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Zou karate: Monkey style Empty Zou karate: Monkey style

This post has in-line assessment comments.Mon Oct 21, 2019 3:12 am

Zou karate: Monkey style


Fighting Style: Zou karate: Monkey style
Weapon Utilization:  Fists, staffed weapons, swords
Description:The purpose of which is to cause external damage and break bones this style of fighting involves smashing your opponent when using one's hands or legs or other means of blunt damage and is generally used only by the extremely physically powerful and dominating user. However, when using something with a blade on the end instead of blunt damage it is slashing damage.  However, there is a secondary function. Allowing the use of mink's innate ability to control electro to incorporate it into one's strikes.

Toggled and Passive Abilities: Electro:(toggled) Electro can channel electricity through parts of their bodies in order to shock anything they touch. This power can also be channeled through weapons adding electric burns to the damage they give to their opponent and paralysis. The user attack is increased by twenty percent increase in attack there is a twenty percent decrease in rx.



Techniques



Light Techniques:

Medium Techniques:

Heavy Techniques:

AoE Techniques:





Last edited by Junichi D. Sabi on Mon Jan 25, 2021 7:49 pm; edited 13 times in total
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Zou karate: Monkey style Empty Re: Zou karate: Monkey style

This post has in-line assessment comments.Tue Oct 22, 2019 3:18 am
[Comments are made in red. Also, you haven't finished making techniques for your MT, HT and AoE, yet you have submitted for approval? Perhaps you've forgotten to copy them over from elsewhere or they didn't save properly? Please double check :O]

Daimaru wrote:

Name your Fighting Style


Fighting Style: Monkey King Style
Weapon Utilization: Fists, staffed weapons, swords
Description:The purpose of which is to cause external damage and break bones this style of fighting involves smashing your opponent when using one's hands or legs or other means of blunt damage and is generally used only by the extremely physically powerful and dominating user. However, when using something with a blade on the end instead of blunt damage it is slashing damage.  However, there is a secondary function. Allowing the use of mink's innate ability to control electro to incorporate it into one's strikes.

Toggled and Passive Abilities:

  • Electro: Electro can channel electricity through parts of their bodies in order to shock anything they touch. This power can also be channeled through weapon adding electric burns to the damage they give to there opponent and paralysis. When using elector it adds a plus three to damage given to opponents. [Unfortunately, adding damage to attacks isn't allowed, sorry :c]however, while there is an increase in an attack by 10 perfect  there is a 10 percent decrease in willpower
    LT = 2 Posts
    UT = 1 Post
    MT = 3 Posts
    HT = 4 Posts [I'm not entirely clear what these are, so please explain them to me?]




Techniques


(The following techniques can either be all devil fruit techniques, or a combination of devil fruit, and natural/weapon techniques)

Light Techniques:

Medium Techniques:

Heavy Techniques:

AoE Techniques:




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Zou karate: Monkey style Empty Re: Zou karate: Monkey style

This post has in-line assessment comments.Tue Oct 22, 2019 9:18 am
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The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species/Tribe : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[childofdestiny]][[freakofnature]]
[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]

[[improviseadaptovercome]]
Posts : 3983

Zou karate: Monkey style Empty Re: Zou karate: Monkey style

This post has in-line assessment comments.Tue Oct 22, 2019 4:49 pm
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Daimaru wrote:

Name your Fighting Style [ Might wanna fix this. ]


Fighting Style: Monkey King Style
Weapon Utilization: Fists, staffed weapons, swords
Description:The purpose of which is to cause external damage and break bones this style of fighting involves smashing your opponent when using one's hands or legs or other means of blunt damage and is generally used only by the extremely physically powerful and dominating user. However, when using something with a blade on the end instead of blunt damage it is slashing damage.  However, there is a secondary function. Allowing the use of mink's innate ability to control electro to incorporate it into one's strikes.

