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Suna Suna no mi
Thu Sep 03, 2020 2:01 pm
Suna Suna no mi
Devil Fruit: Suna Suna no mi
Devil Fruit Type: Logia
Devil Fruit Appearance: It's a bright yellow with strange black zig zags coursing along its body like waves.
Devil Fruit Description: The Suna Suna no mi allows the control, create, and become sand. This fruit in the canon story has created sand storms, create giant blades made of sand, and drain the moisture out of living and non living beings(except metal). In addition to this, the fruit seems to make sand an extension of him/herself allowing the user to become more powerful and sense anything touching the connect sand under the user's control.
Fighting Style: Desert scourge
Weapon Utilization: no
Description: The fighting style ultimately revolves around the creation and manipulation of sand from his body and from the environment. Since it is the early stages of Steins career with the fruit, he is not capable fully realizing his fruit's full potential. Although the main tenants of his fighting style are creating constructs made of sand, absorbing an objects moisture to through them off balance, and firing sand like a weapon. Along with using the sand as a tool for infiltration since he can sense movements at this level, when someone or someone passes by sand.
Toggled and Passive Abilities:
Toggle 1: The more the merrier
Stein begins to grind non-metallic material in order create more sand. This results in a 20 percent attack buff and a -20% reflex debuff.
Techniques
(The following techniques can either be all devil fruit techniques, or a combination of devil fruit, and natural/weapon techniques)
- Light Techniques:
Scourge's blessing
Type:Flat hybrid
Cooldown: 6
Duration: 2
Buffs: None
Debuffs: Debuffs attack and reflex by 5%
Flavour: Stein's arm turns into stream of sand that can lash out horizontally or vertically to bludgeon a target and sap some of their moisture to result in a loss of strength and reflex.
Sand strike
Type: Flat
Cooldown:2
Duration: n/a
Buffs: n/a
Debuffs: n/a
Flavour: Stein punches or kicks someone and adds a stream of sand that rushes from the point of impact to bludgeon his target.
Scourge's claw
Type: Flat
Cooldown: 2
Duration:n/a
Buffs:n/a
Debuffs:n/a
Flavour: Stein's arm turns into sand and it loosely resembles a claw. Everything hit by his attack might be cut like a blade would.
Drought
Type: Stat morph
Cooldown: 6
Duration: 2
Buffs: n/a
Debuffs: -10% strength of the target
Flavour: Stein grabs his target's limb and saps its strength by siphoning their moisture.77
- Medium Techniques:
Scourge's grasp
Type: Flat
Cooldown: 4
Duration:n/a
Buffs: n/a
Debuffs: n/a
Flavour: A limb made of sand bursts from stein's arm and pursues a target to cause damage by grasping it.
desert spike
Type: Flat
Cooldown: 4
Duration:n/a
Buffs: n/a
Debuffs: n/a
flavor:Just a 4 foot spike made of sand that comes from stein or the environment if there's sand already.
- Heavy Techniques:
[b]Tomb of the scourge
Type: Flat
Cooldown:6
Duration:n/a
Buffs: n/a
Debuffs: n/a
Flavour: an enormous amount of sand surges from stein and envelopes a target until it buries them in sand. Once enveloped, the target is squeezed to cause damage.
Scourge's wrath
Type: Flat
Cooldown: 6
Duration:n/a
Buffs: n/a
Debuffs:n/a
Flavour: a pressurized stream of sand that is 6 feet long shoots out in front of stein to inflict heavy slashing damage.
sand spikes
Type: Flat
Cooldown: 6
Duration:n/a
Buffs: n/a
Debuffs:n/a
Flavour: lots of sand spikes(10) that are 4 feet long shoot out from steins body to impale a target.
- AoE Techniques:
Might of the scourge
Type: Flat
Cooldown: 8
Duration: n/a
Buffs:
Debuffs:
Flavour:a 20 foot sand storm surrounds stein and rages around stein.
valley of sand spikes
Type: Flat
Cooldown: 8
Duration: n/a
Buffs: n/a
Debuffs:n/a
Flavour:a small 20 foot area in front of stein(a cone) becomes engulfed in sand rushes from him. They will turn into 6 foot spikes that shoot from the ground
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Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species/Tribe : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
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Re: Suna Suna no mi
Fri Sep 04, 2020 2:44 pm
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Stein wrote:Suna Suna no mi
Devil Fruit: Suna Suna no mi
Devil Fruit Type: Logia
Devil Fruit Appearance: It's a bright yellow with strange black zig zags coursing along its body like waves.
