbs. / 58 kg
Species : Human
Faction : Civilian
Devil Fruit : Ita Ita no Mi, Model: Kamaitachi
Bounty : [bel=r] 10,000,012
Quality Score : S
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Balance : [bel] 2,916,996,298
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This post has in-line assessment comments.Wed Feb 10, 2021 4:23 am
Adrenaline was a powerful painkiller. It surged through Yumiko’s veins, courtesy of her hammering heart. The open wound felt numb enough that she could keep moving. Her gaze darted towards the roar. Reflex guided her hands to her blade, ready for another fight... Until she recognized Sir Ryoichi. He was... a little bigger and hairier than she recalled. Sharing a similar curse herself, she quickly put the two and two together, of course, but the shock was still there. This was the first she learned of it. ...Or the first time the topic came up, rather. She was not the type to pry into other people’s lives.

Despite the bear man’s unsteady performance, the weasel woman stayed put. While a motherly sisterly worry bubbled beneath the surface, she restrained herself. Her fingers wrapped around her other arm, gripping so tightly it hurt. Interfering with another warrior’s fight was an unforgivable offense. The difference in power was meaningless before honor. She had faith that the Petty Officer would see this through... Even if it killed him! The same faith applied to the unconscious Marines scattered about. To die in the line of duty would’ve been a most honorable end indeed. ...But she would still rather not allow that to happen. If things turned bad, she stood ready to cast her own honor aside to protect her precious comrades. ...Most of whom had simply passed out at this point. She just didn’t realize it.

Yumiko’s attention shifted onto the prisoners, who were scampering away from the fallen bear. Their crawling was cut short by a stern comment. “Please do not try to escape. I do not wish to cut you down... But if I must, I will. While she remained polite enough, she clearly didn’t grant them the same level of respect as her comrades. In her eyes, they were criminals and cowards, of which the latter was worse.

Soundlessly the red coloration continued to seep across the pale green kimono. The swordswoman returned the sheathed blade to her waist. Every breath stung all the way down to her stomach. Shutting out the pain, she gripped the stained cloth. Silent sounds of ripping and tearing trailed in the wind. Soon enough, she had several long strips... And an improvised crop top. She wrapped the strips around the wound in several layers and pulled it tight. Calling it first aid would’ve been far too generous. Her medical skills were non-existent. She was simply trying to staunch the bleeding, plugging a leak, as it were. With one last tug of the messy knot, she decided it would hold until she could see an actual medic.

Words: 440
Total: 4546
Ryoichi Ayugai
Ryoichi Ayugai
[tracker=/t1576-ryoichi-ayugai#8716]
Name : Ryoichi Ayugai
Epithet : The Boxing Bear
Age : 22
Height : 6 feet 1 inch (1.85m)
Weight : 198 lbs (95kg)
Species : Human
Faction : Marines
Crew : Blue Fist Academy
Ship : SSS Rocky
Marine Rank : Rear Admiral
Crew Role : Grandmaster
Devil Fruit : Kuma-Kuma no Mi (Bear-Bear Fruit) Model: Polar Bear
Quality Score : A
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.15 (Rear Admiral); 0.20 (to all allies)
Crew Pool : [bel=u] 50,000,000
Balance : [bel] 485,600,807
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Ryoichi Ayugai uses:

[MT] Left Uppercut on Mite Bison
[LT] Left Hook on Mite Bison
[LT] Right Straight on Mite Bison
[UT] on Mite Bison

Mite Bison uses:

[LT] on Ryoichi Ayugai
[LT] on Ryoichi Ayugai
[UT] on Ryoichi Ayugai
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This post has in-line assessment comments.Wed Feb 10, 2021 7:14 am
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#1 'Reflex Check' : 7, 8, 11, 16

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#2 'Reflex Check' : 3, 5, 15
Ryoichi Ayugai
Ryoichi Ayugai
[tracker=/t1576-ryoichi-ayugai#8716]
Name : Ryoichi Ayugai
Epithet : The Boxing Bear
Age : 22
Height : 6 feet 1 inch (1.85m)
Weight : 198 lbs (95kg)
Species : Human
Faction : Marines
Crew : Blue Fist Academy
Ship : SSS Rocky
Marine Rank : Rear Admiral
Crew Role : Grandmaster
Devil Fruit : Kuma-Kuma no Mi (Bear-Bear Fruit) Model: Polar Bear
Quality Score : A
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.15 (Rear Admiral); 0.20 (to all allies)
Crew Pool : [bel=u] 50,000,000
Balance : [bel] 485,600,807
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This post has in-line assessment comments.Wed Feb 10, 2021 7:29 am
Like a true bear when the winter approached, the desire to go into a long slumber arrived... The same could be told to the Polar Bear that was Ryoichi... Except his desire to hit the slumber came from his intoxicated condition. It felt too comfortable to just lay there, on the ground. Nothing bad will happen if he just shut his eyes down for a bit, right? After all, he had punched his Mink friend away into a distance. Surely this was enough to end this fight once and for all.