Toggled and Passive Abilities:
[list] [ Also might wanna fix this. ]
[*]Electro:(toggled) Electro can channel electricity through parts of their bodies in order to shock anything they touch. This power can also be channeled through weapon adding electric burns to the damage they give to there opponent and paralysis.  however, while there is an increase in an attack by 10 percent however  there is a 10 percent decrease in reflex




Techniques


(The following techniques can either be all devil fruit techniques, or a combination of a devil fruit, and natural/weapon techniques)

Light Techniques:

Medium Techniques:

Heavy Techniques:

AoE Techniques:






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Zou karate: Monkey style Empty Re: Zou karate: Monkey style

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Zou karate: Monkey style Empty Re: Zou karate: Monkey style

This post has in-line assessment comments.Tue Oct 22, 2019 5:33 pm
Daimaru wrote:

Monkey King Style


Fighting Style: Monkey King Style
Weapon Utilization: Fists, staffed weapons, swords
Description:The purpose of which is to cause external damage and break bones this style of fighting involves smashing your opponent when using one's hands or legs or other means of blunt damage and is generally used only by the extremely physically powerful and dominating user. However, when using something with a blade on the end instead of blunt damage it is slashing damage.  However, there is a secondary function. Allowing the use of mink's innate ability to control electro to incorporate it into one's strikes.

Toggled and Passive Abilities:

  • Electro:(toggled) Electro can channel electricity through parts of their bodies in order to shock anything they touch. This power can also be channeled through weapon adding electric burns to the damage they give to there opponent and paralysis.  however, while there is an increase in an attack by 10 percent however  there is a 10 percent decrease in reflex





Techniques


(The following techniques can either be all devil fruit techniques, or a combination of a devil fruit, and natural/weapon techniques)

Light Techniques:

Medium Techniques:

Heavy Techniques:

AoE Techniques:








Gray
Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species/Tribe : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[childofdestiny]][[freakofnature]]
[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]

[[improviseadaptovercome]]
Posts : 3983

Zou karate: Monkey style Empty Re: Zou karate: Monkey style

This post has in-line assessment comments.Wed Oct 23, 2019 9:25 am
You're still missing a Level 5 LT.
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This post has in-line assessment comments.Wed Oct 23, 2019 4:01 pm
Once again I have edited
Gray
Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species/Tribe : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[childofdestiny]][[freakofnature]]
[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]

[[improviseadaptovercome]]
Posts : 3983

Zou karate: Monkey style Empty Re: Zou karate: Monkey style

This post has in-line assessment comments.Wed Oct 23, 2019 4:37 pm
Approved.

Daimaru wrote:

Monkey King Style


Fighting Style: Monkey King Style
Weapon Utilization: Fists, staffed weapons, swords
Description:The purpose of which is to cause external damage and break bones this style of fighting involves smashing your opponent when using one's hands or legs or other means of blunt damage and is generally used only by the extremely physically powerful and dominating user. However, when using something with a blade on the end instead of blunt damage it is slashing damage.  However, there is a secondary function. Allowing the use of mink's innate ability to control electro to incorporate it into one's strikes.

Toggled and Passive Abilities:

  • Electro:(toggled) Electro can channel electricity through parts of their bodies in order to shock anything they touch. This power can also be channeled through weapon adding electric burns to the damage they give to there opponent and paralysis.  however, while there is an increase in an attack by 10 percent however  there is a 10 percent decrease in reflex





Techniques


(The following techniques can either be all devil fruit techniques, or a combination of a devil fruit, and natural/weapon techniques)

Light Techniques:

Medium Techniques:

Heavy Techniques:

AoE Techniques:




Gray
Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species/Tribe : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[childofdestiny]][[freakofnature]]
[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]

[[improviseadaptovercome]]
Posts : 3983

Zou karate: Monkey style Empty Re: Zou karate: Monkey style

This post has in-line assessment comments.Mon Jan 25, 2021 8:14 pm
Approved!

Junichi D. Sabi wrote:

Zou karate: Monkey style


Fighting Style: Zou karate: Monkey style
Weapon Utilization:  Fists, staffed weapons, swords
Description:The purpose of which is to cause external damage and break bones this style of fighting involves smashing your opponent when using one's hands or legs or other means of blunt damage and is generally used only by the extremely physically powerful and dominating user. However, when using something with a blade on the end instead of blunt damage it is slashing damage.  However, there is a secondary function. Allowing the use of mink's innate ability to control electro to incorporate it into one's strikes.

Toggled and Passive Abilities: Electro:(toggled) Electro can channel electricity through parts of their bodies in order to shock anything they touch. This power can also be channeled through weapons adding electric burns to the damage they give to their opponent and paralysis. The user attack is increased by twenty percent increase in attack there is a twenty percent decrease in rx.



Techniques



Light Techniques:

Medium Techniques:

Heavy Techniques:

AoE Techniques:



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