Devil Fruit Description: The Suna Suna no mi allows the control, create, and become sand. This fruit in the canon story has created sand storms, create giant blades made of sand, and drain the moisture out of living and non living beings(except metal). In addition to this, the fruit seems to make sand an extension of him/herself allowing the user to become more powerful and sense anything touching the connect sand under the user's control.
Fighting Style: Desert scourge
Weapon Utilization: no
Description: The fighting style ultimately revolves around the creation and manipulation of sand from his body and from the environment. Since it is the early stages of Steins career with the fruit, he is not capable fully realizing his fruit's full potential. Although the main tenants of his fighting style are creating constructs made of sand, absorbing an objects moisture to through them off balance, and firing sand like a weapon. Along with using the sand as a tool for infiltration since he can sense movements at this level, when someone or someone passes by sand.
Toggled and Passive Abilities:
Toggle 1: Basic flight
Stein's legs turn into sand which allows him to fly. -20% ref [ Flight can be a "passive" ability in that it doesn't need to give you a debuff. And, if you still wanna make it a Toggle, then, please balance the debuff with an equivalent buff to another stat. ]
Toggle 2: Sand screen
Stein creates a particles of sand that linger within a 20 foot radius, that alert him of movement. +20% ref -20% def [ I actually think you have your toggles backwards. I would suggest making Basic Flight a toggle that gives you +20% RX and -20% DEF (flight increases your movement capacity but also makes you vulnerable to attacks from more angles). And for Sand Screen, I'd actually suggest making that a toggle with +20% DEF and -20% RX as you could say it impedes any attacks coming your way but also slows your own movements. ]
Techniques
(The following techniques can either be all devil fruit techniques, or a combination of devil fruit, and natural/weapon techniques)
- Light Techniques:
Scourge's blessing
Type:Flat hybrid
Cooldown: 2 [ Cooldowns for LT Flat Hybrids is 6 ]
Duration: 2
Buffs: None
Debuffs: Debuffs strength and reflex by 5% [ We don't have a strength stat. ]
Flavour: Stein's arm turns into stream of sand that can lash out horizontally or vertically to bludgeon a target and sap some of their moisture to result in a loss of strength and reflex.
Sand strike
Type: Flat
Cooldown:2
Duration: n/a
Buffs: n/a
Debuffs: n/a
Flavour: Stein punches or kicks someone and adds a stream of sand that rushes from the point of impact to bludgeon his target.
Scourge's claw
Type: Flat
Cooldown: 2
Duration:n/a
Buffs:n/a
Debuffs:n/a
Flavour: Stein's arm turns into sand and it loosely resembles a claw. Everything hit by his attack might be cut like a blade would.
Drought
Type: Stat morph
Cooldown: 6
Duration: 2
Buffs: n/a
Debuffs: -10% strength of the target
Flavour: Stein grabs his target's limb and saps its strength by siphoning their moisture.77
- Medium Techniques:
Scourge's grasp
Type: Flat
Cooldown: 4
Duration:n/a
Buffs: n/a
Debuffs: n/a
Flavour: A limb made of sand bursts from stein's arm and pursues a target to cause damage by grasping it.
desert spike
Type: Flat
Cooldown: 4
Duration:n/a
Buffs: n/a
Debuffs: n/a
flavor:Just a 4 foot spike made of sand that comes from stein or the environment if there's sand already.
- Heavy Techniques:
[b]Tomb of the scourge
Type: Flat
Cooldown:6
Duration:n/a
Buffs: n/a
Debuffs: n/a
Flavour: an enormous amount of sand surges from stein and envelopes a target until it buries them in sand. Once enveloped, the target is squeezed to cause damage.
Scourge's wrath
Type: Flat
Cooldown: 6
Duration:n/a
Buffs: n/a
Debuffs:n/a
Flavour: a pressurized stream of sand that is 6 feet long shoots out in front of stein to inflict heavy slashing damage.
sand spikes
Type: Flat
Cooldown: 6
Duration:n/a
Buffs: n/a
Debuffs:n/a
Flavour: lots of sand spikes(10) that are 4 feet long shoot out from steins body to impale a target.