Whoosh.... Whoosh... Whoosh...

The sound of a dashing Mink came from the direction he was sent to... If only Ryoichi wasn't as distracted with falling asleep. "You thon of a bitth! You thipped my tooth!!!" Clearly the Mink was angry... His trip into the forest was... Hurtful, or so it seems. His chipped tooth didn't really fix his speech... Nor did it make it much worse. Needless to say though, he had a plan to inflict pain... A lot of pain, and it seemed like this was also the perfect moment for it.

The Bison leaped up in the air and with a twirling motion, he crashed down with his foot first. The foot crushed down into Ryoichi's stomach. The almost completely shut eyes were now completely open. The punch was strong enough to make Ryoichi's body react to it. Such a kick in the stomach... In this situation... Where he would much more prefer to throw up. The situation looked grim. When the Bison was standing on top of the large bear, Ryoichi couldn't help but gag in the spot. Maybe it was finally time... Time, to let it all out. "What'th wrong, about tho throw up? Let me thelp you with tthat.."

The foot has risen... Another kick is on its way... All the way down into the same place as it did before... The bear's stomach. Fortunately, this was not the case this time. With just a few inches away, the kick was stopped by none other than Ryoichi himself by having moved his big paw-like hand, grabbing a hold of the Minks attacking leg. This obviously caught him with a surprise. The mink had hoped that the bear wouldn't move anymore. Slowly but surely, the bear was recollecting himself up while he held the mink from his leg. He was lifted up to Ryoichi's head height... Two predatory piercing eyes stared into that of Minks own prey eyes, growling in front of him as he did so... Was Ryoichi a real bear and not a human, this would have been a perfect moment to chow down on a bison... He had other plans though.

Swiftly, the bear swung the bison by his leg, slamming him into the ground. Even when the ground was solid, the bison bounced up a bit from the slam, almost like a heavy bouncing ball. This followed by a sequence of another set of quick... And somewhat stable and accurate punches. The black substance coated arms slammed a hook and straight punches into the Bison... Not into the locations he had hoped to land them, however... Instead of landing them in his face, he landed one into his stomach... And another one into his groin. Aint that second punch the most un-boxer-like thing ever?

His sequence of assault was finished by the very last punch, which was a fairly solid uppercut. The strength of the uppercut sent the bison flying up in the air a bit, only to then land down into the ground from the free fall, finally knocking him out cold. But... If only the uppercut only damaged the Mink. After the punch was landed, the arm that was used to punch the mink kept on traveling up... Landing into Ryoichi's own face... Which evidently, knocked Ryoichi back down onto the ground. The only saving grace of this embarrassing situation was that the bison stopped the punch enough with his body, it slowed the punch down, minimizing the damage enough to only knock down Ryoichi, and not knock out.

Words: 680
Total: 5166

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Yumiko
Yumiko
[tracker=/t1347-yumiko#7408]
Name : Yumiko
Epithet : Kamaitachi
Age : 28
Height : 5'5'' / 165 cm
Weight : 128 lbs. / 58 kg
Species : Human
Faction : Civilian
Devil Fruit : Ita Ita no Mi, Model: Kamaitachi
Bounty : [bel=r] 10,000,012
Quality Score : S
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Balance : [bel] 2,916,996,298
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This post has in-line assessment comments.Thu Feb 11, 2021 2:47 am
With one last trade of blows, the battle of bulky boxers came to an end. The ground trembled as they fell, one after another. Much to Yumiko’s immediate and immense relief, her fellow Marine emerged victorious. She knew the subtle difference in breathing between living prey, unconscious prey and... Well, no matter. Brushing any grim thoughts aside, she marched over to the winner. “Well done, Petty Officer. Thou hast brought honor to thy unit.” She offered a helping hand, seeming utterly oblivious to the difference in sheer size and weight. True enough, if he accepted the offer, he would find that her best attempt to pull him back onto his was... uh... lacking. Sure, she may have been strong for someone her size, but not that strong.

