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Bancho Kendo
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Fighting Style: Bancho Kendo – Wrath of the Pompadour
Weapon Utilization: Wooden Sword / Bat / Kanabo
Description: Bancho Kendo is a freeform fighting style that was taught to Kazu by his master, loosely based on the traditional Japanese art of which the name is derived. Using a wooden word, or similarly shaped weapon, the user aims to cripple and crush the enemy instead of slashing them to bits.
Combining parts of capoeira, kenjutsu, hapkido, and jui jitsu, the user’s entire body is a weapon, allowing for imagination and creativity to vary the style from user to user. With the seemingly erratic and unorthodox movements, along with the goal of beating their opponent into submission as the common factors.
The style was originally developed as one verse one fighting style, calling its ability to fight multiple opponents at once into question.
Toggled and Passive Abilities:
“Rrrryyahhh*” – Not to be confused with a simple “Rrryyahh”, it’s a simple but effective battle cry that one uses to raise their intensity prior to rushing headlong into battle without thinking. +20% Willpower -20% Defense Toggled
”(Insert Screaming enemies name angrily)* – Red with anger, the user flexes their muscles while screaming out their enemies name and pointing their weapon at them in a dramatic fashion. +20% Attack -20% Defense. Toggled
Techniques
(The following techniques can either be all devil fruit techniques, or a combination of devil fruit, and natural/weapon techniques)
Weapon Utilization: Wooden Sword / Bat / Kanabo
Description: Bancho Kendo is a freeform fighting style that was taught to Kazu by his master, loosely based on the traditional Japanese art of which the name is derived. Using a wooden word, or similarly shaped weapon, the user aims to cripple and crush the enemy instead of slashing them to bits.
Combining parts of capoeira, kenjutsu, hapkido, and jui jitsu, the user’s entire body is a weapon, allowing for imagination and creativity to vary the style from user to user. With the seemingly erratic and unorthodox movements, along with the goal of beating their opponent into submission as the common factors.
The style was originally developed as one verse one fighting style, calling its ability to fight multiple opponents at once into question.
Toggled and Passive Abilities:
“Rrrryyahhh*” – Not to be confused with a simple “Rrryyahh”, it’s a simple but effective battle cry that one uses to raise their intensity prior to rushing headlong into battle without thinking. +20% Willpower -20% Defense Toggled
”(Insert Screaming enemies name angrily)* – Red with anger, the user flexes their muscles while screaming out their enemies name and pointing their weapon at them in a dramatic fashion. +20% Attack -20% Defense. Toggled
Techniques
(The following techniques can either be all devil fruit techniques, or a combination of devil fruit, and natural/weapon techniques)
- Light Techniques:
Heavy Swing
Technique Type: Flat
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: Contact
Cooldown: 1
Duration: N/A
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs: N/A
Description: A seemingly simple swing of the weapon, the user pulls a feint and drops the weapon to their second hand, allowing for a surprise attack aimed to cripple the target.
Pride of the Delinquents
Technique Type: Stat Morph
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: Contact
Cooldown: 4
Duration: 2
Buffs: +25% Willpower
Debuffs: N/a
Description: By displaying a high degree of manliness, the user inspires those around him and in turn they boost them up, allowing the user to push passed their normal limits.
Greaser's Revenge
Technique Type: Stat Morph
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: Self
Cooldown: 4
Duration: 2
Buffs: +25% Attack
Debuffs: N/a
Description: When the users signature pompadour is inevitably ruined in the heat of battle, anger takes over and sends them into a blind rage.
Stamp of the Yankii
Technique Type: Flat
Technique Level: 5
Maximum Base Range: Contact
Cooldown: 1
Duration: N/a
Buffs: N/a
Debuffs: N/a
Description: The user sends themselves airborne and firmly stomps their opponent in the face.
Quickdraw
Technique Type: Flat
Technique Level: 5
Maximum Base Range: Contact
Cooldown: 1
Duration: N/a
Buffs: N/a
Debuffs: N/a
Description: The user takes the stance of a traditional katana wielder, mimicking the act of a quickdraw strike. Moving at blinding speeds, the user aims to quickly and effectively dispatch their opponent.
- Medium Techniques:
Flying Bat
Technique Type: Flat
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: 10m
Cooldown: 3
Duration: -
Buffs: N/a
Debuffs: N/a
Description: The user drops their weapon, kicking the base of it, sending it propelling towards their target at high speeds.
Raging Pompadour
Technique Type: Stat Morph
Technique Level: 5
Maximum Base Range: Self
Cooldown: 6
Duration: 3
Buffs: +50% Attack
Debuffs: N/a
Description: The user succumbs to their natural aggression and relies on pure instincts alone, allowing for a more ruthless method of combat.
