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Makaze's First Style Empty Makaze's First Style

This post has in-line assessment comments.Tue Aug 20, 2019 1:23 pm

Strong Style Fishmen Karate
   


   Fighting Style: Strong Style
   Weapon Utilization: No
   Description: This form of Style. Is Offense and Defense. It rallies on Internal blows, and devastating attacks. It constants of Mostly Punches and Kicks for offense, and Blocking with Feet and And Elbows.


   Toggled and Passive Abilities: Strong Style Devastator: The User takes a Stance, in a Offensive Manner. Does not leave any openings. It's a Iron Clad Stance. This Stance grants the User.It gives a 10%  To Willpower, 5% Strength and Defense ANd a -20% To Reflex. This does Stack with Haki. if the User chooses too use Haki.
   


   Techniques
   




   
Light Techniques:

   
Medium Techniques:

   
Heavy Techniques:

   
AoE Techniques:


   


   


Last edited by Makaze on Wed Aug 21, 2019 6:16 pm; edited 3 times in total
Gray
Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species/Tribe : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[childofdestiny]][[freakofnature]]
[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]

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Posts : 3991

Makaze's First Style Empty Re: Makaze's First Style

This post has in-line assessment comments.Tue Aug 20, 2019 8:40 pm
[Comments in brown. Please review and correct.]
Makaze wrote:    

Strong Style Fishmen Karate
   


   Fighting Style: Strong Style
   Weapon Utilization: No
   Description: This form of Style. Is Offense and Defense. It rallies on Internal blows, and devastating attacks. It constants of Mostly Punches and Kicks for offense, and Blocking with Feet and And Elbows.


   Toggled and Passive Abilities: Strong Style Devastator: The User takes a Stance, in a Offensive Manner. Does not leave any openings. It's a Iron Clad Stance. This Stance grants the User. 5% will, Reflex, Attack and Defense This does Stack with Haki. if the User chooses too use Haki. [Toggled abilities need to have stats balanced out. So, if you have a total of +20% buffs, you need to have a total of -20% debuffs.]
   


   Techniques
   




   
Light Techniques:

   
Medium Techniques:

   
Heavy Techniques:

   
AoE Techniques:


   


   

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Makaze's First Style Empty Re: Makaze's First Style

This post has in-line assessment comments.Tue Aug 20, 2019 11:22 pm
I hope I fixed it right??? Please let me know <3
Gray
Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species/Tribe : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[childofdestiny]][[freakofnature]]
[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]

[[improviseadaptovercome]]
Posts : 3991

Makaze's First Style Empty Re: Makaze's First Style

This post has in-line assessment comments.Wed Aug 21, 2019 1:55 am
Cooldown for HT should be 8 (base 5 cooldown + 3 because of duration).
Cooldown for AoE should be 11 (base 7 cooldown + 4 because of duration).

Also, I'm assuming the stat debuffs in the AoE are as follows: 15% Reflex, 5% Attack, 5% Defense, 5% Willpower. Correct me if I'm mistaken.
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Makaze's First Style Empty Re: Makaze's First Style

This post has in-line assessment comments.Wed Aug 21, 2019 6:14 pm
Fixed.

The answer to your question is yes.
Gray
Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species/Tribe : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[childofdestiny]][[freakofnature]]
[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]

[[improviseadaptovercome]]
Posts : 3991

Makaze's First Style Empty Re: Makaze's First Style

This post has in-line assessment comments.Wed Aug 21, 2019 6:17 pm
Approved.

Makaze wrote:

Strong Style Fishmen Karate
   


   Fighting Style: Strong Style
   Weapon Utilization: No
   Description: This form of Style. Is Offense and Defense. It rallies on Internal blows, and devastating attacks. It constants of Mostly Punches and Kicks for offense, and Blocking with Feet and And Elbows.


   Toggled and Passive Abilities: Strong Style Devastator: The User takes a Stance, in a Offensive Manner. Does not leave any openings. It's a Iron Clad Stance. This Stance grants the User.It gives a 10%  To Willpower, 5% Strength and Defense ANd a -20% To Reflex. This does Stack with Haki. if the User chooses too use Haki.
   


   Techniques
   




   
Light Techniques:

   
Medium Techniques:

   
Heavy Techniques:

   
AoE Techniques:


   


   
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