After the Commander had gotten the Petty Officer back onto his feet, she shifted her attention onto the downed soldiers. Some looked almost peaceful in their slumber... While others had puked the poison out of their systems. Her shoulders slumped with a disappointed sigh. Such a shameful display... But they were her comrades nonetheless. She took a deep breath... And let her voice echo across the area. “Aaaattention! Form up!” Quite the lungs she had for a short woman. Unfortunately the shouting got no results whatsoever. The nearest soldier simply turned to his side and mumbled something about five more minutes.

Several awkward seconds crawled by, before the inexperienced leader had to admit defeat. Red coloration started creeping onto her cheeks. Trying to keep a brave face, she cleared her throat. “Ahem, Petty Officer, tie up the two bandit leaders and watch over the prisoners.” She marched over to the boulders. “I shall clear the path.” While her voice held firm conviction, her actions didn’t quite match it. First she simply gave the nearest boulder a powerful push. Nothing happened. It slowly devolved into a strained shove... “Hnnnnngghghghgghgh!” Her sandals slipped and scraped against the dirt as she failed to move the massive rock even an inch. A trickle of red burst from between the bandages, as she strained herself too hard.

Words: 349
Total: 4895
Ryoichi Ayugai
Ryoichi Ayugai
[tracker=/t1576-ryoichi-ayugai#8716]
Name : Ryoichi Ayugai
Epithet : The Boxing Bear
Age : 22
Height : 6 feet 1 inch (1.85m)
Weight : 198 lbs (95kg)
Species : Human
Faction : Marines
Crew : Blue Fist Academy
Ship : SSS Rocky
Marine Rank : Rear Admiral
Crew Role : Grandmaster
Devil Fruit : Kuma-Kuma no Mi (Bear-Bear Fruit) Model: Polar Bear
Quality Score : A
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.15 (Rear Admiral); 0.20 (to all allies)
Crew Pool : [bel=u] 50,000,000
Balance : [bel] 485,600,807
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This post has in-line assessment comments.Thu Feb 11, 2021 7:13 am
"My nose..." he groaned while laying down on the ground... From his own punch into the face. On the bright side though, he was now wide awake again and nowhere near falling asleep like he was moments ago. His groaning stopped when he had reopened his eyes, being met by a familiar figure standing by his side with a hand reached out to him. He blinked at it and then smiled a bit, accepting it. "Commander Yumiko fstrong!" he let out a soft and hearty chuckle. Not even having an intention to laugh at her attempt, more like deep down being happy she goes to such extends. This did not go as planned though. Yumiko's hand felt so small in the big paw. He ended up having to use his own ability to help himself up more than Yumiko could help him... Which was quite understandable, given the size and weight differences.

When finally back up his feet, still leaning from side to side a bit, he slowly began to decrease in size. His Zoan full form beginning to deform back into his regular furless and small human form. Taking a look around the area, he could still see the majority of the marines either knocked out... Or somewhat conscious but somewhat otherwise occupied. That however did not stop the commander from shouting out to gain some attention to her... But the attempt was fruitless. This leads her to turn to the only 'able' man of the bunch. With the task at hand, Ryoichi was to cuff the leader and the mink Bison to have them ready for the delivery.

"Let's get yjou cuffed.." he mumbled when he was in the process of cuffing the leader that Yumiko fought with first, using the handcuffs he had grabbed from one of the somewhat more dressed and prepared marines of the bunch. Lastly, he moved over to do the same to the mink of the group. Cuffing him gave some weird sense of satisfaction to Ryoichi. He was chuckling on the spot while he was doing it. "Hahaha!!! Remember! Tshi is hte xday wherae kickbox was nowhere clokse xto beating..."

Blegh!

Right in the middle of the sentence, his fight against his own stomach came to an end... With Ryoichi being on the losing side. Thankfully for the Mink, he managed to move his head a bit away to the side when he was letting his digestive system be cleaned, with all that came out of it splashing down next to him. It had to come out eventually. Maybe it would have stayed in but the mink's ferocious kicks did not do any favors. When the disgusting sight came to an end, he stood back up straight, wiped his mouth and let out a heavy sigh of relief. "This afctually feels better now."