- Heavy Techniques:
A Man's True Grit
Technique Type: Stat Morph
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: Self
Cooldown: 9
Duration: 4
Buffs: +75% Willpower
Debuffs: N/A
Description: Drawing on a true man’s fighting spirit, the user unlocks their potential temporarily, causing excessive perspiration and steam to emit from their body.
Savage Thrash
Technique Type: Flat/Hybrid
Technique Level: 5
Maximum Base Range: Contact
Cooldown: 9
Duration: 4
Buffs: N/a
Debuffs: -30% Reflex
Description: An attack that turns a powerful blow into a shockwave rippling throughout the body, stunning the opponents muscles.
Rebel Rush
Technique Type: Flat
Technique Level: 10
Maximum Base Range: Contact
Cooldown: 5
Duration: N/a
Buffs: N/a
Debuffs: N/a
Description: The user unleashes a barrage of attacks on a single target with their weapon, striking from a multitude of angles in a short period of time.
- AoE Techniques:
GrandSlam
Technique Type: Flat/Hybrid
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: 10m
Maximum Base AoE Radius: 2.5m
Cooldown: 11
Duration: 4
Buffs: N/a
Debuffs: -30% Reflex
Description: The user strikes the ground with such force that the shockwave fissures the ground beneath them, shooting off the loose rubble like shrapnel from a grenade.
All Hail the Pompadour
Technique Type: AoE
Technique Level: 10
Maximum Base Range: 100m
Maximum Base AoE Radius: 25m
Cooldown:g 11
Duration: 4
Buffs: +75% Willpower
Debuffs: N/a
Description: The battles been long and hard, allies have fallen and enemies have triumphed, but still you toil on. Struggling to push passed the mountains of corpses that are your comrades only to continuing fighting in a war you don’t even know the cause of… until you come across a beacon of hope. Among all the terror and chaos there is but one constant….and that is the sheer awesomeness of the Pompadour, it fills you with hope, you find the strength to continue onward and fight the good fight until the battle is won!
- Gray
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Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
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Re: Bancho Kendo
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Kazu HiroHara wrote:Fighting Style: Bancho Kendo – Wrath of the Pompadour
Weapon Utilization: Wooden Sword / Bat / Kanabo
Description: Bancho Kendo is a freeform fighting style that was taught to Kazu by his master, loosely based on the traditional Japanese art of which the name is derived. Using a wooden word, or similarly shaped weapon, the user aims to cripple and crush the enemy instead of slashing them to bits.[ Why is your fighting style not using your devil fruit? ]
Combining parts of capoeira, kenjutsu, hapkido, and jui jitsu, the user’s entire body is a weapon, allowing for imagination and creativity to vary the style from user to user. With the seemingly erratic and unorthodox movements, along with the goal of beating their opponent into submission as the common factors.
The style was originally developed as one verse one fighting style, calling its ability to fight multiple opponents at once into question.
Toggled and Passive Abilities:
“Rrrryyahhh*” – Not to be confused with a simple “Rrryyahh”, it’s a simple but effective battle cry that one uses to raise their intensity prior to rushing headlong into battle without thinking. +20% Willpower -20% Defense Toggled
”(Insert Screaming enemies name angrily)* – Red with anger, the user flexes their muscles while screaming out their enemies name while pointing their weapon at them in a dramatic fashion. +20% Attack -20% Defense. Toggled
Techniques
(The following techniques can either be all devil fruit techniques, or a combination of devil fruit, and natural/weapon techniques)
- Light Techniques:
Name of the technique Heavy Swing [ Tsk, tsk. Replace the "Name of the technique" text with the name of your technique. ]
Technique Type: Flat
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: Contact
Cooldown: 1
Duration: N/A
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs: N/A
Description: A seemingly simple swing of the weapon, the user pulls a feint and drops the weapon to their second hand, allowing for a surprise attack aimed to cripple the target.
Name of the technique Pride of the Delinquents
Technique Type: Stat Morph
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: Contact
Cooldown: 1 [ You have to add the duration to the base cooldown for stat morphs and hybrids. Please apply this comment to all subsequent techniques where this is applicable. ]
Duration: [ You're missing the duration. ]
Buffs: +25% Willpower
Debuffs: N/a
Description: By displaying a high degree of manliness, the user inspires those around him and in turn they boost them up, allowing the user to push passed their normal limits.
Name of the technique Greaser’s Revenge
Technique Type: Stat Morph
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: Self
Cooldown: 1
Duration: 2
Buffs: +25% Attack
Debuffs: N/a
Description: When the users signature pompadour is inevitably ruined in the heat of battle, anger takes over and sends them into a blind rage.
