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Pika Pika no Mi
Tue Jul 12, 2016 5:11 amPika Pika no Mi
Devil Fruit: Pika Pika no Mi
Devil Fruit Type: Logia
Devil Fruit Appearance: What does your fruit look like?
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Devil Fruit Passive Abilities:
- Man of Light: Can passively give off light in a 5 feet radius.
- Shine: He can't be blinded by light, and light also has no effect on him.(An example would be that be can look directly at the sun and not be affected.)
- Bypass: Physical hits such as swords and fists go right through him. One thing that may hit him is another Logia or Bushoshoku haki of any level.
Techniques
- Light Attacks:
Light Attack
Technique Level: 1
Technique Range: 10m
Technique Cooldown: 3 posts
Technique Description: He puts his hand in a pistol formation, and from his index finger a small ball of light come out. This ball is about the size of a bullet.
Shine Bright
Technique Level: 1
Technique Range: 10m
Technique Cooldown: 2
Technique Description: From either hand, a very bright light shines. And close range, this light is bright enough to blind someone, and from 3m+ the light is bright enough to cover your eyes. After 10m it's noticeable but has no effect.
Light Double
Technique Level: 5
Technique Range: 35m
Technique Cooldown: 4
Technique Description: The user uses their power to make a short light burst, burning their image into a person's eye to make it seem as if there were two of themselves. Anyone within the range can see this double.
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Light Show
Technique Level: 1
Technique Range: Self
Technique Cooldown: 5 posts
Technique Description: From his body, all his limbs will shine brighter than the rest of his body. Most of his power is poured into his limbs allowing him to deal more damage and move faster.
Light Fracture
Technique Level: 10
Technique Range: 1km
Technique Cooldown: 7 posts
Technique Description: It starts of with firing one beam of light, which then splits into 5 smaller beams each dealing 1/5 of the damage.
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- Heavy Attacks:
Light Snow
Technique Level: 1
Technique Range: 8m
Technique Cooldown: 10 posts
Technique Description: Zeno fires a giant ball of light in the sky, and when it lands it bounces. It can bounce 3 times.
Redirect
Technique Level: 10
Technique Range: 85m
Technique Cooldown: 13 posts
Technique Description: By absorbing all nearby light, he's able to fire it out as a laser from both hands.
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God Mode
Technique Level: 1
Technique Range: 10m
Technique Radius: 12.5m
Technique Cooldown: 22
Technique Description: The user brightens themselves to 100%. This light is so bright that anyone within 10m is blinded while it's active, and the user can't see themselves either. This technique uses up a lot of energy, thus the user can't move while using this technique.
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Castor O. Nox
[tracker=/t980-castor-o-nox#4771]
Name : Castor O. Nox
Epithet : Sanpaku | The Azure Pheasant | Duke Of Lvneel | Saint Nox
Age : 25
Height : 5'9"
Weight : 175lbs
Species/Tribe : Three-Eye Tribesman
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Blockbuster
Alliance : -
Crew : Nox Pirates
Ship : The Wailing Calamity
Crew Role : Captain | Navigator | Book Collector | Pride Sin
Devil Fruit : Goro Goro no Mi
Bounty : [ber=r] 620,000,000
Quality Score : S
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (To all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.42 (Turf); +0.10 (Blockbuster); +0.20 (To all allies)
Shop Discount : -20%
Crew Pool : [bel=u] 96,000,000
Balance : [bel] 2,470,815,020
[[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[dreamsneverdie]]
[[bookworm]][[untouchable]][[childofdestiny]]
[[punchoutguru]][[berryprinter]]
Turf : [turf="/t296-turf-details-lvneel#1110"]Lvneel[/turf] [turf="/t309-turf-details-st-poplar#1124"]St. Poplar[/turf]
Posts : 795
Re: Pika Pika no Mi
Wed Jul 13, 2016 3:43 pmTagged WIP until application's completion, just pop me a message when your finished.
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- Castor O. Nox
[tracker=/t980-castor-o-nox#4771]
Name : Castor O. Nox
Epithet : Sanpaku | The Azure Pheasant | Duke Of Lvneel | Saint Nox
Age : 25
Height : 5'9"
Weight : 175lbs
Species/Tribe : Three-Eye Tribesman
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Blockbuster
Alliance : -
Crew : Nox Pirates
Ship : The Wailing Calamity
Crew Role : Captain | Navigator | Book Collector | Pride Sin
Devil Fruit : Goro Goro no Mi
Bounty : [ber=r] 620,000,000
Quality Score : S
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (To all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.42 (Turf); +0.10 (Blockbuster); +0.20 (To all allies)
Shop Discount : -20%
Crew Pool : [bel=u] 96,000,000
Balance : [bel] 2,470,815,020
[[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[dreamsneverdie]]
[[bookworm]][[untouchable]][[childofdestiny]]
[[punchoutguru]][[berryprinter]]
Turf : [turf="/t296-turf-details-lvneel#1110"]Lvneel[/turf] [turf="/t309-turf-details-st-poplar#1124"]St. Poplar[/turf]
Posts : 795
Re: Pika Pika no Mi
Thu Jul 14, 2016 10:57 pmZero wrote:Pika Pika no Mi
Devil Fruit: Pika Pika no Mi
Devil Fruit Type: Logia
Devil Fruit Appearance: What does your fruit look like? (At least 150-250 words.)