Looking around the place, he actually now felt like he had a better vision about everything. Vomiting everything out really does do wonders sometimes to a human body... A lot of toxins come out with it. He couldn't help but blink at Yumiko then, who was in the middle of attempting to lift the boulder up... Fruitlessly, however. With slow steps, he began to approach closer to her to help her with her task now. It seems like the man is doing a lot today in his current form. He stood next to her and began to try and push the boulder together with Yumiko... But the task was not easy. Battle had taken a toll on both of them... But it seems it did more to one than to the other.

Standing so close to Yumiko, he could easily notice the red batch forming from through the bandages. When he opened his mouth to speak, Yumiko could probably feel the mixed scent of alcohol and vomit come out of it, but hopefully, it was the message that mattered to her, and not the bad scent. "Commander Yumiko... You should takge it easy." he was trying to say with a somewhat of an encouraging tone if it came through from his now a bit less drunk of a stage. Given her current injuries, perhaps it was the right thing to do?

Words: 702
Total: 5868
Yumiko
Yumiko
[tracker=/t1347-yumiko#7408]
Name : Yumiko
Epithet : Kamaitachi
Age : 28
Height : 5'5'' / 165 cm
Weight : 128 lbs. / 58 kg
Species : Human
Faction : Civilian
Devil Fruit : Ita Ita no Mi, Model: Kamaitachi
Bounty : [bel=r] 10,000,012
Quality Score : S
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Balance : [bel] 2,916,996,298
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This post has in-line assessment comments.Fri Feb 12, 2021 10:43 am
Stubborn to a fault, Yumiko kept pushing. She closed her eyes, gritted her teeth and poured every last drop of her strength into it. Despite the growing agony stabbing daggers into her gut, she refused to quit. Against all odds, the massive boulder suddenly shifted. It rolled with a hefty rumble. Little by little, step by step, the mighty roadblock moved. With one last heave, it was forced aside. The path was open. She collapsed onto her knees, basking in the feeling of sheer accomplishment that rode the receding wave of adrenaline. ...Until she opened her eyes and saw the bear standing by her side. The puzzle pieces clicked together. Something behind those cold, green eyes died quietly.

Ah. So that’s what happened...

Fortunately -or unfortunately depending on the view- the Petty Officer provided an accidental distraction... The Commander froze in place. A hint of green painted her features. Her eye twitched and her hair stood up on the end. The foul stench practically slapped her right on the nose and dragged her out of the mental swamp. She gagged and clasped a hand over her face. Scampering onto her feet, she quickly sought some distance. A couple of steps was enough to clear the air enough. The careless movements sent another wave of pain through her body. “Guh, I-I’ll be fine.” She reassured him hastily. While the thought was very kind and all... She dearly hoped he wouldn’t open his mouth again.

Eager to move somewhere with fresher air, Yumiko forced herself to focus on the task at hand. Now that the path was open and the goal in sight, she was going to complete her mission by any means necessary. Her eyes turned to the snoozing Marines. She steadied herself with a deep exhale. “Forgive me... But this is for thy own good!” A series of painfully blunt smacks echoed into the night, accompanied by startled yelps. Within seconds, the soldiers sprung back onto their feet, more or less conscious. Red, hand-shaped marks bloomed on their cheeks. By any means necessary indeed.

With the forces... reassembled... the envoy could continue their mission. The Commander ordered the men back into formation, with the Petty Officer keeping the rear again. Ahead of them, the local base stood like a rook at the end of a chess board, a powerful piece watching over the pawns. The sleepy guard at the gate rubbed his eyes before believing them as the group approached. When the Commander explained the situation to him in brief terms, he gave her an odd look... But opened the gate nonetheless.

Upon entering the base, the messy group was greeted by a confused night watch. The explanation was, again, met with that same odd look. Nonetheless, they sent a messenger inside. Soon enough, the base commander himself stepped out to the yard. He was a great, burly fellow, standing tall and proud like a mighty oak... And his teddy bear decorated pajamas didn’t hinder the inspiring impression one bit. A man of few words, he remained silent and let actions do the talking. ...Or his personal assistant, when the situation demanded it. The mousy, bespeckled boy was practically cowering behind his leg. He was feverishly checking his stack of papers pinned to a clipboard, while mumbling something about unintelligible.