- AoE Techniques:
Might of the scourge
Type: Flat
Cooldown: 8
Duration: n/a
Buffs:
Debuffs:
Flavour:a 20 foot sand storm surrounds stein and rages around stein.
valley of sand spikes
Type: Flat
Cooldown: 8
Duration: n/a
Buffs: n/a
Debuffs:n/a
Flavour:a small 20 foot area in front of stein(a cone) becomes engulfed in sand rushes from him. They will turn into 6 foot spikes that shoot from the ground
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- Gray
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species/Tribe : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
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Posts : 3991
Re: Suna Suna no mi
Fri Sep 04, 2020 7:16 pm
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Stein wrote:Suna Suna no mi
Devil Fruit: Suna Suna no mi
Devil Fruit Type: Logia
Devil Fruit Appearance: It's a bright yellow with strange black zig zags coursing along its body like waves.
Devil Fruit Description: The Suna Suna no mi allows the control, create, and become sand. This fruit in the canon story has created sand storms, create giant blades made of sand, and drain the moisture out of living and non living beings(except metal). In addition to this, the fruit seems to make sand an extension of him/herself allowing the user to become more powerful and sense anything touching the connect sand under the user's control.
Fighting Style: Desert scourge
Weapon Utilization: no
Description: The fighting style ultimately revolves around the creation and manipulation of sand from his body and from the environment. Since it is the early stages of Steins career with the fruit, he is not capable fully realizing his fruit's full potential. Although the main tenants of his fighting style are creating constructs made of sand, absorbing an objects moisture to through them off balance, and firing sand like a weapon. Along with using the sand as a tool for infiltration since he can sense movements at this level, when someone or someone passes by sand.
Toggled and Passive Abilities:
Toggle 1: The more the merrier
Stein begins to grind non-metallic material in order create more sand. This results in a 20 percent attack buff and a -20% reflex debuff.
Techniques
(The following techniques can either be all devil fruit techniques, or a combination of devil fruit, and natural/weapon techniques)
- Light Techniques:
Scourge's blessing
Type:Flat hybrid
Cooldown: 6
Duration: 2
Buffs: None
Debuffs: Debuffs attack and reflex by 5%
Flavour: Stein's arm turns into stream of sand that can lash out horizontally or vertically to bludgeon a target and sap some of their moisture to result in a loss of strength and reflex.
Sand strike
Type: Flat
Cooldown:2
Duration: n/a
Buffs: n/a
Debuffs: n/a
Flavour: Stein punches or kicks someone and adds a stream of sand that rushes from the point of impact to bludgeon his target.
Scourge's claw
Type: Flat
Cooldown: 2
Duration:n/a
Buffs:n/a
Debuffs:n/a
Flavour: Stein's arm turns into sand and it loosely resembles a claw. Everything hit by his attack might be cut like a blade would.
Drought
Type: Stat morph
Cooldown: 6
Duration: 2
Buffs: n/a
Debuffs: -10% strength of the target
Flavour: Stein grabs his target's limb and saps its strength by siphoning their moisture.77
- Medium Techniques:
Scourge's grasp
Type: Flat
Cooldown: 4
Duration:n/a
Buffs: n/a
Debuffs: n/a
Flavour: A limb made of sand bursts from stein's arm and pursues a target to cause damage by grasping it.
desert spike
Type: Flat
Cooldown: 4
Duration:n/a
Buffs: n/a
Debuffs: n/a
flavor:Just a 4 foot spike made of sand that comes from stein or the environment if there's sand already.
- Heavy Techniques:
[b]Tomb of the scourge
Type: Flat
Cooldown:6
Duration:n/a
Buffs: n/a
Debuffs: n/a
Flavour: an enormous amount of sand surges from stein and envelopes a target until it buries them in sand. Once enveloped, the target is squeezed to cause damage.
Scourge's wrath
Type: Flat
Cooldown: 6
Duration:n/a
Buffs: n/a
Debuffs:n/a
Flavour: a pressurized stream of sand that is 6 feet long shoots out in front of stein to inflict heavy slashing damage.
sand spikes
Type: Flat
Cooldown: 6
Duration:n/a
Buffs: n/a
Debuffs:n/a
Flavour: lots of sand spikes(10) that are 4 feet long shoot out from steins body to impale a target.
- AoE Techniques:
Might of the scourge
Type: Flat
Cooldown: 8
Duration: n/a
Buffs:
Debuffs:
Flavour:a 20 foot sand storm surrounds stein and rages around stein.
valley of sand spikes
Type: Flat
Cooldown: 8
Duration: n/a
Buffs: n/a
Debuffs:n/a
Flavour:a small 20 foot area in front of stein(a cone) becomes engulfed in sand rushes from him. They will turn into 6 foot spikes that shoot from the ground
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