Devil Fruit Description: Give full description of what the devil fruit does. (At least 250 words)
Devil Fruit Passive Abilities:
- Man of Light: Can passively give off light in a 5 feet radius.
- Shine: He can't be blinded by light, and light also has no effect on him.(An example would be that be can look directly at the sun and not be affected.) (My only problem with this passive is, due note, that this wouldn't apply in combat instances where opponent's who have superior or winning Defense Versus Attack(vice versa) stats than yourself. Looking at the sun is fine and negation of blinding skills involving light is fine. If you want some kind of defense advantage towards attacks involving light, I'll say you can gain an additional 5-10% in defense applied only when in combat instances.
- Bypass: Physical hits such as swords and fists go right through him. One thing that may hit him is another Logia or Bushoshoku haki of any level. (Now, Logia's actually don't gain intangibility, it's a skill they work on developing, so if you make this a skill but just letting simple skills pass through at will, can't approve that. What I can do for you, is projectiles and weapons that attempt to pass through you, when you have a 80% Reflex advantage over the opponents and in non combat situations, such as buildings or objects coming towards you unrelated to any form attack, non combat, you can phase through. However, separate these passives separately. One for non combat situations with objects and another for combat situations involving those weaker than you in Reflexes. Anything less than that percentile can be approved via skills.
Techniques
- Light Attacks:
Light Attack
Technique Level: 1
Technique Range: 10m
Technique Cooldown: 3 posts
Technique Description: He puts his hand in a pistol formation, and from his index finger a small ball of light come out. This ball is about the size of a bullet.
Shine Bright
Technique Level: 1
Technique Range: 10m
Technique Cooldown: 2 (3 Posts)
Technique Description: From either hand, a very bright light shines. And close range, this light is bright enough to blind someone, and from 3m+ the light is bright enough to cover your eyes. After 10m it's noticeable but has no effect. (Light attacks blinding, I'll say impair someone's vision, blind would imply they wouldn't be able to see at all, they would, it'd just damage their vision, making it blurry.)
Light Double
Technique Level: 5
Technique Range: 35m
Technique Cooldown: 4
Technique Description: The user uses their power to make a short light burst, burning their image into a person's eye to make it seem as if there were two of themselves. Anyone within the range can see this double. (Someone with higher willpower than you, like 50% more would be able to see through this)
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- Medium Attacks:
Light Show
Technique Level: 1
Technique Range: Self
Technique Cooldown: 5 posts
Technique Description: From his body, all his limbs will shine brighter than the rest of his body. Most of his power is poured into his limbs allowing him to deal more damage and move faster. (How much more damage? 10% More? and what's the debuff corresponding, for how much you go up by, you must suffer a debuff either during or after this skills application. Also, how long do these bonuses last? Also, I don't get how shining brighter will increase the attack power? Maybe what you mean that by warping using the force of speed generated by travelling light, the attack power increases. )
Light Fracture
Technique Level: 10
Technique Range: 1km (1km o___o nah. Max is 100 M)
Technique Cooldown: 7 posts
Technique Description: It starts of with firing one beam of light, which then splits into 5 smaller beams each dealing 1/5 of the damage.
One beam splitting into 5 smaller beams is fine, no need for the damage reduction tbh. It's just excessive.
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- Heavy Attacks:
Light Snow
Technique Level: 1
Technique Range: 8m
Technique Cooldown: 10 posts
Technique Description: Zeno fires a giant ball of light in the sky, and when it lands it bounces. It can bounce 3 times.
How big is this ball and how far can it travel before the light starts to disburse. Take into consideration that your max range is 10M.
Redirect
Technique Level: 10
Technique Range: 85m
Technique Cooldown: 13 posts
Technique Description: By absorbing all nearby light, he's able to fire it out as a laser from both hands.
Okay, how big are these laser beams? other than that, it's gucci.
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God Mode
Technique Level: 1
Technique Range: 10m
Technique Radius: 12.5m (2.5 M)
Technique Cooldown: 22
Technique Description: The user brightens themselves to 100%. This light is so bright that anyone within 10m(2.5) is blinded while it's active, and the user can't see themselves either.(wouldn't this be against your passive, not being able to see himself, since he is light? Take this part out, it contradicts your passive.) This technique uses up a lot of energy, thus the user can't move while using this technique.
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