Yumiko stepped up to the mismatched duo and snapped into a salute. “Sir, Commander Yumiko reporting, sir!” She directed a dramatic, sweeping gesture at the captured criminals. “This one has brought the prisoners as per thy orders! We also encountered and captured the bandits thou warned us about!” As the decorum demanded, she slipped back into her most formal speech pattern. It was practically a reflex at this point.

The ensuing silence was deafening.

After a long, painfully awkward pause, the base commander blurted out a baffled question. “...What?” Equally puzzled, Yumiko stared back. “What?” The silence threatened to return, prompting the base commander to clarify. “Haven’t sent any letters.” In turn, the samurai reached into the folds of her kimono and dug out the proof she held. Anyone paying even minimal attention could see that the paper had been written in crayon. “But... It has thy signature.” The base commander and his assistant stared at the so-called letter... Then back to the samurai... And finally shared that same odd look that had been passed around twice now already. Somewhere, a cricket chirped rather loudly.

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Ryoichi Ayugai
Ryoichi Ayugai
[tracker=/t1576-ryoichi-ayugai#8716]
Name : Ryoichi Ayugai
Epithet : The Boxing Bear
Age : 22
Height : 6 feet 1 inch (1.85m)
Weight : 198 lbs (95kg)
Species : Human
Faction : Marines
Crew : Blue Fist Academy
Ship : SSS Rocky
Marine Rank : Rear Admiral
Crew Role : Grandmaster
Devil Fruit : Kuma-Kuma no Mi (Bear-Bear Fruit) Model: Polar Bear
Quality Score : A
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.15 (Rear Admiral); 0.20 (to all allies)
Crew Pool : [bel=u] 50,000,000
Balance : [bel] 485,600,807
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This post has in-line assessment comments.Fri Feb 12, 2021 1:14 pm
"But, it will only get worse eif you won't take it easy..." he tried to get through to Yumiko, hoping to have her ease up a bit, but that was not the case. Yumiko kept on going, soldiering through to continue with her task, no matter her current medical situation. He couldn't help but sigh softly and then wave it off. Luckily, the hardest part, for now, was done. The boulder had been removed from their path and the road was finally clear.

When he moved over to the 'Handsome' man and the bison mink, he couldn't help but chuckle quite loudly at Yumiko smacking each and every one of them up from the ground. It's always funny to see a well-deserved misfortune of his own comrades. To his surprise, every marine got up to their feet, most now feeling fresher than before. Clearly, they had had some time to sleep off their intoxication. But... No time to admire or chat about... Back to duty, they all went, with Ryoichi covering the rear again. One two, one two, one two, the marching went on and on... All the way to the local base, where the prisoners were supposed to be delivered.

Upon arrival, they were greeted by a rather surprised bunch of guards... And later, the same surprised chief of the base. "Look look, a flan of bear!" he chuckled at the PJ's that had the small brown bears on it... This was met by a stern gaze from the chief, which leads Ryoichi immediately into saluting properly... Now standing fairly stable already, not like a palm tree in strong wind. The same was followed by the rest of the marines. What followed next was a conversation between their higher up and the chief of base... And oh boy. Quite some interesting things were uncovered in that chat.

His and almost every marine in the present faces were full of confusion when they saw the crayon written letter that Yumiko was exposing to the chief. Did... Did she really... FALL FOR THIS THING?! That same thought went through quite a few of marines heads, Ryoichi included. Even the chief of base was confused about this, his underlings included. The cricket chirping in the silence was broken by one of the marines raising their voice to throw out their resentment of the situation into the public. "What do you mean what?! Are we supposed to be here or not?! What is going on?!", this was followed by similar questions from others. Ryoichi on the other hand stayed silent. While curious about what is happening, he was looking forward to finding out about this whole situation. An unpopular opinion amongst other marines in the present but... He actually seemed to have enjoyed this task despite it being thrown in at the time when he was probably supposed to enjoy his free time. It was now time to see what Yumiko had to say about this whole situation, and what will happen to the prisoners.

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Yumiko
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This post has in-line assessment comments.Sat Feb 13, 2021 9:28 am
“I-it’s fake!”

Unable to bear the weight of the awkward atmosphere any longer, the mousy assistant suddenly blurted out the painful truth. He adjusted his large glasses and shakily pointed at the so-called letter. “T-the paper doesn’t have the official Marine insignia.” Yes, because that was obviously the first clue. “A-also... It’s... clearly written in crayon... S-so...” He had been hoping he didn’t actually have to say that last part, but it just slipped out anyway. The reactions of the tired men ranged from stifled snickers to annoyed groans. Only the stern base commander remained silent, seemingly unmoved by this shocking revelation.

