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Steam Power Robo
Thu Sep 05, 2019 11:56 amSteam Power Robo
Fighting Style: Steam Power Robo
Weapon Utilization: Though weapons can be incorporated into the style, it doesn't revolve around them.
Description: By using Issen’s steam powered cyborg implants, he’s able to achieve feats of movement and unnatural athleticism otherwise impossible for plain humans. This steam can also be manipulated in small ways to create effects useful in battles. The steam is naturally recharged by moisture in the air.
Toggled and Passive Abilities:
Overheat [Toggle] - The user retains all steam that would be otherwise released. This causes the character to overheat, giving him a 20% Attack bonus, costing a 20% Defense debuff. While this toggle is active, Puff Puff is not.
Hyper Focus [Toggle] - The user’s cyborg enhancements give them the ability to perfectly recall all the things they’ve experienced. By overclocking this ability, their perception is increased for a short time, giving a 10% Reflex bonus, costing 10% to Willpower.
Techniques
- Light Techniques:
Ballistic Alpha Shoot!
Technique Type: Flat
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: 10 meters
Cooldown: 1
Duration: Instant
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs: N/A
Description: Releasing heated steam in a small sphere about the size of a baseball, the user creates a suction force by moving quickly enough to conjure a void in the air. This vacuum is only strong enough to move this specific ball of steam, hurtling a forceful, hot attack towards a target.
Acceleration Beyond Infinity
Technique Type:Stat Morph
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: Self
Cooldown: 3
Duration: 2
Buffs: +25% Reflex
Debuffs: N/A
Description: By releasing a compressed series of streams of steam, the user creates a system of propulsion that increases their speed and reaction timing.
Overwhelming Meteor Missile Striker
Technique Type: Flat
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: 2 meters
Cooldown: 1
Duration: Instant
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs: N/A
Description: The machinery in the user’s body is focused and overworked onto a single limb, creating a devastating arc of damage dealt.
Eyes Toward the Heavens
Technique Type: Stat Morph
Technique Level: 5
Maximum Base Range: 20m
Cooldown: 3
Duration: 2
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs: 25% Defense
Description: By overclocking the user’s ability to memorize perfectly, they’re able to deduce imperceptible weaknesses in a target. Should this technique succeed, those weaknesses can be exposed through speech or by physically exposing them to other attackers. The target’s movements will eventually naturally compensate for this discovery, thus ending the moment of weakness.
- Medium Techniques:
Regicidal Cloud Felling
Technique Type: Flat
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: 10 meters
Cooldown: 3
Duration: Instant
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs: N/A
Description: A supernatural burst of speed punctuated by a puff of steam, that launches the user behind their target so long as they’re within range. The attack is struck by a slash or impact towards an opponent.
Revolution of the Azure Sky
Technique Type: Flat
Technique Level: 5
Maximum Base Range: 50 meters
Cooldown: 3
Duration: Instant
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs: N/A
Description: The user leaps into the sky with great leg strength, and no less than twenty meters from where they jumped from the earth, they return to it, with great force. By using propulsion from steam exhaust, they’re able to rocket back towards a single target and attack.
- Heavy Techniques:
Spirit and Iron Overheating with Passion
Technique Type: Stat Morph
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: Self
Cooldown: 9
Duration: 4
Buffs: +75% Reflex
Debuffs: N/A
Description: In rapidly accelerating the rate of the user’s steam pump, they’re able to summon more energy to their mechanical implants, offering greater reaction times.
Adapting Claw of Harmonic Firefly
Technique Type: Flat
Technique Level: 5
Maximum Base Range: 50 meters
Cooldown: 5
Duration: N/A
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs: N/A
Description: In a single direction, the user bounds from the surface from which they’ve begun, dashing towards them with a trail of opaque steam in their wake. Once reaching their target, a combination of strikes from a single arm come forth in a flurry. Even if the technique misses the user will still travel the 50 meters, unless they are stopped by some other force.
Regal Legend Chain
Technique Type: DoT
Technique Level: 10
Maximum Base Range: 100 meters
Cooldown: 5
Duration: N/A
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs: N/A
Description: A vacuum in the air is made with the user’s whole body, creating a suction force that carries a long a shape of steam looking like the phantom of the user. This phantom barrels forth quickly, delivering a choking attack that attacks one’s internal systems over the course of five posts.