Name of the technique Stamp of the Yankii
Technique Type: Flat
Technique Level: 1 [ You only get 3 LTs at level 1. You've made an extra LT. ]
Maximum Base Range: Contact
Cooldown: 1
Duration: N/a
Buffs: N/a
Debuffs: N/a
Description: The user sends themselves airborne and firmly stomps their opponent in the face.
Name of the technique Quickdraw
Technique Type: Flat
Technique Level: 5
Maximum Base Range: Contact
Cooldown: 1
Duration: N/a
Buffs: N/a
Debuffs: N/a
Description: The user takes the stance of a traditional katana wielder, mimicking the act of a quickdraw strike. Moving at blinding speeds, the user aims to quickly and effectively dispatch their opponent.
- Medium Techniques:
Name of the technique Flying Bat
Technique Type: Flat
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: 10m
Cooldown: 3
Duration: -
Buffs: N/a
Debuffs: N/a
Description: The user drops their weapon, kicking the base of it, sending it propelling towards their target at high speeds.
Name of the technique The Raging Pompadour
Technique Type: Stat Morph
Technique Level: 5
Maximum Base Range: Self
Cooldown: 3
Duration: 3
Buffs: +50%
Debuffs: N/a
Description: The user succumbs to their natural aggression and relies on pure instincts alone, allowing for a more ruthless method of combat.
- Heavy Techniques:
Name of the technique A Man’s Fighting Spirit
Technique Type: Stat Morph
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: Self
Cooldown: 5
Duration: 4
Buffs: +75% Willpower
Debuffs: N/A
Description: Drawing on a true man’s fighting spirit, the user unlocks their potential temporarily, causing excessive perspiration and steam to emit from their body.
Name of the technique Savage Thrash
Technique Type: Flat/Hybrid
Technique Level: 5
Maximum Base Range: Contact
Cooldown: 5
Duration: 4
Buffs: N/a
Debuffs: -30% Reflex
Description: An attack that turns a powerful blow into a shockwave rippling throughout the body, stunning the opponents muscles.
Name of the technique Rebel Rush
Technique Type: Flat
Technique Level: 10
Maximum Base Range: Contact
Cooldown: 5
Duration: 1 [ Don't put durations for Flat techniques. It's misleading. Flat techniques are immediate. ]
Buffs: N/a
Debuffs: N/a
Description: The user unleashes a barrage of attacks on a single target with their weapon, striking from a multitude of angles in a short period of time.
- AoE Techniques:
Name of the technique Grand Slam
Technique Type: Flat/Hybrid
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: 10m
Maximum Base AoE Radius: What is the approximate base radius of this AoE? (Can be up to 25% of the maximum base range.) [ You forgot this. ]
Cooldown: 7
Duration: 4
Buffs: N/a
Debuffs: -30% Reflex
Description: The user strikes the ground with such force that the shockwave fissures the ground beneath them, shooting off the loose rubble like shrapnel from a grenade.
Name of the technique All Hail the Pompadour
Technique Type: AoE
Technique Level: 10
Maximum Base Range: 100m [ Why did you delete the AoE radius field? ]
Cooldown: 7
Duration: 4
Buffs: +75% Willpower
Debuffs: N/a
Description: The battles been long and hard, allies have fallen and enemies have triumphed, but still you toil on. Struggling to push passed the mountains of corpses that are your comrades only to continuing fighting in a war you don’t even know the cause of… until you come across a beacon of hope. Among all the terror and chaos there is but one constant….and that is the sheer awesomeness of the Pompadour, it fills you with hope, you find the strength to continue onward and fight the good fight until the battle is won!
- Francis
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Name : Francis Charlemagne
Epithet : "The Golden Ogre of Tequila Wolf"
Age : 28
Height : 6'1" (186 cm)
Weight : 198 lbs (90 kg)
Species : Human
Faction : Marines
World Position : Rear Admiral
Crew : 69th Battalion
Ship : SSS Méricour
Marine Rank : Rear Admiral
Crew Role : Fleet Commander
Income Bonus : +0.10
Balance : [bel] 120,050,000
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Re: Bancho Kendo
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Kazu HiroHara wrote:Fighting Style: Bancho Kendo – Wrath of the Pompadour
Weapon Utilization: Wooden Sword / Bat / Kanabo
Description: Bancho Kendo is a freeform fighting style that was taught to Kazu by his master, loosely based on the traditional Japanese art of which the name is derived. Using a wooden word, or similarly shaped weapon, the user aims to cripple and crush the enemy instead of slashing them to bits.
Combining parts of capoeira, kenjutsu, hapkido, and jui jitsu, the user’s entire body is a weapon, allowing for imagination and creativity to vary the style from user to user. With the seemingly erratic and unorthodox movements, along with the goal of beating their opponent into submission as the common factors.
The style was originally developed as one verse one fighting style, calling its ability to fight multiple opponents at once into question.