Rosy coloration crept across Yumiko’s features. It slowly grew in intensity until she resembled a ripe tomato. Burning shame flared inside her chest. Her eyes flitted between the paper and the boy, unable to tell which one to believe. The letter had seemed so genuine... As soon as the sheer shock released its hold, she dropped down to her knees. “T-this one apologizes for-!” However, her loud apology was cut short by a single word that came down with the weight of a judge’s gavel.

“Enough.”

The base commander faced his guards and aimed a sharp point at the chained bandits. “Men, lock up the prisoners.” While his soldiers went to work without a word of protest, he swept his gaze over the remaining ten men and their leader. “We will take it from here. The rest of you are dismissed.” As he turned his back to them, one more thing was left hanging in the air. “Thank you for dealing with the bandits.” With that, he marched back inside and the mousy assistant scurried after him. He was a fair man... If a little grumpy when his beauty sleep was interrupted.

Yumiko got back up quietly. She dusted her clothes carefully, trying to gather her composure. Her eyes had lost their stern edge as they shifted towards the troops under her command. For the first time tonight, her voice wavered weakly. “A-attention, men... Return to...” However, much to her dismay, she found the men already leaving. One of them glanced over his shoulder and helpfully clarified the situation to her. “Up yours, Commander. We were already dismissed.” His friends nodded in agreement and one even muttered bitterly. “Just you wait until the Rear Admiral hears about this...” Needless to say, there would be nine angry complaints filed tomorrow.

Or perhaps even ten...

Finally the disgraced leader’s stare stopped on Ryoichi. Her lips parted, but no words came out. She lowered her head, dropping her defeated gaze to the dirt. Quiet winds started whirling around her, tugging at her clothing. “I... am returning to the ship...” It was a mere murmur, barely audible to regular ears. For her, there was nothing more left than to lick her wounds. “Enjoy thy night, Petty Officer.” The forming whirlwind grasped her large sleeves and tossed her like a kite high into the sky. Her silhouette soon vanished into the distance, leaving the young man with only the moon to keep him company. What he chose to do with the rest of his night out was up to him.

Tomorrow would be a new day... with a new set of problems.

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A sigh of relief escaped from Ryoichi as the base accepted the prisoners and took them off of their hands, ending their duty right there. But not before the whole thing had been clarified fully to the whole group of marines. The mission indeed was unofficial, which Commander Yumiko had made official mistakingly. At the end of this whole mess, the commander couldn't help but apologize to the base for disturbing their peaceful night, and the same went for the marines who had accompanied her. Truly, a mess this whole mission was... But perhaps, this is for the best? A ship is already a small place, this base surely is a better-suited place for the prisoners. This also would highly likely assure that the ship will not come under attack by anyone who seeks something very valuable or to free someone.

Even when Yumiko was apologizing to Ryoichi and to every other marine, there was quite a large number who simply could not let this slide. A fair bit of them had an official free night to do what they want... And it was ruined! Ryoichi on the other hand though stayed silent about it. He quite frankly did not have too much resentment from his side. This could be the booze still intoxicating him enough not to feel any anger but only happiness? Or it could be that he genuinely didn't care enough to be angry about it and actually enjoyed the duty? Perhaps out of respect towards his commander, even if he has not gotten to know her well enough. Who knows... Nevertheless, what a story this whole ordeal is to tell about in the future.

When the rest of the men left the scene, Ryoichi stayed behind for a bit. He looked at Yumiko... It was clear that he wanted to say something to her, but before he could even open his mouth, Yumiko had decided to leave as well, dismissing Ryoichi from the active duty. Before leaving though, he heard a soft murmur, thanks to his more enhanced hearing. This was something interesting but nothing too surprising to Ryoichi. He could feel a hint of sadness and disappointment in Yumiko's tone. It was interesting to him because as much as he has known her, he has never seen her express too much emotion, not in open public at least... But why it was nothing surprising is because he knows that Yumiko is still at the end of the day a human and what she feels is very humane.