- AoE Techniques:
Eden Genesis in White
Technique Type: Heal
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: 10 meters
Maximum Base AoE Radius: 2.5 meters
Cooldown: 9
Duration: N/A
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs: N/A
Description: A mass of gentle steam is released from the user’s body, creating a small, serene cloud that resembles a sort of hot spring or rejuvenating sauna. This technique then proceeds to heal all of those caught in its effect.
Brilliant Daydream Charge
Technique Type: Flat
Technique Level: 10
Maximum Base Range: 100 meters
Maximum Base AoE Radius: 25 meters
Cooldown: 7
Duration: Instant
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs: N/A
Description: Within a range of one hundred meters, the user determines a certain area in which this technique will be performed, and move with blinding quickness to that point. In swift succession, every target caught by the technique becomes the recipient of a devastating slash from a weapon or limb.
Gray
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species/Tribe : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
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Posts : 3990
Re: Steam Power Robo
Thu Sep 05, 2019 2:16 pm[ Hi Issen. Good work getting this done so quickly! I have some comments below, so please check them out and make changes accordingly. The comments are marked in red. ]
Issen Hachiyo wrote:Steam Power Robo
Fighting Style: Steam Power Robo
Weapon Utilization: Though weapons can be incorporated into the style, it doesn't revolve around them.
Description: By using Issen’s steam powered cyborg implants, he’s able to achieve feats of movement and unnatural athleticism otherwise impossible for plain humans. This steam can also be manipulated in small ways to create effects useful in battles. The steam is naturally recharged by moisture in the air.
Toggled and Passive Abilities: List any and all passive abilities and properties your devil fruit/fighting style gives you. This cannot include any damage-dealing special attacks, as those will be included under techniques. Passive/toggled abilities cannot give buffs/debuffs higher than 20%. You may have no more than 2 buffing/debuffing toggled abilities. [ Please remove this paragraph. ]
Puff Puff - Use of abilities creates a translucent steam cloud that reduces the Reflex stat of any caught in the cloud by 5 and causing a visual obstruction. This steam can be easily dispersed by concussive, gusting or explosive force. It naturally fades after a single round of posts. [ Your passives cannot have combat mechanical effects. Please remove this or turn it into a toggle that follows a similar format to Overheat. All of our toggles are standardised, so they cannot have custom effects like this or the one you've written for Perfect Memory. ]
Overheat [Toggle] - The user retains all steam that would be otherwise released. This causes the character to overheat, giving him a 20% Attack bonus, costing a 20% Durability [ I'm assuming you mean Defense here? Please change the wording to use the terminology from the combat guide. ] debuff. While this toggle is active, Puff Puff is not.
Perfect Memory - The user’s cyborg enhancements give them the ability to perfectly recall all the things they’ve experienced. The third time the same ability is used against them in the same thread, the user has advantage on Reflex Check rolls. [ You will have to remove this passive. See my comment for Puff Puff. ]
Techniques
- Light Techniques:
Ballistic Alpha Shoot!
Technique Type: Flat
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: 10 meters
Cooldown: 1
Duration: Instant
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs: N/A
Description: Releasing heated steam in a small sphere about the size of a baseball, the user creates a suction force by moving quickly enough to conjure a void in the air. This vacuum is only strong enough to move this specific ball of steam, hurtling a forceful, hot attack towards a target.
Acceleration Beyond Infinity
Technique Type:Stat Morph
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: Self
Cooldown: 3
Duration: 2
Buffs: +25% Reflex
Debuffs: N/A
Description: By releasing a compressed series of streams of steam, the user creates a system of propulsion that increases their speed and reaction timing.
Overwhelming Meteor Missile Striker
Technique Type: Flat
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: 2 meters
Cooldown: 1
Duration: Instant
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs: N/A
Description: The machinery in the user’s body is focused and overworked onto a single limb, creating a devastating arc of damage dealt. This can cause displacement towards opponents with more than 50 less power, moving them 5 meters away from the point of impact at a slow speed. [ Remove this last sentence. The technique descriptions are meant to be flavour and should not have extra mechanics defined in them. ]
Eyes Toward the Heavens
Technique Type: Stat Morph
Technique Level: 5
Maximum Base Range: 20m
Cooldown: 3
Duration: 2
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs: 25% Durability [ Defense? ]
Description: By overclocking the user’s ability to memorize perfectly, they’re able to deduce imperceptible weaknesses in a target. Should this technique succeed, those weaknesses can be exposed through speech or by physically exposing them to other attackers. The target’s movements will eventually naturally compensate for this discovery, thus ending the moment of weakness.