Toggled and Passive Abilities:
“Rrrryyahhh*” – Not to be confused with a simple “Rrryyahh”, it’s a simple but effective battle cry that one uses to raise their intensity prior to rushing headlong into battle without thinking. +20% Willpower -20% Defense Toggled
”(Insert Screaming enemies name angrily)* – Red with anger, the user flexes their muscles while screaming out their enemies name and pointing their weapon at them in a dramatic fashion. +20% Attack -20% Defense. Toggled
Techniques
(The following techniques can either be all devil fruit techniques, or a combination of devil fruit, and natural/weapon techniques)
- Light Techniques:
Heavy Swing
Technique Type: Flat
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: Contact
Cooldown: 1
Duration: N/A
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs: N/A
Description: A seemingly simple swing of the weapon, the user pulls a feint and drops the weapon to their second hand, allowing for a surprise attack aimed to cripple the target.
Pride of the Delinquents
Technique Type: Stat Morph
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: Contact
Cooldown: 4
Duration: 2
Buffs: +25% Willpower
Debuffs: N/a
Description: By displaying a high degree of manliness, the user inspires those around him and in turn they boost them up, allowing the user to push passed their normal limits.
Greaser's Revenge
Technique Type: Stat Morph
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: Self
Cooldown: 4
Duration: 2
Buffs: +25% Attack
Debuffs: N/a
Description: When the users signature pompadour is inevitably ruined in the heat of battle, anger takes over and sends them into a blind rage.
Stamp of the Yankii
Technique Type: Flat
Technique Level: 5
Maximum Base Range: Contact
Cooldown: 1
Duration: N/a
Buffs: N/a
Debuffs: N/a
Description: The user sends themselves airborne and firmly stomps their opponent in the face.
Quickdraw
Technique Type: Flat
Technique Level: 5
Maximum Base Range: Contact
Cooldown: 1
Duration: N/a
Buffs: N/a
Debuffs: N/a
Description: The user takes the stance of a traditional katana wielder, mimicking the act of a quickdraw strike. Moving at blinding speeds, the user aims to quickly and effectively dispatch their opponent.
- Medium Techniques:
Flying Bat
Technique Type: Flat
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: 10m
Cooldown: 3
Duration: -
Buffs: N/a
Debuffs: N/a
Description: The user drops their weapon, kicking the base of it, sending it propelling towards their target at high speeds.
Raging Pompadour
Technique Type: Stat Morph
Technique Level: 5
Maximum Base Range: Self
Cooldown: 6
Duration: 3
Buffs: +50%
Debuffs: N/a
Description: The user succumbs to their natural aggression and relies on pure instincts alone, allowing for a more ruthless method of combat.
- Heavy Techniques:
A Man's True Grit
Technique Type: Stat Morph
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: Self
Cooldown: 9
Duration: 4
Buffs: +75% Willpower
Debuffs: N/A
Description: Drawing on a true man’s fighting spirit, the user unlocks their potential temporarily, causing excessive perspiration and steam to emit from their body.
Savage Thrash
Technique Type: Flat/Hybrid
Technique Level: 5
Maximum Base Range: Contact
Cooldown: 5 [ Cooldown should be 9. ]
Duration: 4
Buffs: N/a
Debuffs: -30% Reflex
Description: An attack that turns a powerful blow into a shockwave rippling throughout the body, stunning the opponents muscles.
Rebel Rush
Technique Type: Flat
Technique Level: 10
Maximum Base Range: Contact
Cooldown: 5
Duration: N/a
Buffs: N/a
Debuffs: N/a
Description: The user unleashes a barrage of attacks on a single target with their weapon, striking from a multitude of angles in a short period of time.
- AoE Techniques:
GrandSlam
Technique Type: Flat/Hybrid
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: 10m
Maximum Base AoE Radius: 2.5m
Cooldown: 7 [ Cooldown should be 11. ]
Duration: 4
Buffs: N/a
Debuffs: -30% Reflex
Description: The user strikes the ground with such force that the shockwave fissures the ground beneath them, shooting off the loose rubble like shrapnel from a grenade.
All Hail the Pompadour
Technique Type: AoE
Technique Level: 10
Maximum Base Range: 100m
Maximum Base AoE Radius: 25m
Cooldown:g 7 [ Cooldown should be 11. ]
Duration: 4
Buffs: +75% Willpower
Debuffs: N/a
Description: The battles been long and hard, allies have fallen and enemies have triumphed, but still you toil on. Struggling to push passed the mountains of corpses that are your comrades only to continuing fighting in a war you don’t even know the cause of… until you come across a beacon of hope. Among all the terror and chaos there is but one constant….and that is the sheer awesomeness of the Pompadour, it fills you with hope, you find the strength to continue onward and fight the good fight until the battle is won!