This left Ryoichi a bit bitter mouthed on his spot. He looked up in the sky towards the shining moon, letting out a soft sigh. There surely was something Ryoichi maybe could have done to cheer her up, but it was already too late... Perhaps he will get his chance next time to talk to her. A comrade cannot be left in a troubled state like this, but he knew this though that she needs her wounds tended, and probably some alone time for herself to think about things without anyone disturbing her.

The night was still young though, and it hit Ryoichi then. He still has to pay for his every drink at the bar! With a fairly quick and now rather stable walking style, he decided to return to the town to do just that... And perhaps, even have one more beer or two... To celebrate a job well done on an unofficial mission! Surely there can be nothing wrong happening this time, right?

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One thing I'm enjoying with Yumiko's characterization is definitely the contrast between her values and those of the unit. Her naivety when it comes to the outside world's 'normal' social cues, makes you sympathize with her.  
The fight scenes from both of you were epic! I really do enjoy reading a good ol' throw-down, I also loved that Bruce had his own distinct style of fighting and the ambush set-up with the bandits.

Notable Moment wrote:An awkward pause was left lingering in the air, until the bandit leader finally broke it. “Crikey! Lookit sheila jabbering all iffy.” His big bison buddy nodded in agreement. “Yeah and thhe altho talkth funny.” The furry fighter rolled his shoulders and stepped closer. “Want me to knock her out too?” However, the leader was quick to wave him off. “Nah, mate. I got this one. Ya go and help the blokes with them chains.” He pointed at the prisoners.
The irony, since all three of them speak oddly.


Favorite Fight Scene Bit wrote:"Yumiko vanished. Within the same heartbeat, her blurry form reappeared behind the charging man. All the action simply stopped. It felt like time stretched during those few, precious seconds. She slowly sheathed her blade, letting the steel whisper gently as it slid against the cover. A dark red splotch appeared on her kimono. The ruined cloth fell slightly aside as a splatter of crimson painted the ground at her feet. She faltered, almost keeling over. Almost... Yet she kept sliding the sword, completing the careful, practiced motion with a quiet..."

The bit at the end with her trying to escape the scent, even though being injured was hilarious. Along with the funny bits in the dialogue exchanges, the cherry on top all of this was the ending - the note being written in crayon, I could've just imagined the shame in Yumiko's heart.




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Exert From Thread wrote:"Hey hey come on... *burp* I am but a petty officer here... It's beyond my paygrade *burp*"
following with a chuckle from the marines themselves. It was clearly a joke on their part. When another drink was ordered by Ryoichi, he couldn't help but overhear a small chatter from the marines next to him. "You know what? Let's send the bill over to Commander Yumiko!" following with a burst of loud laughter... Ryoichi couldn't help but shake his head a bit at that. Seems like some really don't like Yumiko that much...
Assuming it was just a joke and it wouldn't happen, he returned back to his drinking. Jugging down yet another beer. The relaxation party was in full motion!

This was a great setup for the opening scenes to follow, shows that even marines can kick back too.

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Exert from Thread wrote:Ryoichi spat out the saliva mixed with blood after he had received a hit from the Bison. The same angered gaze remained set on the Bison who was recollecting himself up from the ground. After having wiped the dust off of himself from the stumble, the mink looked at Ryoichi. "Tho, you thtill got thome fithght left in you.". In an attempt to intimidate his opponent, the Bison threw a couple of swift punches into the air followed by the same amount of kicks... Seems like they were more of kickbox moves than anything else. "A fighter theeth, you are a boxer... Exthept...

Would've loved a bit more banter at this stage between the two, an exchange would really accentuated Ryo's personality a bit more, albeit, he was drunk.

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Favorite Moment wrote: 'Increasingly his body began to grow larger and larger, his body began to deform. White fur began to grow over his skin along with sharp claws from his hands and feet. Moments later... Stomp! Stomp! The ground shook a bit with each step he took until he stopped. "B...B...Bison man..." the prisoners looked up, trembling on their spot. Bison who had assumed the trembling of the ground was nothing but a small earthquake was not too fazed about... Perhaps he should have been.'
+ I loved how Ryoichi felt guilty about how the other marines were treating Yumiko, and switch in perspective, though it might've been drunken hindsight lolol That she also has feelings too and isn't some heartless work-horse.
+ At times however, though, in re-reading, it seems Ryoichi isn't much of a talker, in the cooler moments, like in his Panda form, it'd be cool introduce some dialogue that shows that 'hard-boil' side of him.




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