- Medium Techniques:
Regicidal Cloud Felling
Technique Type: Flat
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: 10 meters
Cooldown: 3
Duration: Instant
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs: N/A
Description: A supernatural burst of speed punctuated by a puff of steam, that launches the user behind their target so long as they’re within range. The attack is struck by a slash or impact towards an opponent.
Revolution of the Azure Sky
Technique Type: Flat
Technique Level: 5
Maximum Base Range: 50 meters
Cooldown: 3
Duration: Instant
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs: N/A
Description: The user leaps into the sky with great leg strength, and no less than twenty meters from where they jumped from the earth, they return to it, with great force. By using propulsion from steam exhaust, they’re able to rocket back towards a single target and attack.
- Heavy Techniques:
Spirit and Iron Overheating with Passion
Technique Type: Stat Morph
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: Self
Cooldown: 9
Duration: 4
Buffs: +75% Reflex
Debuffs: N/A
Description: In rapidly accelerating the rate of the user’s steam pump, they’re able to summon more energy to their mechanical implants, offering greater reaction times.
Adapting Claw of Harmonic Firefly
Technique Type: Flat
Technique Level: 5
Maximum Base Range: 50 meters
Cooldown: 5
Duration: N/A
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs: N/A
Description: In a single direction, the user bounds from the surface from which they’ve begun, dashing towards them with a trail of opaque steam in their wake. Once reaching their target, a combination of strikes from a single arm come forth in a flurry. Even if the technique misses the user will still travel the 50 meters, unless they are stopped by some other force.
Regal Legend Chain
Technique Type: DoT
Technique Level: 10
Maximum Base Range: 100 meters
Cooldown: 5
Duration: N/A
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs: N/A
Description: A vacuum in the air is made with the user’s whole body, creating a suction force that carries a long a shape of steam looking like the phantom of the user. This phantom barrels forth quickly, delivering a choking attack that attacks one’s internal systems over the course of five posts.
- AoE Techniques:
Eden Genesis in White
Technique Type: Heal
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: 10 meters
Maximum Base AoE Radius: 2.5 meters
Cooldown: 9
Duration: N/A
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs: N/A
Description: A mass of gentle steam is released from the user’s body, creating a small, serene cloud that resembles a sort of hot spring or rejuvenating sauna. This technique then proceeds to heal all of those caught in its effect.
Brilliant Daydream Charge
Technique Type: Flat
Technique Level: 10
Maximum Base Range: 100 meters
Maximum Base AoE Radius: 25 meters
Cooldown: 7
Duration: Instant
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs: N/A
Description: Within a range of one hundred meters, the user determines a certain area in which this technique will be performed, and move with blinding quickness to that point. In swift succession, every target caught by the technique becomes the recipient of a devastating slash from a weapon or limb.
- GuestGuest
Re: Steam Power Robo
Thu Sep 05, 2019 2:46 pmEdited according to comments made. Thanks for the precise help!
- Gray
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species/Tribe : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[childofdestiny]][[freakofnature]]
[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]
[[improviseadaptovercome]]
Posts : 3990
Re: Steam Power Robo
Thu Sep 05, 2019 2:58 pmThanks for the quick changes. Approved!
Issen Hachiyo wrote:Steam Power Robo
Fighting Style: Steam Power Robo
Weapon Utilization: Though weapons can be incorporated into the style, it doesn't revolve around them.
Description: By using Issen’s steam powered cyborg implants, he’s able to achieve feats of movement and unnatural athleticism otherwise impossible for plain humans. This steam can also be manipulated in small ways to create effects useful in battles. The steam is naturally recharged by moisture in the air.
Toggled and Passive Abilities:
Overheat [Toggle] - The user retains all steam that would be otherwise released. This causes the character to overheat, giving him a 20% Attack bonus, costing a 20% Defense debuff. While this toggle is active, Puff Puff is not.
Hyper Focus [Toggle] - The user’s cyborg enhancements give them the ability to perfectly recall all the things they’ve experienced. By overclocking this ability, their perception is increased for a short time, giving a 10% Reflex bonus, costing 10% to Willpower.
Techniques
- Light Techniques:
Ballistic Alpha Shoot!
Technique Type: Flat
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: 10 meters
Cooldown: 1
Duration: Instant
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs: N/A
Description: Releasing heated steam in a small sphere about the size of a baseball, the user creates a suction force by moving quickly enough to conjure a void in the air. This vacuum is only strong enough to move this specific ball of steam, hurtling a forceful, hot attack towards a target.
Acceleration Beyond Infinity
Technique Type:Stat Morph
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: Self
Cooldown: 3
Duration: 2
Buffs: +25% Reflex
Debuffs: N/A
Description: By releasing a compressed series of streams of steam, the user creates a system of propulsion that increases their speed and reaction timing.
Overwhelming Meteor Missile Striker
Technique Type: Flat
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: 2 meters
Cooldown: 1
Duration: Instant
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs: N/A
Description: The machinery in the user’s body is focused and overworked onto a single limb, creating a devastating arc of damage dealt.
Eyes Toward the Heavens
Technique Type: Stat Morph
Technique Level: 5
Maximum Base Range: 20m
Cooldown: 3
Duration: 2
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs: 25% Defense
Description: By overclocking the user’s ability to memorize perfectly, they’re able to deduce imperceptible weaknesses in a target. Should this technique succeed, those weaknesses can be exposed through speech or by physically exposing them to other attackers. The target’s movements will eventually naturally compensate for this discovery, thus ending the moment of weakness.
- Medium Techniques:
Regicidal Cloud Felling
Technique Type: Flat
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: 10 meters
Cooldown: 3
Duration: Instant
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs: N/A
Description: A supernatural burst of speed punctuated by a puff of steam, that launches the user behind their target so long as they’re within range. The attack is struck by a slash or impact towards an opponent.
Revolution of the Azure Sky
Technique Type: Flat
Technique Level: 5
Maximum Base Range: 50 meters
Cooldown: 3
Duration: Instant
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs: N/A
Description: The user leaps into the sky with great leg strength, and no less than twenty meters from where they jumped from the earth, they return to it, with great force. By using propulsion from steam exhaust, they’re able to rocket back towards a single target and attack.
- Heavy Techniques:
Spirit and Iron Overheating with Passion
Technique Type: Stat Morph
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: Self
Cooldown: 9
Duration: 4
Buffs: +75% Reflex
Debuffs: N/A
Description: In rapidly accelerating the rate of the user’s steam pump, they’re able to summon more energy to their mechanical implants, offering greater reaction times.
Adapting Claw of Harmonic Firefly
Technique Type: Flat
Technique Level: 5
Maximum Base Range: 50 meters
Cooldown: 5
Duration: N/A
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs: N/A
Description: In a single direction, the user bounds from the surface from which they’ve begun, dashing towards them with a trail of opaque steam in their wake. Once reaching their target, a combination of strikes from a single arm come forth in a flurry. Even if the technique misses the user will still travel the 50 meters, unless they are stopped by some other force.
Regal Legend Chain
Technique Type: DoT
Technique Level: 10
Maximum Base Range: 100 meters
Cooldown: 5
Duration: N/A
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs: N/A
Description: A vacuum in the air is made with the user’s whole body, creating a suction force that carries a long a shape of steam looking like the phantom of the user. This phantom barrels forth quickly, delivering a choking attack that attacks one’s internal systems over the course of five posts.
- AoE Techniques:
Eden Genesis in White
Technique Type: Heal
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: 10 meters
Maximum Base AoE Radius: 2.5 meters
Cooldown: 9
Duration: N/A
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs: N/A
Description: A mass of gentle steam is released from the user’s body, creating a small, serene cloud that resembles a sort of hot spring or rejuvenating sauna. This technique then proceeds to heal all of those caught in its effect.
Brilliant Daydream Charge
Technique Type: Flat
Technique Level: 10
Maximum Base Range: 100 meters
Maximum Base AoE Radius: 25 meters
Cooldown: 7
Duration: Instant
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs: N/A
Description: Within a range of one hundred meters, the user determines a certain area in which this technique will be performed, and move with blinding quickness to that point. In swift succession, every target caught by the technique becomes the recipient of a devastating slash from a weapon or limb.
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